I just read over the first chapter. Wow there are so many typos.. ick. And the congradulation thingy at the end is supposed to be congradulating. yea hehe. anyway hehe...
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"Yea." Chandler smiled at Monica.
Monica started to laugh. "You so have to be kidding?"
Chandler kept the smile on his face. "I'm so not kidding."
"What would happen if i said yes?"
"Then i'll get down on one knee, buy you a ring and we'll get married."
"Ok.. its definatley not funny."
"I know it's not funny.. i'm not laughing.." Chandler took a sip of his wine.
"It's the wine isn't it? How drunk are you?"
"That was my first sip of wine." Chandler put his glass down and smiled. "Look I would never do this. I never even thought about asking any of my ex girlfriends. Except for one. Monica we have something I've never felt before. There are signs everywhere telling us to get married." Chandler waved his hands in the air.
"Chandler.. this is insane. We barley know each other."
"You mean we haven't known each other for along time. We've only known each other for less the 24 hours. That's what you mean."
"No. I mean we barley know each other. and that."
"No we do know each other. We've spent practically the whole day talking to each other. In the amount of time we've talked to each other I've never found out this much about anyone. Nobody. I know people always say things like I feel like I've known you forever.. and i used to think it was cheesy and that that never happens. But it does. Because i do feel like I've known you forever. We have a special connection. I've told you practically everything about me.."
"Chandler theres still stuff you don't know about me."
"Me too. But if we get married we have forever to get to know each other."
Monica bit her lip. "What were the signs?"
"What do you mean what were the signs?"
"Well you said there was a sign.. and i wanna know what it was that sparked this idea."
"It's so obvious. Look at how we're dressed perfect for a wedding cake."
"This isn't a wedding gown. It's a dress. It's a formal dress."
"The people telling us how perfect we are together. That lady and the dress."
"Wow 3 signs. That's not that many Chandler. Its a coincidence that we're dressed like this. and the people.. maybe their drunk or something."
"So you don't feel what I'm feeling for you?" Chandler took another sip of his wine.
Monica didn't answer.
"So you do." Chandler smiled.
"It's too spontaneous for me."
"Me too. You think i go up to strangers every day and ask them to marry me?"
Monica laughed. "I.. I don't know."
"Ok." Chandler said and went back to his dinner.
They sat there in silence.
Monica broke the silence. "Yes."
Chandler looked at Monica.
Monica smiled.
"Huh?"
"I'll marry you." Monica smiled.
Chandler smiled. And got up.
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That was short... should i rewrite this chapter? Or should i keep it? Thanks for the reviews!! hehe. Please review this one! Thanks 3
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"Yea." Chandler smiled at Monica.
Monica started to laugh. "You so have to be kidding?"
Chandler kept the smile on his face. "I'm so not kidding."
"What would happen if i said yes?"
"Then i'll get down on one knee, buy you a ring and we'll get married."
"Ok.. its definatley not funny."
"I know it's not funny.. i'm not laughing.." Chandler took a sip of his wine.
"It's the wine isn't it? How drunk are you?"
"That was my first sip of wine." Chandler put his glass down and smiled. "Look I would never do this. I never even thought about asking any of my ex girlfriends. Except for one. Monica we have something I've never felt before. There are signs everywhere telling us to get married." Chandler waved his hands in the air.
"Chandler.. this is insane. We barley know each other."
"You mean we haven't known each other for along time. We've only known each other for less the 24 hours. That's what you mean."
"No. I mean we barley know each other. and that."
"No we do know each other. We've spent practically the whole day talking to each other. In the amount of time we've talked to each other I've never found out this much about anyone. Nobody. I know people always say things like I feel like I've known you forever.. and i used to think it was cheesy and that that never happens. But it does. Because i do feel like I've known you forever. We have a special connection. I've told you practically everything about me.."
"Chandler theres still stuff you don't know about me."
"Me too. But if we get married we have forever to get to know each other."
Monica bit her lip. "What were the signs?"
"What do you mean what were the signs?"
"Well you said there was a sign.. and i wanna know what it was that sparked this idea."
"It's so obvious. Look at how we're dressed perfect for a wedding cake."
"This isn't a wedding gown. It's a dress. It's a formal dress."
"The people telling us how perfect we are together. That lady and the dress."
"Wow 3 signs. That's not that many Chandler. Its a coincidence that we're dressed like this. and the people.. maybe their drunk or something."
"So you don't feel what I'm feeling for you?" Chandler took another sip of his wine.
Monica didn't answer.
"So you do." Chandler smiled.
"It's too spontaneous for me."
"Me too. You think i go up to strangers every day and ask them to marry me?"
Monica laughed. "I.. I don't know."
"Ok." Chandler said and went back to his dinner.
They sat there in silence.
Monica broke the silence. "Yes."
Chandler looked at Monica.
Monica smiled.
"Huh?"
"I'll marry you." Monica smiled.
Chandler smiled. And got up.
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That was short... should i rewrite this chapter? Or should i keep it? Thanks for the reviews!! hehe. Please review this one! Thanks 3