Chapter 1
The beginning
.......................My father always wanted to be a farmer .... A few years back he bought a small farm and some land with his best friend Takakura. In a little town called forget –me not valley. The town was an oceanfront town and small mountains surrounding it completely the only ways to get in were by boat or a small road through the mountains. I jack had only once seen my father but I was only a small boy and do not remember him very well but I do remember him talking about this place and how much he loved it there . ..............................
Well anyways yesterday a man came to my house in the city and ask if jack lived here and I said that was me. So the man introduced his self to me and said" My name is takakura and I am your father's partner in forget- me not valley" he said with a grim look "and I have bad news and good news for you ""well your father just died of cancer and his last request was that to have me come to your house and ask you to take over his farm ""so will you take over the farm?" takakura said. I who was in shock that my father died of cancer said "ummmmm........." I was thinking that my life was not all that great said, "Sure I would like to take over my father's farm" ************************ Dark_Blue_Dragon so what do you think of my first chapter? I have just become a member so let me know what you think of my first chapter. I will try to get the next chapter in as soon as possible.
The beginning
.......................My father always wanted to be a farmer .... A few years back he bought a small farm and some land with his best friend Takakura. In a little town called forget –me not valley. The town was an oceanfront town and small mountains surrounding it completely the only ways to get in were by boat or a small road through the mountains. I jack had only once seen my father but I was only a small boy and do not remember him very well but I do remember him talking about this place and how much he loved it there . ..............................
Well anyways yesterday a man came to my house in the city and ask if jack lived here and I said that was me. So the man introduced his self to me and said" My name is takakura and I am your father's partner in forget- me not valley" he said with a grim look "and I have bad news and good news for you ""well your father just died of cancer and his last request was that to have me come to your house and ask you to take over his farm ""so will you take over the farm?" takakura said. I who was in shock that my father died of cancer said "ummmmm........." I was thinking that my life was not all that great said, "Sure I would like to take over my father's farm" ************************ Dark_Blue_Dragon so what do you think of my first chapter? I have just become a member so let me know what you think of my first chapter. I will try to get the next chapter in as soon as possible.
