AD: Here it is, the last chapter of 'Jak and Daxter Renegade: Jak, the Dark
Guardian. The legacy of the Guardians of the Eco'.
Beauty: And a big cliffhanger is coming.
AD: Yeah, a exiting chapter this time.
Beauty: You probably hate her after this chapter.
AD: * Gulp * I hope not. * Sweet drop * 0_0'
Beauty: Am I a stinker or not.
AD: BEAUTY!
Beauty: I have go to the bathroom now, see you later!
AD: Beauty, come here!
***
Jak and Daxter Renegade
Chapter 13: The big escape.
***
Two month was past and Jak stuck almost two years in the prison. It was time, Daxter try to safe him. But how? Then he heard footsteps on the corridor and the door of his cell opened.
Two guards thrown a boy inside. Then they locked up the door and walked away. Jak looked at his new cellmate.
Jak: A new cellmate, what kind of Farkness.
Jak stood up and the boy groveled into a corner of the cell. Jak looked better at him. He was young, like five-teen years old. Jak walked to him.
Jak: I am Jak. Who are you?
Michel: Michel, mister.
Jak: Mister! Just call me Jak. Stuck in here, same song.
Michel: I got hungry and grabbed a apple, I forgot to pay.
Jak: It's a hard world, my friend. I am stuck in here almost two years for now.
Michel: Two years?
Jak: Don't worry Michel, I got friends outside the prison. They are rescue me today or tomorrow and you go with us.
***
Finally, Daxter and Shirline got a plan to rescue Jak.
Shirline: We go via the sewer. Are you really sure, you know where you came out?
Daxter: Of course, it was almost near Jak's cell.
Shirline: Good, we grab a Metal Head and I wear his suit. Then we got more chances to steal the key and free Jak. Then we escape into the sewer where we came from.
Daxter: A great idea. And when we got Jak out of there, then we must find a way to go back to us, our time.
Shirline: That's a other care Dax, now we must make sure that this plan is working, or else. . .
Daxter: Or else, what?
Shirline: Or we hang.
Daxter swallowed and grabbed his throat. He wouldn't think about that. Shirline laugh at him. Daxter looked better at her.
Daxter: Shirl, we know each other almost two years and I have some questions, that I don't want to ask. But was a member of your family, that called Jak and he ever safe the world from Dark Eco?
Shirline: I heard it in the past. My dad was always talking over him. I mist him, he was such a great story teller.
Daxter: What's happen to your dad?
Shirline: My dad was a member of the Underground group, a group that against the Baron is. He die to safe the leader.
Daxter: What. . . what pathetic for you.
Shirline left her shoulders.
Shirline: My dad was proud on itself. Torn is the leader of the group. I'll never forget that bastard.
Daxter: What do he does?
Shirline: My dad was loyalty. He did everything for Torn and that was his fall. Torn said to me, that my dad with proud was die, to rescue him. I hit him and leaved.
Daxter: Was you a member of the Underground too?
Shirline: Yes, only for my dad.
Daxter: And your mother?
Shirline: She be killed by the Crimson Guards. I was four when I lost her.
Daxter nodded and they are ready to rescue Jak.
***
It was 12.01 am. Jak looked the stars and then he waked up Michel.
Jak: It's time, We gonna to escape.
Michel rubbed into his eyes and nodded. Daxter and Shirline walked into the sewer on the way to Jak's cell. When they got there, they groveled out of the sewer and hide into the shadow. A Metal Head past them and Shirline slapped him unconscious.
She wear his suit and Daxter find the keys. Then they walked to Jak. By Jak's cell, opened Shirline the door and walked inside . Michel jumped behind Jak and looked scared at the Metal Head.
Daxter jumped into the cell and ran to Jak. Jak take him into his arms. Daxter was crying.
Daxter: Finally, we are together now.
Jak: Yeah Dax, we are.
Shirline took off the mask and suit. Jak looked surprised at her. Look he into a mirror or was she real? She was a kind of look-a-like of him.
Shirline: We must hurry, if they find the man that I slapped K.O, the alarm is going off.
Jak nodded and looked at Michel.
Jak: Go you with us?
Michel nodded and followed them. They ran to the entrance of the sewer. But really bad was that some of the Metal Heads found a spur near the sewer and didn't trust it. Jak and the others hide quickly.
Daxter: Okay, have one of us another ideas?
Jak: If we can't escape through the sewer, then we must make a risk and go through the front door.
Shirline: Are you kidding us? That's suicide.
Jak: Have you better ideas?
Shirline: No.
Jak: Come on, lets go!
They ran to the front door, but there where two Metal Heads. Shirline opened her weapon, that was tiered up onto her right wrist and forearm, and shoot on the two Guards. Then they ran further. One of the Guards stood up and pushed on the alarm button.
The alarm go off. Farkness sit in his office, when he suddenly heard the alarm. Quickly he grabbed his gun and ran outside his office. Utshie ran to him and followed.
Utshie: I hope it is not 506-AA that is escaped!
Farkness: If he it is, he is going back to his cell, don't worry.
Utshie: That's not the fearful I mean, but it's something else.
In the meantime, Jak and the others are be captured by the Metal Heads. They be trapped. Farkness ran to them. Utshie hide behind Farkness' back. It was 506-AA!
Farkness: Grab 506-AA and kill the others.
The Guards grabbed Jak and pulled him away from his friends. Farkness sniggered evilly.
Farkness: You to important for me 506-AA, or you was the one who die first. Shoot on the boy!
The Guards direct them guns on Michel on shoot him dead. Jak getting furious.
Jak: No, he was to young to die.
Farkness: Get used to it! Your girlfriend is next.
Jak: NO!
Jak's furious turned him into Dark Jak. Farkness getting frighten. For him stood a white monster.
Farkness: Utshie, what the. . .?
Utshie: I told it you, but you didn't listen.
Dark Jak lets his lighting go through the bodies of the two Guards that grabbed him and killed them. Then he walked to Michel. Dark Jak lie his hand on Michel chest. He feels no heart, Michel was really dead. Dark Jak getting more furious and stood front of Shirline and Daxter.
Dark Jak: You kill no more friends, I take care of that!
Then he pounced on his enemies and kill them all. Meanwhile, Farkness ran away and Utshie try to follow him, but Dark Jak grabbed him.
Dark Jak: Did you know what I said to you last time? I tear you up, alive if I ever can gets my hands on you.
Utshie try to escape, but Dark Jak's claws are faster and tear Utshie up alive. Shirline walked to him.
Shirline: Now we have a chance to escape.
Dark Jak: No, Farkness first.
Then Dark Jak search for Farkness. Daxter and Shirline followed him. They can't find Farkness anywhere.
Shirline: We have to go Jak, before. . .
Suddenly they heard a shot being fired and Shirline screamed it out loud. Dark Jak and Daxter looked at her. She was being hit by her upper arm and looked frighten above them. Dark Jak looked up. There stood Farkness.
Farkness hit her and shoot again. Daxter felt the pain in his chest and hit the ground. He heard Dark Jak called his name and then everything is going black for his eyes.
***
-----Responds-----
AD: Did this is! The BIG cliffhanger!
Beauty: Man, you hit Daxter well.
AD: Huh, yeah.
*Yami Kanis: Am I figgen hyper? Thanks, I think.
Beauty: They rescue Jak, but being trapped, poor Shirline and the guys. They tried so hard and such a bad end.
AD: I am telling you, its go further, we not still to the end.
Beauty: And how many chapters yet?
AD: I think maybe 30 chapters left, but I don't sure.
Beauty: 0_0
*Eco Master: He who laughs last, laughs loudest! And that is of course Jak and not Farkness.
Farkness: I hate it, when she tell the true.
Beauty: Yeah, I hope soon, Jak kick your butt.
Farkness: WHAT! Why You Little. . .
Jak: If you ever touch her, you are HISTORY!
Farkness: Damn it! -_-*
*Nobinoir: Don't let Jak hear about falling in love with Shirline and forget about Keira.
Jak: Who said it I must forget Keira!
Shirline: And I must loved Jak!
AD: Nobody.
Jak&Shirl: Yeah yeah, sure AD!
Farkness: Where's my necklace!
*Shark: Shirline is. . . thing. . . huh. . . arg, you discovered it later in this fic. (can't tell more secrets about this fic)
Shirline: What kind of secrets?
AD: You heard it later.
Shirline: -_-*
AD: This fic comes back at 16 September. Meanwhile, I go further writing my other fics. And thinking about the new chapters of Jak and Daxter Renegade. The new title named 'Jak and Daxter Renegade: The Eco Guardians Reunite'
Until the next update and review please.
Beauty: And a big cliffhanger is coming.
AD: Yeah, a exiting chapter this time.
Beauty: You probably hate her after this chapter.
AD: * Gulp * I hope not. * Sweet drop * 0_0'
Beauty: Am I a stinker or not.
AD: BEAUTY!
Beauty: I have go to the bathroom now, see you later!
AD: Beauty, come here!
***
Jak and Daxter Renegade
Chapter 13: The big escape.
***
Two month was past and Jak stuck almost two years in the prison. It was time, Daxter try to safe him. But how? Then he heard footsteps on the corridor and the door of his cell opened.
Two guards thrown a boy inside. Then they locked up the door and walked away. Jak looked at his new cellmate.
Jak: A new cellmate, what kind of Farkness.
Jak stood up and the boy groveled into a corner of the cell. Jak looked better at him. He was young, like five-teen years old. Jak walked to him.
Jak: I am Jak. Who are you?
Michel: Michel, mister.
Jak: Mister! Just call me Jak. Stuck in here, same song.
Michel: I got hungry and grabbed a apple, I forgot to pay.
Jak: It's a hard world, my friend. I am stuck in here almost two years for now.
Michel: Two years?
Jak: Don't worry Michel, I got friends outside the prison. They are rescue me today or tomorrow and you go with us.
***
Finally, Daxter and Shirline got a plan to rescue Jak.
Shirline: We go via the sewer. Are you really sure, you know where you came out?
Daxter: Of course, it was almost near Jak's cell.
Shirline: Good, we grab a Metal Head and I wear his suit. Then we got more chances to steal the key and free Jak. Then we escape into the sewer where we came from.
Daxter: A great idea. And when we got Jak out of there, then we must find a way to go back to us, our time.
Shirline: That's a other care Dax, now we must make sure that this plan is working, or else. . .
Daxter: Or else, what?
Shirline: Or we hang.
Daxter swallowed and grabbed his throat. He wouldn't think about that. Shirline laugh at him. Daxter looked better at her.
Daxter: Shirl, we know each other almost two years and I have some questions, that I don't want to ask. But was a member of your family, that called Jak and he ever safe the world from Dark Eco?
Shirline: I heard it in the past. My dad was always talking over him. I mist him, he was such a great story teller.
Daxter: What's happen to your dad?
Shirline: My dad was a member of the Underground group, a group that against the Baron is. He die to safe the leader.
Daxter: What. . . what pathetic for you.
Shirline left her shoulders.
Shirline: My dad was proud on itself. Torn is the leader of the group. I'll never forget that bastard.
Daxter: What do he does?
Shirline: My dad was loyalty. He did everything for Torn and that was his fall. Torn said to me, that my dad with proud was die, to rescue him. I hit him and leaved.
Daxter: Was you a member of the Underground too?
Shirline: Yes, only for my dad.
Daxter: And your mother?
Shirline: She be killed by the Crimson Guards. I was four when I lost her.
Daxter nodded and they are ready to rescue Jak.
***
It was 12.01 am. Jak looked the stars and then he waked up Michel.
Jak: It's time, We gonna to escape.
Michel rubbed into his eyes and nodded. Daxter and Shirline walked into the sewer on the way to Jak's cell. When they got there, they groveled out of the sewer and hide into the shadow. A Metal Head past them and Shirline slapped him unconscious.
She wear his suit and Daxter find the keys. Then they walked to Jak. By Jak's cell, opened Shirline the door and walked inside . Michel jumped behind Jak and looked scared at the Metal Head.
Daxter jumped into the cell and ran to Jak. Jak take him into his arms. Daxter was crying.
Daxter: Finally, we are together now.
Jak: Yeah Dax, we are.
Shirline took off the mask and suit. Jak looked surprised at her. Look he into a mirror or was she real? She was a kind of look-a-like of him.
Shirline: We must hurry, if they find the man that I slapped K.O, the alarm is going off.
Jak nodded and looked at Michel.
Jak: Go you with us?
Michel nodded and followed them. They ran to the entrance of the sewer. But really bad was that some of the Metal Heads found a spur near the sewer and didn't trust it. Jak and the others hide quickly.
Daxter: Okay, have one of us another ideas?
Jak: If we can't escape through the sewer, then we must make a risk and go through the front door.
Shirline: Are you kidding us? That's suicide.
Jak: Have you better ideas?
Shirline: No.
Jak: Come on, lets go!
They ran to the front door, but there where two Metal Heads. Shirline opened her weapon, that was tiered up onto her right wrist and forearm, and shoot on the two Guards. Then they ran further. One of the Guards stood up and pushed on the alarm button.
The alarm go off. Farkness sit in his office, when he suddenly heard the alarm. Quickly he grabbed his gun and ran outside his office. Utshie ran to him and followed.
Utshie: I hope it is not 506-AA that is escaped!
Farkness: If he it is, he is going back to his cell, don't worry.
Utshie: That's not the fearful I mean, but it's something else.
In the meantime, Jak and the others are be captured by the Metal Heads. They be trapped. Farkness ran to them. Utshie hide behind Farkness' back. It was 506-AA!
Farkness: Grab 506-AA and kill the others.
The Guards grabbed Jak and pulled him away from his friends. Farkness sniggered evilly.
Farkness: You to important for me 506-AA, or you was the one who die first. Shoot on the boy!
The Guards direct them guns on Michel on shoot him dead. Jak getting furious.
Jak: No, he was to young to die.
Farkness: Get used to it! Your girlfriend is next.
Jak: NO!
Jak's furious turned him into Dark Jak. Farkness getting frighten. For him stood a white monster.
Farkness: Utshie, what the. . .?
Utshie: I told it you, but you didn't listen.
Dark Jak lets his lighting go through the bodies of the two Guards that grabbed him and killed them. Then he walked to Michel. Dark Jak lie his hand on Michel chest. He feels no heart, Michel was really dead. Dark Jak getting more furious and stood front of Shirline and Daxter.
Dark Jak: You kill no more friends, I take care of that!
Then he pounced on his enemies and kill them all. Meanwhile, Farkness ran away and Utshie try to follow him, but Dark Jak grabbed him.
Dark Jak: Did you know what I said to you last time? I tear you up, alive if I ever can gets my hands on you.
Utshie try to escape, but Dark Jak's claws are faster and tear Utshie up alive. Shirline walked to him.
Shirline: Now we have a chance to escape.
Dark Jak: No, Farkness first.
Then Dark Jak search for Farkness. Daxter and Shirline followed him. They can't find Farkness anywhere.
Shirline: We have to go Jak, before. . .
Suddenly they heard a shot being fired and Shirline screamed it out loud. Dark Jak and Daxter looked at her. She was being hit by her upper arm and looked frighten above them. Dark Jak looked up. There stood Farkness.
Farkness hit her and shoot again. Daxter felt the pain in his chest and hit the ground. He heard Dark Jak called his name and then everything is going black for his eyes.
***
-----Responds-----
AD: Did this is! The BIG cliffhanger!
Beauty: Man, you hit Daxter well.
AD: Huh, yeah.
*Yami Kanis: Am I figgen hyper? Thanks, I think.
Beauty: They rescue Jak, but being trapped, poor Shirline and the guys. They tried so hard and such a bad end.
AD: I am telling you, its go further, we not still to the end.
Beauty: And how many chapters yet?
AD: I think maybe 30 chapters left, but I don't sure.
Beauty: 0_0
*Eco Master: He who laughs last, laughs loudest! And that is of course Jak and not Farkness.
Farkness: I hate it, when she tell the true.
Beauty: Yeah, I hope soon, Jak kick your butt.
Farkness: WHAT! Why You Little. . .
Jak: If you ever touch her, you are HISTORY!
Farkness: Damn it! -_-*
*Nobinoir: Don't let Jak hear about falling in love with Shirline and forget about Keira.
Jak: Who said it I must forget Keira!
Shirline: And I must loved Jak!
AD: Nobody.
Jak&Shirl: Yeah yeah, sure AD!
Farkness: Where's my necklace!
*Shark: Shirline is. . . thing. . . huh. . . arg, you discovered it later in this fic. (can't tell more secrets about this fic)
Shirline: What kind of secrets?
AD: You heard it later.
Shirline: -_-*
AD: This fic comes back at 16 September. Meanwhile, I go further writing my other fics. And thinking about the new chapters of Jak and Daxter Renegade. The new title named 'Jak and Daxter Renegade: The Eco Guardians Reunite'
Until the next update and review please.
