Not much to say only this. From now, I only update stories at Friday or weekends. The other days I hope to keep myself busy with written of the chapters from different stories.

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Jak and Daxter renegade

Chapter 27: Betrayed and revenge

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On there mission to the Guardians temple, Jak wanes to charged himself up with Dark Eco. Prite found them and snickered. He must kill Jak and his friends from the Baron. With an evil plan he followed the group.

Finally they came by the Dark eco pool. Daxter gets the creeps from the place.

Daxter: Why Jak?

Jak: My body wanes Dark Eco and I give it.

Shirline: Be careful Jak.

Jak: I should be careful Shirl.

He jumped into the pool and quickly he jumped out of it. His body glows white. Then he changed back to normal.

Jak: Wow, I must be careful with that Eco.

Levihantan: Why?

Jak: I don't know. For the second, I thought about killing people, but then again. . .

Shirline: Killing?

Jak: Dark Jak.

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Jak and the others walked further until they came by the Guardian Temple. They walked inside. Daxter walk a front of them and suddenly he steps on a trap and a spear appears right above Daxter's head.

Daxter: WHAAAAA! What was that?

Shirline: It is a trap. I think that this place is full with it.

Daxter: Let's go back.

Jak: No, first the Guardian stone.

With little stones to activate the traps without steps on them, they came into a big room where they found the Guardian stone.

Shirline: We did it!

Jak: Yeah, now we must grab that stone and lets get out of here.

Daxter: You stole my idea jak.

He run to the Guardian stone and grabbed it. Suddenly the walls start to move to them and the door start to close slowly. Daxter keep the stones in his paws and yelled.

Daxter: It is an other trap!

Jak run to his buddy and grabbed him with the Guardian stone and take a run the door. Jak slide under the door and Levihantan and Shirline did the same. When the door closed, they are be saved from out the room, but not from the temple yet.

Still running, they found the exit from the temple and jumped out of it.

When they run far away from the temple, they ran into a cleft, Prite take his evil step and blow up the cleft and a big boulder roll down the hill. Prite laughing evilly and Jak looked up. He saw the boulder and Prite. Levihantan saw Prite too.

Levihantan: PRITE!

Jak: The betrayal!

Jak pushed Levihantan and Shirline out of his way and kicked Daxter away. When he looked up to the boulder, he saw his dead when suddenly somebody pushed him.

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Torn drive quickly if he can to the mountains.

Torn: I hope I'm not late yet!

Torn don't like Shirline much, but she is one of his team. If something happens to her, he can't forgive himself. He want to be a friend of Shirline and from deep inside, they are friends, even they do not like each other.

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Jak coughed and looked up. Shirline ran to him and give him a hand to stand up.

Shirline: Is everything okay?

Jak: Yeah. But who pushed me?

Levihantan: LOOK!

Levihantan point out to the boulder and under the boulder lay a blue-red hairy girl. Jak saw who it was.

Jak: No, NO CHISTE!

He ran to her and try to pushed the boulder of her. Chiste looked at him.

Chiste: Jak?

Jak: Don't worry, I'm here.

Chiste: Jak, I feel nothing.

Jak: We bring you back to the Underground, there they can take care of you.

Chiste: No.

Jak: What you mean by no, I'll take care for you, don't worry.

Chiste: Jak, I love you.

Jak: And I love you.

Chiste: I remember what you said to me in the jail.

Jak: What? We say much to each other.

Chiste: I know, but this should I always remember. So long hope existence. . . its gone be okay. I was your hope, I guess.

Jak: Chiste.

Chiste: I'm really sorry Shirline. I was really jealous at your friendship with Jak. Can you forgive me?

Shirline: Of course, we are friends.

Chiste: Friends, my good. . . friends.

Jak: CHISTE! NO!

Chiste: Farewell, Jak.

Jak: NOOOO!!!!!!!

But it was too late. Chiste was dead.

Jak: CHISTE!

Shirline: No, not her.

Levihantan: Its Prite's fault that she is dead now.

Jak: Prite.

Jak start to growl when Prite slide down the hills and grabbed the stone what Jak has let go when Chiste pushed him.

Prite: Is she?

Levihantan: Dead? Yes. Thanks to you.

Prite: Pity, now lets go back to the Underground and bring this stone to Big Green, okay?

Jak: No, you die tonight.

Prite looked up when Jak transformed into his Dark Side. He looked furious to Prite and make is claws ready to kill him. Levihantan looked also furious to Prite.

Levihantan: Why Prite? Why are you betrayed us. Who give you the order to kill us?

Prite: I don't tell.

Shirline: Just tell it or be dead meat! Dark Jak has no mercy against his enemies. And you are now one of them.

Prite: I should never tell!

Prite run away with the stone in his hand. Dark Jak looked at his friends.

DJak: Take Chiste's body and go back to the Underground. I'll see you three later.

Then he chasses Prite. Levihantan and Shirline looked at it.

Shirline: He will be die tonight if Jak grabbed him.

Levihantan: Yeah.

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Prite try to hid for Dark Jak, but Jak followed his track. Jak changed how longer he was Dark Jak. The Dark Eco changed him into a bloodthirsty monster. He was accustom to the Eco that used by elves and not the Eco that 'lived' in the wild.

Dark Jak should kill everybody that came on his way but his big pray was Prite. When he found him he ran to him and try to kill him. Prite run away and grabbed his gun. He jumped on a boulder and try to shoot on Dark Jak.

Dark Jak get hits in his arm, but he didn't care. He want to kill Prite. He jumped up and grabbed him. When he try to kill Prite, somebody shoot at him. Dark Jak looked up and saw Torn.

Torn in his vehicle, try to kill the evil demon to rescue Prite. Dark Jak growled and take a run for it. Torn shoot another time and hit Dark Jak in his back. The demon screamed it out, but know to escape before Torn can kill him.

Torn parking his vehicle to the ground and jumped of it. He run to Prite and give him a hand to stand up.

Torn: Are you okay?

Prite: Yeah, that monster almost killed me.

Torn: But how?

Prite: That monster came suddenly after me. He saw probably me as his diner. I got the Guardian stone were Samos was looking for.

Torn: How you get that!

Prite: Jak and his friends. I have followed them to make sure they be fine. Than that monster came to us. Jak give the stone to me and we run each way.

Torn: And the beast has chassed you.

Prite: Yeah, I guess.

Torn: We go back to the Underground. Maybe Jak and the others are running back to it. Hope we find them there safety.

Prite: Yeah, lets get hope.

Torn walked back to his vehicle when Prite smirked behind his back.

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-----responds-----

Kiz: Thanks for the review

Nobinoir: Don't worry hun, you have all the J&D Renegade chapters reviewed ^_^

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Shark: I'm really on the half part of the story, but this 'season' is going to at least until chapter 30 or a little more ^_^'

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