-the rest is coming soon including
· 21 different ways to die including the 15 main characters that died in the School Explosion and 6 more; 3 survivors that interfere, an attorney that gets mixed up in it, and Kim & Officer Burke from FD2!!
· A new deathly design that'll leave your mind in a tangle!
· Death's shadow and Zack's shadow lurks and stalks people, switching the order of the list!
· Explanation of Bludworth, the mortician who lies in New York's morgue. What is his character? Why is he so close to death?
· The other side and signs are strong but shady as Cameron tries to save people!
· Soon introducing new characters and new fates including Andrew, Heather, and Chris!
· More intense than ever…this story will use the elements of Final Destination by its affect and realistic plot, as well as Final Destination 2 with a different order and lots of gore.
· All in all: Will explain any question you ever had about the Final Destination franchise like::
--The dates, this takes place 2 and a half years later from FD2s
--Why do people get premonitions
--Bludworth
--etc, ask me by e-mailing me at SnapShotRP23@yahoo.com
if you want to know about questions I can answer in my story…REVIEW IT thanks more to come!!!
DELETED DEATHS::
-the water fountain bursts causing the lunchrooms electric grill spark electricity more
-books dig into people's skin,
*added
AUTHOR NOTES:
Hey, I'm Anthony. I don't own Final Destination, as it is in the hands of a different kind of director *Ellis cough* who is great, but doesn't use elements from the first movie and making FD2 just his own fun enjoyment, which sucks because its in the FD series and now in his name as well as the poor writers who wouldn't accept my ideas except my roller coaster one, which I could sue them if I had proof that I sent them an e-mail about my ideas and then a few weeks later they come up with the idea for it. Coicidence? Whatever.
Anyway, they can do their own thing no hard feelings. I want to direct my own Final Destination 3 or 4, since 3 is being released within the next two years--and want the idea of a school explosion. Maybe the reason they rejected my idea was because I was too morbid and would bring upon the fear of going to school. People all over the country would be afraid of another Columbine and also just not want to get an education using this movie as an excuse. But people need to understand what Columbine was like, even though only a minor part of the school scene refers to the attack--kids need to see or not see.
All story materials are MINE damnit! so no copy, Kahn hot dog? (or is it Comprende?) PLEASE REVIEW THIS NOW FROM WHAT YOU HAVE ReAD! I WOULD APPRECIATE ALL COMMENTS AND/OR E-mAIL ME Snapshotrp23@yahoo.com
~TschUs
ORIGINAL IDEAS:: (may have changed over the course of this book)
DO NOT READ IF YOU DON'T WANT SPOILERS AND THE BACKSTORY OF HOW I MADE A BOOK LIKE THIS!!!! RISKING PLOT TURN OUTS AND CLIMAX TWISTS!!!!
If Final Destination 3-D is released and is as inane as it sounds, my FD3 will become either FD4 or FD5 depending on how they use elements in the medias FD3
This is how I organize my story to make it the best it can be with turns and twists and a ride of hell through natural causes::
Final Destination 3
The power of evil has the power to kill…
A flaw in the school causes a huge explosion and kills the whole school, but a vision was released into Cameron Steven's mind and he saw it before it happened. He stops many people, which means he was cheating death. Now death is continuing its search by stalking the survivors one by one in a design to finally close the design for good. This time it is coming after them because the premonition was not supposed to be revealed this time. The premonition received from death's opponent. (Original two from FD3) 18 people escape including the principal, a mom, a seven year old boy, the attorney, a preppy girl, a gothic girl, a stoner guy, Asian girl, sk8er boy, freak kid, grandma, gym teacher, computer nerd, gothic girl, premonition kid,
13Deb Wright, - mother of 2 Skyler and Scott. Scott's dad left them when he was 2 she got remarried and had Skyler, a half bro for Scott.
2Skyler Wright, -7 year old son of Katrina-dies second *toilet smash/bleachers
4Ashlee Rose, -girlfriend of Dwaine, almost dies until Zack commits suicide
Heather Lindsley,
Andrew Garrison,
Att. Damien Moore,
Chris Marceau,
Kimberly
Officer Burke
8Brian Thompson,
3Davis Simpson,
6Jiina (Gee-Ahna) Wong,
5Dwaine Perry,
11Ester Courtney, -grandmother of Skyler
12Mr. Wilson,
1James Fields, - fat kid with not many friends dies first *roller coaster
10Jennifer Perry,
15Cameron Stevens, -premonition main character dies fourth
9Stephanie Kinman,
14Zack Hutchens, -gunman *locker chops him up/suicide
3Jordan Michaels, -best bud of Cameron, dies ninth
7Scott Oelker ) - strong jock caring but naïve-suspected gay *basketball backboard smash/close call weight room/
15 of the 21 die in school explosion-21 die as an after effect
Room 180 survivors: Cameron, Ashlee
Bus 94 survivors: Dwaine, Jiiana, , Jordan
School survivors: Brian, Heather, Katie, Davis,
Principal room survivors& school: Katrina, Skyler, Mr. Ball, Ester, James, Damien, and Chris
CHARACTERS
Scott Wquiet but athletic spunky jock, suspected gay in later scenes
*Davis and *Brian Scott's 2 friends in opening sequence, appear later as friends also
Ms. Steven'sCameron's mom in intro
Mr. TasyCameron's Biology teacher
JordanCameron's best bud
Debbie Wrightmother of Scott and Skyler
Skyler Wa little boy into anime
Male announcer
Ms. Howardsattendance lady
Mrs. ShortCameron's history teacher-faces brutal death in school scene
JamesFat kid but nice, no one likes really
Admin. Mantells Cameron he has to stay in class while they set up
Zackgunman shoots and gets his friends to throw firecrackers, dynamite, and bombs through each wing of the school and make sure they are armed.
*Davishelps James in school scene and becomes a supporter for Scott
Dwaineboyfriend of Ashlee a wisecracker and sarcastic guy
Jiianathe Chinese chick who's smart and loyal to her work and country
*Brianalso athletic but more on the nerdy side wears glasses at night
EsterGrandmother, sewing older lady
Principal Wilsonorderly principal
Wasn't supposed to die at all and didn't. They get involved and entered Death's new wacky design: Stephanie, Zack, and Andrew
Deaths (laundry room setting, basketball game bleachers, barbershop, balcony, living room, bedroom, boat/airplane jump, roller coaster, weight room, highway construction, cement,
Brian (major stoner), dies in laundry room. First, he slips outside on the ground while walking there on the dewy grass causing Skyler (seven year old) dies behind bleachers during the basketball game.
Chris tries to jump up for an icicle and loosens a huge icicle, but when falling down, slips on the ice, which causes a rumble and the icicles to fall into him. He's bleeding partially, but then gets up w/ his book bag and slips on the dewy grass to land head first in sewer, which on the other side they are filling the sewer with cement and he gets trapped and dies.
Davis doesn't believe them when a steamroller from one end and a bulldozer on the other slam into him, cutting him open and flattening his body.
Scott in a weight room with only a few people there after school, some guy doing plate lifting/sitting and listening to headphones. Scott is on treadmill and speeds it up to run faster and faster and inclines it when something grasps his attention. He saw a sign through the reflection of the light of a bulldozer when he loses his balance and the thing pulls him off backwards, slamming his head into a wall. He gets up really dizzy, seeing two of everything when he feels a bug on his leg. He lifts it up and it gets stuck in the lifting of the plates. The plates slam and the ground slam into his calf, cutting up his leg and seeing bone and muscle. The guy with headphones doesn't pay attention to the screaming. Scott goes by the leg press sitting down at his aching knee which is near the exit, pulls up on the heavy bars and the 500lbs slam into him, crushing his legs to fall backwards and break upon his face. He screams and cries, someone goes to help him and lift it carefully without taking off the weights when the thing slams into his body and face, leaving gushed out blood and a deformed face.
In room 182, an explosion occurs. Across the hall, in room 180, the premonition of freshmen Cameron Stevens turns out to blow up the whole school in New York and kill many when he warns everyone on the P.A. to get out and some just want to skip class and realize it just happened. Since they cheated Death, it comes back after them one by one to avenge that it was their time to die. The premonitions were caused due to his grandparents' ability to see things before they happened. Death comes slower in this end trilogy, but it becomes more gruesome in new ways to die. But with the school, the bus blows up, and then after the premonition, an unexpected tornado comes. So they try to cheat Death many times, but can only realize they are supposed to die and cannot withstand it.
Explanation: Death originally wouldn't come after them because of they cheated Death, but because the stories in this can happen. Other people unrelated die in here as well because of the storm. So Death can happen to anyone. the real design is stated. How things lead to another, which lead to Death.
School: Lockers cut off heads due to explosion impact, stapler lands on kids nose and staples it, kid washes hands, turning on propane when brushing past, teacher trips over rolling chair and stabs her face into pens and pointy manicure accessories, IN GYM: the lights go out and slam onto people, some get tied up in volley ball net, , bus' windows cave in cutting people, the tire gets flat and tilts the bus upwards, someone gets jabbed in throat with "emergency exit only" sign, stick shift goes into someone's open cut in chest, SCHOOL, TV falls, trash can spreads fire, BATHROOM, drown in toilet, collapsed walls, paper towels open and spread fire,
ORDER:
School explodes after a boy with a gun comes in to kill his classmates. He shoots in the Science room 180 and breaks vicious chemicals in the sophomore's experimentation and tears open beakers, which mix chemicals and cause a minor explosion, which then spreads to the whole school in a matter of minutes. But it was just a minor vision that Cameron Stevens had. He prevents a very small portion of the school from dying by using the P.A. and warning everyone. Some kids want to skip class, others believe in the whole Flight 180 conspiracy that held its mark two and a half years ago, and others are grasped and yanked outside until the school blows up and almost burns him and another person.
Cameron's girlfriend: Ashlee Ashlee's best friend: Stephanie
Design: Order of Deaths: Davis, Katie, Heather, Brian, Damien, Skyler, Principal Ball, Katrina, Ester, Chris, Jiaana, Dwaine, Ashlee, Cameron
Order Changed: Davis, Katie, Dwaine (reverse), (Andrew), Cameron, Skyler, Brian, Katrina (skips back 2, skips up four) Ball (back 1), Ester (up 2),
Orders of Death:
James rides the roller coaster. The harness breaks open due to the last person sitting there has a fat man/lady. On a loop, a piece of tiny wood jams inside a controller, which pauses the ride there. The harness breaks open with the impact of the stop and Davis slams fast forward onto the track beside the loop. Out of nowhere, Cart 2 slams into his bloody body and his gasping breath and sends his bones to surround his corpse.
Katie
Zack the freak kid commits suicide to screw up the design. He tries everything from hanging himself, but the rope snaps and unloosens. He then tries to get hit by an underground subway, but his shoe won't stay stuck and his friends pull him up on the ledge. He's gasping but really still wanting to die and falls backwards on the fast paced moving subway which pulls him to hit a brick wall, which gives him a concussion. He then is sent to the hospital. He climbs to the top of the roof there and jumps from a ninety-foot drop, but slams his mouth through a pole, which flag was just taken down and purchased. (During this, someone was really close from dying, but he died right before it, and it stops...changing the design)
Ashlee aware of Death's designs believes and pulls back from life, but Death continues to try to kill her until Dwaine jumps the roof. (during suicide attempt at hospital).
---in the first half of the story somewhere after death 3--
Cameron and Andrew are trying to escape Death (middle scene). A car horn beeps repetitively prevents Cameron from (?) so he goes to check it out, weary of Death. Sure enough, it's the mom of his rival school's student Andrew, which cheated Death earlier in the film. They have no hard feelings, but then Cameron looks up and a blimp of the school loses air and slams into the car. Cameron grabs Andrew by the shoulders and yanks him down to the ground as Andrew watches the car fill of blood from his mom. "What the fuck is going on, man?" -A "You cheated Death once, right!?" The students are taking the burnt flagpole from Jameson 94 High out, when a heavy wind picks up and creates a tiny dust cloud and slams the pole straight up right next to Andrew, but then flips to the side and tries to swipe at Cameron, he ducks but gets hit in the head a little due to not seeing with the dust. The pole then hits the telephone wires above and the wood that's holding it. The wood tilts over some cars. "Get in my car, hurry!" - C They run to Cameron's car and the key won't fit (previously the keys became chipped). The telephone pole slams into the car and cuts into Cameron's arm just as they both almost escape. They hot wire another car, but messed with the brakes slightly and the carpet scuffs up underneath the brakes. A police and a gang member in New York are inching near the school and shoot a bullet through the middle of the car, it would've killed Cameron except they turned fast enough where it went through the middle. They drive off into the city when a car almost slams into them and he presses the brakes hard, but it won't work due to the bottle blocking it. They slam into a window of a shop near a post office. Cameron presses the sunroof; the battery is almost dead in the car. Andrew escapes but when Cameron tries to, the battery mode closes it back up, almost chopping off his head. The gang member's shootout is rounded up to a total of six (3 on each side) members and they start shooting. The bullets pass by Cameron, but he almost gets shot as the bodies of the gangsters fall. He runs to his house when he sees a sign. He looks through the black window of a truck and he can see through it. A ghost or some kind of light shines and wind blows through his ear, like the smoke of an engine or something polluting. Someone's gonna die transparently.
· 21 different ways to die including the 15 main characters that died in the School Explosion and 6 more; 3 survivors that interfere, an attorney that gets mixed up in it, and Kim & Officer Burke from FD2!!
· A new deathly design that'll leave your mind in a tangle!
· Death's shadow and Zack's shadow lurks and stalks people, switching the order of the list!
· Explanation of Bludworth, the mortician who lies in New York's morgue. What is his character? Why is he so close to death?
· The other side and signs are strong but shady as Cameron tries to save people!
· Soon introducing new characters and new fates including Andrew, Heather, and Chris!
· More intense than ever…this story will use the elements of Final Destination by its affect and realistic plot, as well as Final Destination 2 with a different order and lots of gore.
· All in all: Will explain any question you ever had about the Final Destination franchise like::
--The dates, this takes place 2 and a half years later from FD2s
--Why do people get premonitions
--Bludworth
--etc, ask me by e-mailing me at SnapShotRP23@yahoo.com
if you want to know about questions I can answer in my story…REVIEW IT thanks more to come!!!
DELETED DEATHS::
-the water fountain bursts causing the lunchrooms electric grill spark electricity more
-books dig into people's skin,
*added
AUTHOR NOTES:
Hey, I'm Anthony. I don't own Final Destination, as it is in the hands of a different kind of director *Ellis cough* who is great, but doesn't use elements from the first movie and making FD2 just his own fun enjoyment, which sucks because its in the FD series and now in his name as well as the poor writers who wouldn't accept my ideas except my roller coaster one, which I could sue them if I had proof that I sent them an e-mail about my ideas and then a few weeks later they come up with the idea for it. Coicidence? Whatever.
Anyway, they can do their own thing no hard feelings. I want to direct my own Final Destination 3 or 4, since 3 is being released within the next two years--and want the idea of a school explosion. Maybe the reason they rejected my idea was because I was too morbid and would bring upon the fear of going to school. People all over the country would be afraid of another Columbine and also just not want to get an education using this movie as an excuse. But people need to understand what Columbine was like, even though only a minor part of the school scene refers to the attack--kids need to see or not see.
All story materials are MINE damnit! so no copy, Kahn hot dog? (or is it Comprende?) PLEASE REVIEW THIS NOW FROM WHAT YOU HAVE ReAD! I WOULD APPRECIATE ALL COMMENTS AND/OR E-mAIL ME Snapshotrp23@yahoo.com
~TschUs
ORIGINAL IDEAS:: (may have changed over the course of this book)
DO NOT READ IF YOU DON'T WANT SPOILERS AND THE BACKSTORY OF HOW I MADE A BOOK LIKE THIS!!!! RISKING PLOT TURN OUTS AND CLIMAX TWISTS!!!!
If Final Destination 3-D is released and is as inane as it sounds, my FD3 will become either FD4 or FD5 depending on how they use elements in the medias FD3
This is how I organize my story to make it the best it can be with turns and twists and a ride of hell through natural causes::
Final Destination 3
The power of evil has the power to kill…
A flaw in the school causes a huge explosion and kills the whole school, but a vision was released into Cameron Steven's mind and he saw it before it happened. He stops many people, which means he was cheating death. Now death is continuing its search by stalking the survivors one by one in a design to finally close the design for good. This time it is coming after them because the premonition was not supposed to be revealed this time. The premonition received from death's opponent. (Original two from FD3) 18 people escape including the principal, a mom, a seven year old boy, the attorney, a preppy girl, a gothic girl, a stoner guy, Asian girl, sk8er boy, freak kid, grandma, gym teacher, computer nerd, gothic girl, premonition kid,
13Deb Wright, - mother of 2 Skyler and Scott. Scott's dad left them when he was 2 she got remarried and had Skyler, a half bro for Scott.
2Skyler Wright, -7 year old son of Katrina-dies second *toilet smash/bleachers
4Ashlee Rose, -girlfriend of Dwaine, almost dies until Zack commits suicide
Heather Lindsley,
Andrew Garrison,
Att. Damien Moore,
Chris Marceau,
Kimberly
Officer Burke
8Brian Thompson,
3Davis Simpson,
6Jiina (Gee-Ahna) Wong,
5Dwaine Perry,
11Ester Courtney, -grandmother of Skyler
12Mr. Wilson,
1James Fields, - fat kid with not many friends dies first *roller coaster
10Jennifer Perry,
15Cameron Stevens, -premonition main character dies fourth
9Stephanie Kinman,
14Zack Hutchens, -gunman *locker chops him up/suicide
3Jordan Michaels, -best bud of Cameron, dies ninth
7Scott Oelker ) - strong jock caring but naïve-suspected gay *basketball backboard smash/close call weight room/
15 of the 21 die in school explosion-21 die as an after effect
Room 180 survivors: Cameron, Ashlee
Bus 94 survivors: Dwaine, Jiiana, , Jordan
School survivors: Brian, Heather, Katie, Davis,
Principal room survivors& school: Katrina, Skyler, Mr. Ball, Ester, James, Damien, and Chris
CHARACTERS
Scott Wquiet but athletic spunky jock, suspected gay in later scenes
*Davis and *Brian Scott's 2 friends in opening sequence, appear later as friends also
Ms. Steven'sCameron's mom in intro
Mr. TasyCameron's Biology teacher
JordanCameron's best bud
Debbie Wrightmother of Scott and Skyler
Skyler Wa little boy into anime
Male announcer
Ms. Howardsattendance lady
Mrs. ShortCameron's history teacher-faces brutal death in school scene
JamesFat kid but nice, no one likes really
Admin. Mantells Cameron he has to stay in class while they set up
Zackgunman shoots and gets his friends to throw firecrackers, dynamite, and bombs through each wing of the school and make sure they are armed.
*Davishelps James in school scene and becomes a supporter for Scott
Dwaineboyfriend of Ashlee a wisecracker and sarcastic guy
Jiianathe Chinese chick who's smart and loyal to her work and country
*Brianalso athletic but more on the nerdy side wears glasses at night
EsterGrandmother, sewing older lady
Principal Wilsonorderly principal
Wasn't supposed to die at all and didn't. They get involved and entered Death's new wacky design: Stephanie, Zack, and Andrew
Deaths (laundry room setting, basketball game bleachers, barbershop, balcony, living room, bedroom, boat/airplane jump, roller coaster, weight room, highway construction, cement,
Brian (major stoner), dies in laundry room. First, he slips outside on the ground while walking there on the dewy grass causing Skyler (seven year old) dies behind bleachers during the basketball game.
Chris tries to jump up for an icicle and loosens a huge icicle, but when falling down, slips on the ice, which causes a rumble and the icicles to fall into him. He's bleeding partially, but then gets up w/ his book bag and slips on the dewy grass to land head first in sewer, which on the other side they are filling the sewer with cement and he gets trapped and dies.
Davis doesn't believe them when a steamroller from one end and a bulldozer on the other slam into him, cutting him open and flattening his body.
Scott in a weight room with only a few people there after school, some guy doing plate lifting/sitting and listening to headphones. Scott is on treadmill and speeds it up to run faster and faster and inclines it when something grasps his attention. He saw a sign through the reflection of the light of a bulldozer when he loses his balance and the thing pulls him off backwards, slamming his head into a wall. He gets up really dizzy, seeing two of everything when he feels a bug on his leg. He lifts it up and it gets stuck in the lifting of the plates. The plates slam and the ground slam into his calf, cutting up his leg and seeing bone and muscle. The guy with headphones doesn't pay attention to the screaming. Scott goes by the leg press sitting down at his aching knee which is near the exit, pulls up on the heavy bars and the 500lbs slam into him, crushing his legs to fall backwards and break upon his face. He screams and cries, someone goes to help him and lift it carefully without taking off the weights when the thing slams into his body and face, leaving gushed out blood and a deformed face.
In room 182, an explosion occurs. Across the hall, in room 180, the premonition of freshmen Cameron Stevens turns out to blow up the whole school in New York and kill many when he warns everyone on the P.A. to get out and some just want to skip class and realize it just happened. Since they cheated Death, it comes back after them one by one to avenge that it was their time to die. The premonitions were caused due to his grandparents' ability to see things before they happened. Death comes slower in this end trilogy, but it becomes more gruesome in new ways to die. But with the school, the bus blows up, and then after the premonition, an unexpected tornado comes. So they try to cheat Death many times, but can only realize they are supposed to die and cannot withstand it.
Explanation: Death originally wouldn't come after them because of they cheated Death, but because the stories in this can happen. Other people unrelated die in here as well because of the storm. So Death can happen to anyone. the real design is stated. How things lead to another, which lead to Death.
School: Lockers cut off heads due to explosion impact, stapler lands on kids nose and staples it, kid washes hands, turning on propane when brushing past, teacher trips over rolling chair and stabs her face into pens and pointy manicure accessories, IN GYM: the lights go out and slam onto people, some get tied up in volley ball net, , bus' windows cave in cutting people, the tire gets flat and tilts the bus upwards, someone gets jabbed in throat with "emergency exit only" sign, stick shift goes into someone's open cut in chest, SCHOOL, TV falls, trash can spreads fire, BATHROOM, drown in toilet, collapsed walls, paper towels open and spread fire,
ORDER:
School explodes after a boy with a gun comes in to kill his classmates. He shoots in the Science room 180 and breaks vicious chemicals in the sophomore's experimentation and tears open beakers, which mix chemicals and cause a minor explosion, which then spreads to the whole school in a matter of minutes. But it was just a minor vision that Cameron Stevens had. He prevents a very small portion of the school from dying by using the P.A. and warning everyone. Some kids want to skip class, others believe in the whole Flight 180 conspiracy that held its mark two and a half years ago, and others are grasped and yanked outside until the school blows up and almost burns him and another person.
Cameron's girlfriend: Ashlee Ashlee's best friend: Stephanie
Design: Order of Deaths: Davis, Katie, Heather, Brian, Damien, Skyler, Principal Ball, Katrina, Ester, Chris, Jiaana, Dwaine, Ashlee, Cameron
Order Changed: Davis, Katie, Dwaine (reverse), (Andrew), Cameron, Skyler, Brian, Katrina (skips back 2, skips up four) Ball (back 1), Ester (up 2),
Orders of Death:
James rides the roller coaster. The harness breaks open due to the last person sitting there has a fat man/lady. On a loop, a piece of tiny wood jams inside a controller, which pauses the ride there. The harness breaks open with the impact of the stop and Davis slams fast forward onto the track beside the loop. Out of nowhere, Cart 2 slams into his bloody body and his gasping breath and sends his bones to surround his corpse.
Katie
Zack the freak kid commits suicide to screw up the design. He tries everything from hanging himself, but the rope snaps and unloosens. He then tries to get hit by an underground subway, but his shoe won't stay stuck and his friends pull him up on the ledge. He's gasping but really still wanting to die and falls backwards on the fast paced moving subway which pulls him to hit a brick wall, which gives him a concussion. He then is sent to the hospital. He climbs to the top of the roof there and jumps from a ninety-foot drop, but slams his mouth through a pole, which flag was just taken down and purchased. (During this, someone was really close from dying, but he died right before it, and it stops...changing the design)
Ashlee aware of Death's designs believes and pulls back from life, but Death continues to try to kill her until Dwaine jumps the roof. (during suicide attempt at hospital).
---in the first half of the story somewhere after death 3--
Cameron and Andrew are trying to escape Death (middle scene). A car horn beeps repetitively prevents Cameron from (?) so he goes to check it out, weary of Death. Sure enough, it's the mom of his rival school's student Andrew, which cheated Death earlier in the film. They have no hard feelings, but then Cameron looks up and a blimp of the school loses air and slams into the car. Cameron grabs Andrew by the shoulders and yanks him down to the ground as Andrew watches the car fill of blood from his mom. "What the fuck is going on, man?" -A "You cheated Death once, right!?" The students are taking the burnt flagpole from Jameson 94 High out, when a heavy wind picks up and creates a tiny dust cloud and slams the pole straight up right next to Andrew, but then flips to the side and tries to swipe at Cameron, he ducks but gets hit in the head a little due to not seeing with the dust. The pole then hits the telephone wires above and the wood that's holding it. The wood tilts over some cars. "Get in my car, hurry!" - C They run to Cameron's car and the key won't fit (previously the keys became chipped). The telephone pole slams into the car and cuts into Cameron's arm just as they both almost escape. They hot wire another car, but messed with the brakes slightly and the carpet scuffs up underneath the brakes. A police and a gang member in New York are inching near the school and shoot a bullet through the middle of the car, it would've killed Cameron except they turned fast enough where it went through the middle. They drive off into the city when a car almost slams into them and he presses the brakes hard, but it won't work due to the bottle blocking it. They slam into a window of a shop near a post office. Cameron presses the sunroof; the battery is almost dead in the car. Andrew escapes but when Cameron tries to, the battery mode closes it back up, almost chopping off his head. The gang member's shootout is rounded up to a total of six (3 on each side) members and they start shooting. The bullets pass by Cameron, but he almost gets shot as the bodies of the gangsters fall. He runs to his house when he sees a sign. He looks through the black window of a truck and he can see through it. A ghost or some kind of light shines and wind blows through his ear, like the smoke of an engine or something polluting. Someone's gonna die transparently.