A/N: Right,if I don't get AT LEAST 10 reviews 4 this chappie, I'm not
updating!!!If you've already reviewed,REVIEW AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!
nehu, on wiv reviewery repliey thingies:
Jupiter's Light: YOU ROCK!!! THANKIES SOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH 4 REVIEWIN!!! I LUV U!!! Yerse...I is Hypa. I think iv sed dat...
let me rest in peace: Rest? Il tel u summat – u aint gonna get ne rest round ere, savvy? Oh wel, we cant all hav it... mi story, I created it, meanin is ME in der.... YAYSIES!!! I GET JACK!!!
Clueless-Patty: HALLO! 2 u 2!!!ha!u can't do nethin 2 me now coz iv updated!!!and yeah,but hu wouldn't like him?with his GORGEOUS brown eyes, cute li'l beard,AMAZINGLY sexy voice, his obsession wiv rum.....
LoveJackSparrow: Ta!!! if u like me fic,then I like u!!!
CJ*-Cj: I know!!! I would so TOTALLY do that in real life if I met him just 2 c the look on his face!hehe!
cyber-eyes: we really need 2 sort Jack out with that bloody word, don't we? I know: SAVVYSAVVYSAVVYSAVVYSAVVYSAVVYSAVVYSAVVY.........etc.that should get him annoyed!!!(Jack: 2 rite it duz!!!u w8 til I get me hands on u!!!)actually,wouldn't mind him getting his hands on me...................!!!!!!!
Elaveeeen_ElaMEEEEEEEEEEEEEenTALLIiiiiiiIIIIIIIIIIiiiiiii deranged: Or just Elven_Elements... rite, im gonna HAVE 2 ration ur coffee!!! Hope u had a good time in Wales(as if!) n if u stop goin so hypa,I MITE get u n easter egg,sav- oops!can't use dat word!!!capish?!
Ok,it mite start getting a li'l bit more serious now, but I will keep the randomness in. PLEEEEEEEEEEEZ help me wiv ideas!wot d'u wanna happen next?i can PROMISE u it WILL happen IF u TELL ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I'm fed up of speech marks, so from now on, it's in script format, savvy? What I'm doing
Chapter 5 – Some interesting occurrences (oooooh, long word *every1 applauses*)
*God, this is good rum* stumbles
Jack: You alright there, luv?
*Course I am, you're here* Me: Ummmm, yuh.stumbles againJust – woah – fine.
Jack: You sure, luv?
Me: Wha- collapses
*******A few hours later*******
I tried to turn over, but found that I couldn't. I looked down and saw Jack's arm around my waist. I managed to slip away from him. *Thank God I'm still dressed*
Me: Jack. Jack. JACK!!!
Jack: Aye
Me: We didn't, you know, do anything last night? Other than drink rum I mean. *He is just SO cute when he's half asleep!*
Jack: No. Shame really.
I shoved him gently.
Me: Now don't you go getting ideas, Captain.
Jack: Me? Ideas?
Me: Jack, you don't really want me to actually throw your rum overboard, do you?
Jack: You don't want to be doin' that, mate.
Me: Oh? And why not?
Jack: Because I might just have to teach you a lesson.
Me: And what kinda lesson might that be?
Jack: This kinda lesson.
He leaned forward and kissed my lips gently. He didn't linger, but pulled away after a few seconds.
*No, don't leave me now. Not after that*
Me: What exactly was that for, Captain?
Jack: You mean you didn't like it?
*No, I loved it.*
Me: I just don't think we should be acting like that so soon.
*What are you saying? You totally think you should be doing this so soon!*
Jack: Suit yourself. I'm always here if you change yer mind.
Me: I'll bear that in mind.
*What? Just kiss him again, you idiot*
Jack: Good.
Me: I'll be going up on deck. Care to join me?
Jack: O' course, luv.
He brushed a strand of hair out of my eyes and smiled. He stood up, held out his hand for me to take and pulled me up.
Jack: Are ye sure ye don't want to try that again?
Me: Yes. Quite sure.
Jack: Well I'm not, I'm afraid, so you'll have to excuse me, but...
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MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!oooooooh, cliffie!!!im sooo evil!waddya think o' the script format?tell me, coz im not sure bout it.nehu, click the li'l purpley-bluey button that says GO n make me VERY happy!!!while ur @ it, pleeeeez go n review me other 2 fics.iv got hardly ne reviews 4 'em so id gretly appreciate feedback! Remember, reviews=chapters!!!!!!!!! Bibi luv ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! xXxXxXxXx
nehu, on wiv reviewery repliey thingies:
Jupiter's Light: YOU ROCK!!! THANKIES SOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH 4 REVIEWIN!!! I LUV U!!! Yerse...I is Hypa. I think iv sed dat...
let me rest in peace: Rest? Il tel u summat – u aint gonna get ne rest round ere, savvy? Oh wel, we cant all hav it... mi story, I created it, meanin is ME in der.... YAYSIES!!! I GET JACK!!!
Clueless-Patty: HALLO! 2 u 2!!!ha!u can't do nethin 2 me now coz iv updated!!!and yeah,but hu wouldn't like him?with his GORGEOUS brown eyes, cute li'l beard,AMAZINGLY sexy voice, his obsession wiv rum.....
LoveJackSparrow: Ta!!! if u like me fic,then I like u!!!
CJ*-Cj: I know!!! I would so TOTALLY do that in real life if I met him just 2 c the look on his face!hehe!
cyber-eyes: we really need 2 sort Jack out with that bloody word, don't we? I know: SAVVYSAVVYSAVVYSAVVYSAVVYSAVVYSAVVYSAVVY.........etc.that should get him annoyed!!!(Jack: 2 rite it duz!!!u w8 til I get me hands on u!!!)actually,wouldn't mind him getting his hands on me...................!!!!!!!
Elaveeeen_ElaMEEEEEEEEEEEEEenTALLIiiiiiiIIIIIIIIIIiiiiiii deranged: Or just Elven_Elements... rite, im gonna HAVE 2 ration ur coffee!!! Hope u had a good time in Wales(as if!) n if u stop goin so hypa,I MITE get u n easter egg,sav- oops!can't use dat word!!!capish?!
Ok,it mite start getting a li'l bit more serious now, but I will keep the randomness in. PLEEEEEEEEEEEZ help me wiv ideas!wot d'u wanna happen next?i can PROMISE u it WILL happen IF u TELL ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I'm fed up of speech marks, so from now on, it's in script format, savvy? What I'm doing
Chapter 5 – Some interesting occurrences (oooooh, long word *every1 applauses*)
*God, this is good rum* stumbles
Jack: You alright there, luv?
*Course I am, you're here* Me: Ummmm, yuh.stumbles againJust – woah – fine.
Jack: You sure, luv?
Me: Wha- collapses
*******A few hours later*******
I tried to turn over, but found that I couldn't. I looked down and saw Jack's arm around my waist. I managed to slip away from him. *Thank God I'm still dressed*
Me: Jack. Jack. JACK!!!
Jack: Aye
Me: We didn't, you know, do anything last night? Other than drink rum I mean. *He is just SO cute when he's half asleep!*
Jack: No. Shame really.
I shoved him gently.
Me: Now don't you go getting ideas, Captain.
Jack: Me? Ideas?
Me: Jack, you don't really want me to actually throw your rum overboard, do you?
Jack: You don't want to be doin' that, mate.
Me: Oh? And why not?
Jack: Because I might just have to teach you a lesson.
Me: And what kinda lesson might that be?
Jack: This kinda lesson.
He leaned forward and kissed my lips gently. He didn't linger, but pulled away after a few seconds.
*No, don't leave me now. Not after that*
Me: What exactly was that for, Captain?
Jack: You mean you didn't like it?
*No, I loved it.*
Me: I just don't think we should be acting like that so soon.
*What are you saying? You totally think you should be doing this so soon!*
Jack: Suit yourself. I'm always here if you change yer mind.
Me: I'll bear that in mind.
*What? Just kiss him again, you idiot*
Jack: Good.
Me: I'll be going up on deck. Care to join me?
Jack: O' course, luv.
He brushed a strand of hair out of my eyes and smiled. He stood up, held out his hand for me to take and pulled me up.
Jack: Are ye sure ye don't want to try that again?
Me: Yes. Quite sure.
Jack: Well I'm not, I'm afraid, so you'll have to excuse me, but...
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MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!oooooooh, cliffie!!!im sooo evil!waddya think o' the script format?tell me, coz im not sure bout it.nehu, click the li'l purpley-bluey button that says GO n make me VERY happy!!!while ur @ it, pleeeeez go n review me other 2 fics.iv got hardly ne reviews 4 'em so id gretly appreciate feedback! Remember, reviews=chapters!!!!!!!!! Bibi luv ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! xXxXxXxXx
