I don't own Erol, Baron Praxis, but I owned what I owned. * Evil Laughing *
Beauty: Hai, here's the new chapter!
AD: And I got some news. On ign.com is on 22 Augustus new movies from JakII appearing. With new cute scene and scene's from probably the escaping out of the prison. (Annoying stupid alarm sound)
So check it out if you want it!
***
Jak and Daxter Renegade
Chapter 16: Erol
***
Farkness walked through the big building of the Baron. The Baron invite Farkness to talk about a kind of business. He came in a big room and walked to the Baron. They give each other the hand. Erol looked at Farkness.
Erol: How is Utshie doing?
Farkness: They take good care of him, but he will never be the same.
Erol: How could you such a beast letting escaped? He. . .
Baron: Erol?
Erol: Sorry Baron.
Erol and Utshie are friends when they were little. Utshie even let him see Dark Jak.
Erol: Hai Utshie. You ask for me?
Utshie: Yes Erol, I am glad you can come, I know you have a busy agenda.
Erol: To keep the city in order, but I ask for a day off and they give it. Ashlin haves take the job for this day. But what do you want to show me?
Utshie: A beautiful experiment. Our prisoner 506-AA.
Utshie walked in front and Erol followed him. The came by the lab. Erol looked at an boy, that was stuck into a aquarium. When the boy saw them, he jumped up and ran against the glass and try to break it.
Utshie: Keep your strength, did is Precursor glass!
Erol: Who is he?
Utshie: 506-AA.
Erol: His real name?
Utshie: Unknown.
Suddenly 506-AA transformed into a horrible white demon with black eyes, claws and horns. He start to menace Utshie.
Demon: I tear you up alive Utshie and everybody may it know!
Erol: What's wrong with him?
Utshie: He can't get used to his demon form. It was only a accident.
Erol: How is happen to him?
Utshie: You must promise me, you don't tell it, even not to the Baron.
Erol: We are friends, you got my word.
Utshie: We have experiments him with Dark Eco.
Erol: Dark Eco?
Utshie nodded.
Utshie: He is a secret experiment.
Erol: Nobody hear it from me. But did Farkness know from this?
Utshie: Yes, but he want not believe it. But one day, he see that I don't lie to him.
Erol: How strong is that beast really?
Utshie opened his suit and showed four scares on his chest. Erol looked at it.
Erol: He did it?
Utshie: Yes and if you ask me, he is really proud on it.
They looked at the demon, that grins evilly at Utshie.
Demon: Beautiful scares, would you like some more?
Utshie: Shut up, I'm not finished with you.
The demon start to growl and Erol looked at Utshie.
Erol: You must take care of yourself. That demon is searching for revenge.
Demon: You can read my minds.
Erol looked at the demon.
Erol: 506-AA you said?
Utshie: yes, that's his name.
Erol: I should remember him.
Suddenly, Erol wake up by his daydream. Baron looked at him.
Baron: Erol, I didn't pay you for daydreaming!
Erol: Sorry Baron, it's not happen again.
Baron: All right then.
Then the Baron looked at Farkness.
Baron: I hear that a prisoner was escaped? How could it happen!
Farkness: I was surprised too, he was changing into a white dangerous demon! He kill a lot of my guards. Some of them have lucky, but they are not the same anymore.
Baron: A white demon? There exist no white demons, idiot!
Farkess: I know it, but this demon was making!
Baron: Is that the boy, you ask me for a little of experiments on him?
Farkness: Yes Baron.
Baron: Is he a great fighter?
Farkness: Yes, he is one of the best, he can even defeat a big monster!
Baron: I want him.
Farkness: But. . .
Baron: No buts, you here me!
Farkness: Yes Baron.
Baron: Go now.
Farkness go and the Baron looked at Erol.
Baron: Go you after that demon too?
Erol: Yes, lord Praxis.
Baron Praxis walked away and Erol looked at him. Then he heard sniggers and looked around. Felina came out of her hideout.
Felina: You must after that demon too?
Erol: It must. But what do you know about that demon?
Felina: Only that my dad him want.
Erol: For what?
Felina: He don't tell, even not at his own daughter.
Erol sniffed.
Erol: I know how that demon looked like.
Felina: I know, I say you a couple of time by Utshie. He showed you the demon.
Erol: And in the real life.
Felina kissed Erol on his cheek. Erol looked at her.
Felina: This kiss, must be a secret.
Erol: A beautiful secret.
Then she walked away and Erol looked at her. Then Erol decide to try to catch the demon. All cost it his life.
***
-----Responds-----
*Shark: The explanation for Jak's descendent Shirline? Its coming soon!
Daxter: After my story!
Jak: Give me a bucket, I gone be sick.
Daxter: * Glared at Jak *
*Yami Kanis: You read it right, Shirline is the Yellow Guardian!
Shirine: And no one even expect it!
Farkness: * Walked in with a big gun * Where are Y. Kanis and Lunar? They don't twig me again!
AD: Put that gun down, I don't want that you hurting the readers!
Farkness: But they hurting me with twigs!
AD: And I still like it. ^_^
*Nobinoir: Thanks for the review.
Beauty: She loves your flash back Jak.
Jak: I know, I am better than Daxter.
Daxter: Sometimes, I hate him.
*Lady Tsuru: Thanks for the review.
Daxter: Poor Jak? What about poor me?
Jak: I got more fans than you Dax.
Daxter: Give me a break, I gone be sick.
Beauty: You too?
Daxter: Is there a problem with it?
Beauty: No.
Daxter: Shut up.
Beauty: -_-*
*Eco Master: Are you forgotten the review? Anyway, if you read it, thanks.
Until the next update and review please.
Beauty: Hai, here's the new chapter!
AD: And I got some news. On ign.com is on 22 Augustus new movies from JakII appearing. With new cute scene and scene's from probably the escaping out of the prison. (Annoying stupid alarm sound)
So check it out if you want it!
***
Jak and Daxter Renegade
Chapter 16: Erol
***
Farkness walked through the big building of the Baron. The Baron invite Farkness to talk about a kind of business. He came in a big room and walked to the Baron. They give each other the hand. Erol looked at Farkness.
Erol: How is Utshie doing?
Farkness: They take good care of him, but he will never be the same.
Erol: How could you such a beast letting escaped? He. . .
Baron: Erol?
Erol: Sorry Baron.
Erol and Utshie are friends when they were little. Utshie even let him see Dark Jak.
Erol: Hai Utshie. You ask for me?
Utshie: Yes Erol, I am glad you can come, I know you have a busy agenda.
Erol: To keep the city in order, but I ask for a day off and they give it. Ashlin haves take the job for this day. But what do you want to show me?
Utshie: A beautiful experiment. Our prisoner 506-AA.
Utshie walked in front and Erol followed him. The came by the lab. Erol looked at an boy, that was stuck into a aquarium. When the boy saw them, he jumped up and ran against the glass and try to break it.
Utshie: Keep your strength, did is Precursor glass!
Erol: Who is he?
Utshie: 506-AA.
Erol: His real name?
Utshie: Unknown.
Suddenly 506-AA transformed into a horrible white demon with black eyes, claws and horns. He start to menace Utshie.
Demon: I tear you up alive Utshie and everybody may it know!
Erol: What's wrong with him?
Utshie: He can't get used to his demon form. It was only a accident.
Erol: How is happen to him?
Utshie: You must promise me, you don't tell it, even not to the Baron.
Erol: We are friends, you got my word.
Utshie: We have experiments him with Dark Eco.
Erol: Dark Eco?
Utshie nodded.
Utshie: He is a secret experiment.
Erol: Nobody hear it from me. But did Farkness know from this?
Utshie: Yes, but he want not believe it. But one day, he see that I don't lie to him.
Erol: How strong is that beast really?
Utshie opened his suit and showed four scares on his chest. Erol looked at it.
Erol: He did it?
Utshie: Yes and if you ask me, he is really proud on it.
They looked at the demon, that grins evilly at Utshie.
Demon: Beautiful scares, would you like some more?
Utshie: Shut up, I'm not finished with you.
The demon start to growl and Erol looked at Utshie.
Erol: You must take care of yourself. That demon is searching for revenge.
Demon: You can read my minds.
Erol looked at the demon.
Erol: 506-AA you said?
Utshie: yes, that's his name.
Erol: I should remember him.
Suddenly, Erol wake up by his daydream. Baron looked at him.
Baron: Erol, I didn't pay you for daydreaming!
Erol: Sorry Baron, it's not happen again.
Baron: All right then.
Then the Baron looked at Farkness.
Baron: I hear that a prisoner was escaped? How could it happen!
Farkness: I was surprised too, he was changing into a white dangerous demon! He kill a lot of my guards. Some of them have lucky, but they are not the same anymore.
Baron: A white demon? There exist no white demons, idiot!
Farkess: I know it, but this demon was making!
Baron: Is that the boy, you ask me for a little of experiments on him?
Farkness: Yes Baron.
Baron: Is he a great fighter?
Farkness: Yes, he is one of the best, he can even defeat a big monster!
Baron: I want him.
Farkness: But. . .
Baron: No buts, you here me!
Farkness: Yes Baron.
Baron: Go now.
Farkness go and the Baron looked at Erol.
Baron: Go you after that demon too?
Erol: Yes, lord Praxis.
Baron Praxis walked away and Erol looked at him. Then he heard sniggers and looked around. Felina came out of her hideout.
Felina: You must after that demon too?
Erol: It must. But what do you know about that demon?
Felina: Only that my dad him want.
Erol: For what?
Felina: He don't tell, even not at his own daughter.
Erol sniffed.
Erol: I know how that demon looked like.
Felina: I know, I say you a couple of time by Utshie. He showed you the demon.
Erol: And in the real life.
Felina kissed Erol on his cheek. Erol looked at her.
Felina: This kiss, must be a secret.
Erol: A beautiful secret.
Then she walked away and Erol looked at her. Then Erol decide to try to catch the demon. All cost it his life.
***
-----Responds-----
*Shark: The explanation for Jak's descendent Shirline? Its coming soon!
Daxter: After my story!
Jak: Give me a bucket, I gone be sick.
Daxter: * Glared at Jak *
*Yami Kanis: You read it right, Shirline is the Yellow Guardian!
Shirine: And no one even expect it!
Farkness: * Walked in with a big gun * Where are Y. Kanis and Lunar? They don't twig me again!
AD: Put that gun down, I don't want that you hurting the readers!
Farkness: But they hurting me with twigs!
AD: And I still like it. ^_^
*Nobinoir: Thanks for the review.
Beauty: She loves your flash back Jak.
Jak: I know, I am better than Daxter.
Daxter: Sometimes, I hate him.
*Lady Tsuru: Thanks for the review.
Daxter: Poor Jak? What about poor me?
Jak: I got more fans than you Dax.
Daxter: Give me a break, I gone be sick.
Beauty: You too?
Daxter: Is there a problem with it?
Beauty: No.
Daxter: Shut up.
Beauty: -_-*
*Eco Master: Are you forgotten the review? Anyway, if you read it, thanks.
Until the next update and review please.
