.Hack//Flame
Disclaimer I do not own .hack//Sign or anything else.....
Note: this will be my first attempt at a fanfic... so ill hope for the best, this tale will be loosely based on a RP I was once in, also know that I am a big Fan of .hack and am going to try my best, the few reviews I get at first are going to be my big influence in how far to go!
(...) denotes thought
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*inside "the world"*
A twinblade character appears, he looks around at the field, smiling softly to himself, he looks in a virtual river and he gazes at his reflection, his long black hair catches his eye, but his most noticeable is his purple eyes, something impossible in his real life. looking ahead, he draws his new pair of blades, he enjoys the fact they are one of a kind, but hates the reason why he got him. He sighs lightly and speaks to hisself.
"Ah Renzoff, you have the appearance I always dreamed of....now if only I could do what I wanted with it, but I'm trapped by the real world once again"
A glowing white figure appears behind Renz, his robes give him the appearance of a bishop or priest, however his face seems hardened, almost cruel.
"Now, now Renzoff, you should be grateful.... Very few people get these privileges and for pay"
At the beginning of the robed figure's speech, Renzoff scowled ( you fiend... Any moron can see I was chosen because you can force me to do whatever I want... be happy I love learning more than I hate you)
"Whatever Lios, now why have you called me here? You never give anything for free"
"Why must you assume I'm going to give you assignment, why can't I just be here to say..."
"Just tell me Lios...."
Lios frowned with fury, (this kid is more trouble than he is worth, he thought, most people dream of this, and the whelp can only disrespect me, the one day your not so useful kid...)
"Fine Renzoff, I have been receiving complaints about a field"
"and you need me to do such a simple task Lios? Your others must be losing their touch"
"LISTEN! We have sent 2 other administrators to deal with this, but they never reported back in.... I have the meeting after this, so you're left with the field, "
Lios sees the anger in Renzoff's eyes, even through a game
"and if you complain ill see your fired...."
Renzoff grumbles, but holds his tongue,( He couldn't fire me, I'm too valuable, but still, I can't risk myself being wrong for once.) Lios smirks at his victory and begins to leave.
"the field is Delta Holy Sea Terror, go there as soon as you can and you better be done by the time I get back"
.admin//command
Admin = Renzoff
.create = chaosgate.exe
processing.....
done
Renzoff enters the familiar code on his administrator's wristband, in front of him a chaos gate appeared instantly, stepping in Renzoff calls Delta Holy Sea Terror and disappears ************************************************************************
What will happen to Renzoff at the field? Is all as it seems for this admin?
Read and review! I really want this to turn out well!
Disclaimer I do not own .hack//Sign or anything else.....
Note: this will be my first attempt at a fanfic... so ill hope for the best, this tale will be loosely based on a RP I was once in, also know that I am a big Fan of .hack and am going to try my best, the few reviews I get at first are going to be my big influence in how far to go!
(...) denotes thought
***********************************************************************
*inside "the world"*
A twinblade character appears, he looks around at the field, smiling softly to himself, he looks in a virtual river and he gazes at his reflection, his long black hair catches his eye, but his most noticeable is his purple eyes, something impossible in his real life. looking ahead, he draws his new pair of blades, he enjoys the fact they are one of a kind, but hates the reason why he got him. He sighs lightly and speaks to hisself.
"Ah Renzoff, you have the appearance I always dreamed of....now if only I could do what I wanted with it, but I'm trapped by the real world once again"
A glowing white figure appears behind Renz, his robes give him the appearance of a bishop or priest, however his face seems hardened, almost cruel.
"Now, now Renzoff, you should be grateful.... Very few people get these privileges and for pay"
At the beginning of the robed figure's speech, Renzoff scowled ( you fiend... Any moron can see I was chosen because you can force me to do whatever I want... be happy I love learning more than I hate you)
"Whatever Lios, now why have you called me here? You never give anything for free"
"Why must you assume I'm going to give you assignment, why can't I just be here to say..."
"Just tell me Lios...."
Lios frowned with fury, (this kid is more trouble than he is worth, he thought, most people dream of this, and the whelp can only disrespect me, the one day your not so useful kid...)
"Fine Renzoff, I have been receiving complaints about a field"
"and you need me to do such a simple task Lios? Your others must be losing their touch"
"LISTEN! We have sent 2 other administrators to deal with this, but they never reported back in.... I have the meeting after this, so you're left with the field, "
Lios sees the anger in Renzoff's eyes, even through a game
"and if you complain ill see your fired...."
Renzoff grumbles, but holds his tongue,( He couldn't fire me, I'm too valuable, but still, I can't risk myself being wrong for once.) Lios smirks at his victory and begins to leave.
"the field is Delta Holy Sea Terror, go there as soon as you can and you better be done by the time I get back"
.admin//command
Admin = Renzoff
.create = chaosgate.exe
processing.....
done
Renzoff enters the familiar code on his administrator's wristband, in front of him a chaos gate appeared instantly, stepping in Renzoff calls Delta Holy Sea Terror and disappears ************************************************************************
What will happen to Renzoff at the field? Is all as it seems for this admin?
Read and review! I really want this to turn out well!