Later on The Train
Well, I seem to have made it all right!! I was the first person at the station besides one family, they were a family of redheads consisting of a mother, a father, 2 girls, and four boys who each turned towards me as I strode into the station with my cart of stuff. I could tell they were a family of wizards because of the beautiful snowy owl I could see caged on top of one of the trunks. But 2 of the kids seemed out of place, 1 boy had unkempt black hair, and 1 girl had long sort of frizzy brown hair. The boy looked a lot like Harry Potter, he had green eyes and all. They seemed to be waiting between platforms 9 and 10, and as far as I could see platform 9 ¾. So I gathered up my courage and walked towards the mother and asked her in a sweet voice, "Um, excuse me, do you know where platform 9 ¾ is?" "It's right through that barriet," she said, "but it's not open yet." She added with a sigh. "Are you new to Hogwarts?" She asked questioningly, "You don't look like a first year." "Ohh, I'm a transfer student from Beauxbatons, " I said proudly. "Fifth year?" Questioned a red haired boy about my age who was stanfing nex to the Harry P. look a like. "Um, I think so." "Well you better get your cart Deary, the platform is opening." The mother broke in. I dashed over to my cart and wheeled it to the barrier. "You go first," Offered the Harry P. look a like. "Thanks, " I said in my boy charming tone. I then pushed my cart five feet from the barrier then looked back at their mother who nodded and urged me to go on. I took a deep breath and headed at breakneck speed toward the barrier while thinking, "This is going to hurt." I opened my eyes and saw that I was standing in front of a large scarlet steam engiene labeled "The Hogwarts Express" I boarded the train cautiously because I'm not very used to trains. Then I found a compartment I liked and shoved all my stuff into it. I sat down and started to read my book to try to pass time before the train would leave. As time passed, people started pouring into the Hogwarts Express. I heard a knok on the door and looked up to see one of the girl redheads. She said her name was Ginny and she was very nice. We started moving just a few minutes ago it was really weird because everything outside my window is just a blur of darkness. Well, I gotta go, someone is coming.
-Lily
Well, I seem to have made it all right!! I was the first person at the station besides one family, they were a family of redheads consisting of a mother, a father, 2 girls, and four boys who each turned towards me as I strode into the station with my cart of stuff. I could tell they were a family of wizards because of the beautiful snowy owl I could see caged on top of one of the trunks. But 2 of the kids seemed out of place, 1 boy had unkempt black hair, and 1 girl had long sort of frizzy brown hair. The boy looked a lot like Harry Potter, he had green eyes and all. They seemed to be waiting between platforms 9 and 10, and as far as I could see platform 9 ¾. So I gathered up my courage and walked towards the mother and asked her in a sweet voice, "Um, excuse me, do you know where platform 9 ¾ is?" "It's right through that barriet," she said, "but it's not open yet." She added with a sigh. "Are you new to Hogwarts?" She asked questioningly, "You don't look like a first year." "Ohh, I'm a transfer student from Beauxbatons, " I said proudly. "Fifth year?" Questioned a red haired boy about my age who was stanfing nex to the Harry P. look a like. "Um, I think so." "Well you better get your cart Deary, the platform is opening." The mother broke in. I dashed over to my cart and wheeled it to the barrier. "You go first," Offered the Harry P. look a like. "Thanks, " I said in my boy charming tone. I then pushed my cart five feet from the barrier then looked back at their mother who nodded and urged me to go on. I took a deep breath and headed at breakneck speed toward the barrier while thinking, "This is going to hurt." I opened my eyes and saw that I was standing in front of a large scarlet steam engiene labeled "The Hogwarts Express" I boarded the train cautiously because I'm not very used to trains. Then I found a compartment I liked and shoved all my stuff into it. I sat down and started to read my book to try to pass time before the train would leave. As time passed, people started pouring into the Hogwarts Express. I heard a knok on the door and looked up to see one of the girl redheads. She said her name was Ginny and she was very nice. We started moving just a few minutes ago it was really weird because everything outside my window is just a blur of darkness. Well, I gotta go, someone is coming.
-Lily