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Chapter 2
At home, Buffy asked all of them to enter the house and sit in the living room. Tara, Willow and Dawn were joining them. Some minutes later Giles, Xander and Anya arrived.
"Giles! They came trough a Portal as Spike and me were fighting against Vampires. They can fight well and they seem to have magic." Buffy told Giles.
Giles was cleaning his glasses. "Well, I think, the first thing to do is to introduce everybody." Alanna and Jon were nodding. The older man, pointed at the blonde girl they had met in the graveyard "This is Buffy", he pointed to the blond man "Spike" to the small redheaded woman "Willow", a shy blonde girl next to Willow "Tara" a young girl with brown hair "Buffy's sister Dawn", the dark haired man who entered the house at last "Xander" the beauty next to him "Anya". He coughed "And I am Rupert Giles."
Jon looked to Alanna bidding her to do the introductions. Alanna stood up.
Buffy watched her closely, the outspoken redhead had power and she seemed to be a good fighter. She was alerted. The woman pointed at the man with the dark hair first, Buffy had seen his pleading look seconds before and was hiding a grin. "This is Jonathan of Conté, King of Tortall and Voice of the Bazhir Tribes." She pointed at the most beautiful women Buffy had ever seen. "Thayet his Queen and commander of the Queens Riders". She took a step back, introducing another man "George of Pirates Swoop, my husband." Next to this George a tall man with broad shoulders was sitting and watching the Scoobies intensively being prepared for danger. The brown haired man next to him was trying to calm him down. "Raoul of Goldenlake Commander of the Kings Own and our premier minister Gareth of Naxen" The last two people seemed to be a couple trying to calm down some small, which was sitting in the lap of the tall lanky man with the dark hair, the girl had brown hair and seemed to be younger than the rest. "Numair Salmalin Black Robe Mage and Veralidaine Sarrasri Wild Mage and Skysong a young Dragon which had been adopted by Daine." Alanna heard gasps, "Kitten- I mean Skysong is a baby dragon, and she means no harm."
"Well, and who are you?" Buffy asked. "I am.." She was cut short by the so called King. "She is Sir Alanna of Pirate Swoop, Trebond and Olau, first female knight in centuries and the Kings champion." Alanna was cursing. Gary grinned "We all know you do not like to show off, but now do not get into one of your fits, but sit down. If you are too angry with Jon, Alanna you could put a frog in his bed later, wouldn't be for the first time."
All the strangers started laughing and Spike couldn't hide a smirk as well. Giles was irritated "Wait, didn't you said, he was your King. How could that be if she doesn't even obey him?"
Gary was still laughing "Well we were friends since our time as Pages. And Alanna was, covered as Alan, the squire of Jon. So she could do and say things no one else would dare to say. And their Majesties are both not as formal as we were used to." Alanna was getting impatient, "Well, that's not interesting at all. There are .." "Alanna ," now Jon's voice was carrying an order "Be silent, your impatience is not good at this point."
Alanna obeyed. Jon relaxed a bit. "We have some questions. We do not know where we are or when we are, or even what happened. Someone tricked us all into a spell. And that's a frightening thought as we have strong mages with us."
"Strong Mages?" Giles looked worried. He was a bit afraid of the things that could happen if these strangers would fight against them.
"First, to answer your questions, you are in Sunnydale, California and I think you are no longer in your time, the times of knights and kings are over for centuries. And I do not think you are out of this dimension as well. As I know there were no strong mages in the times, you could come from. And I do not know a country called Tortall. But to be sure, Dawn, would you please get one of the maps, you use in school, and I would like to know if they know any landmarks." Giles finished his little speech.
Buffy winced. "Giles, as long as you are working on facts, may I leave you for a moment, I have to attend these wounds."
Alanna stood up. "May I assist you, right here, you will feel better in some seconds." The Slayer shrugged, "Why not?" Showing Alanna a real deep wound in her left arm and another one on her shoulder.
Alanna put her hand on the wound and purple light went into it. Spike was getting nervous, "What are you doing there firehead?" Jon answered for Alanna "She is just healing her wounds, she has a strong healing gift. She saved me from death before as she was 11. She broke a big spell to save me."
Still nervous, Spike went to Buffy's side. Alanna get her hand of, the first wound was healed. They were impressed. "You heal fast" Alanna stated, "It doesn't cost much power to heal you" She healed the second wound and sat back. Buffy said thanks to her. "But Buffy, something inside you feels weird."
"Well I think, as you are not from our world and will leave it with our help or have to stay with us. We could tell you everything. You have no ID and you will not be able to tell someone who doesn't know. Buffy is the Slayer. There is one Chosen in every generation to fight the evil creatures and stop the apocalypse as well as demons and vampires. She is stronger, faster and her senses are better as normal human abilities. And she heals faster." Giles stated.
"Well, but that's not the weird feeling I have. It's not strength! It's well something connected to the realms of death." Alanna answered.
"No wonder, I have died twice in the last years. First time only for some minutes, being revived by Xander than. Second time I was dead for month." Buffy explained.
"Back from the dead, like Roger. " Alanna shivered. "Well, this time I am not the cause of the former death."
George came over and hugged her. Buffy looked confused. "What's the matter firehead?" Spike asked.
Alanna looked at him angrily " My Name is Sir Alanna, not firehead. And as it is I had killed a man, the Duke Roger, Jon's cousin, the day I got my shield. Well some times after it, my brother brought him back from the death, and Roger was again plotting against the crown trying to kill Jon. So I killed him again. But before I could kill him, he killed my twin brother and his alliances killed some friends of mine."
"Well, the Slayer killed no friends and she is just doing what she had done before she sacrificed herself, she is saving this city and time by time - the world." Spike threw in.
Dawn sighed "He is telling the truth, she has sacrificed herself to stop the apocalypse my blood had started, one of us had to die me or her. She did it. And Willow got her back together with Tara. They performed a big spell and so she came back. And is slowly recovering."
Numair looked startled "You performed one of the great ancient spells. Even I won't try it."
The Scoobies didn't look impressed. Daine explained "And he is one of the seven strongest Mages on our world. He is one of the seven Black Robe Mages."
Now the Scoobies looked impressed.
Numair continued "Well, Willow you can't control your powers as you should, Tara you are better but you are not good either. You both have too much power for such a bad self-control. I can work on it while we are here and Jon and Alanna could, too."
"Numair, stop it. There are other things we should attend first. There are more questions to ask. For example, what sort of monsters were fighting against you in the graveyard and why should they want to suck our blood" Raoul interjected.
"The creatures are called Vampires as we said earlier. Mostly soulless, hunting humans, living on blood, they prefer human blood but could live on animal blood as well. Continuously fighting the slayer, having Master- vampires who can rule other vamps. Some have the power to go into the mind of people but only some of the eldest. Vampires are killers, stronger than human beings, can't stand sunlight. Vampires would burn in sunlight, can be killed by chopping the head of, bathing them in holy water or sunlight, or they could be staked in the heart with wooden stake. They will try to drink your blood. If they drank from your blood they'll try to turn you. So do not drink their blood or you will be a vamp, too. Oh and most of them fear crosses, but the older ones knew, that a cross would only hurt them, if it would contact with them. Vampires have normal human faces but can vamp out and put their gamefaces on. Spike show them." Buffy said.
Spike vamped into his gameface for some seconds. The Tortallians reached for their weapons. " No he is a good vamp." Buffy interjected and the Scoobies were giggling as they heard Spike growl. "He will not hurt anyone. He wouldn't be here if he would be a danger for us. A vampire can not get into a house. He can only enter a house when he is invited. So never invite anyone into the house. If someone can't enter he shouldn't do it. There are only two good Vampires. Spike here, and Angel down in L.A.. They are both invited in here, everyone else who can't enter shouldn't enter."
"How is it possible to have two harmless Vampires" Alanna asked, ignoring Spikes growl. Oh he is not harmless, he just wouldn't harm humans, and friends of mine. He has a chip that protected us from him first. Now he likes us, and helps us against evil. And the other Vamp Angel is the one and only Vampire with a soul. He is also helping the helpless, but not here. He is in LA."
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Chapter 2
At home, Buffy asked all of them to enter the house and sit in the living room. Tara, Willow and Dawn were joining them. Some minutes later Giles, Xander and Anya arrived.
"Giles! They came trough a Portal as Spike and me were fighting against Vampires. They can fight well and they seem to have magic." Buffy told Giles.
Giles was cleaning his glasses. "Well, I think, the first thing to do is to introduce everybody." Alanna and Jon were nodding. The older man, pointed at the blonde girl they had met in the graveyard "This is Buffy", he pointed to the blond man "Spike" to the small redheaded woman "Willow", a shy blonde girl next to Willow "Tara" a young girl with brown hair "Buffy's sister Dawn", the dark haired man who entered the house at last "Xander" the beauty next to him "Anya". He coughed "And I am Rupert Giles."
Jon looked to Alanna bidding her to do the introductions. Alanna stood up.
Buffy watched her closely, the outspoken redhead had power and she seemed to be a good fighter. She was alerted. The woman pointed at the man with the dark hair first, Buffy had seen his pleading look seconds before and was hiding a grin. "This is Jonathan of Conté, King of Tortall and Voice of the Bazhir Tribes." She pointed at the most beautiful women Buffy had ever seen. "Thayet his Queen and commander of the Queens Riders". She took a step back, introducing another man "George of Pirates Swoop, my husband." Next to this George a tall man with broad shoulders was sitting and watching the Scoobies intensively being prepared for danger. The brown haired man next to him was trying to calm him down. "Raoul of Goldenlake Commander of the Kings Own and our premier minister Gareth of Naxen" The last two people seemed to be a couple trying to calm down some small, which was sitting in the lap of the tall lanky man with the dark hair, the girl had brown hair and seemed to be younger than the rest. "Numair Salmalin Black Robe Mage and Veralidaine Sarrasri Wild Mage and Skysong a young Dragon which had been adopted by Daine." Alanna heard gasps, "Kitten- I mean Skysong is a baby dragon, and she means no harm."
"Well, and who are you?" Buffy asked. "I am.." She was cut short by the so called King. "She is Sir Alanna of Pirate Swoop, Trebond and Olau, first female knight in centuries and the Kings champion." Alanna was cursing. Gary grinned "We all know you do not like to show off, but now do not get into one of your fits, but sit down. If you are too angry with Jon, Alanna you could put a frog in his bed later, wouldn't be for the first time."
All the strangers started laughing and Spike couldn't hide a smirk as well. Giles was irritated "Wait, didn't you said, he was your King. How could that be if she doesn't even obey him?"
Gary was still laughing "Well we were friends since our time as Pages. And Alanna was, covered as Alan, the squire of Jon. So she could do and say things no one else would dare to say. And their Majesties are both not as formal as we were used to." Alanna was getting impatient, "Well, that's not interesting at all. There are .." "Alanna ," now Jon's voice was carrying an order "Be silent, your impatience is not good at this point."
Alanna obeyed. Jon relaxed a bit. "We have some questions. We do not know where we are or when we are, or even what happened. Someone tricked us all into a spell. And that's a frightening thought as we have strong mages with us."
"Strong Mages?" Giles looked worried. He was a bit afraid of the things that could happen if these strangers would fight against them.
"First, to answer your questions, you are in Sunnydale, California and I think you are no longer in your time, the times of knights and kings are over for centuries. And I do not think you are out of this dimension as well. As I know there were no strong mages in the times, you could come from. And I do not know a country called Tortall. But to be sure, Dawn, would you please get one of the maps, you use in school, and I would like to know if they know any landmarks." Giles finished his little speech.
Buffy winced. "Giles, as long as you are working on facts, may I leave you for a moment, I have to attend these wounds."
Alanna stood up. "May I assist you, right here, you will feel better in some seconds." The Slayer shrugged, "Why not?" Showing Alanna a real deep wound in her left arm and another one on her shoulder.
Alanna put her hand on the wound and purple light went into it. Spike was getting nervous, "What are you doing there firehead?" Jon answered for Alanna "She is just healing her wounds, she has a strong healing gift. She saved me from death before as she was 11. She broke a big spell to save me."
Still nervous, Spike went to Buffy's side. Alanna get her hand of, the first wound was healed. They were impressed. "You heal fast" Alanna stated, "It doesn't cost much power to heal you" She healed the second wound and sat back. Buffy said thanks to her. "But Buffy, something inside you feels weird."
"Well I think, as you are not from our world and will leave it with our help or have to stay with us. We could tell you everything. You have no ID and you will not be able to tell someone who doesn't know. Buffy is the Slayer. There is one Chosen in every generation to fight the evil creatures and stop the apocalypse as well as demons and vampires. She is stronger, faster and her senses are better as normal human abilities. And she heals faster." Giles stated.
"Well, but that's not the weird feeling I have. It's not strength! It's well something connected to the realms of death." Alanna answered.
"No wonder, I have died twice in the last years. First time only for some minutes, being revived by Xander than. Second time I was dead for month." Buffy explained.
"Back from the dead, like Roger. " Alanna shivered. "Well, this time I am not the cause of the former death."
George came over and hugged her. Buffy looked confused. "What's the matter firehead?" Spike asked.
Alanna looked at him angrily " My Name is Sir Alanna, not firehead. And as it is I had killed a man, the Duke Roger, Jon's cousin, the day I got my shield. Well some times after it, my brother brought him back from the death, and Roger was again plotting against the crown trying to kill Jon. So I killed him again. But before I could kill him, he killed my twin brother and his alliances killed some friends of mine."
"Well, the Slayer killed no friends and she is just doing what she had done before she sacrificed herself, she is saving this city and time by time - the world." Spike threw in.
Dawn sighed "He is telling the truth, she has sacrificed herself to stop the apocalypse my blood had started, one of us had to die me or her. She did it. And Willow got her back together with Tara. They performed a big spell and so she came back. And is slowly recovering."
Numair looked startled "You performed one of the great ancient spells. Even I won't try it."
The Scoobies didn't look impressed. Daine explained "And he is one of the seven strongest Mages on our world. He is one of the seven Black Robe Mages."
Now the Scoobies looked impressed.
Numair continued "Well, Willow you can't control your powers as you should, Tara you are better but you are not good either. You both have too much power for such a bad self-control. I can work on it while we are here and Jon and Alanna could, too."
"Numair, stop it. There are other things we should attend first. There are more questions to ask. For example, what sort of monsters were fighting against you in the graveyard and why should they want to suck our blood" Raoul interjected.
"The creatures are called Vampires as we said earlier. Mostly soulless, hunting humans, living on blood, they prefer human blood but could live on animal blood as well. Continuously fighting the slayer, having Master- vampires who can rule other vamps. Some have the power to go into the mind of people but only some of the eldest. Vampires are killers, stronger than human beings, can't stand sunlight. Vampires would burn in sunlight, can be killed by chopping the head of, bathing them in holy water or sunlight, or they could be staked in the heart with wooden stake. They will try to drink your blood. If they drank from your blood they'll try to turn you. So do not drink their blood or you will be a vamp, too. Oh and most of them fear crosses, but the older ones knew, that a cross would only hurt them, if it would contact with them. Vampires have normal human faces but can vamp out and put their gamefaces on. Spike show them." Buffy said.
Spike vamped into his gameface for some seconds. The Tortallians reached for their weapons. " No he is a good vamp." Buffy interjected and the Scoobies were giggling as they heard Spike growl. "He will not hurt anyone. He wouldn't be here if he would be a danger for us. A vampire can not get into a house. He can only enter a house when he is invited. So never invite anyone into the house. If someone can't enter he shouldn't do it. There are only two good Vampires. Spike here, and Angel down in L.A.. They are both invited in here, everyone else who can't enter shouldn't enter."
"How is it possible to have two harmless Vampires" Alanna asked, ignoring Spikes growl. Oh he is not harmless, he just wouldn't harm humans, and friends of mine. He has a chip that protected us from him first. Now he likes us, and helps us against evil. And the other Vamp Angel is the one and only Vampire with a soul. He is also helping the helpless, but not here. He is in LA."
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