Alright, Listen up I haven't written in ages and it seems to me like I should more often.
I can't get any ideas for this story but it has been my most prosperous story at the moment.
Review here if you wish for me to continue this story and also post me some ideas or if you wish
me to change the mood of the story persay...Anyways Later..
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At this time I'd like to thanks the reviewers..
monkey92 (devilish_tiger9@hotmail.com)
I like what you showed us at the end. i liked it plz update as soon as possible cos it is really good
b Well thanks alot. I guess I'll be sure to try to get an idea as soon as possible, k? /b
Citrus Fruit
Make a lemon or lime of seto/tea!
b You want me to? I have been thinking of making one before. Tell me your ideas /b
Chibi Tiger
Your story is quite amusing and I like it a lot. But don't turn poor Tea into a hoe now!
b Lol, Okay I'll be sure to keep Tea from doing any "favors" /b
Alex Lee
you !@##%^&^@@&*%^&!Can't you tell that the pairs are obvious!!!!
Tea/Yugi Joey/Mai Tristan/Miho{thats his futere GF in the Yu-gi-Oh movie;Kazza}who cares about Bukura. Seto/Serenity!!!!!!!!!!
Seth is hott!
Care for me to explain any more? GOOD!!!!!!
Alex Lee
b Umm...okay..../b
YamiAnzu1
This is so funny! Name chapter 5 "A break from the night to come" or somthing and have some more funny stuff happen that night! It's so kewl PLZ keep it up! ^__^
b Thanks, I'll be sure to change the title. /b
Forlorn Hope
ROFL Write more!
b You got it /b
DSTakeshi
lol! Man that was rich, loved it! keep making chapters! O.o *eats chips*
b Thanks again Takeshi. _ You were always there to review my stories. :P /b
kaiba_fan
Yay go Seto/Tea!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Good story ^^
b Thanks for the nice review ^^ /b
Cynical Bitch
Er....well I can't say your a bad writer but i can say that the plot is way to fast. You didn't even tell how they all got to be friends (and lovers). You've got talent man. But your wastin it
b Cynical, I am sincerely sorry I appologize for my stories if they contradicted your vision of a good plot. But
I guess I wrote these when I was in 6-7th grade. Theres an old saying Practice makes Perfect right?
Once again sorry if I offended you, be sure to check out my new vocabulary. ;D /b
Ishuzu
Very strange. Sort of a everyone-makes-out-with-everyone, fun all around type story, huh? Cool, cept the Tea/Kaiba thing *shiver* But hey, I wouldn't want Kaiba to end up with any of the YGO chicks. He's mine!!! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
Kaiba: *exchanges glances with the forbidden Yami*
b I'll be sure to tell Kaiba he's yours ;) /b
Queen of Curses
funny...
anywayz, tea might b a slutty bitch, but she DOES know how to take care of perverted guys.
hehehe....those yamis r gonna kill y. blitz. yup, the competitiveness in each yami pulls them to do extreme things to win at anything.
well, hope u get the next chapter up soon. wish this was a yaoi fic, tho. ::sighs:: oh well...
b Awww...Sorry Queen of Curses. I'm glad you liked my story. Its just my...imagination doesn't open up
for Yaoi stories. No offense to you or anyone its just that I never write Yaoi stories..Sorry but thanks
for the review. /b
Queen of Curses
::vomits:: i'm so sorry, but it's just the fact that tea is with seto and joey is sickening. but this chapter was funny. i was looking for a good laugh all day. also, i don't blame mai for trying so desperately to get a hold on duke. cuz he's one hot guy. anywayz, it's good.
PS tea is a bitchy slut! (no offense to u or ur fic)
b Who would you like me to have Tea with? /b
Queen of Curses
whoah, wasn't expecting seto/tea. i've hating that couple ever since, and i still do. i guess that's what happens when ur addicted to yaoi...
anywayz, so far, the 1st chapter is going on well. also, in that line where you say 'mai was showing off her boobs' u make her sound like a total ditz. ok....maybe she is....whatever. i'll just read the rest of this fic.
b Alright guess I'll make Mai less of a "ditz" /b
Ellen/CREAM FILLING (megriffin@earthlink.net)
I love it, but needs moe Kaiba and Tea romance.
****Ellen/CREAM FILLING****
b You got it. Thanks for the review. /b
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Ellen/CREAM FILLING (megriffin@earthlink.net)
This is the best and only good Tea and Kaiba fiction ever. It makes you wonder cause you always see Kaiba and Tea pared up. Oh, please read my romance "The Bloody Ruby" by Umi Wave
****Ellen****
b Thanks a bunch! I'll be sure to check out your story when I get the chance. /b
Me 2002-11-28 5 Anonymous
First of all, this story is not very organized, and has a lot of grammar problems. Your writing style is random and the story is plotless.
I really hope you change your plotless style, or not continue at all.
And I will also tell you that, yes, I think Tea is the most annoying little girl in the show, and not everyone is in love with her.
Certainly Joey and Tea do not go together! Their personalities don't match. Secondly, Seto and Tea don't go together. They would totally clash. Both Seto and Joey need a strong, attractive woman. Not Tea, obviously.
And what's with all the kissing and stuff? That's what bad writers do to fill up space. And you certainly are a bad writer.
b Sorry...It wasn't supposed to be and I lost Microsoft Word..No spell check. Guess I should but a backbone into my plot.
Only Joey and Kaiba love her. Hmm you might've been write about that. Sorry once more I'll be sure to edit it. /b
kireina (hotaru_saturn@attbi.com) 2002-11-28 4 Anonymous
x.x it's mai!!!! i bet...why else would kaiba go pale since he was looking for tea and serenity's in with yugi oh by the way blitzy boy*hug* keep going with the serenity/yugi think i like that much better
b Okay Serenity/Yugi it is /b
lostlonelytear
that was super funny and quite interesting ^__^ I can't ait for the next chapter.
b Interesting? Wow never recieved that compliment! Thanks for the review. /b
lili
keep ritin yay! i like this fic!
b Okay I'll keep writing. Thanks for the review. /b
sungirl
alright...
b Okay.../b
kireina (hotaru_saturn@attbi.com)
oh blitzy-chan.....my bakura! oter then that great fic the pegasus jokes are funny..
b Thanks alot Kireina-Chan. Be sure to talk to me on MSN more often. /b
Jce
great fic. post the nxt chappie soon plz!!!
b Thanks alot. I'll be sure to get a chapter up soon. /b
AnimeRei
Cygurl: Ooooooooooooooh Seto likes Tea ^_*
Y.C: *sweatdrop* she's obsessed over romance
Cygurl: so i don't care what's so bad about romance?
Y.C: i dunno
Cygurl: iz dat ur final answer?
Y.C: O_o;;;
Cygurl: hehehe update soon okie
Forlorn Hope
Wait! Tea's supposed to be with Bakura, isn't she??? Other than that, funny fic! ^_^
b Bakura? Maybe I'll clone Tea and pair her up with all of the boys.. Thanks for the review though! /b
Joshua
Kaiba's a little cough*aggresive*cough
100/100
b Isin't Kaiba supposed to be? /b
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Once more thanks to the reviews and be sure to scroll to the top of the page for what to do. Later
The Vash Wannabe~
I can't get any ideas for this story but it has been my most prosperous story at the moment.
Review here if you wish for me to continue this story and also post me some ideas or if you wish
me to change the mood of the story persay...Anyways Later..
---------------------------------------------
At this time I'd like to thanks the reviewers..
monkey92 (devilish_tiger9@hotmail.com)
I like what you showed us at the end. i liked it plz update as soon as possible cos it is really good
b Well thanks alot. I guess I'll be sure to try to get an idea as soon as possible, k? /b
Citrus Fruit
Make a lemon or lime of seto/tea!
b You want me to? I have been thinking of making one before. Tell me your ideas /b
Chibi Tiger
Your story is quite amusing and I like it a lot. But don't turn poor Tea into a hoe now!
b Lol, Okay I'll be sure to keep Tea from doing any "favors" /b
Alex Lee
you !@##%^&^@@&*%^&!Can't you tell that the pairs are obvious!!!!
Tea/Yugi Joey/Mai Tristan/Miho{thats his futere GF in the Yu-gi-Oh movie;Kazza}who cares about Bukura. Seto/Serenity!!!!!!!!!!
Seth is hott!
Care for me to explain any more? GOOD!!!!!!
Alex Lee
b Umm...okay..../b
YamiAnzu1
This is so funny! Name chapter 5 "A break from the night to come" or somthing and have some more funny stuff happen that night! It's so kewl PLZ keep it up! ^__^
b Thanks, I'll be sure to change the title. /b
Forlorn Hope
ROFL Write more!
b You got it /b
DSTakeshi
lol! Man that was rich, loved it! keep making chapters! O.o *eats chips*
b Thanks again Takeshi. _ You were always there to review my stories. :P /b
kaiba_fan
Yay go Seto/Tea!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Good story ^^
b Thanks for the nice review ^^ /b
Cynical Bitch
Er....well I can't say your a bad writer but i can say that the plot is way to fast. You didn't even tell how they all got to be friends (and lovers). You've got talent man. But your wastin it
b Cynical, I am sincerely sorry I appologize for my stories if they contradicted your vision of a good plot. But
I guess I wrote these when I was in 6-7th grade. Theres an old saying Practice makes Perfect right?
Once again sorry if I offended you, be sure to check out my new vocabulary. ;D /b
Ishuzu
Very strange. Sort of a everyone-makes-out-with-everyone, fun all around type story, huh? Cool, cept the Tea/Kaiba thing *shiver* But hey, I wouldn't want Kaiba to end up with any of the YGO chicks. He's mine!!! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
Kaiba: *exchanges glances with the forbidden Yami*
b I'll be sure to tell Kaiba he's yours ;) /b
Queen of Curses
funny...
anywayz, tea might b a slutty bitch, but she DOES know how to take care of perverted guys.
hehehe....those yamis r gonna kill y. blitz. yup, the competitiveness in each yami pulls them to do extreme things to win at anything.
well, hope u get the next chapter up soon. wish this was a yaoi fic, tho. ::sighs:: oh well...
b Awww...Sorry Queen of Curses. I'm glad you liked my story. Its just my...imagination doesn't open up
for Yaoi stories. No offense to you or anyone its just that I never write Yaoi stories..Sorry but thanks
for the review. /b
Queen of Curses
::vomits:: i'm so sorry, but it's just the fact that tea is with seto and joey is sickening. but this chapter was funny. i was looking for a good laugh all day. also, i don't blame mai for trying so desperately to get a hold on duke. cuz he's one hot guy. anywayz, it's good.
PS tea is a bitchy slut! (no offense to u or ur fic)
b Who would you like me to have Tea with? /b
Queen of Curses
whoah, wasn't expecting seto/tea. i've hating that couple ever since, and i still do. i guess that's what happens when ur addicted to yaoi...
anywayz, so far, the 1st chapter is going on well. also, in that line where you say 'mai was showing off her boobs' u make her sound like a total ditz. ok....maybe she is....whatever. i'll just read the rest of this fic.
b Alright guess I'll make Mai less of a "ditz" /b
Ellen/CREAM FILLING (megriffin@earthlink.net)
I love it, but needs moe Kaiba and Tea romance.
****Ellen/CREAM FILLING****
b You got it. Thanks for the review. /b
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Ellen/CREAM FILLING (megriffin@earthlink.net)
This is the best and only good Tea and Kaiba fiction ever. It makes you wonder cause you always see Kaiba and Tea pared up. Oh, please read my romance "The Bloody Ruby" by Umi Wave
****Ellen****
b Thanks a bunch! I'll be sure to check out your story when I get the chance. /b
Me 2002-11-28 5 Anonymous
First of all, this story is not very organized, and has a lot of grammar problems. Your writing style is random and the story is plotless.
I really hope you change your plotless style, or not continue at all.
And I will also tell you that, yes, I think Tea is the most annoying little girl in the show, and not everyone is in love with her.
Certainly Joey and Tea do not go together! Their personalities don't match. Secondly, Seto and Tea don't go together. They would totally clash. Both Seto and Joey need a strong, attractive woman. Not Tea, obviously.
And what's with all the kissing and stuff? That's what bad writers do to fill up space. And you certainly are a bad writer.
b Sorry...It wasn't supposed to be and I lost Microsoft Word..No spell check. Guess I should but a backbone into my plot.
Only Joey and Kaiba love her. Hmm you might've been write about that. Sorry once more I'll be sure to edit it. /b
kireina (hotaru_saturn@attbi.com) 2002-11-28 4 Anonymous
x.x it's mai!!!! i bet...why else would kaiba go pale since he was looking for tea and serenity's in with yugi oh by the way blitzy boy*hug* keep going with the serenity/yugi think i like that much better
b Okay Serenity/Yugi it is /b
lostlonelytear
that was super funny and quite interesting ^__^ I can't ait for the next chapter.
b Interesting? Wow never recieved that compliment! Thanks for the review. /b
lili
keep ritin yay! i like this fic!
b Okay I'll keep writing. Thanks for the review. /b
sungirl
alright...
b Okay.../b
kireina (hotaru_saturn@attbi.com)
oh blitzy-chan.....my bakura! oter then that great fic the pegasus jokes are funny..
b Thanks alot Kireina-Chan. Be sure to talk to me on MSN more often. /b
Jce
great fic. post the nxt chappie soon plz!!!
b Thanks alot. I'll be sure to get a chapter up soon. /b
AnimeRei
Cygurl: Ooooooooooooooh Seto likes Tea ^_*
Y.C: *sweatdrop* she's obsessed over romance
Cygurl: so i don't care what's so bad about romance?
Y.C: i dunno
Cygurl: iz dat ur final answer?
Y.C: O_o;;;
Cygurl: hehehe update soon okie
Forlorn Hope
Wait! Tea's supposed to be with Bakura, isn't she??? Other than that, funny fic! ^_^
b Bakura? Maybe I'll clone Tea and pair her up with all of the boys.. Thanks for the review though! /b
Joshua
Kaiba's a little cough*aggresive*cough
100/100
b Isin't Kaiba supposed to be? /b
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Once more thanks to the reviews and be sure to scroll to the top of the page for what to do. Later
The Vash Wannabe~