Okay, just so you don't get confused. Everything that's inside an asterisk* are Katie's thoughts. The words inside this thingy[ ] are Marcus's thoughts.
The night was cool. A full moon shone brightly in the night sky. They kissed tenderly underneath the stars. He pulled her down gently to lay her down on the soft quilt that he placed across the cold hard floor of the castle rooftop.He went on top of her, showing her who was in control. She coated in his warm embrace. She could feel his body pressy against hers. With his hand supporting her head, he brought her closer into himShe looked into his eyes. Never had anyone looked at her the way he did. The way he looked at her was special.
*This is what I want, I want to be with him. With Marcus.Then why am I so nervous?*
His right hand was running up her leg, "Ooooh..."Katie moaned.
*Just a little more now....*
SHe started to tug on his robes when he stopped her and reminded her that that was his job. He stood up and stripped himself with ease. He laid back down upon her, and ripped off her clothes in one swift motion. A cold chill ran up Katie's spine. Seeing her shiver, Marcus took it upon himself to keep warm by wrapping his arms around her once again, and pulling her into another deep, hot, passionate kiss. When they stopped for breath, both were huffing and breathing more deeply than ever. He took a glance at her face, she smiled.
[She's so beautiful. Look at her.It's gonna happen now, there's no stopping it.]
He wanted it, so did she. He was ready to thrust himself into her, inside of her.
*No, I can't do this*
"Don't Marcus, please" she said as she pushed herself away from him. He got up, "What's wrong?"
[I don't understand...everything was okay...but she stopped me]
"I don't know Marcus. I'm sorry. I thought I was ready but I'm not" she said, as she tried hard to fight back her tears. But she couldn't take it any longer and burst out crying. "It's okay, it's okay." he hugged her tightly.
[Did I hurt her?]
Author's note:
I hope you guuys enjoyed this, leave me some reviews so I can continue this. I'm need some ideas.
The night was cool. A full moon shone brightly in the night sky. They kissed tenderly underneath the stars. He pulled her down gently to lay her down on the soft quilt that he placed across the cold hard floor of the castle rooftop.He went on top of her, showing her who was in control. She coated in his warm embrace. She could feel his body pressy against hers. With his hand supporting her head, he brought her closer into himShe looked into his eyes. Never had anyone looked at her the way he did. The way he looked at her was special.
*This is what I want, I want to be with him. With Marcus.Then why am I so nervous?*
His right hand was running up her leg, "Ooooh..."Katie moaned.
*Just a little more now....*
SHe started to tug on his robes when he stopped her and reminded her that that was his job. He stood up and stripped himself with ease. He laid back down upon her, and ripped off her clothes in one swift motion. A cold chill ran up Katie's spine. Seeing her shiver, Marcus took it upon himself to keep warm by wrapping his arms around her once again, and pulling her into another deep, hot, passionate kiss. When they stopped for breath, both were huffing and breathing more deeply than ever. He took a glance at her face, she smiled.
[She's so beautiful. Look at her.It's gonna happen now, there's no stopping it.]
He wanted it, so did she. He was ready to thrust himself into her, inside of her.
*No, I can't do this*
"Don't Marcus, please" she said as she pushed herself away from him. He got up, "What's wrong?"
[I don't understand...everything was okay...but she stopped me]
"I don't know Marcus. I'm sorry. I thought I was ready but I'm not" she said, as she tried hard to fight back her tears. But she couldn't take it any longer and burst out crying. "It's okay, it's okay." he hugged her tightly.
[Did I hurt her?]
Author's note:
I hope you guuys enjoyed this, leave me some reviews so I can continue this. I'm need some ideas.
