Okay, this is the first chapter since I had to repost. I'm really sorry
about that, but the Now Reviews were too long, and it was taken off by the
site. Anyway, as I told you in the new summary, add 174 reviews to the
number at the bottom, and you have accurate number of reviews.
Okay, this story, I'm just gonna say it now, will create another realm. A realm of Vampires and the Undead. Not alive, like our realm, not dead, like spirit world, and not demons like the Makai. No. This is a completely different realm, with a ruler named Duzell. (I got his name from Vampire Game by Judal. Very good manga. You should read it.) Now, Chappie ummmmmm.............. 10!
HANDS ON DREAMING
You went to bed that night more tired than you had ever been in your life. 'You hurt in places you didn't even know you had.' You r first impression of Genkai as a kindly old lady was wrong beyond all rational belief. She was an evil slave driver. Poses you hadn't even known were possible to GUMBI, let alone something who's body structure was relatively human (you're still not quite sure what you are), Grandma had forced you into. Either by harsh prodding, excruciatingly long patience, or physically taking your limbs and pushing them into position, she had gotten you into most of the poses. OOOWW. She had told you to stretch before sleeping, and you had learned to trust her judgment. But first, you wanted a hot shower. You took your Dove shower stuff out of your bag, and ran the water. It felt so good. You rubbed yourself raw, getting off all the sweat and dirt of the day. You stepped out of they shower, dripping, and wrapped one of the fluffy black towels around you, then put one around your hair. You sighted. The shower had put the worst of the aches in their place. You changed into your PJs, then did some simple stretches, and fell into bed. Ow. That was a mistake. A bruise on your back had been smushed when you did that. You groaned and rolled onto your stomach. That was also a mistake. Lying on your sides wasn't good either. You sat there, and decided to show off you new skills to the Orlando Bloom posters on the wall. You concentrated. Getting yourself off the ground was the hardest. You turned red and sweated. A wind picked up in your room. Finally, your body was lifted off your bed, and you hung three inches above the mattress. NOW you could relax. You had problems getting up and down, but once you were up, you could stay there. You praised Genkai silently. Looks like your training was paying off. Go levitation! There you drifted off to sleep, thinking about how many calories you burning doing this.
HIEI'S POV
I felt an odd power pulsing through the temple. It was definitely not human, or demon. It felt black. Completely black. It left a hollow feeling in my stomach as it rushed past me. It was so immensely joyously painful, if that makes any sense at all. It was something I NEVER wanted to feel attain. I opened the jagan, to see where the power was coming from. Reis's room. Oh damn.
OUT OF HIEI'S THOUGHTS
REI'S POV
I was in a place. Alone. It was dark, but light. I was flying. Not the levitation I learned, this was beyond my beginner skills. I was floating so high up, I couldn't see the ground. If there was a ground here... Also, I could move. Zoom this way and that. Everything around me felt so, light. Technically, I couldn't see that there was anything around me, just nothingness, but the nothingness was so light. Everything was floating, floating, and now, swirling. Now fast dizzy swirling, but slow, pleasant swirling. The colors flashed, and I was in a different place. I don't know how I could tell, I just knew. Here, the nothingness floated and swirled also. Colors, and another place, and swirling and floating. This went on and on, and it was so nice.
HIEI'S POV
I sprinted to Rei's room, and threw open the door. "What the hell?" Genkai, Yusuke, and Kuwabara came running. We stared. Rei was floating. So was everything else in her room. Then all the stuff started swirling around her, and everything fell with a crash as a portal swallowed Rei up. Her power popped up in the kitchen. Once again, she made everything float, circle, and crash. We followed her to 2 bathrooms, the living room, Yusuke's walk in closet, and we finally caught up with her outside, in the back, where she was floating peacefully.
"Um... do we wake her up now?" asked Yusuke.
"I don't know!" snapped Genkai "I've never seen anything like this before!"
We all crept closer. Her mouth opened, and we watched as her canine teeth elongated, and as the black of her tank top with a sleeping puppy on it ripped, as wings grew. Black ones. There weren't any feathers, there was just smooth, glossy surface. There came a howl, like one from a bobcat, or a dying animal, and the wings and teeth retracted, and Rei fell to the ground. There she started to snore lightly. *sweatdrops all around!*
"Um *blink blink* what now?" asked the Detective.
"Hiei is going to take Rei back to her room, and we are all going to sleep" Genkai replied.
So I picked up Rei. She looked so peaceful. You would never guess that this thing had looked evil one minute ago. I brought her to her room, which looked like a bomb had hit it. Or, more accurately, a tornado. I deposited her on her bed, which was on the wrong side of the room, and drew the covers around her. I don't know why, but I wanted to watch her, so is sat on the window seat in my regular position. There, I fell asleep
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I apologize again for having to repost. I'm sorry. REVIEW NOW too bad I can't do my three pages of them any more. Tear tear. Oh well, I want to keep this story.
Okay, this story, I'm just gonna say it now, will create another realm. A realm of Vampires and the Undead. Not alive, like our realm, not dead, like spirit world, and not demons like the Makai. No. This is a completely different realm, with a ruler named Duzell. (I got his name from Vampire Game by Judal. Very good manga. You should read it.) Now, Chappie ummmmmm.............. 10!
HANDS ON DREAMING
You went to bed that night more tired than you had ever been in your life. 'You hurt in places you didn't even know you had.' You r first impression of Genkai as a kindly old lady was wrong beyond all rational belief. She was an evil slave driver. Poses you hadn't even known were possible to GUMBI, let alone something who's body structure was relatively human (you're still not quite sure what you are), Grandma had forced you into. Either by harsh prodding, excruciatingly long patience, or physically taking your limbs and pushing them into position, she had gotten you into most of the poses. OOOWW. She had told you to stretch before sleeping, and you had learned to trust her judgment. But first, you wanted a hot shower. You took your Dove shower stuff out of your bag, and ran the water. It felt so good. You rubbed yourself raw, getting off all the sweat and dirt of the day. You stepped out of they shower, dripping, and wrapped one of the fluffy black towels around you, then put one around your hair. You sighted. The shower had put the worst of the aches in their place. You changed into your PJs, then did some simple stretches, and fell into bed. Ow. That was a mistake. A bruise on your back had been smushed when you did that. You groaned and rolled onto your stomach. That was also a mistake. Lying on your sides wasn't good either. You sat there, and decided to show off you new skills to the Orlando Bloom posters on the wall. You concentrated. Getting yourself off the ground was the hardest. You turned red and sweated. A wind picked up in your room. Finally, your body was lifted off your bed, and you hung three inches above the mattress. NOW you could relax. You had problems getting up and down, but once you were up, you could stay there. You praised Genkai silently. Looks like your training was paying off. Go levitation! There you drifted off to sleep, thinking about how many calories you burning doing this.
HIEI'S POV
I felt an odd power pulsing through the temple. It was definitely not human, or demon. It felt black. Completely black. It left a hollow feeling in my stomach as it rushed past me. It was so immensely joyously painful, if that makes any sense at all. It was something I NEVER wanted to feel attain. I opened the jagan, to see where the power was coming from. Reis's room. Oh damn.
OUT OF HIEI'S THOUGHTS
REI'S POV
I was in a place. Alone. It was dark, but light. I was flying. Not the levitation I learned, this was beyond my beginner skills. I was floating so high up, I couldn't see the ground. If there was a ground here... Also, I could move. Zoom this way and that. Everything around me felt so, light. Technically, I couldn't see that there was anything around me, just nothingness, but the nothingness was so light. Everything was floating, floating, and now, swirling. Now fast dizzy swirling, but slow, pleasant swirling. The colors flashed, and I was in a different place. I don't know how I could tell, I just knew. Here, the nothingness floated and swirled also. Colors, and another place, and swirling and floating. This went on and on, and it was so nice.
HIEI'S POV
I sprinted to Rei's room, and threw open the door. "What the hell?" Genkai, Yusuke, and Kuwabara came running. We stared. Rei was floating. So was everything else in her room. Then all the stuff started swirling around her, and everything fell with a crash as a portal swallowed Rei up. Her power popped up in the kitchen. Once again, she made everything float, circle, and crash. We followed her to 2 bathrooms, the living room, Yusuke's walk in closet, and we finally caught up with her outside, in the back, where she was floating peacefully.
"Um... do we wake her up now?" asked Yusuke.
"I don't know!" snapped Genkai "I've never seen anything like this before!"
We all crept closer. Her mouth opened, and we watched as her canine teeth elongated, and as the black of her tank top with a sleeping puppy on it ripped, as wings grew. Black ones. There weren't any feathers, there was just smooth, glossy surface. There came a howl, like one from a bobcat, or a dying animal, and the wings and teeth retracted, and Rei fell to the ground. There she started to snore lightly. *sweatdrops all around!*
"Um *blink blink* what now?" asked the Detective.
"Hiei is going to take Rei back to her room, and we are all going to sleep" Genkai replied.
So I picked up Rei. She looked so peaceful. You would never guess that this thing had looked evil one minute ago. I brought her to her room, which looked like a bomb had hit it. Or, more accurately, a tornado. I deposited her on her bed, which was on the wrong side of the room, and drew the covers around her. I don't know why, but I wanted to watch her, so is sat on the window seat in my regular position. There, I fell asleep
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I apologize again for having to repost. I'm sorry. REVIEW NOW too bad I can't do my three pages of them any more. Tear tear. Oh well, I want to keep this story.