YAH! I am glad some don't think it is corny! i looked back at it and felt really stupid for some grammar errors i didn't change ^_^ ..anywayz, here is chapter 2...
thanks for your reviews...oh, yes and some might have a different pov. on jou' s father...uh, i am in a bad mood..i just found out my friend is mad at me for little jokes here and there. like she said she didn't want to hurt my feelings but i guess she is sick of me or something? well...usually when people say "i dont want to hurt your feelings" it always does!!!! anywayz..enough of my sad depressed life...here is chapter 2 ^_^
The Dragon Prince:
Chapter 2: Under Attack ... and a meeting.
"My lord, can I ask you a question" asked Mai kneeling beside the King's chair.
"You may" said the king
"why do you keep hurting jou this way? I know you really love him" said Mai. The king sighed, "it's becasue ... the more he hates me the better. When I go, I don't want him to miss me ...it's going to be tough for him when I am gone. This will toughen him up for the real world out there. I let him hate me ...so he won't be hurt when I die."
"but still ...you should make ammends before you die. Life without love is horrible"
"well ...then, my life is horrible then, mai?"
"you are loved, my lord, do not forget that" said Mai
"I won't"
"mai, I fear for Jou. The prince of the blue eyes clan has taken the thrown. I fear that I might not live much longer then the week. If he takes over ...our clan.... what will he do to Jou
A/N: make him is sex slace ^_^ hehe
"Maybe ... he doesn't need to know about Jou"
"what do you mean?"
"send him away?"
"away? to otogi?"
"NO!!! Jou hates otogi. I am thinking to his ... mother"
"I don't even know where she is?"
"send him to the human world then. I can take care of him there myself"
"do you think he would like that?"
"yes, jou is very kind. I think he acts more human than dragon. He will be happy there"
" ... happy there" jou's father whispered, "if it makes him happy"
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"where did you go?" asked Jou as Mai walked back into the room carrying new clothes for Jou. "to visit your father" said Mai
"Shh, that bastard. why would you want too?" Jou said angrily as he touched a bruise on his cheek.
"becasue he is my king and your father" said Mai
"I don't understand how you can stick up for that bastard" said Jou. Mai didn't answer and just shoved the robes into Jou's arms. "get dressed, the king wants you"
"what ...my face isn't already to black and blue?"
"get dressed" Mai said again and walked out. Jou grumbeled and took off his clothes. He pulled on the fresh new robes. Deep dark red silk. He placed on the pants and shirt and tied the red sash around and tucked the end in. Then he slipped on the red gloves to cover his wrist and hands then last the shawl to cover his whole head except for his eyes. His father made it clear everytime he came out to be covered head to toe. And that was what he did.
Mai knocked on the door and asked if he was ready yet.
"Coming" called Jou, he walked out dreading what was to come.
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On the mountain top, above the red eyes clan, blue eyes troops awaited the order. Seto starred down at the castle thinking of how he was going to rule this land by tonight. Bakura walked up to him "seto, going to give the order anytime soon?" .
"Yes, but not right now. Wait, untill the sun has set" said Seto
"Sun set...got it!" said Bakura turning to walk back to his post.
"Oh, Bakura" said Seto
"yes?"
"Mokuba is safe, correct?"
"Yes, he's under lock and key with the finest gaurds including that little dark magician"
"good. Get ready. We move in soon" ordered Seto
"you called father" said Jou walking into the kings chambers. The king nodded and waved at Mai for her to leave. He then motioned for Jou to come closer. Jou came as far as he could to his father, he didn't want to be in arms reach.
"Jou, as you have or have not known, the blue eyes clan has throwned a new king"
said the king
"did they and this has to do with me for what?" asked Jou.
"I worry for your sake"
"shh, bull shit" said Jou, the king ignored Jou's comment and continued
"So, that is why I am going to send you and mai to the human world"
"excuse me!!!" said Jou
"I am going to send you to the human world. Would this make you happy?" asked Jou's father
"human world? to be free! Of course I would be happy" said Jou smiling infront of his father for the first time even though his father couldn't see it.
"then, you shall leave tomorrow"
"tomorrow! so soon!" said Jou surprised.
"Because the blue eyes clan is going to attack us. They are known to kill all the royal family of the clans they overtake"
"oh"
"so, tonight get your things ready. Go hurry now and get ready."
"thank you, dad" Jou uncovered his face and smiled for his father giving him a hug. "I love you" he kissed his fathers cheek
"I love you too"
To bad their little happy scene was ruined as guards ran into the thrown shouting.
"HIGHNESS! WE ARE UNDER ATTACK! THE BLUE EYES ARE ATTACKING!" screamed one of the guards spitting out blood.
The king stood up, "what! get the troops ready fast! Gaurd the front gate. We cannot let them through the first defense." ordered the king. He turned to Jou.
"Jou, take the back gate. Get Mai and flee right away" ordered the king
"but father"
"thats an order" screamed the king. Jou felt tears on his cheeks. He kissed his father one last time and ran out the back door.
Jou found Mai in the servents quarters. "Mai! we're under attack. we need to leave now"
"but the king" Mai started
"ordered us to leave" Jou finished for her. He grabbed her hand and ran down the hall making twists and turns around the halls. Damn, where was the back door. Come to think of it. He never really seen it! The made a right turn and bumped into some blue eyes and red eyes fighting.
"Jou! this way" said Mai pulling on his sleeve. Jou couldn't move though, he starred as the blue eyes soldiers kill the red eyes soldiers. Jou never seen spilt blood before. He felt sick at the site as the blue eyes laughed and chopped off the dead's heads. They snickered then looked at Jou smirking.
"look here, who is this." they teased as they saw Jous covered body. Jou felt angry, how can someone be so violent. He tore at the soliders punching them and kicking at them. He wanted them to die, he felt so angry. What was this feeling? where was it coming from. Something in him stirred, it thirsted for blood but another part wanted him to leave, didn't want him to kill.
"JOU!" shouted Mai.
Jou didn't listen to her plea's, he kept punching and kicking them untill they were bloodied and on the floor. Mai ran up and slapped him "snap out of it!" shouted Mai.
"we, have to go now!"
"WHY! why should we go when others are fighting. What a embarassment to our clan! the prince running! I don't want to shame my father!" said Jou
"he wants you to live, do as he says" said Mai
"No! I cannot let him die alone, please understand Mai! Please Mai, flee this place. Do not get hurt" Jou kissed her cheek through the cloth and ran off
"JOU!!!" shouted Mai, "damn it!" she swore and ran after him.
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The red eyes king was tired and felt defeated. He had been stabbed to many times to count. He lost so much blood and felt dizzy. He wasn't going to last much longer. Suddenly, he heard hard footsteps walking right to him.
"stop!" a voice ordered. The king looked up to meet the eyes of deep blue. The man had brunnete hair and was beautiful.
"I am Seto Kaiba, king of the blue eyes clan"
"I am Saio, King of the red eyes clan" replied the King.
"I see, I don't see though. Is your heir? where he is?" asked Seto
"He is dead" said the king
"really. I was hoping to much to see him. I heard he was ugly beyond belief that is why you locked him up. Other say different. I wonder why. Please tell me, I am very interested. Why did you lock up your son for what was it seven hundred years?" asked Seto
"I won't tell you a damn thing" said the king
"pity then, well I grow tired of this talk. Now ..." Seto held up his sword and the King did the same. He knew he was going to die but he wouldn't go down without a fight. Seto swung at him, young and strong, the stroke made the king stumble back.
"tired?" asked Seto swinging again. The king blocked it and made a attack at Seto who dodged it and threw his sword up slicing the kings arm. The king dropped his sword with a clatter.
"now we finish this" seto raised the sword and swung it down only to have it blocked by another sword. He looked up
and blue met brown ....
2 B' Continued...so how was it good?
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thanks for your reviews...oh, yes and some might have a different pov. on jou' s father...uh, i am in a bad mood..i just found out my friend is mad at me for little jokes here and there. like she said she didn't want to hurt my feelings but i guess she is sick of me or something? well...usually when people say "i dont want to hurt your feelings" it always does!!!! anywayz..enough of my sad depressed life...here is chapter 2 ^_^
The Dragon Prince:
Chapter 2: Under Attack ... and a meeting.
"My lord, can I ask you a question" asked Mai kneeling beside the King's chair.
"You may" said the king
"why do you keep hurting jou this way? I know you really love him" said Mai. The king sighed, "it's becasue ... the more he hates me the better. When I go, I don't want him to miss me ...it's going to be tough for him when I am gone. This will toughen him up for the real world out there. I let him hate me ...so he won't be hurt when I die."
"but still ...you should make ammends before you die. Life without love is horrible"
"well ...then, my life is horrible then, mai?"
"you are loved, my lord, do not forget that" said Mai
"I won't"
"mai, I fear for Jou. The prince of the blue eyes clan has taken the thrown. I fear that I might not live much longer then the week. If he takes over ...our clan.... what will he do to Jou
A/N: make him is sex slace ^_^ hehe
"Maybe ... he doesn't need to know about Jou"
"what do you mean?"
"send him away?"
"away? to otogi?"
"NO!!! Jou hates otogi. I am thinking to his ... mother"
"I don't even know where she is?"
"send him to the human world then. I can take care of him there myself"
"do you think he would like that?"
"yes, jou is very kind. I think he acts more human than dragon. He will be happy there"
" ... happy there" jou's father whispered, "if it makes him happy"
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"where did you go?" asked Jou as Mai walked back into the room carrying new clothes for Jou. "to visit your father" said Mai
"Shh, that bastard. why would you want too?" Jou said angrily as he touched a bruise on his cheek.
"becasue he is my king and your father" said Mai
"I don't understand how you can stick up for that bastard" said Jou. Mai didn't answer and just shoved the robes into Jou's arms. "get dressed, the king wants you"
"what ...my face isn't already to black and blue?"
"get dressed" Mai said again and walked out. Jou grumbeled and took off his clothes. He pulled on the fresh new robes. Deep dark red silk. He placed on the pants and shirt and tied the red sash around and tucked the end in. Then he slipped on the red gloves to cover his wrist and hands then last the shawl to cover his whole head except for his eyes. His father made it clear everytime he came out to be covered head to toe. And that was what he did.
Mai knocked on the door and asked if he was ready yet.
"Coming" called Jou, he walked out dreading what was to come.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
On the mountain top, above the red eyes clan, blue eyes troops awaited the order. Seto starred down at the castle thinking of how he was going to rule this land by tonight. Bakura walked up to him "seto, going to give the order anytime soon?" .
"Yes, but not right now. Wait, untill the sun has set" said Seto
"Sun set...got it!" said Bakura turning to walk back to his post.
"Oh, Bakura" said Seto
"yes?"
"Mokuba is safe, correct?"
"Yes, he's under lock and key with the finest gaurds including that little dark magician"
"good. Get ready. We move in soon" ordered Seto
"you called father" said Jou walking into the kings chambers. The king nodded and waved at Mai for her to leave. He then motioned for Jou to come closer. Jou came as far as he could to his father, he didn't want to be in arms reach.
"Jou, as you have or have not known, the blue eyes clan has throwned a new king"
said the king
"did they and this has to do with me for what?" asked Jou.
"I worry for your sake"
"shh, bull shit" said Jou, the king ignored Jou's comment and continued
"So, that is why I am going to send you and mai to the human world"
"excuse me!!!" said Jou
"I am going to send you to the human world. Would this make you happy?" asked Jou's father
"human world? to be free! Of course I would be happy" said Jou smiling infront of his father for the first time even though his father couldn't see it.
"then, you shall leave tomorrow"
"tomorrow! so soon!" said Jou surprised.
"Because the blue eyes clan is going to attack us. They are known to kill all the royal family of the clans they overtake"
"oh"
"so, tonight get your things ready. Go hurry now and get ready."
"thank you, dad" Jou uncovered his face and smiled for his father giving him a hug. "I love you" he kissed his fathers cheek
"I love you too"
To bad their little happy scene was ruined as guards ran into the thrown shouting.
"HIGHNESS! WE ARE UNDER ATTACK! THE BLUE EYES ARE ATTACKING!" screamed one of the guards spitting out blood.
The king stood up, "what! get the troops ready fast! Gaurd the front gate. We cannot let them through the first defense." ordered the king. He turned to Jou.
"Jou, take the back gate. Get Mai and flee right away" ordered the king
"but father"
"thats an order" screamed the king. Jou felt tears on his cheeks. He kissed his father one last time and ran out the back door.
Jou found Mai in the servents quarters. "Mai! we're under attack. we need to leave now"
"but the king" Mai started
"ordered us to leave" Jou finished for her. He grabbed her hand and ran down the hall making twists and turns around the halls. Damn, where was the back door. Come to think of it. He never really seen it! The made a right turn and bumped into some blue eyes and red eyes fighting.
"Jou! this way" said Mai pulling on his sleeve. Jou couldn't move though, he starred as the blue eyes soldiers kill the red eyes soldiers. Jou never seen spilt blood before. He felt sick at the site as the blue eyes laughed and chopped off the dead's heads. They snickered then looked at Jou smirking.
"look here, who is this." they teased as they saw Jous covered body. Jou felt angry, how can someone be so violent. He tore at the soliders punching them and kicking at them. He wanted them to die, he felt so angry. What was this feeling? where was it coming from. Something in him stirred, it thirsted for blood but another part wanted him to leave, didn't want him to kill.
"JOU!" shouted Mai.
Jou didn't listen to her plea's, he kept punching and kicking them untill they were bloodied and on the floor. Mai ran up and slapped him "snap out of it!" shouted Mai.
"we, have to go now!"
"WHY! why should we go when others are fighting. What a embarassment to our clan! the prince running! I don't want to shame my father!" said Jou
"he wants you to live, do as he says" said Mai
"No! I cannot let him die alone, please understand Mai! Please Mai, flee this place. Do not get hurt" Jou kissed her cheek through the cloth and ran off
"JOU!!!" shouted Mai, "damn it!" she swore and ran after him.
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The red eyes king was tired and felt defeated. He had been stabbed to many times to count. He lost so much blood and felt dizzy. He wasn't going to last much longer. Suddenly, he heard hard footsteps walking right to him.
"stop!" a voice ordered. The king looked up to meet the eyes of deep blue. The man had brunnete hair and was beautiful.
"I am Seto Kaiba, king of the blue eyes clan"
"I am Saio, King of the red eyes clan" replied the King.
"I see, I don't see though. Is your heir? where he is?" asked Seto
"He is dead" said the king
"really. I was hoping to much to see him. I heard he was ugly beyond belief that is why you locked him up. Other say different. I wonder why. Please tell me, I am very interested. Why did you lock up your son for what was it seven hundred years?" asked Seto
"I won't tell you a damn thing" said the king
"pity then, well I grow tired of this talk. Now ..." Seto held up his sword and the King did the same. He knew he was going to die but he wouldn't go down without a fight. Seto swung at him, young and strong, the stroke made the king stumble back.
"tired?" asked Seto swinging again. The king blocked it and made a attack at Seto who dodged it and threw his sword up slicing the kings arm. The king dropped his sword with a clatter.
"now we finish this" seto raised the sword and swung it down only to have it blocked by another sword. He looked up
and blue met brown ....
2 B' Continued...so how was it good?
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