REVISED: its much better than before, trust me, anyways, tell me what you think.
"Come back here you little thief!" you run faster as you heard the storeowner shout that. You could hear sirens in the distance now.
'Oo, I have a challenge today.' you turn a corner and run down an alley very familiar to you.
"She went in there. Come on, hurry up!"
'Oh great. Sgt. Ray is here. Better hurry or I'm toast.' you run to a nearby all, and knock.
"What's the password?" A voice asked.
"Loot." The door swings open and you rush in. As the door closes behind you, you turn and listen. You hear running feet run past the door. After letting out the air you were holding in, you went inside, and through a curtain.
Your boss awaited you inside the club you were in. This was a hidden club, members only. Not meant for kids, but in your case, the boss needed a skilled thief around to keep his business going. You walked up the two flights of stairs, and opened the door to the left.
"Your late, ." stated the voice behind a desk.
"Sorry, the place gave me a few troubles. Plus that Sgt. Ray was after me too."
"I don't care. Now, did you get the Black Jewels or not?"
"Of course I did. I wouldn't leave you hanging now would I Satros?"
"Just hand them over, and I'll pay you your half." You hand over the jewels to Satros, and waited. He checked them out, and handed half of them to you.
"Good job. Next time, make it a low profile. I don't want the cops coming into my club over and over trying to locate you, got it?"
"Low profile, right." You leave Satros to slobber over the jewels that you stole.
'It ain't fair that I only get half of what I steal, but he does get the cops off my back.' You walk to a counter, and order a drink.
'It's been half an hour already. The cops should be calling off the search by now, but I think it wise to stay here a couple more minutes.' After ten more minutes, you leave.
You slowly glance out the peephole to see if anyone was around. Positive that no one was, you left for home. Since the people of Kyoto didn't really like you around, you took the back way home, through the shadows. Your house, well, the house that you borrowed, is a mansion, but no one lived there anymore because of a robbery or murder. The house was so expensive, that no one would buy it. So you just snuck in.
Once home, you went to take a long needed shower. Then went to look at the jewels you brought home. After inspecting them to see if you weren't cheated out, you took them to a safe. It's not that you don't trust Satros, its just you don't think he would really let you have half of what you steal. You put the jewels into the safe, and then go to you're room to sleep. About an hour later you were awakened by a crash in the living room.
'What the Hell was that?' You get out of bed and look out through a crack in the door.
SMASH
"Where is she?"
'She. He means...me?'
"Huh?" The demon looked over at you.
"There you are. You're very difficult to find." Within seconds the demon was in front of you.
"You're coming with me, human."
"Um…No." With that you closed the door in his face and ran to your bedroom window. The demon burst through the door.
"That wasn't very nice." He growled, stalking towards you.
"I thought it was." With that you jumped out of the 2nd story window and to the ground. You got into a roll, and as you stood up, you felt great pain shoot through your whole leg from your ankle, but you ignore it, and run like hell.
"You can't run from me. You're as good as mine." The demon hissed as he ran faster.
"Not if I can trick you." You glance desperately for a way out, when all of a sudden, a blast came from the trees, and knocked both you and the demon down.
"Yusuke, you idiot. You were supposed to hit the demon, not the girl." sighed a calm voice.
"Sorry, but the demon was too close." With what was left of your consciousness, you look up to see someone kneeling down and staring at you, red eyes swirling with the darkness that overtook you.
Well that's chapter one. Hope you like it. If I get enough reviews, I'll keep on updating it. Thanks.