Passion
By: Yu Mutou
Disclaimer: I don't own Jackie Chan Adventures.
Note from the Author: Ok I know all of you want to start reading this chapter of "Passion" so I won't waist to much time here. Um, lets see basically I just want to thank everyone for reviewing the last chapter!!! I really, really appreciate it! Once again here's a little question and answer to everyone who reviewed:
Souma Kagura: It's ok you couldn't review chapter three. Believe me I've been really busy too. (Actually I should be doing homework right now but...) Anyway, yes Jade and Hsi make an awesomely cute couple. I thought that Jackie and Uncle's reactions turned out pretty well, some parts I would of changed but in general they were pretty close. I agree it wasn't a cliffhanger. But a great place to end! ^_^
Forgotten Love: I'm glad that you liked it! *Bouncing like a sugar filled bunny on crack.* Thanks for the idea, a little weird but funny nonetheless. Hsi Wu would look cute as a Pringles Jar! Part's you enjoyed...um yes Uncle's reaction to having a Demon in his shop was good. The part about Jade and Hsi eggin' Jackie and Uncle on well that's what I was trying to go for. The cute puppy dog face well...whatever it reminds you of ok. About the character's being OCC, to tell you the truth I have no idea what the means so fill me in please! Glad that you liked it!!! ^_^
Youkai Youko: Yes, it was a funny chapter. Glad that you liked it.
Story Weaver1: I thought the personalities turned out good too. My brother disagrees though. (Hear that Oni Lord! Somebody thought they were good!)
VampireNaomi: Glad that you though it was great. About Uncle reaction, I tried to make it as big as possible. I mean we all know he hates the Demon's so of course he's going to freak-out when he finds that Jade is in love with one. Jackie's reaction was surprised at first be the truth is, he doesn't know what in heck to think about it. I don't want Hsi Wu to go back either. I think that the ending will be a surprise to everyone.
Oni Lord: Ok, I know you didn't write a review but I talk to you all the time and I know what you think about it. I'm glad that you though it was ok even if you thought the character's reactions were off. I personally though that they were good but that's my opinion. Please review this chapter! You keep saying your going to but you never do! It's pretty sad when my own brother doesn't review my stories. Anyway, you need to update "The Unexpected Future" or start a new story. You're leaving me at a cliffie here!
All right well now that I wasted even more time let's get to the story! Here ya' have it Chapter 5 of "Passion":
Chapter 5: Day 3: The Last Day
Story Thus Far: It's 6 years after Taracudo and the Oni masks. Hsi Wu was freed from the demon realm for three days and decides to see his one true love again...by kidnapping her. Jade at first is reluctant but has a change of heart and now expresses her true feelings for Hsi Wu. Jade after many years was able to get her revenge on an old "friend" Drew. Jackie and Uncle are searching for the Dark Chi that Uncle delectated and managed to stumble onto Jade's and Hsi Wu's fun. Despite Uncles protesting he allowed Hsi Wu to stay in his shop for the night...
UNCLES RARE FINDS:
It was morning ad the little birds were chirping outside. Jackie sat up and rubbed his eyes. He yawned and even though he had just slept for a good 10 hours he was still tired. With all of the things that had gone on yesterday he was afraid to go face the "thing" downstairs. He got out of bed and went over to his closet to get dressed. Jade in love with a Demon! He thought, knowing Jade being such a tomboy he was never sure if she would fall in love. He would have no problem if it had been with a boy at school, or someone that was her age and human. But Hsi Wu! He was a Demon it would never work out in the real world. People just wouldn't accept it. (AN: I would! ^_^) Jackie realized he had no control over his nieces feelings and would just have to get over it.
Jackie walked over to Jade's door and knocked. He wanted to have a chance talk to her without Hsi Wu being around. There was no answer so he figured she had already gone downstairs. Jackie looked down into the living room and did a double take. Jade and Hsi Wu were sleeping on the couch together. Despite the fact the Jade had broken his rules he still couldn't help smiling, they looked so cute together. Jade was holding Hsi Wu's hand as her head was on his lap. Hsi Wu was sleeping sitting up but he was snuggling Jade close to him. She had a smile on her lips and Hsi Wu almost looked innocent while he was sleeping.
Jackie walked over to them and leaned down close to Jade's face.
"Jade." He said.
"Wa..."Jade said opening her eyes. "Jackie!" She sat up and let go of Hsi Wu. "God don't scare me like that."
"You know your not supposed to be down here." Jackie said crossing his arms.
"Aw, Jackie your treating me like I'm still 11. Please, please, please don't get mad." Jade replied.
"Do you ever give up?"
"You know me better than that." "Arg! I've had enough...fine sleep with him for all I care. It's your life."
"Thanks Jackie." Jade said.
"Snore, snore"
"Is he still sleeping?" Jackie said looking down at Hsi Wu. "Sure is a heavy sleeper for a demon."
"Come on Hsi wake up..." Jade said as she gently shook him.
"G...good morning my Jewel." Hsi Wu said as he opened his eyes.
"Good morning Chhhhan." Hsi Wu said to Jackie in a mid yawn.
"Are you aware that, that's Jade's last name too?" Jackie said.
"It wouldn't be for long I didn't have to go back today."
"She's only 17! Don't even think about marriage!!!"
"I don't care what it takes, I'm going to find a way out of that prison called the Demon Realm and make Jade mine." Hsi Wu said glaring at Jackie.
"AIHAAAA!!! I see a Demon in my shop, on the couch with Jade in her pajamas, Uncle thinks that someone broke the rules!!!" Uncle said walking down the stairs.
"I um, just came down here Uncle." Jade said looking nervous.
"Suuuure. And I should believe you because..." Uncle said.
"Come on Jackie back me up here!" Jade said as she kicked Jackie in the foot. He looked down at her and then back up at Uncle.
"She slept with him." Jackie said point down at Jade and Hsi Wu.
"Jackie!" Jade said.
"Aiahh! That's it Uncle is going to go get the blowfish." Uncle said as he turned around.
"No wait Uncle! Give me a chance to explain." Jade said.
"If I had a dollar for every time I've heard the word in the past two days..." Jackie mumbled to himself.
"Fine, I still don't think there is anything to explain. But if this happens one more time..." Uncle said as he walked over and sat down into the chair next to Jackie.
"What time is it?" Hsi Wu asked.
"I think we should ban you from talking, Demon Boy." Uncle said with his arms crossed.
"It's almost noon." Jackie said looking at his watch.
"NOON! Darn we slept in, come on Jade lets get going..." Hsi Wu said as he pulled Jade towards the door.
"Not yet Hsi Wu. First I don't trust you being alone with Jade and people might think it's a little weird Jade walking down the street in her pajamas. You go get changed." Jackie said looking at Jade. "Hsi Wu, Uncle and I need to have a talk."
"Don't start a war without me..." Jade said as she ran up the stairs. Hsi Wu watched her leave.
"I'm going to go make some tea. I can't stand being around this demon anymore." Uncle said as he walked out of the room.
"This better be fast." Hsi Wu said. "Were wasting valuable time on earth here."
"So let me get this straight, you have to leave?" Jackie asked.
"Midnight tonight." Hsi Wu replied.
"Why?"
"Like I said before, I'm not sure."
"If Jade really loves you as much as she says she does...isn't she going to be heartbroken when you leave?" Jackie asked.
"Her and me both." Hsi Wu said looking down. He couldn't imagine losing Jade now. "I've never met anyone like her...there's just something that reaches out and grabs you."
"I know what you mean." Jackie said.
"I love her more than anything."
"I didn't know that demons were capable of love."
"Demons are capable of any emotion humans may have. Only most demons like my brothers and sisters they try to ignore that emotion and focus and hate more."
"Why are you different then?"
"I used to be hateful, until I meet Jade. I guess that my brothers and sisters never really feel in love before..."
"Ready!" Jade said as she slid down the banister. She ran over and pulled Hsi Wu off the couch. "Did you two have a interesting talk?"
"Sure, lets get going." Hsi Wu said as he walked towards the door.
"Jade?"
"Yes Jackie." Jade said rolling her eyes.
"Just be careful ok?"
"You're just going to let me leave! No speech no-"
"Yes." Jackie cut her off.
"Thanks Jackie!" Jade said she ran up and gave him a hug.
"Hey save some for me!" Hsi Wu said.
"You better take care of her Hsi Wu." Jackie said.
"You bet Chan." Hsi Wu said as he opened the door and stepped outside. Jade followed him. Hsi Wu shut the door and left with Jade.
"Tea is ready!" Uncle said walking into the room. "Where is Demon Boy? He better not be in Jade's room..."
"They left."
"LEFT! You let them leave! You let that demon take Jade with him!"
"Yes."
"I don't trust him one bit!"
"I think he really does love Jade..."
"How do you know?"
"I can just tell by the way he talks about her...Listen Uncle is there anyway to bring Hsi Wu back from the Demon Realm?"
"I'm sure that there is a counter spell...but I'd have to find one. Wait, what am I saying there is no way I'm agreeing to this!"
"But Jade will be heart broken..." Uncle though to himself,
"There may be one way but Hsi Wu's not going to like it..."
TO BE CONTINUED...
Note for the Author: Wow this it turning out longer than I though it would be! This was actually supposed to be my last chapter. Oh well, the more chapters the better! ^_^ Lets see now that I have some extra time to talk let me say again thanks to all the reviewers!!!
I also have a question; I heard that there was actually going to be a 5th season of Jackie Chan Adventures? If there is, then that just made my day no wait that just made my month! If anyone is absolutely sure that this is true will you please tell me! I'd really appreciate it!
I would of got this posted sooner but I went to the mall today will my Grandma. We went to this store that made custom shirt's and decided to get one. Well, I got one that all black on the front it says: "Scout's Honor! Ch, like I'm a scout." (One of Jade's famous quotes) and on the back it says: Yu Mutou. How awesome is that! ^_^ I just can't wait to wear it. We also got one for my brother that says: "Never Mock the Cookie" (For those of you that have see the episode "The Power Within" you know what I'm talking about.) on the front and: Oni Lord, on the back. It's so cool. I just might have to steal his penname for a day and wear it! Oh and I'd like to give a big thanks to my Grandma for getting them for me! Hi Grandma! Thank you, thank you, thank you! I just love them! ^_^
Well I'll try to update as soon a possible! Please review! (Cough*thatgoesforyoutooOniLord*cough) Thanks for reading!!!
~Yu Mutou
Disclaimer: I don't own Jackie Chan Adventures.
Note from the Author: Ok I know all of you want to start reading this chapter of "Passion" so I won't waist to much time here. Um, lets see basically I just want to thank everyone for reviewing the last chapter!!! I really, really appreciate it! Once again here's a little question and answer to everyone who reviewed:
Souma Kagura: It's ok you couldn't review chapter three. Believe me I've been really busy too. (Actually I should be doing homework right now but...) Anyway, yes Jade and Hsi make an awesomely cute couple. I thought that Jackie and Uncle's reactions turned out pretty well, some parts I would of changed but in general they were pretty close. I agree it wasn't a cliffhanger. But a great place to end! ^_^
Forgotten Love: I'm glad that you liked it! *Bouncing like a sugar filled bunny on crack.* Thanks for the idea, a little weird but funny nonetheless. Hsi Wu would look cute as a Pringles Jar! Part's you enjoyed...um yes Uncle's reaction to having a Demon in his shop was good. The part about Jade and Hsi eggin' Jackie and Uncle on well that's what I was trying to go for. The cute puppy dog face well...whatever it reminds you of ok. About the character's being OCC, to tell you the truth I have no idea what the means so fill me in please! Glad that you liked it!!! ^_^
Youkai Youko: Yes, it was a funny chapter. Glad that you liked it.
Story Weaver1: I thought the personalities turned out good too. My brother disagrees though. (Hear that Oni Lord! Somebody thought they were good!)
VampireNaomi: Glad that you though it was great. About Uncle reaction, I tried to make it as big as possible. I mean we all know he hates the Demon's so of course he's going to freak-out when he finds that Jade is in love with one. Jackie's reaction was surprised at first be the truth is, he doesn't know what in heck to think about it. I don't want Hsi Wu to go back either. I think that the ending will be a surprise to everyone.
Oni Lord: Ok, I know you didn't write a review but I talk to you all the time and I know what you think about it. I'm glad that you though it was ok even if you thought the character's reactions were off. I personally though that they were good but that's my opinion. Please review this chapter! You keep saying your going to but you never do! It's pretty sad when my own brother doesn't review my stories. Anyway, you need to update "The Unexpected Future" or start a new story. You're leaving me at a cliffie here!
All right well now that I wasted even more time let's get to the story! Here ya' have it Chapter 5 of "Passion":
Chapter 5: Day 3: The Last Day
Story Thus Far: It's 6 years after Taracudo and the Oni masks. Hsi Wu was freed from the demon realm for three days and decides to see his one true love again...by kidnapping her. Jade at first is reluctant but has a change of heart and now expresses her true feelings for Hsi Wu. Jade after many years was able to get her revenge on an old "friend" Drew. Jackie and Uncle are searching for the Dark Chi that Uncle delectated and managed to stumble onto Jade's and Hsi Wu's fun. Despite Uncles protesting he allowed Hsi Wu to stay in his shop for the night...
UNCLES RARE FINDS:
It was morning ad the little birds were chirping outside. Jackie sat up and rubbed his eyes. He yawned and even though he had just slept for a good 10 hours he was still tired. With all of the things that had gone on yesterday he was afraid to go face the "thing" downstairs. He got out of bed and went over to his closet to get dressed. Jade in love with a Demon! He thought, knowing Jade being such a tomboy he was never sure if she would fall in love. He would have no problem if it had been with a boy at school, or someone that was her age and human. But Hsi Wu! He was a Demon it would never work out in the real world. People just wouldn't accept it. (AN: I would! ^_^) Jackie realized he had no control over his nieces feelings and would just have to get over it.
Jackie walked over to Jade's door and knocked. He wanted to have a chance talk to her without Hsi Wu being around. There was no answer so he figured she had already gone downstairs. Jackie looked down into the living room and did a double take. Jade and Hsi Wu were sleeping on the couch together. Despite the fact the Jade had broken his rules he still couldn't help smiling, they looked so cute together. Jade was holding Hsi Wu's hand as her head was on his lap. Hsi Wu was sleeping sitting up but he was snuggling Jade close to him. She had a smile on her lips and Hsi Wu almost looked innocent while he was sleeping.
Jackie walked over to them and leaned down close to Jade's face.
"Jade." He said.
"Wa..."Jade said opening her eyes. "Jackie!" She sat up and let go of Hsi Wu. "God don't scare me like that."
"You know your not supposed to be down here." Jackie said crossing his arms.
"Aw, Jackie your treating me like I'm still 11. Please, please, please don't get mad." Jade replied.
"Do you ever give up?"
"You know me better than that." "Arg! I've had enough...fine sleep with him for all I care. It's your life."
"Thanks Jackie." Jade said.
"Snore, snore"
"Is he still sleeping?" Jackie said looking down at Hsi Wu. "Sure is a heavy sleeper for a demon."
"Come on Hsi wake up..." Jade said as she gently shook him.
"G...good morning my Jewel." Hsi Wu said as he opened his eyes.
"Good morning Chhhhan." Hsi Wu said to Jackie in a mid yawn.
"Are you aware that, that's Jade's last name too?" Jackie said.
"It wouldn't be for long I didn't have to go back today."
"She's only 17! Don't even think about marriage!!!"
"I don't care what it takes, I'm going to find a way out of that prison called the Demon Realm and make Jade mine." Hsi Wu said glaring at Jackie.
"AIHAAAA!!! I see a Demon in my shop, on the couch with Jade in her pajamas, Uncle thinks that someone broke the rules!!!" Uncle said walking down the stairs.
"I um, just came down here Uncle." Jade said looking nervous.
"Suuuure. And I should believe you because..." Uncle said.
"Come on Jackie back me up here!" Jade said as she kicked Jackie in the foot. He looked down at her and then back up at Uncle.
"She slept with him." Jackie said point down at Jade and Hsi Wu.
"Jackie!" Jade said.
"Aiahh! That's it Uncle is going to go get the blowfish." Uncle said as he turned around.
"No wait Uncle! Give me a chance to explain." Jade said.
"If I had a dollar for every time I've heard the word in the past two days..." Jackie mumbled to himself.
"Fine, I still don't think there is anything to explain. But if this happens one more time..." Uncle said as he walked over and sat down into the chair next to Jackie.
"What time is it?" Hsi Wu asked.
"I think we should ban you from talking, Demon Boy." Uncle said with his arms crossed.
"It's almost noon." Jackie said looking at his watch.
"NOON! Darn we slept in, come on Jade lets get going..." Hsi Wu said as he pulled Jade towards the door.
"Not yet Hsi Wu. First I don't trust you being alone with Jade and people might think it's a little weird Jade walking down the street in her pajamas. You go get changed." Jackie said looking at Jade. "Hsi Wu, Uncle and I need to have a talk."
"Don't start a war without me..." Jade said as she ran up the stairs. Hsi Wu watched her leave.
"I'm going to go make some tea. I can't stand being around this demon anymore." Uncle said as he walked out of the room.
"This better be fast." Hsi Wu said. "Were wasting valuable time on earth here."
"So let me get this straight, you have to leave?" Jackie asked.
"Midnight tonight." Hsi Wu replied.
"Why?"
"Like I said before, I'm not sure."
"If Jade really loves you as much as she says she does...isn't she going to be heartbroken when you leave?" Jackie asked.
"Her and me both." Hsi Wu said looking down. He couldn't imagine losing Jade now. "I've never met anyone like her...there's just something that reaches out and grabs you."
"I know what you mean." Jackie said.
"I love her more than anything."
"I didn't know that demons were capable of love."
"Demons are capable of any emotion humans may have. Only most demons like my brothers and sisters they try to ignore that emotion and focus and hate more."
"Why are you different then?"
"I used to be hateful, until I meet Jade. I guess that my brothers and sisters never really feel in love before..."
"Ready!" Jade said as she slid down the banister. She ran over and pulled Hsi Wu off the couch. "Did you two have a interesting talk?"
"Sure, lets get going." Hsi Wu said as he walked towards the door.
"Jade?"
"Yes Jackie." Jade said rolling her eyes.
"Just be careful ok?"
"You're just going to let me leave! No speech no-"
"Yes." Jackie cut her off.
"Thanks Jackie!" Jade said she ran up and gave him a hug.
"Hey save some for me!" Hsi Wu said.
"You better take care of her Hsi Wu." Jackie said.
"You bet Chan." Hsi Wu said as he opened the door and stepped outside. Jade followed him. Hsi Wu shut the door and left with Jade.
"Tea is ready!" Uncle said walking into the room. "Where is Demon Boy? He better not be in Jade's room..."
"They left."
"LEFT! You let them leave! You let that demon take Jade with him!"
"Yes."
"I don't trust him one bit!"
"I think he really does love Jade..."
"How do you know?"
"I can just tell by the way he talks about her...Listen Uncle is there anyway to bring Hsi Wu back from the Demon Realm?"
"I'm sure that there is a counter spell...but I'd have to find one. Wait, what am I saying there is no way I'm agreeing to this!"
"But Jade will be heart broken..." Uncle though to himself,
"There may be one way but Hsi Wu's not going to like it..."
TO BE CONTINUED...
Note for the Author: Wow this it turning out longer than I though it would be! This was actually supposed to be my last chapter. Oh well, the more chapters the better! ^_^ Lets see now that I have some extra time to talk let me say again thanks to all the reviewers!!!
I also have a question; I heard that there was actually going to be a 5th season of Jackie Chan Adventures? If there is, then that just made my day no wait that just made my month! If anyone is absolutely sure that this is true will you please tell me! I'd really appreciate it!
I would of got this posted sooner but I went to the mall today will my Grandma. We went to this store that made custom shirt's and decided to get one. Well, I got one that all black on the front it says: "Scout's Honor! Ch, like I'm a scout." (One of Jade's famous quotes) and on the back it says: Yu Mutou. How awesome is that! ^_^ I just can't wait to wear it. We also got one for my brother that says: "Never Mock the Cookie" (For those of you that have see the episode "The Power Within" you know what I'm talking about.) on the front and: Oni Lord, on the back. It's so cool. I just might have to steal his penname for a day and wear it! Oh and I'd like to give a big thanks to my Grandma for getting them for me! Hi Grandma! Thank you, thank you, thank you! I just love them! ^_^
Well I'll try to update as soon a possible! Please review! (Cough*thatgoesforyoutooOniLord*cough) Thanks for reading!!!
~Yu Mutou
