Okay, I just changed a few things on this story. As someone said, I
did need to change Snowfoot's origin a little bit. I did do that, and as
one reviewer said that I should start a new paragraph for each speaker, and
I'm going to start doing that after chapter six, since I already wrote
chapters five and six. As for the first chapter, I had no idea that
Watership Down took place in England when I wrote that chapter. Thank you
reviewers who have read this story, I will update it soon. By the way, all
your questions will be answered on this page.
