Sa: Wow! I'm so happy! I got reviews! Lol. In the first chapter, I forgot
to give credit to Kitty, she helped me come up with some of the sentences.
CoughTheBeginningCough. Lol I couldn't think of anything so I asked her for
help. I couldn't have started this fic with out you Amanda! ^-^`
Reveal Yourself
Chapter Two: Running Away
By: Syaorons angel
'Were am I?' I was running, but I didn't know where too. All of a sudden, I saw him. Oh the last person I wanted to see! I panicked and started running faster. As fast as I could. Even though I was running, I wasn't getting anywhere! I just kept going closer to him. Finally, I ran out of breath, and collapsed. He started walking toward me, with that evil smile that was way too familiar. Tears found their way into my eyes. It was burning; wanting to fall, I couldn't hold them back, so I let them fall. He was even closer now. I started shaking violently. He was merely inches from me now. That gleam that was in his eyes, they were pure evil (Not Lord Voldemort evil just evil.get it? Lol). He was right in front of me now, chuckling. He raised his hand, and with a sudden movement, I was about to receive the blow. But I didn't, but I continued to shake. I opened my eyes to find Malfoy shaking me.
"Wake up! Wake up, Granger!"
I slapped his hands away, not wanting him to touch me. I didn't like it when people touched me, even if it was just a pat or anything like that.
"Finally! Do you know how long I was trying to wake you!? Anyway, that's not the point. What was, was that you were shaking violently, what the heck was wrong with you!? Are you demon-possessed?!" Draco sneered.
"...."
"What's wrong? Too taken up with my charms?" I heard him chuckle to himself.
"......."
"Bloody heck! Why aren't you talking?!"
I did only what I could do. Stare. I stared back into his eyes of grayish blue color. They were fascinating. One minute they're blue, the next minute, they're gray. But usually, they were what I saw, grayish blue pools of liquid.
"Fine, DON'T talk to me. I'm only in here because Professor Dumbledor (spelling?) already met with me and told me to inform you. You are the new Head Girl."
~*~
"What do you think is wrong with Hermione?" Harry asked.
"I don't know." Ron answered.
"......"
"Ginny?"
"Huh..what? Sorry Ron what were you two saying?"
"We were just talking about Hermione. She seems really out of it. She usually, at least greats us.." Harry trailed off.
"I don't know what could possibly be wrong. I mean, maybe it's something she's going through.." Ginny trailed. She smirked and chuckled under her breath. 'Probably PMS'.(A/N: Sorry I just HAD to do it)
"What are you chuckling about over there Ginny?" Ron asked looking suspicious.
"Oh nothing oh brother of mine," she smiled sweetly.
Ron eyed her while Harry was just confused. Soon Ron thought nothing of it, and went into a game of Exploding Snap with Harry, then they talked about...Quiditch.(Lol, I have no Idea what Exploding Snap is! Lol I just read it in some fics lol). Ginny became quite bored, and excused herself. Of course the guys were so into their conversation, they didn't even noticed that she left. She decided that she would visit some other students, mainly Gryfindors (spelling?) that she had befriended over the years, and I few Hufflepuffs and Ravenclaw here and there.
~*~
I saw her eyes widen a tad bit, but then went back to normal. I expected her to at least ask who the Head Boy was or at least smile; but no, she didn't, she just kept staring. I looked into her eyes of cinnamon brown, they were the same as before and just as beautiful. The only thing, they had lost their gleam. When I stared into them, it were as if they had no soul left. I wonder what could have happened to her.
"And of course, I'm head boy." I gloated, but expected some retort from her. I smirked at her, hoping to get her annoyed enough to get her to talk. Nothing. She didn't say anything. She just looked out the window again, with that distant look in her eyes.
~*~
I know that was short. I just couldn't help it. I wanted to get it out now cause Achievement tests are going to be going on for a whole week (which means I won't be updating anytime soon). I know it wasn't much of a cliffy either, but I kind of have writer's block at the same time. Also, I'm depressed..I don't know why. Plus, I have to study for a test so yeah. Please R+R! Constructive criticism please! I think writing a fic about Hermione not talking at all will be very hard, so I might change the plot a bit if it becomes too hard. I will try to continue with the plot that I have now until it just becomes too hard.
Thanks to all of you who reviewed! I have never gotten that many reviews in such a short amount of time. It makes me so happy! Lol. You guys are the reason I write! Thanks again!
~ Syaorons angel
Reveal Yourself
Chapter Two: Running Away
By: Syaorons angel
'Were am I?' I was running, but I didn't know where too. All of a sudden, I saw him. Oh the last person I wanted to see! I panicked and started running faster. As fast as I could. Even though I was running, I wasn't getting anywhere! I just kept going closer to him. Finally, I ran out of breath, and collapsed. He started walking toward me, with that evil smile that was way too familiar. Tears found their way into my eyes. It was burning; wanting to fall, I couldn't hold them back, so I let them fall. He was even closer now. I started shaking violently. He was merely inches from me now. That gleam that was in his eyes, they were pure evil (Not Lord Voldemort evil just evil.get it? Lol). He was right in front of me now, chuckling. He raised his hand, and with a sudden movement, I was about to receive the blow. But I didn't, but I continued to shake. I opened my eyes to find Malfoy shaking me.
"Wake up! Wake up, Granger!"
I slapped his hands away, not wanting him to touch me. I didn't like it when people touched me, even if it was just a pat or anything like that.
"Finally! Do you know how long I was trying to wake you!? Anyway, that's not the point. What was, was that you were shaking violently, what the heck was wrong with you!? Are you demon-possessed?!" Draco sneered.
"...."
"What's wrong? Too taken up with my charms?" I heard him chuckle to himself.
"......."
"Bloody heck! Why aren't you talking?!"
I did only what I could do. Stare. I stared back into his eyes of grayish blue color. They were fascinating. One minute they're blue, the next minute, they're gray. But usually, they were what I saw, grayish blue pools of liquid.
"Fine, DON'T talk to me. I'm only in here because Professor Dumbledor (spelling?) already met with me and told me to inform you. You are the new Head Girl."
~*~
"What do you think is wrong with Hermione?" Harry asked.
"I don't know." Ron answered.
"......"
"Ginny?"
"Huh..what? Sorry Ron what were you two saying?"
"We were just talking about Hermione. She seems really out of it. She usually, at least greats us.." Harry trailed off.
"I don't know what could possibly be wrong. I mean, maybe it's something she's going through.." Ginny trailed. She smirked and chuckled under her breath. 'Probably PMS'.(A/N: Sorry I just HAD to do it)
"What are you chuckling about over there Ginny?" Ron asked looking suspicious.
"Oh nothing oh brother of mine," she smiled sweetly.
Ron eyed her while Harry was just confused. Soon Ron thought nothing of it, and went into a game of Exploding Snap with Harry, then they talked about...Quiditch.(Lol, I have no Idea what Exploding Snap is! Lol I just read it in some fics lol). Ginny became quite bored, and excused herself. Of course the guys were so into their conversation, they didn't even noticed that she left. She decided that she would visit some other students, mainly Gryfindors (spelling?) that she had befriended over the years, and I few Hufflepuffs and Ravenclaw here and there.
~*~
I saw her eyes widen a tad bit, but then went back to normal. I expected her to at least ask who the Head Boy was or at least smile; but no, she didn't, she just kept staring. I looked into her eyes of cinnamon brown, they were the same as before and just as beautiful. The only thing, they had lost their gleam. When I stared into them, it were as if they had no soul left. I wonder what could have happened to her.
"And of course, I'm head boy." I gloated, but expected some retort from her. I smirked at her, hoping to get her annoyed enough to get her to talk. Nothing. She didn't say anything. She just looked out the window again, with that distant look in her eyes.
~*~
I know that was short. I just couldn't help it. I wanted to get it out now cause Achievement tests are going to be going on for a whole week (which means I won't be updating anytime soon). I know it wasn't much of a cliffy either, but I kind of have writer's block at the same time. Also, I'm depressed..I don't know why. Plus, I have to study for a test so yeah. Please R+R! Constructive criticism please! I think writing a fic about Hermione not talking at all will be very hard, so I might change the plot a bit if it becomes too hard. I will try to continue with the plot that I have now until it just becomes too hard.
Thanks to all of you who reviewed! I have never gotten that many reviews in such a short amount of time. It makes me so happy! Lol. You guys are the reason I write! Thanks again!
~ Syaorons angel