I owned what I owned.

You know the little story of The three Jaks and Beautyfly? Well, on amandaxter.deviantart.com I gonna make a kind of comic, with a new character named Darkscout a demon-dog

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Jak and Daxter Renegade

Chapter 24: Shut down the systems

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Ele looked at the building were she break in together with Shirline. Jak and Levihantan walked to her and looked also the building. Daxter jumped of Jak's shoulder. Shirline was busy with her computer. She was really good in it, especially with breaking of security alarms.

Shirline: I can break the security alarms, but too bad there is also a time of it.

Jak: What do you mean?

He walked to Shirline and gonna sit down next to her. Shirline looked at him.

Shirline: Well, we can break the security alarms, but than we have only ten minutes to destroy the Krimzon Guards systems.

Jak: That sound a challenge too me.

Daxter: And gonna die!

Levihantan: Yeah! Jak, we talking about the fortress!

Jak: The fortress?

Ele: The headquarters of the Baron.

Jak: The headquarters? And what's that thing in the air?

Shirline: That is were the Baron looking over the city, it is his home, his palace!

Jak: Note to myself, blow up that thing!

He stood up and Levihantan grabbed his shoulder.

Levihantan: You're crazy! If that thing falls above the city! Millions of peoples are gonna die!

Daxter: He's right Jak.

Jak: Okay. New note, explore the palace and kill the Baron.

Then he walked away and looked back at the fortress. Daxter signed.

Daxter: He is changed. In the past he was a friendly boy without anger or revenge, but now. . .

Shirline: Every changed Dax. Especially in this darn city.

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Daxter signed and thought on the day when they sit together at Sentinel Beach. They were still young and Jak had loosing his parents and so his voice. Daxter looked at him.

Daxter: Were are friends right?

Jak looked at friend and smiled. A teas felt from his cheek. Daxter looked worried at him.

Daxter: Don't cry.

Jak shakes his head.

Daxter: Maybe you can't speak anymore, but I should always be your friend. And nothing can changed that. Or you be later a evil guy that kill his enemies, but even that you still my friend.

Jak start to laughing. No, he should never be a evil guy, that as something he doesn't want.

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Daxter walked to his friend and looked at him.

Daxter: Are you thinking too?

Jak: Thinking? About what?

Daxter: The past. About what I said.

Jak: What you said?

Daxter: Evil guy.

Jak signed. Now he remember it too. he would never be a evil guy, but what Shirline all said. Everything is changing.

Jak: Are you thinking that I am a bad guy?

Daxter: You speak evil. Things I never heard from you or saw.

Jak: Farkness and the Baron, they did it too me.

Daxter: But why are you not changing back!

Jak: I can't.

Daxter: Why not!

Jak: Dax, that is something you find out later.

Daxter looked at him when Jak walked back to the others.

Jak: All right Shirl, if you shut down the alarm, we got only ten minutes to destroyed the system. Are we gone make that?

Shirline: If we work together!

Jak: That's fine. Levihantan, can you go with Ele?

Levihantan: Yes.

Jak: Okay, than I go with Shirline. Are you ready?

Shirline: Yes.

Jak: DO IT!

Shirline shut down the alarm and they sneak into the fortress. Ele grabbed her computer too and looked at the screen.

Ele: There's two systems. Are you seeing that too Shirl?

Shirline: Yes.

Ele: Okay, Shirline you do the right one, I do the left one!

Shirline: Left was always your favorite.

Ele smiled evilly at Shirline and then they separate the group.

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Jak kick a door out and they looked inside a room. Daxter was the first one who step into the room. Jak and Shirline followed him. Shirline snickered when she saw the systems. Daxter looked his eyes out. The system was big.

Shirline put her computer down and sit on a chair. She played with her computer and find a alarm on the systems.

Shirline: Lucky me that I can break alarms.

Daxter: Yeah, I don't want to fight with Krimzon Guards!

Shirline: I know. But we have our dark friend with us.

Jak: He, I can't help that I am a dark demon now, you know!

Shirline: But Dark Jak help us escape from the prison, you know.

She wink to Jak and he blush.

Jak: Yeah that's. . . that's true.

Daxter: And Dark Jak almost killed us when he was going after Farkness.

Jak: I KNOW!

Shirline: Can you. . . transform in your Dark side? I need your claws to open this lock of the system.

Jak: Okay, but you must hurry. I haven't charge my body with Dark Eco for a while and its almost. . .

Daxter: Wait a minute Big Guy! I got claws too.

He wink to Shirline and she rolled her eyes.

Shirline: Ohh, how romantic!

Daxter shows smiling his teeth and try to break the lock.

Jak and Shirline looked at each other and start to chuckle.

Daxter: What?

Shirline: Nothing 'darling' let Jak handle this.

Daxter: You called me a darling! Are you serious!

Shirline: No.

Daxter: Ouch! You break my ottsel heart!

Jak transformed into Dark Jak. He grabbed the lock and break it. Shirline broke the alarm and go further in the system. But suddenly the alarm is going of. Shirline stood with angry up.

Shirline: Stupid system! There was an other alarm!

DJak: What!

Shirline: They putting another alarm in it and I saw it too late!

Daxter: We must get out of here!

Shirline&DJak: Right.

Jak transformed back to his previous form and run away with Shirline and Daxter.

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Levihantan hear the alarm too. Ele stood up and looked at Levihantan.

Ele: Lef, we got a big problem. The system has two different alarms, one is hide somewhere in the system and probably felt Shirline into that trap!

Levihantan: Oh no!

Ele: We must find the others and we must get out of here.

Levihantan: Say that again!

They run the room out and ran into Farkness.

Levihantan: Farkness!

Farkness: Levihantan?

Levihantan pushed Farkness out of the way and run further. Farkness stood up and looked at them. He grabbed the crystal and looked at it. The colors Purple, Yellow and Red are shinning.

Farkness: I know the other two, but who is that Red Guardian? Levihantan!

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Jak and Shirline ran outside the building. There stood a couple of Krimon Guards waiting for them. Jak grabbed Shirline's wrist and run for it.

A boy with blue hair stopped his zoomer and walked a little booth. The woman behind the bar of the booth looked at him.

Woman: Mataius, I thought you was going back to your parents in Gron City.

Mataius: I know, but I want to say goodbye.

Woman: You want a coke?

Mataius: Thanks Sene.

Sene grabbed a coke and want to give it too Mataius when she suddenly looked behind him.

Sene: Someone try to steal your zoomer Mat.

Mataius: What?

He looked also behind and saw a boy with yellow hair jumped on his zoomer. A girl with also yellow hair and an orange ottsel jumped also on the zoomer. Mataius ran to it.

Mataius: HE! Get of my zoomer!

Jak: We just borrow it!

Jak fly away and Mataius looked at it. Suddenly he saw hellcat cruisers that chasing the boy and his friends.

Jak know to loose the Krimzon Guards with damage on the zoomer. They jumped of it and looked at it.

Shirline: The zoomer is history!

Jak: Yeah, but we loose those Guards.

Daxter: But how is it with Lef and Ele?

Shirline grabbed her walkie-talkie and phoned to Ele. She get response back.

Ele: We are saved and you?

Shirline: We fine.

Ele: Okay, I see you at the headquarters.

Shirline: Okay.

Jak: Back to the headquarters?

Shirline: Yes.

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