Wounded Essence
By: ScRibBLrOfDrEaMs
Chapter 5 – Time is precious
Years passed as Ron and Hermione tried to forget the vicious past that haunted them in the three years before. Hermione was now 17 years of age and very independent. Yes, she had changed quite a bit. Not by looks, however, but her thoughts and ideas. Her hair was not bushy and her teeth were straight, if you want to call that a change. It's not all about looks and Hermione knew that. Maybe she could find a guy who liked her for who she really was. If that was even possible. Oh well, right now that didn't even matter. She was focused and determined. Graduation was only a few months away and she could hardly stand the wait. She did love Hogwarts and the people but she wanted a new atmosphere. The N.E.W.T.S. were out of the way which was a relief to her. She made it to Head Girl and Draco Malfoy was chosen for Head Boy. They did develop a little bit of a relationship, you could say. They tried to see if a relationship would work between them, which may seem impossible. Opposites attract. I mean, think about it, relationships would be really boring if the two people involved were exactly alike. Their love is hard to explain. Love isn't really explainable, it just happens when you least expect it. It didn't work but it lasted for quite some time. Hermione was happy but she knew from the very start that it would never work. She didn't want it to end that way but she enjoyed it while it was there. Hermione and Draco are two very different people, as different as night and day. It truly was an amazement to see it actually work for awhile. Their history just wouldn't allow it either. He was a pureblood and she was a muggleborn. His father would never allow it. Her best friend was enemies with Draco. Some many conflicts and obstacles they would have to overcome just didn't seem worth it. Who knows maybe their love would have a chance later? They were, however, still trying to make it work. They would do whatever it took. At least they could make it last, for now.
Now, Mr. Player, also known as Ron Weasley, had changed a lot. Ron lost that attitude and it was like it never really happened. Hermione knew it happened. She would never forget. How could you forget about something like that? For her, it was impossible. She moved on and tried to forget. Tried being the keyword. He and Lavender were off and on. It was just old news because they were dating and then they weren't. Hermione understood Ron and Lavender now. She came to respect that Ron had chosen Lavender but what Ron did to her was wrong. She didn't know if she could truly forgive him for what he had done to her, all the pain, sadness, anger, and loneliness was just too much for her to handle. I wouldn't blame her for never fully forgiving him anyway. They were friends but it was a lot different. Harry was a little torn sometimes between his two best friends. Harry was a really great friend. He possessed the right qualities a true friend and Hermione was grateful for him.
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Hermione was just on her way to Arithmancy but she remembered she had Herbology right after. She had no time to go back to her room and pick up her book so she started to go back to her room and pick up her book before class started.
"Hey 'Mione." Ron said casually.
"Oh hello, Ron." Hermione replied.
"How are you?" Ron asked as if he was concerned.
Hermione knew he was just playing mind games but replied, "Fine, thank you, I'm sorry I have to cut this short but I need to get my book before class starts. What about you?"
"I'm off to Divination." Ron sighed.
"I told you to stop taking that class."
"Hermione, you know I never listen."
"You're absolutely right. Well, I'll catch up with you later."
"Alright, goodbye Hermione."
"Bye Ron."
Hermione walked quickly to her room, gave the password and stepped in to her and Draco's common room. Draco was casually lounging on the couch.
"Hello Malfoy. Why are you just sitting around?" She asked him.
"What, it's not like I have anything else to do."
"You've got a point. I have to get going or else I'm going to be late for class."
"Excuse me for ruining your perfect schedule, Ms. Perfect." He said sarcastically.
Hermione rolled her eyes and dashed in to her room, grabbed her book and made sure she had everything. Then she ran to class, yelling a quick goodbye to Draco. She made it in class just on time. She got out some parchment and a quill. She listened and took notes. The teacher gave them an assignment and Hermione finished in no time. The teacher also gave out homework which was just in time because they had to go to their next class. She bumped into Ginny on the way and just briefly chatted with her. Hermione told her she would talk to her at dinner. She got to class a little early and took her place beside Harry. They were working with Professor Sprout and Hermione was talking to Harry while working.
"So, Harry, how have you been?" Hermione asked.
"Great, thanks. And you?" Harry replied.
"Oh, I'm fine. How's the Quidditch team doing?"
"They're doing all right, Ginny is absolutely brilliant and Ron's getting there. Being captain sure is hard work." His face seemed to light up when he spoke about Ginny.
"Are you falling for a certain someone?" Hermione asked casually.
Harry blushed a little and said, "Um...I don't know."
"Harry, it's okay. You can tell me, I'm your friend remember. And besides, I think it's cute."
"I know you're my friend. I just haven't thought about it yet.
"Well, let me know when you figure it out."
"Psst! Hermione! Can you help me with this?" Ron asked with a pleading face.
"Sure Ron." Hermione said and spent the rest of class helping Ron.
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It was almost time for dinner as Hermione lay on the couch, thinking about Harry and Ginny. They were absolutely perfect together and she knew that their relationship would last. 'Why can't I have love like that?' Hermione thought. She was happy for them though. Hermione knew Ginny would most likely feel the same way about Harry. Maybe that's what she wanted to talk to Hermione about. Hermione was so deep in thought that she didn't even see Draco come in.
"Hermione?" He said, interrupting her thoughts and bringing her back to reality. He lifted up her head, sat down and laid her head in his lap. She didn't try to stop him as she still had feelings for him but she was trying to fight them.
"Yes, Malfoy." Hermione replied.
"Oh come on, we've been through a lot. Call me Draco."
"Fine. Yes, Draco."
"What were you thinking about?" He asked looking down at her.
She looked up, into his eyes and said, "I was thinking about Harry and Ginny. Don't you think they'd make a good couple?"
"Yes, I suppose." He agreed. "Their love would probably last."
"Yes, I agree and then I wanted love like that even if they are not officially together yet. I don't want to be alone forever and that's when I thought of you, Draco."
"You could have love like theirs too, Hermione." He replied as he took her hand in his.
"Draco, we can't." She told him but never letting go of his hand.
"For now, we can. You know it, don't fight it. We'll worry about that stuff after graduation. Right now, all that matters is you, me, and the feelings we have for each other. Why do you act like the feelings you have for me do not exist? Am I not good enough for you?"
"No Draco, of course you are good enough. You're all I could ever ask for and more. It's just I worry. I worry about what will happen if your father finds out. I worry about Harry for you and he are not the best of friends. I worry about you most of all. I fear you will be hurt and I will be the cause." A tear slid down her face and Draco wiped it away.
"Don't worry right now. It will be alright." He said while stroking her cheek. Hermione sat up and hugged him tightly, as if she never wanted to let him go.
"Oh Draco. I'm so afraid." She said, still hugging him tightly.
"It will be okay. I'm here and I will always be here." He replied.
"Thanks Draco." Hermione said as smiled, feeling sad. She then broke away from the hug and kissed him softly. "I'm so glad I have you."
"Me too, Hermione." Draco said pulling her into a long hug. Hermione could have stayed there forever but she was getting a little hungry.
"Draco, it's time for dinner. We should eat." Hermione said as she got up and started to walk in the direction of the Great Hall. She was again in deep thought, oblivious to all around her, as she walked to the Great Hall. Draco was all she ever wanted but she knew it wouldn't work out. Their relationship had been off and on as well. Hermione was constantly denying all her feelings for him but she knew that deep down in her heart, those feelings were there. Draco knew that as well and couldn't fully understand why she was denying them. They made the perfect match but so many things said they weren't meant to be together. At least for now, they could be together in the protection of Hogwarts. Why were there so many obstacles in the way of her happiness? She wanted to be with him so bad but a part of her knew it was wrong. 'Don't worry. Draco said it will be alright.' Hermione told herself. 'Enjoy the time you have with him because you may never get the chance again.'
She finally reached the Great Hall and spotted Ginny. It was fairly easy to spot her because of her beautiful red hair. Ginny was beautiful and she knew why Harry liked her. There was not one thing to dislike about her. Harry and Ginny had things in common. She walked over to her and sat down.
"Hey Gin!" Hermione greeted warmly.
"Hey 'Mione!" Ginny said.
"So what did you want to talk to me about?" Hermione asked, putting food on her plate.
"Well, I wanted to talk to you about...um...Harry." Ginny said as her voice dropped to a low whisper that Hermione could barely hear her.
"Okay. Go ahead." Hermione said as she began to eat.
"I think I'm starting to fall for him." Ginny started as she stole a glance at him, laughing with Ron. She sighed.
"Aww...Gin, I think that is so cute." Hermione replied.
"Do you think I'd have a chance with him?"
"Of course. Who wouldn't like you?"
"You really think so, Hermione?"
"Yes. I'm sure he's feeling the same way."
Meanwhile during Hermione and Ginny's conversation, Harry and Ron were having one of their own.
"Hey Ron, how do you know if someone likes you?" Harry asked.
"I have no clue. Girls can be so confusing and complicated." Ron said as he laughed.
Harry laughed with his friend. "Well, you see, there's this girl and I think I'm falling for her."
"Okay. Who is this mystery girl?"
Harry stole a quick glance at Ginny and said jokingly, "Promise not to beat me up?"
Ron laughed. "Of course."
"Well, I think I'm falling for..." Harry gulped and whispered, "Ginny."
"What?!"
"Ron, please, don't kill me. I don't even know if she feels the same way. Don't worry, I promise not to hurt her in any way."
"Well, I am a little shocked but if there had to be someone with her, I'm glad it's you, mate." Ron said, patting Harry on his back.
"Thank goodness." Harry breathed a sigh of relief. In all truth, he did not know how Ron would accept that.
"Don't worry, mate. I'll hook you up." Ron said and laughed.
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Hermione was finished eating and said goodbye to Ginny.
"Hey Gin, I'm going to go. I think you should talk to him. Maybe he feels the same way."
"Okay, Hermione. Thanks for your help. I want to tell him and someday, hopefully one day soon, I'll tell him. Goodnight." Ginny said.
"Goodnight, Gin. Sweet dreams." Hermione replied as Ginny smiled. Hermione started back to her common room. She glanced over at the Slytherin table and noticed Draco was gone. 'He's probably sleeping by now.' She thought. She was on her way to her room but then decided to take a walk outside. It was mid-March so it wasn't that cold. It was actually nice outside. It was a beautiful night and a light breeze blew. She walked to her usual spot near the lake which was hidden from the outside. It was where she and Draco met sometimes. There was a willow tree and a bench beneath it. She sat down and hugged her knees. She then began to think about Harry, Ginny, and most of all Draco.
"Fancy meeting you here, Granger." A familiar voice said behind her.
She jumped at the sound but then quickly relaxed because she recognized that voice. "Draco." She whispered and closed her eyes. When she opened them, Draco was sitting beside her. He put his arms around her and she got comfortable laying on him. She felt so safe in his arms and she wished this moment would last forever. "Draco." She whispered again. He pulled her up and he lay down on the soft grass. She lay down on her stomach on top of him, resting her head on his chest. Her head raised and fell with each of his breaths. He had his arms around her and held her even tighter.
"Draco, don't ever leave me." Hermione said after a peaceful silence.
"You know I would never, Hermione." Draco replied.
She leaned up and kissed him softly at first but then he deepened it. She pulled away and buried her head into his neck, inwardly smiling.
A/N: Hey everyone! I hope you liked this chapter and I'm so sorry it took me so long. As you know, I was planning to delete this story but I decided not to. I also decided to skip a few years and go into their seventh year. I hope I have explained what has happened in between well. I'm sorry if it is confusing. There was a lot of Hermione and Draco fluff, so I hope you all enjoyed that. I also threw in some Harry and Ginny. This is probably one of the longest chapters I've written. YAY! GO ME! Anyway, I'd like to thank my reviewers.
Jessiebear- Thank you for reviewing my story and not stopping when my story sucked!
LiLblueangel1223- I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for the review!
Rebecca89- Thanks for your review! I promise to check out your story soon!
Dream-Siren- TA DA! What do you think? My chapter sucked, huh? I hope that was enough D/Hr action for you! Thanks for reviewing! I luv ya!
IcyCoolTiger- I think that's your name. (I hope it is.) Thanks for reviewing! Guess what? They're not 15 anymore!
Bridget Jones- Thanks for the review! I hope you had fun looking for everything wrong in my story. I wonder why you continue to read it if it is so horribly written. Sorry to hear you feel that way. Now tell me, what's wrong with this chapter?
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By: ScRibBLrOfDrEaMs
Chapter 5 – Time is precious
Years passed as Ron and Hermione tried to forget the vicious past that haunted them in the three years before. Hermione was now 17 years of age and very independent. Yes, she had changed quite a bit. Not by looks, however, but her thoughts and ideas. Her hair was not bushy and her teeth were straight, if you want to call that a change. It's not all about looks and Hermione knew that. Maybe she could find a guy who liked her for who she really was. If that was even possible. Oh well, right now that didn't even matter. She was focused and determined. Graduation was only a few months away and she could hardly stand the wait. She did love Hogwarts and the people but she wanted a new atmosphere. The N.E.W.T.S. were out of the way which was a relief to her. She made it to Head Girl and Draco Malfoy was chosen for Head Boy. They did develop a little bit of a relationship, you could say. They tried to see if a relationship would work between them, which may seem impossible. Opposites attract. I mean, think about it, relationships would be really boring if the two people involved were exactly alike. Their love is hard to explain. Love isn't really explainable, it just happens when you least expect it. It didn't work but it lasted for quite some time. Hermione was happy but she knew from the very start that it would never work. She didn't want it to end that way but she enjoyed it while it was there. Hermione and Draco are two very different people, as different as night and day. It truly was an amazement to see it actually work for awhile. Their history just wouldn't allow it either. He was a pureblood and she was a muggleborn. His father would never allow it. Her best friend was enemies with Draco. Some many conflicts and obstacles they would have to overcome just didn't seem worth it. Who knows maybe their love would have a chance later? They were, however, still trying to make it work. They would do whatever it took. At least they could make it last, for now.
Now, Mr. Player, also known as Ron Weasley, had changed a lot. Ron lost that attitude and it was like it never really happened. Hermione knew it happened. She would never forget. How could you forget about something like that? For her, it was impossible. She moved on and tried to forget. Tried being the keyword. He and Lavender were off and on. It was just old news because they were dating and then they weren't. Hermione understood Ron and Lavender now. She came to respect that Ron had chosen Lavender but what Ron did to her was wrong. She didn't know if she could truly forgive him for what he had done to her, all the pain, sadness, anger, and loneliness was just too much for her to handle. I wouldn't blame her for never fully forgiving him anyway. They were friends but it was a lot different. Harry was a little torn sometimes between his two best friends. Harry was a really great friend. He possessed the right qualities a true friend and Hermione was grateful for him.
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Hermione was just on her way to Arithmancy but she remembered she had Herbology right after. She had no time to go back to her room and pick up her book so she started to go back to her room and pick up her book before class started.
"Hey 'Mione." Ron said casually.
"Oh hello, Ron." Hermione replied.
"How are you?" Ron asked as if he was concerned.
Hermione knew he was just playing mind games but replied, "Fine, thank you, I'm sorry I have to cut this short but I need to get my book before class starts. What about you?"
"I'm off to Divination." Ron sighed.
"I told you to stop taking that class."
"Hermione, you know I never listen."
"You're absolutely right. Well, I'll catch up with you later."
"Alright, goodbye Hermione."
"Bye Ron."
Hermione walked quickly to her room, gave the password and stepped in to her and Draco's common room. Draco was casually lounging on the couch.
"Hello Malfoy. Why are you just sitting around?" She asked him.
"What, it's not like I have anything else to do."
"You've got a point. I have to get going or else I'm going to be late for class."
"Excuse me for ruining your perfect schedule, Ms. Perfect." He said sarcastically.
Hermione rolled her eyes and dashed in to her room, grabbed her book and made sure she had everything. Then she ran to class, yelling a quick goodbye to Draco. She made it in class just on time. She got out some parchment and a quill. She listened and took notes. The teacher gave them an assignment and Hermione finished in no time. The teacher also gave out homework which was just in time because they had to go to their next class. She bumped into Ginny on the way and just briefly chatted with her. Hermione told her she would talk to her at dinner. She got to class a little early and took her place beside Harry. They were working with Professor Sprout and Hermione was talking to Harry while working.
"So, Harry, how have you been?" Hermione asked.
"Great, thanks. And you?" Harry replied.
"Oh, I'm fine. How's the Quidditch team doing?"
"They're doing all right, Ginny is absolutely brilliant and Ron's getting there. Being captain sure is hard work." His face seemed to light up when he spoke about Ginny.
"Are you falling for a certain someone?" Hermione asked casually.
Harry blushed a little and said, "Um...I don't know."
"Harry, it's okay. You can tell me, I'm your friend remember. And besides, I think it's cute."
"I know you're my friend. I just haven't thought about it yet.
"Well, let me know when you figure it out."
"Psst! Hermione! Can you help me with this?" Ron asked with a pleading face.
"Sure Ron." Hermione said and spent the rest of class helping Ron.
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It was almost time for dinner as Hermione lay on the couch, thinking about Harry and Ginny. They were absolutely perfect together and she knew that their relationship would last. 'Why can't I have love like that?' Hermione thought. She was happy for them though. Hermione knew Ginny would most likely feel the same way about Harry. Maybe that's what she wanted to talk to Hermione about. Hermione was so deep in thought that she didn't even see Draco come in.
"Hermione?" He said, interrupting her thoughts and bringing her back to reality. He lifted up her head, sat down and laid her head in his lap. She didn't try to stop him as she still had feelings for him but she was trying to fight them.
"Yes, Malfoy." Hermione replied.
"Oh come on, we've been through a lot. Call me Draco."
"Fine. Yes, Draco."
"What were you thinking about?" He asked looking down at her.
She looked up, into his eyes and said, "I was thinking about Harry and Ginny. Don't you think they'd make a good couple?"
"Yes, I suppose." He agreed. "Their love would probably last."
"Yes, I agree and then I wanted love like that even if they are not officially together yet. I don't want to be alone forever and that's when I thought of you, Draco."
"You could have love like theirs too, Hermione." He replied as he took her hand in his.
"Draco, we can't." She told him but never letting go of his hand.
"For now, we can. You know it, don't fight it. We'll worry about that stuff after graduation. Right now, all that matters is you, me, and the feelings we have for each other. Why do you act like the feelings you have for me do not exist? Am I not good enough for you?"
"No Draco, of course you are good enough. You're all I could ever ask for and more. It's just I worry. I worry about what will happen if your father finds out. I worry about Harry for you and he are not the best of friends. I worry about you most of all. I fear you will be hurt and I will be the cause." A tear slid down her face and Draco wiped it away.
"Don't worry right now. It will be alright." He said while stroking her cheek. Hermione sat up and hugged him tightly, as if she never wanted to let him go.
"Oh Draco. I'm so afraid." She said, still hugging him tightly.
"It will be okay. I'm here and I will always be here." He replied.
"Thanks Draco." Hermione said as smiled, feeling sad. She then broke away from the hug and kissed him softly. "I'm so glad I have you."
"Me too, Hermione." Draco said pulling her into a long hug. Hermione could have stayed there forever but she was getting a little hungry.
"Draco, it's time for dinner. We should eat." Hermione said as she got up and started to walk in the direction of the Great Hall. She was again in deep thought, oblivious to all around her, as she walked to the Great Hall. Draco was all she ever wanted but she knew it wouldn't work out. Their relationship had been off and on as well. Hermione was constantly denying all her feelings for him but she knew that deep down in her heart, those feelings were there. Draco knew that as well and couldn't fully understand why she was denying them. They made the perfect match but so many things said they weren't meant to be together. At least for now, they could be together in the protection of Hogwarts. Why were there so many obstacles in the way of her happiness? She wanted to be with him so bad but a part of her knew it was wrong. 'Don't worry. Draco said it will be alright.' Hermione told herself. 'Enjoy the time you have with him because you may never get the chance again.'
She finally reached the Great Hall and spotted Ginny. It was fairly easy to spot her because of her beautiful red hair. Ginny was beautiful and she knew why Harry liked her. There was not one thing to dislike about her. Harry and Ginny had things in common. She walked over to her and sat down.
"Hey Gin!" Hermione greeted warmly.
"Hey 'Mione!" Ginny said.
"So what did you want to talk to me about?" Hermione asked, putting food on her plate.
"Well, I wanted to talk to you about...um...Harry." Ginny said as her voice dropped to a low whisper that Hermione could barely hear her.
"Okay. Go ahead." Hermione said as she began to eat.
"I think I'm starting to fall for him." Ginny started as she stole a glance at him, laughing with Ron. She sighed.
"Aww...Gin, I think that is so cute." Hermione replied.
"Do you think I'd have a chance with him?"
"Of course. Who wouldn't like you?"
"You really think so, Hermione?"
"Yes. I'm sure he's feeling the same way."
Meanwhile during Hermione and Ginny's conversation, Harry and Ron were having one of their own.
"Hey Ron, how do you know if someone likes you?" Harry asked.
"I have no clue. Girls can be so confusing and complicated." Ron said as he laughed.
Harry laughed with his friend. "Well, you see, there's this girl and I think I'm falling for her."
"Okay. Who is this mystery girl?"
Harry stole a quick glance at Ginny and said jokingly, "Promise not to beat me up?"
Ron laughed. "Of course."
"Well, I think I'm falling for..." Harry gulped and whispered, "Ginny."
"What?!"
"Ron, please, don't kill me. I don't even know if she feels the same way. Don't worry, I promise not to hurt her in any way."
"Well, I am a little shocked but if there had to be someone with her, I'm glad it's you, mate." Ron said, patting Harry on his back.
"Thank goodness." Harry breathed a sigh of relief. In all truth, he did not know how Ron would accept that.
"Don't worry, mate. I'll hook you up." Ron said and laughed.
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Hermione was finished eating and said goodbye to Ginny.
"Hey Gin, I'm going to go. I think you should talk to him. Maybe he feels the same way."
"Okay, Hermione. Thanks for your help. I want to tell him and someday, hopefully one day soon, I'll tell him. Goodnight." Ginny said.
"Goodnight, Gin. Sweet dreams." Hermione replied as Ginny smiled. Hermione started back to her common room. She glanced over at the Slytherin table and noticed Draco was gone. 'He's probably sleeping by now.' She thought. She was on her way to her room but then decided to take a walk outside. It was mid-March so it wasn't that cold. It was actually nice outside. It was a beautiful night and a light breeze blew. She walked to her usual spot near the lake which was hidden from the outside. It was where she and Draco met sometimes. There was a willow tree and a bench beneath it. She sat down and hugged her knees. She then began to think about Harry, Ginny, and most of all Draco.
"Fancy meeting you here, Granger." A familiar voice said behind her.
She jumped at the sound but then quickly relaxed because she recognized that voice. "Draco." She whispered and closed her eyes. When she opened them, Draco was sitting beside her. He put his arms around her and she got comfortable laying on him. She felt so safe in his arms and she wished this moment would last forever. "Draco." She whispered again. He pulled her up and he lay down on the soft grass. She lay down on her stomach on top of him, resting her head on his chest. Her head raised and fell with each of his breaths. He had his arms around her and held her even tighter.
"Draco, don't ever leave me." Hermione said after a peaceful silence.
"You know I would never, Hermione." Draco replied.
She leaned up and kissed him softly at first but then he deepened it. She pulled away and buried her head into his neck, inwardly smiling.
A/N: Hey everyone! I hope you liked this chapter and I'm so sorry it took me so long. As you know, I was planning to delete this story but I decided not to. I also decided to skip a few years and go into their seventh year. I hope I have explained what has happened in between well. I'm sorry if it is confusing. There was a lot of Hermione and Draco fluff, so I hope you all enjoyed that. I also threw in some Harry and Ginny. This is probably one of the longest chapters I've written. YAY! GO ME! Anyway, I'd like to thank my reviewers.
Jessiebear- Thank you for reviewing my story and not stopping when my story sucked!
LiLblueangel1223- I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for the review!
Rebecca89- Thanks for your review! I promise to check out your story soon!
Dream-Siren- TA DA! What do you think? My chapter sucked, huh? I hope that was enough D/Hr action for you! Thanks for reviewing! I luv ya!
IcyCoolTiger- I think that's your name. (I hope it is.) Thanks for reviewing! Guess what? They're not 15 anymore!
Bridget Jones- Thanks for the review! I hope you had fun looking for everything wrong in my story. I wonder why you continue to read it if it is so horribly written. Sorry to hear you feel that way. Now tell me, what's wrong with this chapter?
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Excuse me if I have spelling or grammar mistakes. After all, I'm not perfect.
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Also, don't forget to review all the other great stories out there. They deserve reviews too because they're probably better written than this story.
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ScRibBLrOfDrEaMs