Lothlorien
rating: G
genre: Nature / Life
summary: I wrote a poem in English, translated it into Elvish, then back
into English for a rough translation. Please read and review.
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Lothlorien
Yassen aldaron tuia tára
ar sírer nar celumë senda:
Lothlorien! Hlar omanya, Galadriel!
Elyë nar vanassë mi nórë órënya mavoinë,
yassen filici willë latin.
Órënya ránë ar inyë úmë.
Ananta Galadriel! Etriel Galadriel!
Hlar omanya, lle er harya fëa
ana fainu lumbë indonya.
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Rough translation:
Where trees grow high
and rivers flow peacefully:
Lothlorien! Hear my voice, Galadriel!
You are beauty in a land my heart longs for,
where birds fly free.
My soul wandered and I was weary.
But Galadriel! Lady Galadriel!
Hear my voice, for only you possess soul to
release the melancholy of my mind.
rating: G
genre: Nature / Life
summary: I wrote a poem in English, translated it into Elvish, then back
into English for a rough translation. Please read and review.
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Lothlorien
Yassen aldaron tuia tára
ar sírer nar celumë senda:
Lothlorien! Hlar omanya, Galadriel!
Elyë nar vanassë mi nórë órënya mavoinë,
yassen filici willë latin.
Órënya ránë ar inyë úmë.
Ananta Galadriel! Etriel Galadriel!
Hlar omanya, lle er harya fëa
ana fainu lumbë indonya.
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Rough translation:
Where trees grow high
and rivers flow peacefully:
Lothlorien! Hear my voice, Galadriel!
You are beauty in a land my heart longs for,
where birds fly free.
My soul wandered and I was weary.
But Galadriel! Lady Galadriel!
Hear my voice, for only you possess soul to
release the melancholy of my mind.
