Hey. I'm back. Sorry I haven't updated in more than 6 months. I got a really bad flame and then I had a lull where I only got two reviews for each chapter I put up. That put me off writing for a while but now I'm back. I just posted two chapters several weeks ago and got a great response. I'm hoping to keep it up.

Mystic- Yah right

Sush. Sorry this chapters so short but I just wanted something up so my friends would stop bugging me.

Mystic- Like that would ever happen.

No it won't. I've also got review responses at the bottom. So I hope you enjoy and review.

Disclaimer- Don't own anyone here. BASED of my life though.

THE WAR

It was lunch again and the girls were late as usual. Sitting down at the same table as the other day they all pilled tier stuff on one side of the table.

"so what's for lunch today?" Michelle asked looking around at who was sitting where.

"Um… pasta and mozzarella sticks." Kate replied grabbing some mozzarella sticks.

"Hmmm… what to choose?" Lily looked for a moment before grabbing some mozzarella sticks. Taking a seat next to Jas who had already gotten her lunch, pasta.]

"So anything new happen today?" Jas asked looking up.

"Nothing you don't know of." Diana said while eating some nachos she got from… somewhere.

"Thanks." Kate said taking a couple for herself.

"Hey get your own." Diana retorted covering her food from the girl sitting next to her.

"Oh I just remembered." Michelle said excitedly "I got an owl from Tyler yesterday."

"You mean 'Tyler' from our old school?" Jas looked at Michelle.

"That's the one. He's moving back and coming to Hogwarts."

"I didn't know he was a wizard." Lily looked at her old friends. They had all gone to the same school before getting their letters informing them of their magic.

"I did." Jas said taking a drink. "Did you find out he was a wizard, 'chelle?"

"Our dad's are friends." Suddenly Peter sat down next to Lily.

"Hi." He said simply.

"Uh Hi." They all looked at him strangely.

"Hey… You wouldn't happen to have a sickle?"

"Why?" Diana asked.

"Because I'm hungry. And you need money to get food at Hogsmead."

"Why don't you ask your friends for money?" Michelle asked.

He looked back at the rest of the Marauders who were fooling around with their food. "Do you really think they would give me money?"

"Uh. Here." Lily dug into her pocket and pulled out a sickle. "Leave."

"Thanks." And he walked of happy.

"That was a bit strange." Jas said and looked up. Matt a Hufflepuff in their year was standing there. "Yes."

"Have any of you have Care of Magical Creatures yet?"

"Nope." Diana said.

"Wait, Jas you have." Michelle looked at their friend who had spaced out again.

"Yah?"

"Did Kettleburn collect the homework?"

"No, when does he?"

"Hey you never know." He said with a shrug and walked back to his table.

"Again very strange." Again Jas turned back to the last minute homework she had to do and the other continued with their conversation about Tyler. Well more like Michelle and Lily continued talking about Tyler with Diana and Kate looking on just a bit confused. Jas realized this and started them of remembering their old school days.

They kept talking for about five minutes until Jas picked her head up to comment on something said and was promptly hit in the back of the head by a bottle cap.

Turing she glared at the marauders who were sitting there with innocent smiles on their faces.

"Sorry we though that would work better than a paper football."

"Watch it." She growled tossing their bottle cap back and turned back around and was promptly hit again.

Spinning around and giving then an evil glare she took the bottle cap and threw it at them hitting Sirius in the face. Just then the bell rang causing them to gather all their stuff.

"Do I have a sign on my back?" Jas asked Lily as she walked out the door with the others.

"No why?"

"'cuz where ever I go people feel the constant urge to throw stuff at me."

The other girls just laughed and went of to class.

~*~*~

Done. Again I apologize for the shortness.

Mystic-Yes you said that already.

Well here are the review responses.

OH and just so you know here is my little rant so you can just skip this first part if you wish.

FandomAvenger

"=D This fic is based on real life, my like actually."

First of all if you're going to quote me please do it properly.

Second where did I ever say that Boys are icky or have cooties. I'm sorry if I said boys are idiots. But you can't mean to say you've never thought that.

Third about my age. As my friends have said I AM 15 Years old and in High School. And did it ever occur to you that this might not have been something that hasn't happened recently. I was 13 when I joined FF.net about a year and a half ago and I happen to have plenty of people who enjoy my stories.

All this happened my Freshman year in High School. So what if I had some very immature people in my class.


Another thing is that I always believed a Mary-Sue is someone put into a story who is generally perfect. Not a Self insertion per say. I have the opinion that the best kinds of writings are the ones that are at least loosely based on the author's life so that they know what they're writing about.

I also might point out that not everything I write actually happened and if they did it might not have happened in that particular order. I really feel sorry for you since you seem to have no respect for other people's creativity. I'm sorry if I enjoy writing as a hobby. I never claimed grammar or spelling to be my forte but I was hoping to get some helpful criticism. I would have not minded so much if you pointed some mistakes in my plot of spelling or grammar mistakes. But the way you just went all and out and just said my fic sucked was not in the spirit of FF.net community.

*END of RANT*

Now that I've gotten that out of my system the other responses.

Liza (aka Michelle)

Hehe. If you thought that first part was good I figure it can only get better.

deeegoalie

Yay. For lunch and adjectives

Kari aka Kate/Kara

Woops Sorry bout that name thing… Did I ever fix that… Must check that later.

coco butter-fly

Thanks for the review

Meg

Yay now the whole gang's reviewed. Here's the next part

Well that's all for now. Until my friend nag me into writing the next part. Review!!!!