Felix: Well... here it is... another chapter of Golden Sorrow... and Kokoay is throwing a hissie fit...
Kokoay: I'm not throwing a hissie-fit!!! And I don't want to be out of the story for awhile!!!
Me: Well thats to bad!!! Your going to be out of the story for awhile and thats it!!! Live with it!!!
Ivan: ... I'm not sure if thats a good thing or a bad...
Garet: Why?
Ivan: Because, Kokoay gets a little... murderous... when she pissed...
Kokoay: If you don't put me in the story I'll murder you!!! *pulls out her sword* So what will it be!!!
Me: ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ...
Kokoay: Say something!
Me: ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ...
Kokoay: DAMNIT!!! SAY SOMETHING!!!
Me: ... ...
Kokoay: I'M GOING NOW!!! * she puts her sword away, and leaves*
Ivan: Thats a good idea, being quite and stuff...
Me: ... ... ... ...
Felix: You can talk now!
Me: ... ... ... ... ...
Garet: TALK!!!
Me: ... ... ... ... ...
Ivan: I'm leaveing!
Felix: Wait for me!
Garet: Me too!!
* the three of them leave the room *
Random kid that over heard: * steps out of the closet * Hey that worked well!!!
Me: I can't believe that worked! The quite treatment works every time!
Random kid that over heard: He he he he he he he!!!
Me: Heh heh heh heh heh heh heh!!!
* they high five *
Ivan: So it was a trick!!
Felix: Why we should go in there and hurt her!!!
Garet: Yeah!!
* they walk in there, looking like there mad *
Me: What do you want? * lays down, putting on sunglasses*
Ivan: We're going to hurt you for lieing to us!!!
Me: * yawn * Why?
Felix: Because you made us look like fools!
Garet: Yeah fools!!!
Me: * yawns again * Garet, you make yourself look like a fool...
Ivan: Can't disagree there...
Garet: Hey!!!
Felix: The truth hurts, live with it...
Garet: y'all mean!!! * runs out of the room, crying *
Ivan: I think I we hurt Garet feelings...
Me: Its OK... I can fix it... I am the one writing this story after all... * pulls out her handy dandy laptop and types something... *
Garet: I'm so happy!! Happy!!! Happy!!! * Jumps around the room *
Ivan and Felix:???
Me: heh heh heh... her look... * turns around the laptop and shows what she typed, ' Garet begins to bounce around the room happily ' *
Ivan: ...
Felix: ...
Me: Scary aint it?
Ivan: ... Yep
Random kid that over heard: Why don't we just get on with the story?! I'll do the disclaimer...
FOR SOME WEIRD REASON IVAN'S KITSUNE DOESN'T OWN GOLDEN SUN, DON'T ASK ME WHY, THATS JUST THE WAY IT IS!!! SAD AINT IT?
Me: ahhh... not bad, not bad! OK, who wants to do the shout-outs?!
* everyone looks that other way and starts to whistle *
Me: I'll make sure the person will have a better time in the story then they will have if they don't...
Garet: Nope...
Felix: I'm not in the story yet.
Ivan: Not falling for it.
Me: Damn... I know! I'll make a new muse!!! Another one that nobody will use!
Bob the cheese king: Hi! I'm a new muse!
Random kid that over heard: T.T
Bob the cheese king: Hahahahahahahaha!!! here I go!
THANKS GO TO EVERYONE THAT REVIEWED!!! IVAN'S KITSUNE GOT TWO NEW REVIEWERS!!! HEY, HO, HEY, HO!!! WELL... BECAUSE IVAN'S KITSUNE IS IN A GOOD MOOD AT THE MOMENT SO EVERYONE GETS A CAKE!!! AND GUESS WHAT? THERE SUGER IN IT!!!
Felix: Not bad... Roll story!
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*~ To the town across the Karagol sea, Toibi!! yes that means we are NOT in Kalay! ~*
(note: if you know the right why to spell this town then tell me!!)
Ivan looked back across the sea. They were too far away to see Kalay any more. All he could see is water... They had just gotten off the boat and the people were talking to each other.
" I can't believe that guy picked me to row!"
" Well I'm gald that I wasn't picked!"
" Hey rowing wasn't that bad, I got buff rowing!"
" Well la-di-da!"
Isaac and the others were trying not to catch the eye of the other people, but the other people were trying to make she that they heard them. Three of these people they picked didn't like doing that. And judging by the looks they were giving them, they were just about to pick up the first sharp thing they could find.... not good... Mia was to first one to see this coming, so she pointed out to the others.
" Umm... Isaac, Garet, Ivan... I think it would by better if we leave..." She said turning her head and saw that a few of them were taking a stick and rubbing it against a rock. Sharp.
" Now Mia?" Garet said, not really seeing the look of death on the other people. But when the two people that were done sharping the sticks, he got the idea.
" Yes Garet... NOW!!!" Ivan yelled as the three people attacked them. The people that werent attacking, or running, sat down and started to watch the show.
" Die evil warriors that made us row!" Person 1 said.
" Run damnit, run!!!" Isaac said to the others.
" I'm running as fast as I can Isaac! It's not my fault I have a low speed rating!!!" Garet yelled as the fastest person of the assault got his sharp-stick-like-thing three feet away from his butt.
" Oh dear... I thought it was bad with the all monsters on the boat!!!" Mia yelled as another person appeared and poked her in the back.
" Really? It doesn't feel that bad...." Ivan said, or rather yelled, to the others. Ivan was about seven minutes infront of everyone else so it was more like a jog in the mornings.
" DON'T RUB IT IN IVAN!!!" The others yelled.
*~ Later in Toibi... Ivan's in trouble!!! ~*
"Damn it... what did I do?" Ivan said to himself in his empty room. When they had gotten away from the crowd of death, Ivan was to only one that didn't look hurt, or tired. They decided that that wasn't fair so they gave Ivan a little beat down... " Just because I didn't get hurt buy the people that wanted to kill us tht didn't mean that THEY had to hurt me!" Ivan turned around in his bed. He felt tired and decided that he needed to sleep...
*~ Outside of the Inn... ~*
Garet, Isaac and Mia were doing some shopping. Mia had decided that it would be better if they waited for Ivan to get better before they did the gambling. She felt like Ivan should have fun with them too. Issac and Garet weren't happy with this, but they were cooking up a plan to change that...
" OK... we tell Mia that..."
" ...we saw... Umm..."
" A nice steel plate!"
" Yeah that'll do... go tell her Isaac!"
" You!"
" I don't want to die!"
" Oh, but i do?"
" Yeah!"
" Gee... some friend you are..."
Isaac walked away from Garet and looked around for Mia. He saw Mia looking at some shirts.
" Oh, these are so cute!!!" Isaac felt like the world had began to care about him. Mia would get mad at him for making up something to get away if she was busy looking at shirts. Isaac headed back to Garet to told him the news.
" Great!!! Lets go win us some gold!!!" Garet said heading to the dice house.
*~ To Mia, gee all this jumping around is really getting to me! ~*
Mia had about threes bags full of things ( shirts, herbs, sharp things that she planned to use on Isaac and the others to make them obey her every order...), and she was looking around for Isaac and Garet.
" Maybe... they went back to the Inn to see if Ivan is OK... I'll go check of them... but they better not be at that dice game... I think I'll go check there first..." Mia turned around and started to go to the dice game house...
*~ To Ivan... I don't need to go on with Mia and the others because I think you know whats going to happen to them... And I'm going to give you the joy of making up what Mia does when she sees Isaac and Garet.... ~*
Ivan turned over in his sleep. He found it hard to calm down. He turned to the left, then the right... he only stayed in the same spot for about three minutes, ( sounds like me! ^.~) and it wasn't getting any easier to sleep.
" Darn... why can't I go to sleep?! It anit that hard to do..." Ivan said breaking off.
*// ... fear... boy... fear...//*
Ivan jumped up and looked around. He thought he heard the voice of someone else. But there wasn't anyone else in the room but him...
" W-who's there? What d-do you mean, f-f-fear?" Ivan stuttered.
*// ... can't you see, boy?... you fear the thought of having the dream again... but it wont go away... not intill you learn what it means... heh heh heh...//*
Ivan looked like he was frozen. He didn't move a bit. * How did that voice know about the dream... and why is it that I can hear the person, but not see them? I just want the dream to stop... I don't want to learn what it means... *
He layed back down. He had a feeling that the person who had told he all that wasn't there anymore for talking to... " It's just a dream that wont leave me alone... that it, nothing else... nothing..." Ivan didn't really believe himself when he said that but he could hear three people coming and he didn't really feel like sharing what he just learned...
" DIDN'T I TELL YOU NOT TO GO TO THAT DICE PLACE INTILL IVAN WAS WITH US?! YOU GOT WHAT YOU GOT AND I'M NOT GOING TO HEAL YOU!!! I'M GOING TO KEEP A EYE ON YOU ISAAC INTILL I CAN GET IVAN TO CAST BIND ON YOU SO YOU CAN'T HEAL YOURSELF!!!" It was easy to tell that Mia was the one yelling this. If you couldn't tell then theres something wrong with you....
" But we didn't want to wait!!! We thought that if we started then, we could tell Ivan what we learned, and would have a better shot at winning!" That was Garet.
" YEAH RIGHT! AND HOW MUCH OF HIS WINNINGS WOULD HE HAVE TO GIVE YOU?!" Once again, lady pissed.
" Ummm... none?" Isaac that time.
" Yeah, why would we do that to Ivan?" Garet, not doing a good job, are they? I mean, would you believe them if they told you that? I know I wouldn't...
" CARE TO TRY AGAIN?!!!" The lady is really blowing down Isaac and Garet tonight.
" Ummm... No?" Garet, and thats just sealed there fates... dun,dun,dunnn!!
Ivan could hear Mia beating the two boys up. He decided on doinf them a favor, on;y because he could then later on get them to do something for him...
" Whats going on Mia?" Ivan said as he opened the door. Mia stopped hitting Isaac and Garet.
" Oh, Ivan, I didn't know you could hear that..." Mia said to Ivan.
" Ten gold says she did..." Garet muttered under his breath. Mia heard that and hit them on the head.
Garet: X.X
Isaac rolled his eyes. He knew better then to pick a fight with Mia... or did he?
" Garet you dumb ass..." Isaac said a bit to loudly to be safe...
SMACK!!! Mia's rod connected with Isaac's head.
Isaac: X.X
" Well... at least they won't try to heal themselfs for a while..." Mia said.
" Should we take them into the room?" Ivan said to Mia, not wanting to end up like Isaac and Garet.
" Yeah... it might lead to weird questions if we leave them out here..." She said taking Garet's arms to pull him. She knew that Ivan would never be able to pull Garet so she decided to pull him, and left Isaac to Ivan. Ivan knew what she did but didn't say anything, he was still afraid of ending up like the boys.
They pulled the two of them in to the room and left them in the middle of the floor. Ivan pulled out his deck of cards.
" Well... why don't I show you some tricks for the game those two like to play..." And then he started to teach Mia what many would believe, could never be done... make Mia a good card player!!! dun, dun, dunnnn!!!
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Me: Hahahahahahahaha!!! How many of you out there think that Ivan should really make Mia a better player, or should she still suck? Reviewers you have your say!!!
Reveiw!!!
Aren't you going to review? you better....
Review now...
DAMNIT REVIEW!!!!
Kokoay: I'm not throwing a hissie-fit!!! And I don't want to be out of the story for awhile!!!
Me: Well thats to bad!!! Your going to be out of the story for awhile and thats it!!! Live with it!!!
Ivan: ... I'm not sure if thats a good thing or a bad...
Garet: Why?
Ivan: Because, Kokoay gets a little... murderous... when she pissed...
Kokoay: If you don't put me in the story I'll murder you!!! *pulls out her sword* So what will it be!!!
Me: ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ...
Kokoay: Say something!
Me: ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ...
Kokoay: DAMNIT!!! SAY SOMETHING!!!
Me: ... ...
Kokoay: I'M GOING NOW!!! * she puts her sword away, and leaves*
Ivan: Thats a good idea, being quite and stuff...
Me: ... ... ... ...
Felix: You can talk now!
Me: ... ... ... ... ...
Garet: TALK!!!
Me: ... ... ... ... ...
Ivan: I'm leaveing!
Felix: Wait for me!
Garet: Me too!!
* the three of them leave the room *
Random kid that over heard: * steps out of the closet * Hey that worked well!!!
Me: I can't believe that worked! The quite treatment works every time!
Random kid that over heard: He he he he he he he!!!
Me: Heh heh heh heh heh heh heh!!!
* they high five *
Ivan: So it was a trick!!
Felix: Why we should go in there and hurt her!!!
Garet: Yeah!!
* they walk in there, looking like there mad *
Me: What do you want? * lays down, putting on sunglasses*
Ivan: We're going to hurt you for lieing to us!!!
Me: * yawn * Why?
Felix: Because you made us look like fools!
Garet: Yeah fools!!!
Me: * yawns again * Garet, you make yourself look like a fool...
Ivan: Can't disagree there...
Garet: Hey!!!
Felix: The truth hurts, live with it...
Garet: y'all mean!!! * runs out of the room, crying *
Ivan: I think I we hurt Garet feelings...
Me: Its OK... I can fix it... I am the one writing this story after all... * pulls out her handy dandy laptop and types something... *
Garet: I'm so happy!! Happy!!! Happy!!! * Jumps around the room *
Ivan and Felix:???
Me: heh heh heh... her look... * turns around the laptop and shows what she typed, ' Garet begins to bounce around the room happily ' *
Ivan: ...
Felix: ...
Me: Scary aint it?
Ivan: ... Yep
Random kid that over heard: Why don't we just get on with the story?! I'll do the disclaimer...
FOR SOME WEIRD REASON IVAN'S KITSUNE DOESN'T OWN GOLDEN SUN, DON'T ASK ME WHY, THATS JUST THE WAY IT IS!!! SAD AINT IT?
Me: ahhh... not bad, not bad! OK, who wants to do the shout-outs?!
* everyone looks that other way and starts to whistle *
Me: I'll make sure the person will have a better time in the story then they will have if they don't...
Garet: Nope...
Felix: I'm not in the story yet.
Ivan: Not falling for it.
Me: Damn... I know! I'll make a new muse!!! Another one that nobody will use!
Bob the cheese king: Hi! I'm a new muse!
Random kid that over heard: T.T
Bob the cheese king: Hahahahahahahaha!!! here I go!
THANKS GO TO EVERYONE THAT REVIEWED!!! IVAN'S KITSUNE GOT TWO NEW REVIEWERS!!! HEY, HO, HEY, HO!!! WELL... BECAUSE IVAN'S KITSUNE IS IN A GOOD MOOD AT THE MOMENT SO EVERYONE GETS A CAKE!!! AND GUESS WHAT? THERE SUGER IN IT!!!
Felix: Not bad... Roll story!
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*~ To the town across the Karagol sea, Toibi!! yes that means we are NOT in Kalay! ~*
(note: if you know the right why to spell this town then tell me!!)
Ivan looked back across the sea. They were too far away to see Kalay any more. All he could see is water... They had just gotten off the boat and the people were talking to each other.
" I can't believe that guy picked me to row!"
" Well I'm gald that I wasn't picked!"
" Hey rowing wasn't that bad, I got buff rowing!"
" Well la-di-da!"
Isaac and the others were trying not to catch the eye of the other people, but the other people were trying to make she that they heard them. Three of these people they picked didn't like doing that. And judging by the looks they were giving them, they were just about to pick up the first sharp thing they could find.... not good... Mia was to first one to see this coming, so she pointed out to the others.
" Umm... Isaac, Garet, Ivan... I think it would by better if we leave..." She said turning her head and saw that a few of them were taking a stick and rubbing it against a rock. Sharp.
" Now Mia?" Garet said, not really seeing the look of death on the other people. But when the two people that were done sharping the sticks, he got the idea.
" Yes Garet... NOW!!!" Ivan yelled as the three people attacked them. The people that werent attacking, or running, sat down and started to watch the show.
" Die evil warriors that made us row!" Person 1 said.
" Run damnit, run!!!" Isaac said to the others.
" I'm running as fast as I can Isaac! It's not my fault I have a low speed rating!!!" Garet yelled as the fastest person of the assault got his sharp-stick-like-thing three feet away from his butt.
" Oh dear... I thought it was bad with the all monsters on the boat!!!" Mia yelled as another person appeared and poked her in the back.
" Really? It doesn't feel that bad...." Ivan said, or rather yelled, to the others. Ivan was about seven minutes infront of everyone else so it was more like a jog in the mornings.
" DON'T RUB IT IN IVAN!!!" The others yelled.
*~ Later in Toibi... Ivan's in trouble!!! ~*
"Damn it... what did I do?" Ivan said to himself in his empty room. When they had gotten away from the crowd of death, Ivan was to only one that didn't look hurt, or tired. They decided that that wasn't fair so they gave Ivan a little beat down... " Just because I didn't get hurt buy the people that wanted to kill us tht didn't mean that THEY had to hurt me!" Ivan turned around in his bed. He felt tired and decided that he needed to sleep...
*~ Outside of the Inn... ~*
Garet, Isaac and Mia were doing some shopping. Mia had decided that it would be better if they waited for Ivan to get better before they did the gambling. She felt like Ivan should have fun with them too. Issac and Garet weren't happy with this, but they were cooking up a plan to change that...
" OK... we tell Mia that..."
" ...we saw... Umm..."
" A nice steel plate!"
" Yeah that'll do... go tell her Isaac!"
" You!"
" I don't want to die!"
" Oh, but i do?"
" Yeah!"
" Gee... some friend you are..."
Isaac walked away from Garet and looked around for Mia. He saw Mia looking at some shirts.
" Oh, these are so cute!!!" Isaac felt like the world had began to care about him. Mia would get mad at him for making up something to get away if she was busy looking at shirts. Isaac headed back to Garet to told him the news.
" Great!!! Lets go win us some gold!!!" Garet said heading to the dice house.
*~ To Mia, gee all this jumping around is really getting to me! ~*
Mia had about threes bags full of things ( shirts, herbs, sharp things that she planned to use on Isaac and the others to make them obey her every order...), and she was looking around for Isaac and Garet.
" Maybe... they went back to the Inn to see if Ivan is OK... I'll go check of them... but they better not be at that dice game... I think I'll go check there first..." Mia turned around and started to go to the dice game house...
*~ To Ivan... I don't need to go on with Mia and the others because I think you know whats going to happen to them... And I'm going to give you the joy of making up what Mia does when she sees Isaac and Garet.... ~*
Ivan turned over in his sleep. He found it hard to calm down. He turned to the left, then the right... he only stayed in the same spot for about three minutes, ( sounds like me! ^.~) and it wasn't getting any easier to sleep.
" Darn... why can't I go to sleep?! It anit that hard to do..." Ivan said breaking off.
*// ... fear... boy... fear...//*
Ivan jumped up and looked around. He thought he heard the voice of someone else. But there wasn't anyone else in the room but him...
" W-who's there? What d-do you mean, f-f-fear?" Ivan stuttered.
*// ... can't you see, boy?... you fear the thought of having the dream again... but it wont go away... not intill you learn what it means... heh heh heh...//*
Ivan looked like he was frozen. He didn't move a bit. * How did that voice know about the dream... and why is it that I can hear the person, but not see them? I just want the dream to stop... I don't want to learn what it means... *
He layed back down. He had a feeling that the person who had told he all that wasn't there anymore for talking to... " It's just a dream that wont leave me alone... that it, nothing else... nothing..." Ivan didn't really believe himself when he said that but he could hear three people coming and he didn't really feel like sharing what he just learned...
" DIDN'T I TELL YOU NOT TO GO TO THAT DICE PLACE INTILL IVAN WAS WITH US?! YOU GOT WHAT YOU GOT AND I'M NOT GOING TO HEAL YOU!!! I'M GOING TO KEEP A EYE ON YOU ISAAC INTILL I CAN GET IVAN TO CAST BIND ON YOU SO YOU CAN'T HEAL YOURSELF!!!" It was easy to tell that Mia was the one yelling this. If you couldn't tell then theres something wrong with you....
" But we didn't want to wait!!! We thought that if we started then, we could tell Ivan what we learned, and would have a better shot at winning!" That was Garet.
" YEAH RIGHT! AND HOW MUCH OF HIS WINNINGS WOULD HE HAVE TO GIVE YOU?!" Once again, lady pissed.
" Ummm... none?" Isaac that time.
" Yeah, why would we do that to Ivan?" Garet, not doing a good job, are they? I mean, would you believe them if they told you that? I know I wouldn't...
" CARE TO TRY AGAIN?!!!" The lady is really blowing down Isaac and Garet tonight.
" Ummm... No?" Garet, and thats just sealed there fates... dun,dun,dunnn!!
Ivan could hear Mia beating the two boys up. He decided on doinf them a favor, on;y because he could then later on get them to do something for him...
" Whats going on Mia?" Ivan said as he opened the door. Mia stopped hitting Isaac and Garet.
" Oh, Ivan, I didn't know you could hear that..." Mia said to Ivan.
" Ten gold says she did..." Garet muttered under his breath. Mia heard that and hit them on the head.
Garet: X.X
Isaac rolled his eyes. He knew better then to pick a fight with Mia... or did he?
" Garet you dumb ass..." Isaac said a bit to loudly to be safe...
SMACK!!! Mia's rod connected with Isaac's head.
Isaac: X.X
" Well... at least they won't try to heal themselfs for a while..." Mia said.
" Should we take them into the room?" Ivan said to Mia, not wanting to end up like Isaac and Garet.
" Yeah... it might lead to weird questions if we leave them out here..." She said taking Garet's arms to pull him. She knew that Ivan would never be able to pull Garet so she decided to pull him, and left Isaac to Ivan. Ivan knew what she did but didn't say anything, he was still afraid of ending up like the boys.
They pulled the two of them in to the room and left them in the middle of the floor. Ivan pulled out his deck of cards.
" Well... why don't I show you some tricks for the game those two like to play..." And then he started to teach Mia what many would believe, could never be done... make Mia a good card player!!! dun, dun, dunnnn!!!
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Me: Hahahahahahahaha!!! How many of you out there think that Ivan should really make Mia a better player, or should she still suck? Reviewers you have your say!!!
Reveiw!!!
Aren't you going to review? you better....
Review now...
DAMNIT REVIEW!!!!