Beaner: Ok I can understand why you would call Paige a Mary Sue. With the
being good at hockey but just wait and you'll see the other side! I know
how that can get annoying though because I was reading this other
fanfiction and this OC is a true blue Mary Sue I mean she was accepted by
all of the Ducks in like two hours. That pissed me off. Oh and Joey Potter
from Dawson's Creek? She is a Mary Sue as well! Err! But thank you so much
for your review! It's good to know that if I write a bad chapter or two (or
make an annoying character) you will still read on!
Banksiebabe99: Thanks for your review!!!
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ At the mall Julie and Portman turned to see Adam walking towards them. Julie pulled farther away from Portman and waved at Adam who smiled back. "Hey Cake eater," Portman greeted 'Of course he has to show up now' he thought with dismay.
"Hi Portman" Adam said 'It's a good thing that I showed up now' he congratulated himself.
He looked at Julie with a sympathetic look and asked, "How are you?"
"I'm great" she lied
"That's good" Adam smiled "So you got your supplies?"
"Yeah," she held up her plastic bag. Cindy walked over and shot Julie an evil glare.
"Hi Julie' she sneered
"Hi" she said awkwardly 'What did I do to her?' she wondered
"Oh, hi Adam" she absent mindedly
"Hey Cindy" he greeted with a smirk even though he despised her. But as I said before Adam would never say it. He was a good boy. : )
"So you were just telling me how you single handedly won the game" Cindy flirted as she inched closer to Portman.
"You won the game? What about us, as in the rest of the team?" Julie asked angrily.
"I . . .Well . . ." Portman stuttered
"Yeah Portman" said only he wasn't as mad as Julie. Actually he was happy that she was pissed at Portman. It was the perfect chance to comfort her after she stormed off.
As if on cue Julie scoffed "Whatever" and walked away followed by Adam. *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ Luis and Alice were at the same coffee shop they were last time.
"Two hundred and one, two hundred and two, tow hundred and three . . .' Luis counted the ceiling tiles in his head.
"The love was odd," the poet on the stage droned on.
'two hundred and five . . .'
"The love was older then time'
'two hundred and six . . .'
"I knew that she saw the love . . ."
'two hundred and seven . . .'
"reflected in the pond."
'two hundred and eight . . .' *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
At Eden Hall . . . "This is the trophy room," Charlie said as he opened the door to let Paige in.
"Impressive' she gasped as walked into the center of the room and turned around slowly absorbing what she saw. The shelves were filled with trophies and pictures of winning teams behind clear glass. The walls were covered with different banners of all sorts of sports: cross country, soccer, tennis (hee hee), volleyball, swimming . . .
She went over to one of the cases and laughed, "There are even academic awards, check out the spelling bee trophy."
He walked over and frowned "I never noticed this one before."
"This school is really into winning isn't it?" she asked moving away from one case and headed to the other one on the other side of the room.
"It defiantly is," he answered as he looked closer at the picture of the Spelling Bee champ.
"So, this is the Varsity hockey team?" she pointed to a picture of a bunch of jocks in Eden Hall jackets holding up the trophy that was beside the frame holding the joyous jocks.
'Those are the meatheads" he looked at the picture and a look of hate came to his face and Paige noticed this.
"I'm guessing the two hockey teams don't get along"
"Let's just say there was an incident with fire ants" he smiled moving away from the source of his hatred.
"This certainly a lot of pressure" she groaned as she glanced at all of the trophies and banners one last time then quickly exited the room.
"Are you ok?" Charlie asked closing the door behind him.
"Nothing," she gave him a faint smile "I'm guessing this isn't the end of the tour?"
"Nope, onto the golf course"
"They even have a golf course?" Paige asked in aw.
" No I'm just messing with you. Eden Hall isn't that rich." She pushed him to thank him for his little joke. *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ In one of the many science rooms at Eden Hall . . . "No Dwayne for the last time you can't see the positive or negative charges through a microscope" Ken explained frustrated
"Sorry Kenny I forgot" Dwayne apologized and stepped away from the microscope.
Averman was standing on one of the desks and twirling a mobile of the solar system with his hand. "Dwayne if you really want to understand electricity stand out side in a storm with a lighting rod" Averman said. Goldberg laughed from his spot in the teacher's chair which he was spinning in. The science teacher who was required to watch them while they were in a classroom when outside of school hours was no where to be seen. He had mumbled something about coffee and not fooling around and then left the four boys alone.
"Could you guys pay attention, at least Dwayne is trying" Kenny pleaded as Dwayne beamed with pride from what he thought was a compliment.
"I would K-man but electricity is so boring" Averman complained taking his attention away from the mobile to look at Kenny just to have Neptune hit him in the back of his head.
"Yeah I am never going to use this" Goldberg said.
"You're going to use this to keep yourself on the team. You still need a C average," Kenny pointed out.
"Thank the goldness of hay that Bombay is here so we don't need a B average or above anymore" Dwayne thanked.
"I hear that Tex" Goldberg agreed standing up dizzily from spinning.
"So you aren't upset with him for keeping the Cat as first line goalie?" Averman asked as he rubbed the back of his head.
"I'm getting used to being second best. And being a defensemen isn't that bad," Goldberg said grasping the table trying to make the room stop spiraling. *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ 'two hundred and twenty four. . .'
"The next poet is going to be Jerry with his poems called 'Puppies'"
'two hundred and twenty five. . .'
"Ok hi I'm Jerry"
'two hundred and twenty six' *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Connie and Guy were arguing at Willy's
"The Green Lantern is so much cooler than Spiderman" Guy said as the pizza was placed on their table.
"No way" Connie picked up a piece of pizza and shook salt on it "the Green Lantern can't climb up walls."
"No but he can make a green bubble that he can go into and then go up farther then the building" said biting into his own peace of pizza.
"He doesn't have a catchy theme song," Connie rebutted putting more salt on her pizza.
"So Superman's theme song isn't catchy and he can kick any superhero's butt."
"Fine but if you take away Green Lantern's ring he's powerless" Connie smirked finally putting down the salt and diving into her meal.
"If Spiderman wasn't bitten by that spider then he would just be a two bit photographer' Guy pointed out
"Spiderman has spider sense and Green Lantern doesn't" Connie went on *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ Russ was walking to Felicia's dorm. He stopped in front of her door smelt his black button up shirt. He rearranged his belt on his blue jeans. Lastly he checked his breath. Satisfied he knocked on the door.
A pretty black girl answered the door. Her hair was in braids she was wearing a pink dress, matching cardigan, knee high boots and a scowl. "Who's Chloe?" she asked obviously up set "I heard your friends talking about spending all of your time with her"
"Oh no it's not what you think," Russ said and used his most charming smile trying to calm her down.
"Then what is it?" she asked
"It's my chemistry textbook" Russ explained
"You really think that I would believe that?" she growled
"Hey you can ask anyone of my friends. I just named my book. You know a joke" he tried his 'charming' smile again.
"Ok I will," she slammed the door before Russ could enter. 'What is that girl doing now?' he turned and sat down on the floor outside of her door. Seconds latter she opened the door and looked down to where Russ was sitting and confirmed, "You were telling the truth I just called Fulton"
"Great then are you ready for our date?" he beamed
"Yes as long as you never name another one for your textbooks again and stop calling your chemistry Chloe," she ordered.
"Get ride of Chloe?" he frowned *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
'two hundred and forty eight . . .'
"They are warm" Jerry said drama filled his voice
'two hundred and forty nine . . .'
"They are many different colors"
'two hundred and fifty . . .' *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ Fulton skated down the sidewalk his hockey stick and bag full of pucks in tow. He turned into his alley and stood up his beat up old trunk. He skated farther back into his alley he spilled the pucks onto the ground and raised his hockey stick waist high and hit the puck with all of his strength. He heard a crash and cringed and fired again just to hear another crash. He smiled 'It's good to get back to my roots'. *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ "Julie wait up!" Adam called
"Oh sorry Adam" she slowed down " I didn't know that you were behind me"
"That's alright. So where are you headed?" he asked
"As far as I get from that . . . that . . . dill hole" she looked angrily from the direction that they came from.
"Hey calm down Jules. He was just trying to get a girl to like him," he explained
"By taking all of the credit?"
"Why are you so upset about this?"
"I don't know . . . I just didn't think that he was that shallow," she sighed. Adam looked at her, put his hands in his corduroy pants' pockets and glanced around the mall. He spotted a movie sign that read 'Can't Hardly Wait: Playing Today'
"Hey do you want to go see a movie?" he pointed to the movie poster.
"Yeah" she perked up "I love that movie I remember seeing it when it first came out in theatres in Main"
They both headed for the entrance. *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ At Eden Hall the tour was going strong.
"This is the Dean's office" Charlie pointed to the door labeled 'Dean's Office'
"So I see. But still good to know where it is. I have to see him tomorrow," she looked up, down and around the hall. Walked up to the doors beside on each side of the Dean's door.
"What you doing?" Charlie chuckled
"Making a mental note," Paige looked up at the ceiling.
"You're making a mental note of the ceiling?" Charlie asked not being able to lose the smile on his face.
"Of course I'm trying to absorb all I can" she stopped walking around and looked at Charlie.
"So why do you have to see the Dean? Did you get yourself in trouble already?" Charlie teased
"I wish that was it. I have to get my schedule, textbooks, rulebook, agenda, locker number, lock and then I'm going to have an hour with all of my teachers so they can test me on what I know then tell me what I need to know so they can test me again at the end of the week" she looked totally overwhelmed.
"I'm sure you'll do fine" he tried to reassure her.
"You have too much faith. But thanks" *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ 'two hundred and fifty one . . . '
"Sand" the "artist" hit her drum with her hands
'two hundred and fifty two . . .'
"Hot" she hit the drum again
'two hundred and fifty three . . .'
"So hot" she knocked on the floor she was sitting on
'two hundred and four . . .' Luis finished counting the tiles and a look of horror came to his face. 'What am I going to do now?' *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ End of Chapter Ok first of all, sorry about chapter 7 I know that one kind of sucked but I'm trying to get to something but it takes time. There are little things that you need to put in. Anyway this one had all of the characters so I hope you enjoyed!
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ At the mall Julie and Portman turned to see Adam walking towards them. Julie pulled farther away from Portman and waved at Adam who smiled back. "Hey Cake eater," Portman greeted 'Of course he has to show up now' he thought with dismay.
"Hi Portman" Adam said 'It's a good thing that I showed up now' he congratulated himself.
He looked at Julie with a sympathetic look and asked, "How are you?"
"I'm great" she lied
"That's good" Adam smiled "So you got your supplies?"
"Yeah," she held up her plastic bag. Cindy walked over and shot Julie an evil glare.
"Hi Julie' she sneered
"Hi" she said awkwardly 'What did I do to her?' she wondered
"Oh, hi Adam" she absent mindedly
"Hey Cindy" he greeted with a smirk even though he despised her. But as I said before Adam would never say it. He was a good boy. : )
"So you were just telling me how you single handedly won the game" Cindy flirted as she inched closer to Portman.
"You won the game? What about us, as in the rest of the team?" Julie asked angrily.
"I . . .Well . . ." Portman stuttered
"Yeah Portman" said only he wasn't as mad as Julie. Actually he was happy that she was pissed at Portman. It was the perfect chance to comfort her after she stormed off.
As if on cue Julie scoffed "Whatever" and walked away followed by Adam. *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ Luis and Alice were at the same coffee shop they were last time.
"Two hundred and one, two hundred and two, tow hundred and three . . .' Luis counted the ceiling tiles in his head.
"The love was odd," the poet on the stage droned on.
'two hundred and five . . .'
"The love was older then time'
'two hundred and six . . .'
"I knew that she saw the love . . ."
'two hundred and seven . . .'
"reflected in the pond."
'two hundred and eight . . .' *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
At Eden Hall . . . "This is the trophy room," Charlie said as he opened the door to let Paige in.
"Impressive' she gasped as walked into the center of the room and turned around slowly absorbing what she saw. The shelves were filled with trophies and pictures of winning teams behind clear glass. The walls were covered with different banners of all sorts of sports: cross country, soccer, tennis (hee hee), volleyball, swimming . . .
She went over to one of the cases and laughed, "There are even academic awards, check out the spelling bee trophy."
He walked over and frowned "I never noticed this one before."
"This school is really into winning isn't it?" she asked moving away from one case and headed to the other one on the other side of the room.
"It defiantly is," he answered as he looked closer at the picture of the Spelling Bee champ.
"So, this is the Varsity hockey team?" she pointed to a picture of a bunch of jocks in Eden Hall jackets holding up the trophy that was beside the frame holding the joyous jocks.
'Those are the meatheads" he looked at the picture and a look of hate came to his face and Paige noticed this.
"I'm guessing the two hockey teams don't get along"
"Let's just say there was an incident with fire ants" he smiled moving away from the source of his hatred.
"This certainly a lot of pressure" she groaned as she glanced at all of the trophies and banners one last time then quickly exited the room.
"Are you ok?" Charlie asked closing the door behind him.
"Nothing," she gave him a faint smile "I'm guessing this isn't the end of the tour?"
"Nope, onto the golf course"
"They even have a golf course?" Paige asked in aw.
" No I'm just messing with you. Eden Hall isn't that rich." She pushed him to thank him for his little joke. *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ In one of the many science rooms at Eden Hall . . . "No Dwayne for the last time you can't see the positive or negative charges through a microscope" Ken explained frustrated
"Sorry Kenny I forgot" Dwayne apologized and stepped away from the microscope.
Averman was standing on one of the desks and twirling a mobile of the solar system with his hand. "Dwayne if you really want to understand electricity stand out side in a storm with a lighting rod" Averman said. Goldberg laughed from his spot in the teacher's chair which he was spinning in. The science teacher who was required to watch them while they were in a classroom when outside of school hours was no where to be seen. He had mumbled something about coffee and not fooling around and then left the four boys alone.
"Could you guys pay attention, at least Dwayne is trying" Kenny pleaded as Dwayne beamed with pride from what he thought was a compliment.
"I would K-man but electricity is so boring" Averman complained taking his attention away from the mobile to look at Kenny just to have Neptune hit him in the back of his head.
"Yeah I am never going to use this" Goldberg said.
"You're going to use this to keep yourself on the team. You still need a C average," Kenny pointed out.
"Thank the goldness of hay that Bombay is here so we don't need a B average or above anymore" Dwayne thanked.
"I hear that Tex" Goldberg agreed standing up dizzily from spinning.
"So you aren't upset with him for keeping the Cat as first line goalie?" Averman asked as he rubbed the back of his head.
"I'm getting used to being second best. And being a defensemen isn't that bad," Goldberg said grasping the table trying to make the room stop spiraling. *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ 'two hundred and twenty four. . .'
"The next poet is going to be Jerry with his poems called 'Puppies'"
'two hundred and twenty five. . .'
"Ok hi I'm Jerry"
'two hundred and twenty six' *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Connie and Guy were arguing at Willy's
"The Green Lantern is so much cooler than Spiderman" Guy said as the pizza was placed on their table.
"No way" Connie picked up a piece of pizza and shook salt on it "the Green Lantern can't climb up walls."
"No but he can make a green bubble that he can go into and then go up farther then the building" said biting into his own peace of pizza.
"He doesn't have a catchy theme song," Connie rebutted putting more salt on her pizza.
"So Superman's theme song isn't catchy and he can kick any superhero's butt."
"Fine but if you take away Green Lantern's ring he's powerless" Connie smirked finally putting down the salt and diving into her meal.
"If Spiderman wasn't bitten by that spider then he would just be a two bit photographer' Guy pointed out
"Spiderman has spider sense and Green Lantern doesn't" Connie went on *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ Russ was walking to Felicia's dorm. He stopped in front of her door smelt his black button up shirt. He rearranged his belt on his blue jeans. Lastly he checked his breath. Satisfied he knocked on the door.
A pretty black girl answered the door. Her hair was in braids she was wearing a pink dress, matching cardigan, knee high boots and a scowl. "Who's Chloe?" she asked obviously up set "I heard your friends talking about spending all of your time with her"
"Oh no it's not what you think," Russ said and used his most charming smile trying to calm her down.
"Then what is it?" she asked
"It's my chemistry textbook" Russ explained
"You really think that I would believe that?" she growled
"Hey you can ask anyone of my friends. I just named my book. You know a joke" he tried his 'charming' smile again.
"Ok I will," she slammed the door before Russ could enter. 'What is that girl doing now?' he turned and sat down on the floor outside of her door. Seconds latter she opened the door and looked down to where Russ was sitting and confirmed, "You were telling the truth I just called Fulton"
"Great then are you ready for our date?" he beamed
"Yes as long as you never name another one for your textbooks again and stop calling your chemistry Chloe," she ordered.
"Get ride of Chloe?" he frowned *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
'two hundred and forty eight . . .'
"They are warm" Jerry said drama filled his voice
'two hundred and forty nine . . .'
"They are many different colors"
'two hundred and fifty . . .' *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ Fulton skated down the sidewalk his hockey stick and bag full of pucks in tow. He turned into his alley and stood up his beat up old trunk. He skated farther back into his alley he spilled the pucks onto the ground and raised his hockey stick waist high and hit the puck with all of his strength. He heard a crash and cringed and fired again just to hear another crash. He smiled 'It's good to get back to my roots'. *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ "Julie wait up!" Adam called
"Oh sorry Adam" she slowed down " I didn't know that you were behind me"
"That's alright. So where are you headed?" he asked
"As far as I get from that . . . that . . . dill hole" she looked angrily from the direction that they came from.
"Hey calm down Jules. He was just trying to get a girl to like him," he explained
"By taking all of the credit?"
"Why are you so upset about this?"
"I don't know . . . I just didn't think that he was that shallow," she sighed. Adam looked at her, put his hands in his corduroy pants' pockets and glanced around the mall. He spotted a movie sign that read 'Can't Hardly Wait: Playing Today'
"Hey do you want to go see a movie?" he pointed to the movie poster.
"Yeah" she perked up "I love that movie I remember seeing it when it first came out in theatres in Main"
They both headed for the entrance. *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ At Eden Hall the tour was going strong.
"This is the Dean's office" Charlie pointed to the door labeled 'Dean's Office'
"So I see. But still good to know where it is. I have to see him tomorrow," she looked up, down and around the hall. Walked up to the doors beside on each side of the Dean's door.
"What you doing?" Charlie chuckled
"Making a mental note," Paige looked up at the ceiling.
"You're making a mental note of the ceiling?" Charlie asked not being able to lose the smile on his face.
"Of course I'm trying to absorb all I can" she stopped walking around and looked at Charlie.
"So why do you have to see the Dean? Did you get yourself in trouble already?" Charlie teased
"I wish that was it. I have to get my schedule, textbooks, rulebook, agenda, locker number, lock and then I'm going to have an hour with all of my teachers so they can test me on what I know then tell me what I need to know so they can test me again at the end of the week" she looked totally overwhelmed.
"I'm sure you'll do fine" he tried to reassure her.
"You have too much faith. But thanks" *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ 'two hundred and fifty one . . . '
"Sand" the "artist" hit her drum with her hands
'two hundred and fifty two . . .'
"Hot" she hit the drum again
'two hundred and fifty three . . .'
"So hot" she knocked on the floor she was sitting on
'two hundred and four . . .' Luis finished counting the tiles and a look of horror came to his face. 'What am I going to do now?' *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ End of Chapter Ok first of all, sorry about chapter 7 I know that one kind of sucked but I'm trying to get to something but it takes time. There are little things that you need to put in. Anyway this one had all of the characters so I hope you enjoyed!