A/N thanks to all who reviewed. This chapter is the 'explaining'
chapter. All questions and confusion will hopefully be cleared up.
Responses:
Imprisoned in a Cork: glad you're on my side with the evil mary sue haters and name-callerers. I won't stop writing unless people stop reviewing, so don't worry!!
Hex: I don't really think you can ask for no cliffies. Ahem, have you looked at the endings of your chapters?? Just a question. Thanks for the support.
Nicksy: thanks. Its nice to hear it from someone other than my English teacher.
Nithlandiel: here's chapter 3 for you!
TKF: so sorry girl. You know I love ya!! Its just I think Toby (TB) Keith (K). I sowwie.
Cookies and cake to PiratesAreCool for adding me to his/her favorite author list!!!
~*~*~*~*Explanation*~*~*~*~
There was a loud crash as Meleth fell from her chair in a faint. "Not again!" Mary sighed. "No more Mrs. Nice Mortal," she thought as she picked up the pitcher and proceeded to pour its contents on Meleth.
Meleth woke up and sat back down, trying to remember what happened. All of the sudden it came to her.
"I'm a what?!" Meleth stood up so fast she knocked her chair over. It fell to the floor with a crash. She looked from Mary to the chair and back at Mary.
"An elf, dear. Surely your father had books on them. He said he did." Mary managed to remain calm although Meleth was obviously fighting a losing battle with her reactions.
"I don't believe this. Is this supposed to be some joke? Ok everyone! You can come out now! It's over! Come and laugh at me!" Meleth looked around the room, wondering if she was going crazy.
"Meleth!! You can either trust what I am going to tell you about your life, or you can live in the dark for the rest of eternity!" Mary got Meleth's attention.
"I find it very hard to believe that I am an elf. My parents wouldn't lie to me. They loved me."
"That they did. They loved you very much. That's why they lied to you. Can I continue the story with no interruptions?" Mary asked and continued when Meleth nodded. "It all started on a sunny day in August, about 25 years ago."
A/N that's the ends of this chapter. Just kidding, I wouldn't be that evil.
%%%%%%flashback%%%%%%%
Meleth looked up at her mother. They were sharing a horse, riding with her father to a town in Gondor where he was to propose an idea of King Greenleaf's. Normally a messenger would talk the idea, but it was very important, so the King sent his right hand man: Glebriwyn. Because he would be staying a while he brought his wife, Anadriewen, and his daughter Meleth.
One of the scouts rode back to Glebriwyn. "Sir, there is a band of orcs coming from the north."
"Very well," he said and raised his voice to announce to the rest of the group they would be turning east when the orcs attacked.
"Anadriewen! Ride south as fast as you can! Hold on tight to Meleth, my dear! I love you!" Glebriwyn
%%%%%%end flashback%%%%%%%
"She didn't make it very far. The orcs allowed her to gallop about 10 feet before shooting her in the back with an arrow." Mary informed Meleth.
Meleth promptly fainted out of her chair.
"This needs to stop!"
A/N not so much of a cliffy, but just enough to keep you begging for more. I have to go back to school in 8 days, so updates won't be very frequent. If you want more before Monday 25, just press that button down at the bottom. Thanks! Ta ta.
~kevin luver
Responses:
Imprisoned in a Cork: glad you're on my side with the evil mary sue haters and name-callerers. I won't stop writing unless people stop reviewing, so don't worry!!
Hex: I don't really think you can ask for no cliffies. Ahem, have you looked at the endings of your chapters?? Just a question. Thanks for the support.
Nicksy: thanks. Its nice to hear it from someone other than my English teacher.
Nithlandiel: here's chapter 3 for you!
TKF: so sorry girl. You know I love ya!! Its just I think Toby (TB) Keith (K). I sowwie.
Cookies and cake to PiratesAreCool for adding me to his/her favorite author list!!!
~*~*~*~*Explanation*~*~*~*~
There was a loud crash as Meleth fell from her chair in a faint. "Not again!" Mary sighed. "No more Mrs. Nice Mortal," she thought as she picked up the pitcher and proceeded to pour its contents on Meleth.
Meleth woke up and sat back down, trying to remember what happened. All of the sudden it came to her.
"I'm a what?!" Meleth stood up so fast she knocked her chair over. It fell to the floor with a crash. She looked from Mary to the chair and back at Mary.
"An elf, dear. Surely your father had books on them. He said he did." Mary managed to remain calm although Meleth was obviously fighting a losing battle with her reactions.
"I don't believe this. Is this supposed to be some joke? Ok everyone! You can come out now! It's over! Come and laugh at me!" Meleth looked around the room, wondering if she was going crazy.
"Meleth!! You can either trust what I am going to tell you about your life, or you can live in the dark for the rest of eternity!" Mary got Meleth's attention.
"I find it very hard to believe that I am an elf. My parents wouldn't lie to me. They loved me."
"That they did. They loved you very much. That's why they lied to you. Can I continue the story with no interruptions?" Mary asked and continued when Meleth nodded. "It all started on a sunny day in August, about 25 years ago."
A/N that's the ends of this chapter. Just kidding, I wouldn't be that evil.
%%%%%%flashback%%%%%%%
Meleth looked up at her mother. They were sharing a horse, riding with her father to a town in Gondor where he was to propose an idea of King Greenleaf's. Normally a messenger would talk the idea, but it was very important, so the King sent his right hand man: Glebriwyn. Because he would be staying a while he brought his wife, Anadriewen, and his daughter Meleth.
One of the scouts rode back to Glebriwyn. "Sir, there is a band of orcs coming from the north."
"Very well," he said and raised his voice to announce to the rest of the group they would be turning east when the orcs attacked.
"Anadriewen! Ride south as fast as you can! Hold on tight to Meleth, my dear! I love you!" Glebriwyn
%%%%%%end flashback%%%%%%%
"She didn't make it very far. The orcs allowed her to gallop about 10 feet before shooting her in the back with an arrow." Mary informed Meleth.
Meleth promptly fainted out of her chair.
"This needs to stop!"
A/N not so much of a cliffy, but just enough to keep you begging for more. I have to go back to school in 8 days, so updates won't be very frequent. If you want more before Monday 25, just press that button down at the bottom. Thanks! Ta ta.
~kevin luver
