Golden Sun: the Intertwinement of Sol and Luna

Disclaimer when first published: Me: This is my first story. Don't flame me too badly but you could say my story sucks. Flint: If it sucks, why are you writing it? Sap: Yeah! The people want stories that have lots of action and good dialogue. Me: I'm trying. Dullahan: Make it scary and suspenseful. Me: I'll try. Wise one: Believe in yourself. Me: Believe in myself! Believe in myself.

This is my first Fan-fiction story as you can tell. As you can see, I'm very inexperienced in posting my work. How many words can I fit in chapter? Some people have 2090 words with good paragraphing while I only have 1131 words with my paragraphing on Microsoft word lost. Reviews would be great. The faster you review, the faster I update. This story is meant to be long and may take awhile to get started. Oh yeah I don't own golden sun and any of the characters. I do own the chaos one and the Luna lighthouses and elemental stars.

(Must read) Disclaimer at December 20, 2003 before the New Year: I decided to stop the progress in my story and rework the beginning. It seems like the beginning really irks people so I'm changing it for the better. I reiterate that this is my first fan-fiction and inputs will always be welcomed.

Story: Our adventure starts exactly at the top of Mount Aleph.

" I got the power of the golden sun! Ha! Ha! Nobody can stop me!" Alex said triumphantly. He set his eyes on the town near Mt. Aleph, Vale. He wanted to test his power so he said,
" I command you storms. Unleash your wrath on this accursed town." Alex raised his hands but nothing happened. He tried it again but nothing happened. Suddenly a huge rock appeared in front of him. Further observation showed that this rock had one huge eye. The wise one bellowed,
" You wish to have infinite power?" Alex was infuriated by the comment and replied,
" I already have unlimited power. Watch and learn." Alex felt psynergy brimming in his body. His powers were growing in unimaginable lengths. He held both hands in front of him and yelled,
" Take this!" Alex used channeled the psynergy into the wise one's body. The wise one seemed like it didn't stir. The wise one was being pushed back inch-by-inch. Alex cockily said,
" You see? I'm stronger than you are." The wise one chuckled,
" Is that so?" The wise one retaliated so fast that Alex wasn't prepared. The wise one used some weird form of psynergy and paralyzed Alex on top of the mountain. Alex couldn't move and barely could speak. He barely heard the wise one say,
" You don't posses infinite power, Alex." Alex asked.
" What have I done wrong?" The wise one replied,
" I transferred the powers of the mars star to young Isaac." Suddenly the mountain started crumbling. Rocks fell from the top of Mt. Aleph. The piece of land where Alex was, crumbled beneath him. Alex neither had the time or strength to escape the wrath of the mountain. The wise one mockingly said,
"Mt, Aleph is crumbling due to the rise of the golden sun. If you want to live, you better escape right now." The wise one whizzed away from the site. Alex's mind started racing. He couldn't concentrate on escaping. Eventually his eyes closed and he drifted in the subconscious. Mt. Aleph still stood (if you watch the ending of GS2 you will see the mountain is still there). Alex tumbled towards the insides of Mt. Aleph. When Alex's body smacked on top of the hard rock surface of the mountain, Alex began to stir.
" Where am I? This place is so dark and so humid, " Alex inquired. " I must find a way out of this place. Yikes! My back is killing me. Based on the fact I tumbled downward, I'm at the base of Mt. Aleph or under it." Alex continued searching for a way out. He was baffled by the closeness of the space in here. It seemed like something lived here. "Where is the exit?" Alex thought to himself. Suddenly a looming figure that had a shape of rock was floating by and appeared in front of Alex. Alex was stunned but before he could say a thing, the eye replied,
" Do not fear me. I'm not the wise one who embarrassed you. I'm the negative, the opposite of the wise one." Before the rock could speak again, Alex interrupted, " Wait a second! If you're not the wise one than who are you?" His impatience and arrogance began to show. The rock sighed and said,
" I like to call myself the Chaos one. The wise one seeks for balance
in this world. I seek the chaos of this world. You, my friend, is the
key to causing mayhem to this world. You are very powerful indeed
based on the fact that you have three-quarters of the Sol Sun."
" I'm powerful but I couldn't even defeat the wise one."
" The wise one is a god with boundless power. Your power still has boundaries but I can show you the path to make it limitless." Alex racked his brains and asked,
" Why does my power have boundaries? I have the golden sun for god sakes."
" That is partially true. You have three-fourths of the Sol Sun." Alex was infuriated and said,
" Stop speaking to me with riddles! What is the Sol sun?"
" Patience my young friend. There is no point in getting worked up about it. The Sol sun is produced when you light the Mercury, Venus, Jupiter, and Mars lighthouses."
" Isn't that called the golden sun like most normal people refer it too."
" You're thinking of some far greater power that nobody in this world has ever seen. There is another sun that could be formed which is the Luna sun. The Luna sun is produced by lighting Neptune, Uranus, Saturn and Pluto lighthouses."
" Wait a second. Are you telling me there are more lighthouses to be lit?"
" Once the Luna sun and the Sol sun are both formed they form the Golden sun you speak off." Alex processed this new information. He said,
" If I can manage to form the Luna sun, I can get unlimited power from the real golden sun?"
" Precisely! You are a very perceptive one indeed. I presume you need more information to complete the task?"
" Where can I find the elemental stars? Where are the lighthouses? Where is the golden sun going to form?"
" The elemental stars are surprising in the Sol Sanctum where you originally raided the place for the Sol elemental stars."
" We've cleaned out every part of the Sanctum. You're telling me there's more."
" Stubborn fool. You've only solved one half of the mysteries of the sanctum. There were two sides of the trap. If you switched the order."
" If I switched the order than I could reach the Luna room with the Luna elemental stars."
" Thank god you now understand. The Luna lighthouses reside in Luna Gaia."
" What's Luna Gaia?"
" It's the parallel to Sol Gaia, the place you are standing on right now. There is portal that leads between Sol Gaia and Luna Gaia. Legends say that this portal resides in an ancient city where time slows."
" I know precisely where it is."
" Good for you. Now the power of the Golden sun will shine high in the sky in the spot where the Anemos civilization was suppose to be. Legends said that once the golden sun was formed, the Anemos civilization will return back to Sol Gaia. Once the city of Anemos returned back to its roots, the beholder of the Sol sun can receive unlimited power from the golden sun." " Ah! The famous Anemos civilization." "You have a rival that can steal this power away from you. Young Isaac does possess the last piece of the Sol sun." " Damn you Isaac! I will crush you for wrecking my dream to posses pure alchemy."
" That's the spirit! Before you leave, I need to train you to conquer the world. I will train you to utilize your new powers."
" Thank you, Chaos one. Once I'm done with my training, I will cause chaos in the world. Ha! Ha!" ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
It has been a day since the lighting of the lighthouses. The adepts just returned from their journey to restore Alchemy. The adepts realized Vale has been completely destroyed yet everybody was saved from the wreckage. The wise one led the people to refuge. The adepts decided to clear things up and met at a tent at the refuge. The leader of the group with spiked blond hair with fair skin, Isaac said,
" We need to decide what our plans will be for the next coming months." The red haired man with the complexion of a muscle man, Garet said,
" I think it is obvious that I will stay with my family and be the main man of the household." The purple haired with fiery red eyes, Jenna chuckled. The brother of Jenna, Felix with his brown-blackish hair spoke on behalf of both of them,
" We've volunteered to help rebuild Vale. Maybe you should help us?"
" I concur!" Isaac said. Garet then said,
" I have to after all I'm the grandson of the mayor of Vale." The yellow haired boy with a baby face finally made his decision. Ivan said,
" I have now decided to go back to my original roots. I'm going back to Contigo to stay with my sister." The long blue-haired man with the age numbering in the hundreds also made his decision. Piers said,
" I'm going back to Lemuria to set things straight there. I will be leaving at tomorrow morning. Care to join along Ivan?" Ivan replied,
" It seems like I have no choice. I have no other rides to take me to Contigo." Isaac noticed that the sexy, blue haired lady and the cute blonde haired girl haven't spoken out. He asked them
" What are your decisions Mia and Sheba?" Mia first spoke,
" I'm staying with you Isaac. (Oh! what does this mean?) The people of Inil can depend on the water of the Hermes. They don't need me anymore. I just feel helping the people of Vale is a more pertinent issue now." Sheba just kept staring at Felix nice complexion. Eventually Garet broke up the stare and asked,
" Have you decided yet, Sheba?" Sheba was kind of startled by Garet's impudence but she quickly replied,
" Ah. I'm also staying at Vale. I believe Faran will understand my decision to stay here. I just don't want to go back to Laverio and be looked upon as special." Isaac shouted to keep order,
" Then it's decided. We all are staying at Vale except Ivan and Piers. We shall wish them a good journey."
It has been two days since the departure of both Ivan and Piers. They sailed on the majestic Lemurian ship with the wings of Contigo. They had managed to say a nice goodbye to their friends. They didn't know how long it would take for all of them to have a reunion.
Isaac and Felix along with other workmen of Vale started creating a fence around the area of where new Vale will stand. Both Isaac and Felix used their move psynergy to move heavy rocks to it's right position. The workmen would craft the rock into a nice cube. Isaac would then use his carry psynergy to carry the blocks on top of each to form a formidable wall. If there were ever a mistake in a fence, Felix would use his grind psynergy to rectify the mistake. The wall was put up in no time thanks to the help of 2 very gifted adepts. Isaac and Felix finally had a break. Isaac decided to ask Felix,
" Are you and Sheba an item?" Felix calmly replied,
" Are you and Mia an item?" Isaac patted him on the back and said,
" Nice comeback, man! Now answer my question."
" I won't answer it, if you don't answer it."
" Come on just tell me."
" I have a good idea! Why don't we have a fight? The loser will have to answer the question."
" Fine by me. Prepare to lose!"
" I think you will be doing the losing." The two earth adepts promised not to use blades but just use very weak psynergy. Felix started it off with quake sphere. The ground shook beneath Isaac. Isaac lost his balance a little but retaliated with gaia. Little rocks surrounded Felix and levitated him above the ground. The rocks disappeared and Felix fell back to the ground. Felix wasn't hurt by this and cast spire. A huge piece of sharp rock aimed straight at Isaac. Isaac also used spire. The spires hit but Isaac's spires had a little more power backed behind it and landed right on Felix chest. Felix was blown across the field. Isaac immediately came to Felix's side and cast cure on Felix's chest. Isaac said,
" I think I have won this fight. Now tell me are you and Sheba an item?"
" Maybe. I'm not so sure. Damn! Your last attack was impressive. Where did you pack that power?"
" I'm not sure. I think it just came out of me, I guess."
There was a lot of activity inside new Vale. People started building houses for their new residence. Garet helped his family to create a comfortable house out clay and bricks. Clay and bricks were never available before the restoration of Alchemy but now it was common building material for most homes. Garet used his fire psynergy to mold the clay into the appropriate dimensions that his grandfather asked him to do. Jenna was helping her mom and dad build their "dream" house. She also used fire psynergy to mold the clay. Her dad used a ladder to climb on top of the clay cube and laid the bricks in an orderly fashion. Jenna's mom used paint (new invention) to colorize (is that a word?) the walls and ceilings.
Both Jenna and Garet were working diligently to satisfy their families' needs. While Jenna was working, Garet would always set his eyes on the next-door neighbor, Jenna. He inspected the beautiful purple hair and fiery red eyes that pierced his heart and made it steam like using parch psynergy on water. Garet's mind was drifting off to space when the mayor yelled,
" Get back to work, grandson. You should've finished the work by now."
" Yes, grandfather. May I ask you question?"
" Oh. ok. You can ask me any question?"
" What do you do to impress a lady?"
" That's a tough question. You can try the direct path by going up to the lady and hand her a present and say I love you. You can also do the subtle method of giving the lady clues and secret presents. That's how I won my love. Sorry this might not be helping you right now."
" I don't have the courage to say I love you. I'm too lazy to think of presents let alone make them."
" If you want to win over somebody, you might want to fix your attitude. The power of love takes awhile and you can't afford to be lazy."
" Oh.ok."
" Now get to work!"

Sheba was busy using her wind psynergy to clear the grass to create roads. She used cyclone and whirlwind to clear weeds and leaves respectively. One she paved the paths; a person would use the newly invented hot, burning asphalt to cover the paths. Mia would use douse to cool down the asphalt and a brand new road would be open. These new roads were made to accompany the new invented cart with 4 wheels that could carry goods all over the town. After they paved about 10 roads, Mia and Sheba decided to take a break. Mia and Sheba laid on the remaining grass and started to have a conversation. Mia inquired,
" I've always been wondering about this but where do you stay?"
" Is that any of your business?" Sheba replied.
" Can't you just tell me?"
" Fine. I stay with Felix and Jenna. How about you?"
" I like to keep that as a secret."
" Secrets will always be disclosed by a wind adept." Sheba used her mind read technique to read Mia's mind. Mia tried to stop Sheba but it was too late. Sheba then chuckled,
" You and Isaac are an item." Mia blushed but she then said,
" If you're staying at Felix's house that means you two are also an item." Sheba was blushing so much that her whole face was turning red. Mia definitely hit the wrong spot. Sheba continued,
" Now we know who each other has a crush on. Maybe we can discuss how do we approach them?"
" I thought it was usually the men who goes up to the lady and confesses their love to them."
" Usually, but both Isaac and Felix are chicken. They will never tell us even if we asked them."
" Maybe we can show them hints that we love them. Once they realize the clues, they might have the confidence to ask us out on a date."
" It's a start. I think you and Isaac are a cute couple."
" I also think the same for you and Felix."
" Do you think Garet and Jenna are an item?"
" Possibly. I know Garet definitely has a crush on Jenna."
" Yeah but we're not sure if Jenna has the same feelings."
" Should we tell Garet to confess?"
" Nah, let them figure out on their own." Both Sheba and Mia laughed under the beautiful sunset.

First time published: Me: Yep! I love pairings. Isacc/Mia, Garet/Jenna, and Felix/Sheba are very cute couples. I hope you like the cliffhanger. It may be a little obvious what happens next. Review! Review!

December 20, 2003: My first revision chapter is up. Hope the beginning spices things up for my story. I made this chapter longer because it I felt like it. There's more plot and detail into this chapter anyway. If you don't like what I'm doing please review and tell me about it. I haven't posted the revision for my 2nd chapter so the events won't connect very well. I will post the 2nd chapter tomorrow. Thank you for the inconvenience.