A Lesson on Discipline
By: Andrea Valencia
Chapter II
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Well, so I'm continuing this then! Yay! *cheers* so far no flamers…yet! Though I hope there won't be any…. Neway this is to all who reviewed… I give my thanks to… queen animelia (my first reviewer), Ichigo, aphrael-chibi, Sanae, Crystalgail, and Cold-hearted Nightfox, jules and to crimson_der ….. here's the continuation… Sorry if I posted it so late but I'm kinda busy here coz summer vacation has just started and my mom is forcing me to go and help her though personally I wanted to stay away from the sun….. indoors with my computer…. *sigh* anyway I'll put up the next chapter soon… I promise…. just please give me suggestions and correct me please….. BTW, could anyone tell me the name of the eyeglass girl who hates Ran and ummm I also forgot Rei's last name? please? I forgot her name…. peeps I also know that there are a lot of mistakes…. anyone, please be my beta?
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After seeing the bright and cheerful Kotobuki Ran in such a state would not one wonder what fate had befallen the cause of her misery? […okay too dramatic there…] Now we see that while Ran is still on her bed thinking about the incident Rei is also in his own room staring guiltily at the blank wall….
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"So….what am I going to do now?", I thought aloud. "I screwed up big time and now I just don't know how to ask for her forgiveness.." 'I just don't know what had happened then…. It was as if I just snapped… Maybe…. just maybe it was because I've grown tired of Ran pushing me towards Aya when she's the one I love…..' 'Ran…ran…. I'm sorry….. It's just that…. I've loved you since before and ….. I've been wanting to tell you that…. that day you told me that Aya liked me…. I wanted to tell you that I don't deserve her because I already had feelings for you…. but I guess I'm just a fool …. coz even though I know that you're happy with Tatsuki I still continue hoping that someday you'll notice me…', I thought staring at a picture of Ran on my desk. 'I don't know what to do… Should I still confess my feelings even though ….. no….. no…. she's still mad at me and I don't even know how to ask for her forgiveness…. maybe….. ishould make a letter?..... no…. give her a present….. maybe….. call her…. maybe….. follow her around till I have the guts to do all of the above? Hell, no!!! That's what a stalker does and I'm not about to be a stalker….' 'Well, what do you plan to do then?' ' I'm not sure…. I really don't kno- wait! Who are you! and What are you doing in my head?' 'Isn't it obvious? I'm you…' 'Well then why are you talking to me' 'I'm the you that listens to your heart….. stop thinking that way…. because of your earlier actions…. you should tell… her…. and after that … if she rejects you… don't give up if your feelings are true… go for it…. make your intentions true and don't give up! However if there is really no chance then accept it…. then move on…. Rei…. you're stronger than that…. everyone makes mistakes but you have to fix it up!' 'Thankyou…. for telling me that… I will…'
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Rei then got some paper and a pen and wrote a single line….
Ran, I'm sorry. Please forgive me…
He planned to leave it for her later…. and finally after a week of staying up late thinking about Ran, he fell into a peaceful slumber….
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Ummm…. done? sorry……. L bad case of writer's block…. that's all I can produce…. please give me ideas for the next chapters….. :3 please???????? Reviews/Comments/Suggestions welcome…
