Alright I might as well tell anyone who is reading this; the next chapter
might be the last.
Don't worry, don't worry. I said that this story is going to develop
further than you can imagine. Yes. THERE WILL BE A SEQUEL!
I can't write the next part in this story because; well there will be different ratings and a new plot. It won't go along with this story, but characters will be the same. (And some new ones too.) But first let's finish one thing at a time.
"Example" Character speaking.
*Example* Character thinking.
(Example) Author's notes.
Kai sat on his bench in his jail cell looking outside his bar window. All that was visible was smoke. *What is this place?* Even though he was in jail Kai wasn't really worried, for he had other problems. Kai had discovered that he had a companion in his cell; a tail of his own. (That's right he has a tail. Oh and it's an orange wolf tail that's longer than usual in case you're wondering.) *Let's see I have completely red long hair, two horns, eyes red as blood, fangs that are really uncomfortable, an arm completely made of stone, a stupid tail that won't stop wagging, and cat like feet. No wonder they shot at me.*
(He found a mirror some where under the bench.)
Kai had a long night before his trial in the morning, and sleep wasn't really something he would rather do at the moment.
Suddenly the wall behind him started talking. "Hey kid, what are you doing here? Aren't you a little too young to commit any crimes?"
Kai was startled at the talking wall but then he looked over to the side and saw a hand holding a little mirror pointing at him. (Jail cells next to each other. People use mirrors to look at the person next door.)
"Uh, I don't know. I don't think I did anything wrong, but as you've heard earlier, I won't know anything until tomorrow," replied Kai.
"Heh. Don't even know what you're in for. That's got to be a drag."
"So.. Tell me your story. Why are you here?"
"Oh, I killed some stupid human when he caught me stealing a pendant from his precious jewel store. Now I'm stuck here for the next fifty years."
"Human?" Asked Kai. "What do you mean human?"
"Ningens, you know. The weakest race in existence, I don't even know why that little toddler is bothering to protect them. We demons have always been tougher, stronger, and way better looking. Looking at a human's face just makes me wanna rip their guts out."
"Uhhh,,,,,,,,, yeah. Those humans sure are ugly. Hehehe."
*Telling him I was a human won't be a good idea right now. So, this place is a prison for demons? How the hell did I turn into a demon?*
Taking a risk Kai raised his mirror over the bars to take a look at his companion next door. Immediately Kai took the mirror back into his own cell. That so call demon next cell was the most hideous thing he had ever witnessed.
As hideous as that demon was he was actually nice talking to. Kai actually liked hearing insults about a race that he once was a part of. Perhaps his new demonic mind is starting to take effects on him.
Kai was enjoying his time with his new pal making up insults about humans. But the whole thing was getting old after a while.
"Hey kid. I got a harmonica; you know any good jail songs?" Asked the demon.
"Well no, but I'm good at making up songs. Hearing all these insults about humans is giving me an idea for a song."
And so the two pals played the harmonica and continue to insult humans in a new fashion throughout all night long.
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Meanwhile in Koenma's office.
"So, what did you get on him Hiei?"
"Not much, but enough to prove that he's not guilty."
"Well then spill it," demanded Koenma.
"Could we do this tomorrow? If the three of us don't get home soon, our folks will start hounding us from now on," complained Yusuke.
Both Kuwabara and Kurama nodded their heads in agreement.
"Alright then you're all dismissed, but Hiei you're not free yet. There's still that trial tomorrow. You're a witness to part of the scene. After the trial you're free to go, understand?" asked Koenma.
"Yes I understand," replied Hiei coldly.
Hiei was about to head to his dorm at Rekai, he wasn't in the mood to pick out a tree for the night. Just as Hiei had lay down on his bed a harmonica started playing.
*Which one of these idiots would play a harmonica in the middle of the night?*
"Hiei! Get down there and shut that harmonica up," demanded Koenma.
"Hnn."
Hiei arrived at the Rekai jail cells expecting an ugly, stupid demon playing around. Instead he found demon boy and his neighbor singing a stupid jail song. (One of them was stupid and ugly.)
"Shut up, both of you," demanded Hiei.
"Make me," shouted Kai right back at Hiei's face.
"Listen boy, you're already in deep water don't sink any lower. Especially when your trial is in four hours," said Hiei.
"Is that supposed to scare me? Because judging by the situation I'm in right now, I might as well enjoy all the fun I can while it last."
*Hnn, tough little bugar. Reminds me of me when I was a young thief,* thought Hiei.
"You don't even know why you're in here, so stop singing or you'll find yourself in here for the next three hundred years," said Hiei.
Kai thought for about five second, and then he asked his demon neighbor, "Hey, dude next door. What kind of crime would get you a sentence of three hundred years in prison?"
"Same thing I did; human killing. I've been in this cell for two hundred and fifty years, I got fifty more years to go," replied the demon.
"Human killing! I never touched a soul. There must have been some mistake I'm innocent," pleaded Kai.
"Hah! So now,,,, you're pleading for mercy. Good luck on your trial kid," said Hiei with a smirk.
"Argg, yeah go ahead and leave shorty," Kai yelled after Hiei.
At the word shorty Hiei spun around and threw a fire ball at Kai, who caught it with his normal arm.
"Huh?" was the only reaction from the confused Kai.
"So. You're part fire apparition," said Hiei.
"Fire appar what?" asked Kai. "Who cares what you say about me, just take your damn fire toy back," yell Kai as he threw back the fire ball handed to a moment ago. The flaming orb disintegrated after touching Hiei.
The two stared at each other eye to eye each giving their best death glare.
*I have to admit, the boy's definitely got guts.*
And so the two demons glared at each other for the next four hours neither of them backing down.
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Okay this chapter is just a little humor added to the story. But it reveals a lot about our new character. I know Hiei is not his usual self, he's still grumpy all the time but he plays an important part in the story.
R&R Please.
I can't write the next part in this story because; well there will be different ratings and a new plot. It won't go along with this story, but characters will be the same. (And some new ones too.) But first let's finish one thing at a time.
"Example" Character speaking.
*Example* Character thinking.
(Example) Author's notes.
Kai sat on his bench in his jail cell looking outside his bar window. All that was visible was smoke. *What is this place?* Even though he was in jail Kai wasn't really worried, for he had other problems. Kai had discovered that he had a companion in his cell; a tail of his own. (That's right he has a tail. Oh and it's an orange wolf tail that's longer than usual in case you're wondering.) *Let's see I have completely red long hair, two horns, eyes red as blood, fangs that are really uncomfortable, an arm completely made of stone, a stupid tail that won't stop wagging, and cat like feet. No wonder they shot at me.*
(He found a mirror some where under the bench.)
Kai had a long night before his trial in the morning, and sleep wasn't really something he would rather do at the moment.
Suddenly the wall behind him started talking. "Hey kid, what are you doing here? Aren't you a little too young to commit any crimes?"
Kai was startled at the talking wall but then he looked over to the side and saw a hand holding a little mirror pointing at him. (Jail cells next to each other. People use mirrors to look at the person next door.)
"Uh, I don't know. I don't think I did anything wrong, but as you've heard earlier, I won't know anything until tomorrow," replied Kai.
"Heh. Don't even know what you're in for. That's got to be a drag."
"So.. Tell me your story. Why are you here?"
"Oh, I killed some stupid human when he caught me stealing a pendant from his precious jewel store. Now I'm stuck here for the next fifty years."
"Human?" Asked Kai. "What do you mean human?"
"Ningens, you know. The weakest race in existence, I don't even know why that little toddler is bothering to protect them. We demons have always been tougher, stronger, and way better looking. Looking at a human's face just makes me wanna rip their guts out."
"Uhhh,,,,,,,,, yeah. Those humans sure are ugly. Hehehe."
*Telling him I was a human won't be a good idea right now. So, this place is a prison for demons? How the hell did I turn into a demon?*
Taking a risk Kai raised his mirror over the bars to take a look at his companion next door. Immediately Kai took the mirror back into his own cell. That so call demon next cell was the most hideous thing he had ever witnessed.
As hideous as that demon was he was actually nice talking to. Kai actually liked hearing insults about a race that he once was a part of. Perhaps his new demonic mind is starting to take effects on him.
Kai was enjoying his time with his new pal making up insults about humans. But the whole thing was getting old after a while.
"Hey kid. I got a harmonica; you know any good jail songs?" Asked the demon.
"Well no, but I'm good at making up songs. Hearing all these insults about humans is giving me an idea for a song."
And so the two pals played the harmonica and continue to insult humans in a new fashion throughout all night long.
---------------------
Meanwhile in Koenma's office.
"So, what did you get on him Hiei?"
"Not much, but enough to prove that he's not guilty."
"Well then spill it," demanded Koenma.
"Could we do this tomorrow? If the three of us don't get home soon, our folks will start hounding us from now on," complained Yusuke.
Both Kuwabara and Kurama nodded their heads in agreement.
"Alright then you're all dismissed, but Hiei you're not free yet. There's still that trial tomorrow. You're a witness to part of the scene. After the trial you're free to go, understand?" asked Koenma.
"Yes I understand," replied Hiei coldly.
Hiei was about to head to his dorm at Rekai, he wasn't in the mood to pick out a tree for the night. Just as Hiei had lay down on his bed a harmonica started playing.
*Which one of these idiots would play a harmonica in the middle of the night?*
"Hiei! Get down there and shut that harmonica up," demanded Koenma.
"Hnn."
Hiei arrived at the Rekai jail cells expecting an ugly, stupid demon playing around. Instead he found demon boy and his neighbor singing a stupid jail song. (One of them was stupid and ugly.)
"Shut up, both of you," demanded Hiei.
"Make me," shouted Kai right back at Hiei's face.
"Listen boy, you're already in deep water don't sink any lower. Especially when your trial is in four hours," said Hiei.
"Is that supposed to scare me? Because judging by the situation I'm in right now, I might as well enjoy all the fun I can while it last."
*Hnn, tough little bugar. Reminds me of me when I was a young thief,* thought Hiei.
"You don't even know why you're in here, so stop singing or you'll find yourself in here for the next three hundred years," said Hiei.
Kai thought for about five second, and then he asked his demon neighbor, "Hey, dude next door. What kind of crime would get you a sentence of three hundred years in prison?"
"Same thing I did; human killing. I've been in this cell for two hundred and fifty years, I got fifty more years to go," replied the demon.
"Human killing! I never touched a soul. There must have been some mistake I'm innocent," pleaded Kai.
"Hah! So now,,,, you're pleading for mercy. Good luck on your trial kid," said Hiei with a smirk.
"Argg, yeah go ahead and leave shorty," Kai yelled after Hiei.
At the word shorty Hiei spun around and threw a fire ball at Kai, who caught it with his normal arm.
"Huh?" was the only reaction from the confused Kai.
"So. You're part fire apparition," said Hiei.
"Fire appar what?" asked Kai. "Who cares what you say about me, just take your damn fire toy back," yell Kai as he threw back the fire ball handed to a moment ago. The flaming orb disintegrated after touching Hiei.
The two stared at each other eye to eye each giving their best death glare.
*I have to admit, the boy's definitely got guts.*
And so the two demons glared at each other for the next four hours neither of them backing down.
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Okay this chapter is just a little humor added to the story. But it reveals a lot about our new character. I know Hiei is not his usual self, he's still grumpy all the time but he plays an important part in the story.
R&R Please.
