Thank you all for reviewing the first poem. I have to admit that I actually forgot about this one until I received a review off DreaminofLorien which remind me. So thank you and here it for you to enjoy, I hope.
A Shining Light
Now, Mr Frodo
I can see your pain
You are lost in the darkness
Although I shout your name
I try to help you recall
The days that have gone past
I try to shine a guiding light
But the darkness is too vast
I see the weight you carry
I see the end before you fall
So let us be rid of ring
Forever now, once and for all
I see you are too weak
I taste fear in the air
But don't give up now Frodo
And leave me, don't you dare
The end is growing close
We have no time to loose
Between carrying on or giving up
It is now we have to choose
As last the light I see
And I know what I must do
I can't carry it for you
But I can carry you
Thank you again for everyone who has already reviewed and anyone who hasn't, please let me know what you think.
