PLEASE GIVE ME SOME FEEDBACK. THIS IS A SHORT CHAPTER BECAUSE I NEED
FEEDBACK.
I can hear him speak to me. He wants me to sleep. I thought that that was what I had been doing. Why should I sleep some more? He was holding something and god did it smell good. He's bringing it closer and I can't wait until it is close enough for me to grab. It takes forever for it to get to me and once it is I look down at it. It is red, why is it red. No I don't want this. Why is he giving me blood? Pushing it away I scramble to the other side. He's coming closer and wants me to drink the blood. I faintly hear him tell me that it is what I need but I don't want it. Somewhere along the way he gives up because I'm left alone again. My stomach hurts and I'm hungry, I want something. I can't take the pain so I fall into a dreamless sleep.
She doesn't realize that the only way to make the aching in her stomach go away, is to drink blood. She wont take it and I can't force her. I finally leave her alone and take the blood back to the kitchenette. The only escape for her being sleep, she has forced herself to rest. Taking her into my arms I make sure that I don't wake her up. I don't think that she is a vampire, if she was I would be able to make her face change. But I haven't seen her eat and the ach she seems to be feeling is what a vampire would feel without blood. So the only thing to do is to make her drink. Lifting her head I gently pour the blood down her throat. She moves restlessly in my arms and I still, trying to make sure not to wake her. I'm supposed to call the gang once I know what Buffy needs and how to make her come back home. Easier said than figured out.
I can hear him speak to me. He wants me to sleep. I thought that that was what I had been doing. Why should I sleep some more? He was holding something and god did it smell good. He's bringing it closer and I can't wait until it is close enough for me to grab. It takes forever for it to get to me and once it is I look down at it. It is red, why is it red. No I don't want this. Why is he giving me blood? Pushing it away I scramble to the other side. He's coming closer and wants me to drink the blood. I faintly hear him tell me that it is what I need but I don't want it. Somewhere along the way he gives up because I'm left alone again. My stomach hurts and I'm hungry, I want something. I can't take the pain so I fall into a dreamless sleep.
She doesn't realize that the only way to make the aching in her stomach go away, is to drink blood. She wont take it and I can't force her. I finally leave her alone and take the blood back to the kitchenette. The only escape for her being sleep, she has forced herself to rest. Taking her into my arms I make sure that I don't wake her up. I don't think that she is a vampire, if she was I would be able to make her face change. But I haven't seen her eat and the ach she seems to be feeling is what a vampire would feel without blood. So the only thing to do is to make her drink. Lifting her head I gently pour the blood down her throat. She moves restlessly in my arms and I still, trying to make sure not to wake her. I'm supposed to call the gang once I know what Buffy needs and how to make her come back home. Easier said than figured out.
