I decided to continue one of my old stories. I had abandoned this story in
October, but now it's time for it again.
Please remember, I am no native English speaker. I have never seen Buffy in
English so I can not copy her slang. Same for the Tamora Pierce characters,
I have read the Alanna and the Daine series in German. Please tell me,
where I made mistakes, but do expect some.
Comments on reviews:
@ Coldfang: thanks
@ Imp17: well, kitten will have her part in it .. Learn more about it later ;-)
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Chapter 11:
PLEASE REMEMBER! "But Buffy, hello, Vampire in front of you. Big nasty evil. Not holding hands with evils. "Xander babbled.
Alanna was watching him looking something behind amused and angry. "Is he so intolerant or is he just dumb?"
Xander wanted to throw a fit. "Be silent." Alanna commanded. "It's no big thing. I am married to a former thief. Thayet is an exiled princess, I was a girl becoming a knight, Daine was officially base born and one of our sergeants Sarge is a former slave. Don't judge someone by such things, judge him by his behaviour and motives."
George interposed, "He is good for her, lad. He loves her and deeply cares for her, wanting to protect her, the wish of every girl."
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Xander was still angry. "No, he can't be good for her, he is a freakin vampire for god's sake!" Willow interfered: "He is good for her, Xan. He loves her, and he can not loose his soul for this love. So there will be no other Angelus incident."
Angel growled. He didn't like the ways things were developing right now. "Cause he has no soul to loose. Buffy, think about it! He can go evil whenever he likes. He is not like me."
Alannas temper rose again. She got up and started to shake Angel. "Get real. He loves her, he is good for her. It's about the person, not about its kind! Stop bugging her! You may be her former lover, but the important word is former. No one has made any trouble since we arrived, except you!"
Angel went into gameface, ready to slam the redhead into the wall. But she was grinning and a colour wall appeared around her. He tried to slam his fist into her face, just to burn his hand on this wall. She was still grinning. He growled.
The next thing was, he felt himself being slammed into a wall by a very pissed Slayer. "Enough! Get over it. Or go back to LA and brood. But do not attack anyone in MY home again." She hissed.
Spike was behind her, pulling her into his arms and ignoring Angel.
Angel grabbed Spikes shoulder. Now Spike went into gameface, too. "Fingers off, poof." He commanded nearly growling. "And do not hurt the slayer. Go away, lick your wounds, tend to your hurt pride and do not hurt Buffy because your pride is hurt."
Willow had enough. She flicked her hand and Angel flew off of Spike. "Spike is right, Angel. You are hurt and you try to hurt anyone else. Go away until you can behave again."
Willow went back to her research. Angel waited until she wasn't paying attention, then he advanced Buffy and Spike again-with a stake. This time he was stopped by a force, nobody had considered before. Kitten was standing in front of him chirping angry. He tried to ignore her and step over her. At this point he was in for a lesson: Do NOT step over dragons, even if they are only small kids!" Kitten made a real angry noise and bit Angel, hard. Blood was flowing and Angel fell, his leg wasn't supporting him any longer. Kitten was fast and had put her jaw around his arm, not biting but warning.
"Do not move, or she will bite again! And the first bite should have been enough." Daine explained to him. "Good Kitten. You saved them."
Buffy and Spike who were awoken out of their embrace by the noise of the fallen Angel, saw him and the stake , the blood on his leg and the dragons jaw on his arm and growled. "That's enough! Could someone please enchant chains that will restrain even him? We will send him back to LA as a package tonight. And Angel, do not come back again, ever!" Buffy's tone went from an angry growl to a thankful and pride one. "Thanks, Kitten. You have done well. Do you mind to hold him a bit longer? Just until he is chained up. Good girl. "
Numair put some magical chains on Angel and Kitten released her hold onto his arm. Buffy was next to her, wiping her clean from vampire blood and giving her some chocolate chips ice-cream as a small thanks. Kitten made a happy sound and started to eat the ice cream.
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Just a short chapter. I wanted to know, if anybody likes this story. If I get any reviews, except flames, I'll continue this.
Comments on reviews:
@ Coldfang: thanks
@ Imp17: well, kitten will have her part in it .. Learn more about it later ;-)
**********************
Chapter 11:
PLEASE REMEMBER! "But Buffy, hello, Vampire in front of you. Big nasty evil. Not holding hands with evils. "Xander babbled.
Alanna was watching him looking something behind amused and angry. "Is he so intolerant or is he just dumb?"
Xander wanted to throw a fit. "Be silent." Alanna commanded. "It's no big thing. I am married to a former thief. Thayet is an exiled princess, I was a girl becoming a knight, Daine was officially base born and one of our sergeants Sarge is a former slave. Don't judge someone by such things, judge him by his behaviour and motives."
George interposed, "He is good for her, lad. He loves her and deeply cares for her, wanting to protect her, the wish of every girl."
-
Xander was still angry. "No, he can't be good for her, he is a freakin vampire for god's sake!" Willow interfered: "He is good for her, Xan. He loves her, and he can not loose his soul for this love. So there will be no other Angelus incident."
Angel growled. He didn't like the ways things were developing right now. "Cause he has no soul to loose. Buffy, think about it! He can go evil whenever he likes. He is not like me."
Alannas temper rose again. She got up and started to shake Angel. "Get real. He loves her, he is good for her. It's about the person, not about its kind! Stop bugging her! You may be her former lover, but the important word is former. No one has made any trouble since we arrived, except you!"
Angel went into gameface, ready to slam the redhead into the wall. But she was grinning and a colour wall appeared around her. He tried to slam his fist into her face, just to burn his hand on this wall. She was still grinning. He growled.
The next thing was, he felt himself being slammed into a wall by a very pissed Slayer. "Enough! Get over it. Or go back to LA and brood. But do not attack anyone in MY home again." She hissed.
Spike was behind her, pulling her into his arms and ignoring Angel.
Angel grabbed Spikes shoulder. Now Spike went into gameface, too. "Fingers off, poof." He commanded nearly growling. "And do not hurt the slayer. Go away, lick your wounds, tend to your hurt pride and do not hurt Buffy because your pride is hurt."
Willow had enough. She flicked her hand and Angel flew off of Spike. "Spike is right, Angel. You are hurt and you try to hurt anyone else. Go away until you can behave again."
Willow went back to her research. Angel waited until she wasn't paying attention, then he advanced Buffy and Spike again-with a stake. This time he was stopped by a force, nobody had considered before. Kitten was standing in front of him chirping angry. He tried to ignore her and step over her. At this point he was in for a lesson: Do NOT step over dragons, even if they are only small kids!" Kitten made a real angry noise and bit Angel, hard. Blood was flowing and Angel fell, his leg wasn't supporting him any longer. Kitten was fast and had put her jaw around his arm, not biting but warning.
"Do not move, or she will bite again! And the first bite should have been enough." Daine explained to him. "Good Kitten. You saved them."
Buffy and Spike who were awoken out of their embrace by the noise of the fallen Angel, saw him and the stake , the blood on his leg and the dragons jaw on his arm and growled. "That's enough! Could someone please enchant chains that will restrain even him? We will send him back to LA as a package tonight. And Angel, do not come back again, ever!" Buffy's tone went from an angry growl to a thankful and pride one. "Thanks, Kitten. You have done well. Do you mind to hold him a bit longer? Just until he is chained up. Good girl. "
Numair put some magical chains on Angel and Kitten released her hold onto his arm. Buffy was next to her, wiping her clean from vampire blood and giving her some chocolate chips ice-cream as a small thanks. Kitten made a happy sound and started to eat the ice cream.
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Just a short chapter. I wanted to know, if anybody likes this story. If I get any reviews, except flames, I'll continue this.