I don't own Jak or Daxter, but I owned the rest of the characters in this
chapter.
Beauty: Next Chaptie!
AD: Yeah and soon is Jak out of the prison.
Beauty: And then the big adventure go to the start.
AD: Sig, Torn and the rest and of course you meet the Guardians of the Eco.
***
Jak and Daxter Renegade
Chapter 11: Dark Jak, killer machine.
***
Daxter ran back to the city. Jake ran to him and jumped on Daxter's back. Daxter pushed him away. He looked at Jake.
Daxter: Jake, I have to go now.
Jake looked astonish at him, but then he start to smiling and give Daxter a lick. Ones again, Daxter pushed him away.
Daxter: I mean it. I have go to the big city to rescue Jak.
Daxter's eyes filled up with tears. Then he walked to Jake and stroke him.
Daxter: We must now say goodbye. I never forget you.
Jake start to crying and then they hugs each other.
Daxter: Farewell Jake.
Then Daxter ran away. Jake sit down and cried for Daxter. He should never see Daxter again. But the memories on him, should never be forgotten.
***
Meanwhile, Jak thrown into a big cage. Utshie stood above on a gallery and smiled at him.
Utshie: This time, you can't escape that easily. This grille is from pure precursor metal. Even you darkside can't escape.
Jak: If I get my get my hands on you! I tear you up in pieces!
Utshie: Keep your strength for him.
Utshie pushed on a button and a door in the cage opened. Jak looked at it and then he heard a growl. A gigantic monster appears. The monster was black with red eyes that can look through of you. Claws and teeth from pure precursor metal.
Jak moved back. He looked angrily at the monster and then to Utshie. Utshie smiled evilly and sit down into his chair.
Utshie: Let the fight begins.
Utshie snapped his fingers and the monster attacked Jak. Jak ran away from the monster. But the monster lie is paw above Jak. First thought Utshie that the fight was over, but then he saw purple lighting under the paw from the monster.
Utshie signed. The fight was just begun. Dark Jak pulled the paw up and jumped away. The monster looked at him. Dark Jak smiled evilly and look him viciously on.
The monster ran to him. If the monster was to close, jumped Dark Jak under him. He land on his back and scratch the stomach from the monster open. The monster cried out loud.
Utshie looked at it. One of the guard walked to him. She looked afraid to the fight. It was Farkness' daughter, Felina. She was the leader of the Metal Heads from the jail.
Felina: Breiens is strong, but it seems that 506-AA stronger is.
Utshie: That's true, he tear up Breiens.
Felina: But Breiens is your pet!
Utshie: I know, but we can't find something else.
Felina: We?
Utshie: Your dad and I. We want to know how strong 506-AA really is.
Felina nodded and looked back at the fight. Dark Jak jumped on Breiens' back and pulled him claws into the back. Breiens cried out loud. The pain go through his body and try to get rid of Dark Jak.
Breiens fall on his side and Dark Jak jumped off of him. Breiens stood up and looked at Dark Jak. Nobody have defeat him before. Why is he different than the others?
Dark Jak stood ready for the next round. He begin to enjoyment the fight. The killing of his enemies is now in his blood. Utshie looked at Dark Jak and Breiens.
Utshie: Its almost over, 506-AA kills Breiens.
Felina: Let the fight stop!
Utshie: No, let 506-AA finished Breiens. I can nothing do about this.
Felina looked at Utshie and then to Breiens and Dark Jak. The fight was almost finished.
Breiens was furious and try to grabbed Dark Jak with his teethes. Dark Jak jumped out of the way and grabbed Breiens by his throat. Breiens can not do anything, but he try to swing Dark Jak off of him.
Dark Jak smiled at him and then he tears up Breiens' throat open. Its over, Breiens was dead. Dark Jak looked at him and then to the grille. He ran to it and try to break the grille, but he failed. Utshie laughed.
Utshie: I told you, the grille is from pure precursor metal.
Dark Jak: I hate you!
Utshie: I know, you not the only one, that's hate me.
Dark Jak: And not the last one. But if you want that this was the last one, come here and I tear you up! I have got my main course, but I waiting for my dessert. And you are the dessert! Come here, I dare you!
Utshie looked at Felina.
Utshie: Give him a sedative and bring him back to his cell and locked up the door.
Felina: Okay, but what do you do in the meantime?
Utshie: I go back to my lab, I want to loose something.
Felina: You tears for Breiens?
Utshie didn't answer and walked away. Felina looked at him and then she looked at Dark Jak. Dark Jak was in the meantime back transformed into his old body. He can't believe that Dark Jak so strong was, that he can defeat a gigantic monster.
But Jak knew it. Dark Jak is a killing machine and didn't stop unless his enemies are dead. He smiled evilly. He can his new power used on Farkness. Farkness didn't get easily escape from the mighty Dark Jak. He start to laugh evilly and can't wait until he can kill Farkness.
***
A month was past and Daxter finally came to the big city. Daxter looked at the forest. He maybe not going back to that place. He was thinking about the adventures he go through.
Then he looked at the big city and swallowed. He walked the city in and search for the Jak look-a-like girl. It took him two days when he finally found her. It was at midnight.
Daxter walked in a dark alley, when someone followed him. Suddenly it speaks to Daxter.
Voice: Well, if that not my little animal friend is.
Daxter was frighten and turned quickly to the figure. The moonlight fall into the alley and Daxter saw who it was. The Jak look-a-like girl, but now she saw two years older then the first time they meet each other.
Daxter: finally, I found you!
Girl: Found me? The last time you screamed away like a madman.
Daxter: That's true, but I was confused. See, my friend is a look-a-like of you and I though you was him. Because, he was on the same day that I meet you, arrest by Metal Skulls and they take him away from me.
Girl: I understand. But why are you looking for me?
Daxter: Let me introduce myself first. My name is Daxter. And what is your name?
The girl looked at him and smiled.
Girl: My name is Shirline.
*** -----Responds-----
*Nobinoir: Thanks for the review. I hope we talk soon with each other.
Black Ottset: * Ran to Jak to steal the power cell. *
Daxter: * Jumped on him * I want to know who you really are!
Black Ottset: Stay reading Nobinoir's fic and you find it out.
AD: * Signed * I want to know it too!
*Eco Master: Next chapter, and the two are together. Not really to together but. . . I don't tell, it's a secret for the next chaptie.
Jak: I can't kill Farkness, he stood up and ran away.
AD: I told you so, I need Farkness until the last Chapter. He is your principal enemy.
Jak: -_-*
*'Bane: And how you find the Jak look-a-like girl? She don't see only like Jak, but she got the character from him too.
Shirline: NO, that have I not!
Jak: I look in the mirror!
Shirline: Shut up.
AD: And may ask you something, or Beautyfly want to ask you too.
Beauty: Yeah, may we borrow Kaza from you? For a story that's in the making?
AD: I hope that we may borrow him. And if we borrow him, you and me are playing in too, but Kaza and Beautyfly are the main characters.
*Yami Kanis: Thanks for the review.
Daxter: Whiteside hit me well. I got a bump and than I got the risk to safe Jak. I got a BAD feeling about this!
AD: Where is Dark Eco, I must ran for my life!
Daxter: Verry funny AD, You know this sentences from the game in 'The lost precursor city'
AD: Yeah ^_^
Thanks for the reviews
Until the next update and review please.
Beauty: Next Chaptie!
AD: Yeah and soon is Jak out of the prison.
Beauty: And then the big adventure go to the start.
AD: Sig, Torn and the rest and of course you meet the Guardians of the Eco.
***
Jak and Daxter Renegade
Chapter 11: Dark Jak, killer machine.
***
Daxter ran back to the city. Jake ran to him and jumped on Daxter's back. Daxter pushed him away. He looked at Jake.
Daxter: Jake, I have to go now.
Jake looked astonish at him, but then he start to smiling and give Daxter a lick. Ones again, Daxter pushed him away.
Daxter: I mean it. I have go to the big city to rescue Jak.
Daxter's eyes filled up with tears. Then he walked to Jake and stroke him.
Daxter: We must now say goodbye. I never forget you.
Jake start to crying and then they hugs each other.
Daxter: Farewell Jake.
Then Daxter ran away. Jake sit down and cried for Daxter. He should never see Daxter again. But the memories on him, should never be forgotten.
***
Meanwhile, Jak thrown into a big cage. Utshie stood above on a gallery and smiled at him.
Utshie: This time, you can't escape that easily. This grille is from pure precursor metal. Even you darkside can't escape.
Jak: If I get my get my hands on you! I tear you up in pieces!
Utshie: Keep your strength for him.
Utshie pushed on a button and a door in the cage opened. Jak looked at it and then he heard a growl. A gigantic monster appears. The monster was black with red eyes that can look through of you. Claws and teeth from pure precursor metal.
Jak moved back. He looked angrily at the monster and then to Utshie. Utshie smiled evilly and sit down into his chair.
Utshie: Let the fight begins.
Utshie snapped his fingers and the monster attacked Jak. Jak ran away from the monster. But the monster lie is paw above Jak. First thought Utshie that the fight was over, but then he saw purple lighting under the paw from the monster.
Utshie signed. The fight was just begun. Dark Jak pulled the paw up and jumped away. The monster looked at him. Dark Jak smiled evilly and look him viciously on.
The monster ran to him. If the monster was to close, jumped Dark Jak under him. He land on his back and scratch the stomach from the monster open. The monster cried out loud.
Utshie looked at it. One of the guard walked to him. She looked afraid to the fight. It was Farkness' daughter, Felina. She was the leader of the Metal Heads from the jail.
Felina: Breiens is strong, but it seems that 506-AA stronger is.
Utshie: That's true, he tear up Breiens.
Felina: But Breiens is your pet!
Utshie: I know, but we can't find something else.
Felina: We?
Utshie: Your dad and I. We want to know how strong 506-AA really is.
Felina nodded and looked back at the fight. Dark Jak jumped on Breiens' back and pulled him claws into the back. Breiens cried out loud. The pain go through his body and try to get rid of Dark Jak.
Breiens fall on his side and Dark Jak jumped off of him. Breiens stood up and looked at Dark Jak. Nobody have defeat him before. Why is he different than the others?
Dark Jak stood ready for the next round. He begin to enjoyment the fight. The killing of his enemies is now in his blood. Utshie looked at Dark Jak and Breiens.
Utshie: Its almost over, 506-AA kills Breiens.
Felina: Let the fight stop!
Utshie: No, let 506-AA finished Breiens. I can nothing do about this.
Felina looked at Utshie and then to Breiens and Dark Jak. The fight was almost finished.
Breiens was furious and try to grabbed Dark Jak with his teethes. Dark Jak jumped out of the way and grabbed Breiens by his throat. Breiens can not do anything, but he try to swing Dark Jak off of him.
Dark Jak smiled at him and then he tears up Breiens' throat open. Its over, Breiens was dead. Dark Jak looked at him and then to the grille. He ran to it and try to break the grille, but he failed. Utshie laughed.
Utshie: I told you, the grille is from pure precursor metal.
Dark Jak: I hate you!
Utshie: I know, you not the only one, that's hate me.
Dark Jak: And not the last one. But if you want that this was the last one, come here and I tear you up! I have got my main course, but I waiting for my dessert. And you are the dessert! Come here, I dare you!
Utshie looked at Felina.
Utshie: Give him a sedative and bring him back to his cell and locked up the door.
Felina: Okay, but what do you do in the meantime?
Utshie: I go back to my lab, I want to loose something.
Felina: You tears for Breiens?
Utshie didn't answer and walked away. Felina looked at him and then she looked at Dark Jak. Dark Jak was in the meantime back transformed into his old body. He can't believe that Dark Jak so strong was, that he can defeat a gigantic monster.
But Jak knew it. Dark Jak is a killing machine and didn't stop unless his enemies are dead. He smiled evilly. He can his new power used on Farkness. Farkness didn't get easily escape from the mighty Dark Jak. He start to laugh evilly and can't wait until he can kill Farkness.
***
A month was past and Daxter finally came to the big city. Daxter looked at the forest. He maybe not going back to that place. He was thinking about the adventures he go through.
Then he looked at the big city and swallowed. He walked the city in and search for the Jak look-a-like girl. It took him two days when he finally found her. It was at midnight.
Daxter walked in a dark alley, when someone followed him. Suddenly it speaks to Daxter.
Voice: Well, if that not my little animal friend is.
Daxter was frighten and turned quickly to the figure. The moonlight fall into the alley and Daxter saw who it was. The Jak look-a-like girl, but now she saw two years older then the first time they meet each other.
Daxter: finally, I found you!
Girl: Found me? The last time you screamed away like a madman.
Daxter: That's true, but I was confused. See, my friend is a look-a-like of you and I though you was him. Because, he was on the same day that I meet you, arrest by Metal Skulls and they take him away from me.
Girl: I understand. But why are you looking for me?
Daxter: Let me introduce myself first. My name is Daxter. And what is your name?
The girl looked at him and smiled.
Girl: My name is Shirline.
*** -----Responds-----
*Nobinoir: Thanks for the review. I hope we talk soon with each other.
Black Ottset: * Ran to Jak to steal the power cell. *
Daxter: * Jumped on him * I want to know who you really are!
Black Ottset: Stay reading Nobinoir's fic and you find it out.
AD: * Signed * I want to know it too!
*Eco Master: Next chapter, and the two are together. Not really to together but. . . I don't tell, it's a secret for the next chaptie.
Jak: I can't kill Farkness, he stood up and ran away.
AD: I told you so, I need Farkness until the last Chapter. He is your principal enemy.
Jak: -_-*
*'Bane: And how you find the Jak look-a-like girl? She don't see only like Jak, but she got the character from him too.
Shirline: NO, that have I not!
Jak: I look in the mirror!
Shirline: Shut up.
AD: And may ask you something, or Beautyfly want to ask you too.
Beauty: Yeah, may we borrow Kaza from you? For a story that's in the making?
AD: I hope that we may borrow him. And if we borrow him, you and me are playing in too, but Kaza and Beautyfly are the main characters.
*Yami Kanis: Thanks for the review.
Daxter: Whiteside hit me well. I got a bump and than I got the risk to safe Jak. I got a BAD feeling about this!
AD: Where is Dark Eco, I must ran for my life!
Daxter: Verry funny AD, You know this sentences from the game in 'The lost precursor city'
AD: Yeah ^_^
Thanks for the reviews
Until the next update and review please.
