I don't owned Jak. But I owned Farkness, Utshie, Pitte and Willie.
AD: Sorry it took so long, but here it is, the new chaptie!
A little info about Jak I I. What Nobinoir al said. The game come out on the 3rd week of October. By us NL/Holland it come out Wednesday 15 Oct.
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Jak and Daxter Renegade
Chapter 09: An failure escape plan
***
A week was past away and Jak was 100% complete, sooner than Utshie had expect. He looked at the scans and then to Jak.
Utshie: Are you ready for testing?
Jak looked angrily at him. He was throw into an tube and there was no escaping.
Jak: What do you want?
Utshie: I want to test you how strong you really are.
Then he filled up the tube with water. Jak looked muddled.
Jak: Are you try to drown me?
Utshie: Only testing. What do you do with this situation?
Jak: Swimming?
The water rise quickly and Jak try to keep his head above the water.
Jak: Stop with this!
Utshie: No, the tube must filled up with water, or we can't test you!
Jak: You are crazy!
Utshie start to laughing out loud.
When the tube was filled up with water, looked Jak around. He be drowned if he don't do something quickly. Suddenly his body transformed again. Utshie was scared.
Utshie: No, not again!
Dark Jak looked at the glass and with one claw-attack, he broke the glass. He search for air and Utshie ran away. Dark Jak looked around and then to his claws, soon he begin to smile.
Dark Jak: Farkness, you're last days are over, I'll take care of it.
***
A little month later, lie Jak on his bed, when he heard whisper. He stood up and walked to the door. He looked through the little window and saw Pitte.
Jak: How on earth you escaped?
Pitte: Willie and I ware pickpocket too. We stole key's from the guard.
Pitte let Jak out of his cell and Willie walked in front of them to look of it was save.
Pitte: If we play clever, we will escape before you can say 'See You Later'.
Suddenly ran Jak to the other way.
Pitte: Dark Jak, the exit is there!
Jak: I know, but I have to do something, I See You Later!
Willie: See You Later!
Pitte: Shut up, we going with or without him. Come on.
***
Jak ran to Farkness' office. Farkness wasn't there and give Jak a change too look to his lost Power Cell. He search everywhere, but left the objects on there places.
He grabbed an photo frame from the wall and saw an safe. He transformed into Dark Jak and do the safe, without damage, open and saw the Power Cell. He grabbed the Power Cell and locked up the safe. Then he transformed back to itself.
The Power Cell was shaking in his hand. Jak looked at her.
Jak: Don't be afraid. It's me, Jak.
The Power Cell heard his voice and looked better at him. Then she was happy too see him again.
Then he grabbed the photo frame and hang it back. He put the Power Cell into his backpack and closet the zip. Then he make a run for it. Half way the stairs, he heard something and looked outside.
Then he become frighten when he saw that Pitte and Willie where outside. They are surrounded by Metal Heads. Even stood Farkness. He give an order and the Metal Heads shoot the two boys dead.
Jak ran back to his cell and locked up the door. Then he going to sit on his bed.
Jak: Pitte, you fool! I told you, it's here strict surveillance!
Then he looked outside to the stars.
Jak: Well, at least his wish came out. They are escaped, but it was not purposed to be happen that they kill them.
Then he feels the Power Cell. He grabbed her out of his backpack and looked at her.
Jak: Yeah, I know. You are back to me. Sorry I let you scared about my monstrous body.
The Power Cell was shinning and jak feel the heat. He also feels what the Power Cell said to him.
Jak: You are different then the other Power Cells, right?
The Power Cell jumped up and down on his legs. Jak smiled at her.
Jak: I promise you, I'll protect you from everybody. They can't catch you that easily.
Then Jak put the Power Cell back into his backpack and lie down into his bed. He looked at the stars and then he felt asleep.
Suddenly ran Farkness to Jak's cell and unlocked it. He walked inside and saw that Jak was sleeping on his bed. He sleep as a block and don't hear Farkness come in. Farkness signed.
Farkness: For a moment, I thought you escaped too, my Dark Guardian.
Then he walked out of the cell.
Farkness: About a half year, then it is time. I can conquer the world!
He smiled evilly and then he walked away.
***
-----Responds-----
*Shark: Yes, I must admit. Jak is cool, sexy and more. And Dark Jak is cool, not sexy. ^-^
Farkness: Who name Shark me?
AD: Farky!
Jak: * Got a big smile * Farky?
Farkness: Not my childhood name!
AD&Jak: Farky!
Farkness: NO!
*Nobinoir: Maybe you know it all. When you said about the demo disk, I run to the shops and ask it everywhere. No demo, but info about, what you all said, 3rd week of October. Then he came out! (Happiness) ^__^
*Darksbane: Another Chapter, no review from you (again). * Fall on her knees and start to beg * Please, review the other chapters and this? I want reviews!
Beauty: Oh ho, she posthaste!
AD: No, I am not! Alright, a little.
Until the next Chapter and review please.
AD: Sorry it took so long, but here it is, the new chaptie!
A little info about Jak I I. What Nobinoir al said. The game come out on the 3rd week of October. By us NL/Holland it come out Wednesday 15 Oct.
***
Jak and Daxter Renegade
Chapter 09: An failure escape plan
***
A week was past away and Jak was 100% complete, sooner than Utshie had expect. He looked at the scans and then to Jak.
Utshie: Are you ready for testing?
Jak looked angrily at him. He was throw into an tube and there was no escaping.
Jak: What do you want?
Utshie: I want to test you how strong you really are.
Then he filled up the tube with water. Jak looked muddled.
Jak: Are you try to drown me?
Utshie: Only testing. What do you do with this situation?
Jak: Swimming?
The water rise quickly and Jak try to keep his head above the water.
Jak: Stop with this!
Utshie: No, the tube must filled up with water, or we can't test you!
Jak: You are crazy!
Utshie start to laughing out loud.
When the tube was filled up with water, looked Jak around. He be drowned if he don't do something quickly. Suddenly his body transformed again. Utshie was scared.
Utshie: No, not again!
Dark Jak looked at the glass and with one claw-attack, he broke the glass. He search for air and Utshie ran away. Dark Jak looked around and then to his claws, soon he begin to smile.
Dark Jak: Farkness, you're last days are over, I'll take care of it.
***
A little month later, lie Jak on his bed, when he heard whisper. He stood up and walked to the door. He looked through the little window and saw Pitte.
Jak: How on earth you escaped?
Pitte: Willie and I ware pickpocket too. We stole key's from the guard.
Pitte let Jak out of his cell and Willie walked in front of them to look of it was save.
Pitte: If we play clever, we will escape before you can say 'See You Later'.
Suddenly ran Jak to the other way.
Pitte: Dark Jak, the exit is there!
Jak: I know, but I have to do something, I See You Later!
Willie: See You Later!
Pitte: Shut up, we going with or without him. Come on.
***
Jak ran to Farkness' office. Farkness wasn't there and give Jak a change too look to his lost Power Cell. He search everywhere, but left the objects on there places.
He grabbed an photo frame from the wall and saw an safe. He transformed into Dark Jak and do the safe, without damage, open and saw the Power Cell. He grabbed the Power Cell and locked up the safe. Then he transformed back to itself.
The Power Cell was shaking in his hand. Jak looked at her.
Jak: Don't be afraid. It's me, Jak.
The Power Cell heard his voice and looked better at him. Then she was happy too see him again.
Then he grabbed the photo frame and hang it back. He put the Power Cell into his backpack and closet the zip. Then he make a run for it. Half way the stairs, he heard something and looked outside.
Then he become frighten when he saw that Pitte and Willie where outside. They are surrounded by Metal Heads. Even stood Farkness. He give an order and the Metal Heads shoot the two boys dead.
Jak ran back to his cell and locked up the door. Then he going to sit on his bed.
Jak: Pitte, you fool! I told you, it's here strict surveillance!
Then he looked outside to the stars.
Jak: Well, at least his wish came out. They are escaped, but it was not purposed to be happen that they kill them.
Then he feels the Power Cell. He grabbed her out of his backpack and looked at her.
Jak: Yeah, I know. You are back to me. Sorry I let you scared about my monstrous body.
The Power Cell was shinning and jak feel the heat. He also feels what the Power Cell said to him.
Jak: You are different then the other Power Cells, right?
The Power Cell jumped up and down on his legs. Jak smiled at her.
Jak: I promise you, I'll protect you from everybody. They can't catch you that easily.
Then Jak put the Power Cell back into his backpack and lie down into his bed. He looked at the stars and then he felt asleep.
Suddenly ran Farkness to Jak's cell and unlocked it. He walked inside and saw that Jak was sleeping on his bed. He sleep as a block and don't hear Farkness come in. Farkness signed.
Farkness: For a moment, I thought you escaped too, my Dark Guardian.
Then he walked out of the cell.
Farkness: About a half year, then it is time. I can conquer the world!
He smiled evilly and then he walked away.
***
-----Responds-----
*Shark: Yes, I must admit. Jak is cool, sexy and more. And Dark Jak is cool, not sexy. ^-^
Farkness: Who name Shark me?
AD: Farky!
Jak: * Got a big smile * Farky?
Farkness: Not my childhood name!
AD&Jak: Farky!
Farkness: NO!
*Nobinoir: Maybe you know it all. When you said about the demo disk, I run to the shops and ask it everywhere. No demo, but info about, what you all said, 3rd week of October. Then he came out! (Happiness) ^__^
*Darksbane: Another Chapter, no review from you (again). * Fall on her knees and start to beg * Please, review the other chapters and this? I want reviews!
Beauty: Oh ho, she posthaste!
AD: No, I am not! Alright, a little.
Until the next Chapter and review please.
