I understand the Mary Sue-ish-ness, but she had to be pretty so Jack would
let her come along without too much resent. Her personality wouldn't get
her on the adventure; she didn't seem to like Jack, but he thought she was
hot so...And Jack couldn't be threatened by her, he's our brave, strong
hero...
Jack glared. "What are you doing here, anyway. I didn't remember anyone inviting you." Jesse looked at him in disbelief. "You get me caught, I get stuck in a cell with you for a whole night, and you don't apologize once and you ask me what I'm doing here? I do believe that he said if *we* lead him to the Black Pearl. On top of that, do you really think you can man a boat, all by yourself? He probably hasn't ever worked on a boat once." She nodded towards Will.
He looked at Jack. "I don't really know much about boats, I've been on a few, but that was a long time ago. She would be useful. And, she has a point. You *did* get her caught." Jack heaved a sigh. It was all his fault. At least she was easy on the eyes. He was outnumbered 2 to 1 on the vote to take her. He really didn't mind though. "Fine. But you're working. No if, and, or buts." "Oh and I was the one thinking of the ways to get out of work, Mr. I-don't-want-you-on-my-boat. You were thinking I was going to sit there and do absolutely nothing? I'm not exactly one of the those pedigreed farm-fed ladies. I'm a pirate."
"Sure you are love, and I'm a bloody gentlemen, that I am." Jesse lunged for Jack and Will grabbed her just before she landed on top of Mr. Sparrow. He covered her mouth so she wouldn't alert the men in uniforms passing by the very spot they hid. When he let go she seemed a little calmer. "I told you about calling me love. I hope you sleep with the door locked and an eye open, because if I get a hold of you you'll be calling me anything but love." Jack smiled, he loved to ruffle her feathers. It was right fun, it was.
"Will you two stop bickering, Miss Swann is being held by pirates as we speak, she could be in grave danger." Will's words had the oddest effect he could ever imagine on Jesse. She burst out laughing the moment he mentioned the word 'grave'. Jack looked at her and realized the irony of the statement. He, himself began laughing. "What, pray tell, is so hilarious. A lady is in great danger and you two stand here laughing like hyenas. Are you mad?" Jack suppressed enough of his laughter to spit out a few words. "Sorry, mate. You don't quite seem to understand. Really it's more of an *inside* joke or should I say no insides." Jesse couldn't help but snicker at the comment. Both finally came back to reality. Jack looked at Will sternly. "Just how far are you willing to go for this girl?" Will looked sternly back. "I would die for her." Jack took a smile to his face. "Good." Jesse smiled, too. "It looks like they already did..." she whispered under her breath, loud enough for only Jack to hear. Maybe they could get along better than they thought...
Okay. I'm done for tonight but more tomorrow...I hope. I'm so behind in school. This weekend, I promise one good chapter!
Jack glared. "What are you doing here, anyway. I didn't remember anyone inviting you." Jesse looked at him in disbelief. "You get me caught, I get stuck in a cell with you for a whole night, and you don't apologize once and you ask me what I'm doing here? I do believe that he said if *we* lead him to the Black Pearl. On top of that, do you really think you can man a boat, all by yourself? He probably hasn't ever worked on a boat once." She nodded towards Will.
He looked at Jack. "I don't really know much about boats, I've been on a few, but that was a long time ago. She would be useful. And, she has a point. You *did* get her caught." Jack heaved a sigh. It was all his fault. At least she was easy on the eyes. He was outnumbered 2 to 1 on the vote to take her. He really didn't mind though. "Fine. But you're working. No if, and, or buts." "Oh and I was the one thinking of the ways to get out of work, Mr. I-don't-want-you-on-my-boat. You were thinking I was going to sit there and do absolutely nothing? I'm not exactly one of the those pedigreed farm-fed ladies. I'm a pirate."
"Sure you are love, and I'm a bloody gentlemen, that I am." Jesse lunged for Jack and Will grabbed her just before she landed on top of Mr. Sparrow. He covered her mouth so she wouldn't alert the men in uniforms passing by the very spot they hid. When he let go she seemed a little calmer. "I told you about calling me love. I hope you sleep with the door locked and an eye open, because if I get a hold of you you'll be calling me anything but love." Jack smiled, he loved to ruffle her feathers. It was right fun, it was.
"Will you two stop bickering, Miss Swann is being held by pirates as we speak, she could be in grave danger." Will's words had the oddest effect he could ever imagine on Jesse. She burst out laughing the moment he mentioned the word 'grave'. Jack looked at her and realized the irony of the statement. He, himself began laughing. "What, pray tell, is so hilarious. A lady is in great danger and you two stand here laughing like hyenas. Are you mad?" Jack suppressed enough of his laughter to spit out a few words. "Sorry, mate. You don't quite seem to understand. Really it's more of an *inside* joke or should I say no insides." Jesse couldn't help but snicker at the comment. Both finally came back to reality. Jack looked at Will sternly. "Just how far are you willing to go for this girl?" Will looked sternly back. "I would die for her." Jack took a smile to his face. "Good." Jesse smiled, too. "It looks like they already did..." she whispered under her breath, loud enough for only Jack to hear. Maybe they could get along better than they thought...
Okay. I'm done for tonight but more tomorrow...I hope. I'm so behind in school. This weekend, I promise one good chapter!