COMMENTARY
Holli:
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*in an evil laugh of mirth* MUHAHAHAHAAAA!!!! ROTFLMAO!
Wow. MorningStar really out did herself this time, without the assistance of BuddhaFrog. Talk about intense.or maybe I'm in a dirty-minded mood right now. Eh. Who knows? Heh, heh, heh.
I have one more piece of commentary, but it's at then end of the fic. If I say it here, I'll ruin the fic...heh heh heh.... E-yay! I love stars! Heh, heh, read the fic and you'll get it.
"Let's play twister naked!"
MorningStar: Yeah, ummm, this just popped into my head. I was sitting in class, grabbed my pen and the first sentence that came out was "Hisoka was horny." Yeah, um, it just went from there. So, enjoy! There is more from me at the end! Love to all my readers! DAMN MURAKI!!!
BuddhaFrog: They are making me type my own commentary. . .damnit. I don't understand these people sometimes. The room is a mess. *Sings* It's a beautiful day!! Okay so let's just say people who don't know anything about fanfiction mentioning interesting pairing around people who WRITE fanfiction lead to the brain trying to rid itself of the forementioned interesting pairing. Volia! Hisoka becomes horny! What the hell? This is very lucid for me. . .hmmmm. Someone must have slipped me my medication when I wasn't looking. Or maybe it is because I am kinda of pissed. Hmmmm. . .Oh well whatever, ribbit! There is a chicken on our dry erase board. I am going to make soup. That is about all enjoy the fic! LOVE AND PEACE!!
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On My Mind
(SUBTITLE: Get Spock x Kirk and Buffy x Willow in black corsets out of my head!) LOL
Written by MorningStar. Additional parts and editing by Holli. Additional commentary and annoyance by BuddhaFrog.
(WARNINGS: NC-17 lemon; completely PWP smutfic...for now. HEH, HEH, HEH...SWEET!; Hisoka x Tsuzuki...YES, YOU READ IT RIGHT! WOOT!)
Hisoka was horny. There was no other word for it. All he had been able to think about for the past hour or so had been Tsuzuki. The teen couldn't understand it; it wasn't as if he lacked for sex. In fact, just this morning, Tsuzuki had surprised him while he was in the shower. Hisoka growled and wondered what was wrong with him. He squirmed in his chair, a chair that was getting decidedly more uncomfortable.
"Hey, 'Soka! Are you almost finished?" Tsuzuki smiled brightly, walked into the office that he shared with the younger Shinigami, and fell into his chair that sat in front of his desk. Tsuzuki tilted his head and raised an eyebrow as the wheat-haired teen stood up without a word and walked over to the door. Hisoka shut the office door and clicked the lock. His hormones had taken over, the only thing he cared about was the gorgeous man sitting, sprawled, in the chair. He turned and smiled sensuously, stalking slowly towards his lover.
"'Soka? A-are you alright?" Tsuzuki's eyes widened in shock as his young partner bent over him, until their lips were only a hairsbreadth apart.
"I'm fine," Hisoka pressed their lips together. He snaked his tongue out and ran it along Tsuzuki's lips. The young Shinigami surprised even himself as he took his lover's hand and placed it over the bulge in his pants. Tsuzuki moaned at the burning heat beneath his palm. Hisoka took the opportunity and slid his tongue into the violet-eyed man's mouth. He groaned as he tasted and searched the older man's mouth, his tongue scraping along Tsuzuki's teeth.
The older man moaned and wrapped his arms around his partner, dragging the teen into his lap and crushing him to his chest. Hisoka groaned and thrust his hips downward, causing his erection to rub against Tsuzuki's thigh. The young Shinigami slid his hands beneath Tsuzuki's shirt and started to caress and gently pinch his lover's nipples.
Tsuzuki tore his mouth away from Hisoka, panting, his hands still roaming over the teen's back, "'Soka, what's going on?"
Hisoka nipped and licked at Tsuzuki's neck, "I'm horny. Very horny. And there is nothing I want to do more than make you see stars...literally."
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*in an evil laugh of mirth* MUHAHAHAHAAAA!!!! ROTFLMAO!
Wow. MorningStar really out did herself this time, without the assistance of BuddhaFrog. Talk about intense.or maybe I'm in a dirty-minded mood right now. Eh. Who knows? Heh, heh, heh.
I have one more piece of commentary, but it's at then end of the fic. If I say it here, I'll ruin the fic...heh heh heh.... E-yay! I love stars! Heh, heh, read the fic and you'll get it.
"Let's play twister naked!"
MorningStar: Yeah, ummm, this just popped into my head. I was sitting in class, grabbed my pen and the first sentence that came out was "Hisoka was horny." Yeah, um, it just went from there. So, enjoy! There is more from me at the end! Love to all my readers! DAMN MURAKI!!!
BuddhaFrog: They are making me type my own commentary. . .damnit. I don't understand these people sometimes. The room is a mess. *Sings* It's a beautiful day!! Okay so let's just say people who don't know anything about fanfiction mentioning interesting pairing around people who WRITE fanfiction lead to the brain trying to rid itself of the forementioned interesting pairing. Volia! Hisoka becomes horny! What the hell? This is very lucid for me. . .hmmmm. Someone must have slipped me my medication when I wasn't looking. Or maybe it is because I am kinda of pissed. Hmmmm. . .Oh well whatever, ribbit! There is a chicken on our dry erase board. I am going to make soup. That is about all enjoy the fic! LOVE AND PEACE!!
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On My Mind
(SUBTITLE: Get Spock x Kirk and Buffy x Willow in black corsets out of my head!) LOL
Written by MorningStar. Additional parts and editing by Holli. Additional commentary and annoyance by BuddhaFrog.
(WARNINGS: NC-17 lemon; completely PWP smutfic...for now. HEH, HEH, HEH...SWEET!; Hisoka x Tsuzuki...YES, YOU READ IT RIGHT! WOOT!)
Hisoka was horny. There was no other word for it. All he had been able to think about for the past hour or so had been Tsuzuki. The teen couldn't understand it; it wasn't as if he lacked for sex. In fact, just this morning, Tsuzuki had surprised him while he was in the shower. Hisoka growled and wondered what was wrong with him. He squirmed in his chair, a chair that was getting decidedly more uncomfortable.
"Hey, 'Soka! Are you almost finished?" Tsuzuki smiled brightly, walked into the office that he shared with the younger Shinigami, and fell into his chair that sat in front of his desk. Tsuzuki tilted his head and raised an eyebrow as the wheat-haired teen stood up without a word and walked over to the door. Hisoka shut the office door and clicked the lock. His hormones had taken over, the only thing he cared about was the gorgeous man sitting, sprawled, in the chair. He turned and smiled sensuously, stalking slowly towards his lover.
"'Soka? A-are you alright?" Tsuzuki's eyes widened in shock as his young partner bent over him, until their lips were only a hairsbreadth apart.
"I'm fine," Hisoka pressed their lips together. He snaked his tongue out and ran it along Tsuzuki's lips. The young Shinigami surprised even himself as he took his lover's hand and placed it over the bulge in his pants. Tsuzuki moaned at the burning heat beneath his palm. Hisoka took the opportunity and slid his tongue into the violet-eyed man's mouth. He groaned as he tasted and searched the older man's mouth, his tongue scraping along Tsuzuki's teeth.
The older man moaned and wrapped his arms around his partner, dragging the teen into his lap and crushing him to his chest. Hisoka groaned and thrust his hips downward, causing his erection to rub against Tsuzuki's thigh. The young Shinigami slid his hands beneath Tsuzuki's shirt and started to caress and gently pinch his lover's nipples.
Tsuzuki tore his mouth away from Hisoka, panting, his hands still roaming over the teen's back, "'Soka, what's going on?"
Hisoka nipped and licked at Tsuzuki's neck, "I'm horny. Very horny. And there is nothing I want to do more than make you see stars...literally."
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Want more? Well, FF.net's rules only allow so much, so to check out the rest of the fic, go to our homepage listed on our profile page! Sorry!