Hi everybody! Sorry it took so long to update, but I was having some
trouble with my computer.
Before I begin, I'd like to thank all my reviewers, especially ???????, whoever you are, since it is thanks
to him/her that I have nearly half of my reviews.
By the way, in this story, there is no Oldale Town, because it interferes with the story.
Disclaimer: I don't own Pokemon
Ch.5: May and Ash almost make it to Petalburg...AMAZING
It was a windy morning as Ash and May kept walking down the dusty road to Petalburg City.
May was still ecstatic about her new Poochyena. Over the last few days, they had finally seen a lot more
Pokemon, and while Ash and May hadn't been able to capture any new Pokemon, they had gotten into
plenty of battles, and raised their Pokemon very well.
"Oh, my little Poochy has gotten so big and strong now, haven't you?" May was cuddling
Poochyena tightly. "Yes you have! You're so big and strong now!"
"The way you treat him I'm surprised he's not wearing a bib yet" Ash muttered.
May glared at him. "And soon, when you become even bigger and stronger, you'll be able to
kick mean old Ash's ass all the way from here to Johto!"
Ash put up his hands in defense. "Hey, all I'm saying is that you treat him like a baby!"
May looked at him, annoyed. "So? You always say that you should treat your Pokemon well!"
Ash was now annoyed too. "I treat my Pokemon like my friends, not like my children! They way
you spoil them, they won't want to fight tougher battles!"
"That's it, Ash!" May was mad now. "I don't care how you think I treat my Pokemon! You take
care of yours your way, and I'll take care of mine my way!" With that, she turned away and kept on
walking.
Ash looked at her, also mad now. He thought of something really mean to say. "Hey May, your-"
He was cut off by Pikachu shocking him as hard as he could. Ash slumped to the ground. "Why do you
keep doing that?!" he asked. Pikachu just shook his head, pointing at May. Ash looked, and understood
immediately. "I should apologize, shouldn't I?" he asked Pikachu, who nodded. "Oh boy" he said, then
ran to catch up with May.
"Hey May, wait!" May heard this, and turned around. She saw Ash run up to her, then stop in
front of her to catch his breath.
"What now, Ash? Are you going to criticize the way I dress?"
He sighed. She was still mad. "Look, about what I said earlier.."
"Forget it Ash. I really don't care what you think" May was making this hard.
Ash was annoyed again. "Damnit May, I'm trying to apologize!"
May turned toward him. "You are?" she said softly.
Ash quickly recovered. "Uh, yeah. I just want to say that I'm sorry for what I said to you earlier.
I don't have any right to tell you how to treat your Pokemon, and you have the right to treat them any
way you want. And, uh..yeah, I'm sorry"
May smiled. "Thanks Ash"
He smiled back. "You're welcome"
They looked into each other's eyes, and were lost in each other's gaze for a while. They
unconsciously moved closer together. Their lips were almost touching, until...
"Pika!" Pikachu hopped off of Ash's shoulder, and started running down the road. Ash and May
snapped out of their trances, and turned toward the little mouse.
"Pikachu, where are you going?" Ash called, but was answered when May tugged on his arm.
"Ash, look!" She pointed down the road. Ash followed her gaze, and looked in surprise. There,
just over the hill, was a towering building.
"Is that..." Ash just stared.
"Yay! We finally made it to Petalburg City!" May said happily. She rushed down the road after
Pikachu. Ash sighed in relief, and ran after her.
END OF CH.5.
What do you think? I know it was really short, but I'm out of ideas for now. As always, R&R!
Poopsie Moopsie out!
Before I begin, I'd like to thank all my reviewers, especially ???????, whoever you are, since it is thanks
to him/her that I have nearly half of my reviews.
By the way, in this story, there is no Oldale Town, because it interferes with the story.
Disclaimer: I don't own Pokemon
Ch.5: May and Ash almost make it to Petalburg...AMAZING
It was a windy morning as Ash and May kept walking down the dusty road to Petalburg City.
May was still ecstatic about her new Poochyena. Over the last few days, they had finally seen a lot more
Pokemon, and while Ash and May hadn't been able to capture any new Pokemon, they had gotten into
plenty of battles, and raised their Pokemon very well.
"Oh, my little Poochy has gotten so big and strong now, haven't you?" May was cuddling
Poochyena tightly. "Yes you have! You're so big and strong now!"
"The way you treat him I'm surprised he's not wearing a bib yet" Ash muttered.
May glared at him. "And soon, when you become even bigger and stronger, you'll be able to
kick mean old Ash's ass all the way from here to Johto!"
Ash put up his hands in defense. "Hey, all I'm saying is that you treat him like a baby!"
May looked at him, annoyed. "So? You always say that you should treat your Pokemon well!"
Ash was now annoyed too. "I treat my Pokemon like my friends, not like my children! They way
you spoil them, they won't want to fight tougher battles!"
"That's it, Ash!" May was mad now. "I don't care how you think I treat my Pokemon! You take
care of yours your way, and I'll take care of mine my way!" With that, she turned away and kept on
walking.
Ash looked at her, also mad now. He thought of something really mean to say. "Hey May, your-"
He was cut off by Pikachu shocking him as hard as he could. Ash slumped to the ground. "Why do you
keep doing that?!" he asked. Pikachu just shook his head, pointing at May. Ash looked, and understood
immediately. "I should apologize, shouldn't I?" he asked Pikachu, who nodded. "Oh boy" he said, then
ran to catch up with May.
"Hey May, wait!" May heard this, and turned around. She saw Ash run up to her, then stop in
front of her to catch his breath.
"What now, Ash? Are you going to criticize the way I dress?"
He sighed. She was still mad. "Look, about what I said earlier.."
"Forget it Ash. I really don't care what you think" May was making this hard.
Ash was annoyed again. "Damnit May, I'm trying to apologize!"
May turned toward him. "You are?" she said softly.
Ash quickly recovered. "Uh, yeah. I just want to say that I'm sorry for what I said to you earlier.
I don't have any right to tell you how to treat your Pokemon, and you have the right to treat them any
way you want. And, uh..yeah, I'm sorry"
May smiled. "Thanks Ash"
He smiled back. "You're welcome"
They looked into each other's eyes, and were lost in each other's gaze for a while. They
unconsciously moved closer together. Their lips were almost touching, until...
"Pika!" Pikachu hopped off of Ash's shoulder, and started running down the road. Ash and May
snapped out of their trances, and turned toward the little mouse.
"Pikachu, where are you going?" Ash called, but was answered when May tugged on his arm.
"Ash, look!" She pointed down the road. Ash followed her gaze, and looked in surprise. There,
just over the hill, was a towering building.
"Is that..." Ash just stared.
"Yay! We finally made it to Petalburg City!" May said happily. She rushed down the road after
Pikachu. Ash sighed in relief, and ran after her.
END OF CH.5.
What do you think? I know it was really short, but I'm out of ideas for now. As always, R&R!
Poopsie Moopsie out!