Wow. It's been forever. I think...about...7, 8 months? Wow. Almost a whole
year. Wow. Let's just say I had a huge writer's block. I probably still
have it but I was thinking, why sit here thinking about your fic when you
could try writing to it? So that's what I'm doing. I know why I have been
on writer's block forever. I started the fic with no plot...that goes to all
my fics. Lol. Well, I'm just going to have to let my fic go with the flow I
guess.
k-magic- as long as you email me when you update I'll make sure to review...and that goes for you too! ^-~
DanishGirl- thanks for the review. Yeah. Everyone always has to ask 'why' lol
Ash Night- thanks for the review. It really helped me. Thanks for your words of wisdom.
Mione-n-Draco4ever- yeah I know my chapters are short. I hope they will be longer in the future.
All Reviewers- Thanks for reviewing...so how about reviewing this chapter too? Please? constructive criticism. Oh and sorry for the lack of better titles...I'm not good at that kind of stuff.
Oh and just letting yall know. My writing might have changed seeing that I wrote this in 7th grade. So...it should be getting better and not the other way around lol.
Reveal Yourself
Chapter 4: Instinct
By Syaoronsangel
~*~ Last time: I can't believe I actually thought that those were soft emotions in his eyes earlier. I thought that he would actually be able to care, have emotions. I turned towards the window again. My eyes started to burn as tears started to form in my eyes. No, I wouldn't cry in front of him! He had already hurt me enough! I couldn't cry, I wouldn't. I still had my pride, and it was probably the only thing I had left. I wouldn't cry. Too late, I had lost, and I brokedown.
~*~
I was in shock as I watched the girl I always thought was strong crying her eyes out. I couldn't believe it. She was just there, across from me. Her body racking with each and every sob. I could just hear the pain in each cry. Many thoughts flew through my mind. I guess I just went with my instinct because I found myself walking across to her. I picked up her small frame and sat down with her on my lap. And there I sat just holding her trying to get her to stop.
~*~
I couldn't hold it in any longer. I just couldn't. For the first time in a long time, I was crying my heart out. Each and every sob was full of pain and sorrow. I was huddled against the window. I realized that I was crying in front of Malfoy but I couldn't help it. I just couldn't stop. As I was still crying I heard his footsteps coming closer. I thought this is it, he's going to hit me senseless until I stop crying. But that wasn't the case. Instead he picked me up and drew me close into his chest. And there I continued to cry.
I started to calm down a bit but I had made his shirt wet with my tears. And I just sat there, on top of his lap clinging onto his shirt gasping for air. I finally was able to calm my breath. But soon darkness claimed me and I drifted.
~*~ In the next compartment:
"What are you thinking about Ron?"
"Just about Hermione Harry. She would tell us what's wrong right?"
"I think that she'll tell us when the time is right."
"Yeah I guess you're right Harry. Up for some Wizards Chess?"
"Ron, you know that you're going to win, what's the point?"
"Come on Harry, you need to work on it anyhow."
"Alright Ron, but just one game."
Five Games later....
"Checkmate"
"Right Ron, there you won again."
"Come on Harry lets play again."
Just then the food trolley (is that the right thing?) came by.
"Harry! I'm starving, let's get some food."
"Saved by the food cart." Harry mumbled under his breath.
"What was that Harry?" Ron managed to get out with his month full of Chocolate frogs.
"Nothing Ron, Nothing."
~*~ Back to Hermione and Draco...
I finally came to and all I could grasp is the smell of cologne. It was a musk smell. I just wanted to inhale it all in. I then realized that I was still on Malfoy's lap and it was dark outside. How long have I been asleep? I tilted my head up and I saw that Malfoy was sleeping too. He looked so peaceful. I then took the time to take in his features.
His hair had changed a bit. It was no longer slicked back with a profuse about of gel. It now hung loosely on his head. He was still pale.......but not as pale as before. It must've been from quiditch. He was also tall and lean, and also had strong arms too. From quiditch also. For some reason it felt right to be in his arms but I knew that it was wrong, really wrong. I mean he is Harry's worst enemy. And here I am, in his arms! There was something really disturbing about that. But it felt so good. Just to be held and feel loved. I snuggled in knowing that when he woke he would just push me to the floor. I was going to savor this moment forever.
~*~
Yeah well I wanted to get this out tonight so I'm ending it now. There isn't a cliffy but those are good once in a while. It's not as long as I hoped it would be either. Lol chapter four and they still aren't at Hogwarts. Wow, I'm making this slow huh? Oh well. Oh and I changed it so that she only talks a little bit...like only when she has to almost. I mean to not talk at all...I know people can do that but it would be hard to write about it and plus it's my fic and I can do whatever I want to mwahahhahaa. Wow. I huge run on but whatever lol. Well since that you stayed to finish this chapter why don't you do me a favor and review? Please? *puppy dog face*
Inu yasha: Why do you bother with that Sa?
Sa: Because it works...
Inu yasha: no it doesn't....
Sa: *puppy dog face* Inu yasha....will you let me pet your ears?...please?
Inu yasha: Oh ...oh...FINE! *Mumbles*
Sa: Te he *pets ears that are oh so soft* XD oh and by the way, if anyone knows how to make words and such in italics, bold, etc. on Microsoft Word please inform me! Thanks for reading! Now...review!
k-magic- as long as you email me when you update I'll make sure to review...and that goes for you too! ^-~
DanishGirl- thanks for the review. Yeah. Everyone always has to ask 'why' lol
Ash Night- thanks for the review. It really helped me. Thanks for your words of wisdom.
Mione-n-Draco4ever- yeah I know my chapters are short. I hope they will be longer in the future.
All Reviewers- Thanks for reviewing...so how about reviewing this chapter too? Please? constructive criticism. Oh and sorry for the lack of better titles...I'm not good at that kind of stuff.
Oh and just letting yall know. My writing might have changed seeing that I wrote this in 7th grade. So...it should be getting better and not the other way around lol.
Reveal Yourself
Chapter 4: Instinct
By Syaoronsangel
~*~ Last time: I can't believe I actually thought that those were soft emotions in his eyes earlier. I thought that he would actually be able to care, have emotions. I turned towards the window again. My eyes started to burn as tears started to form in my eyes. No, I wouldn't cry in front of him! He had already hurt me enough! I couldn't cry, I wouldn't. I still had my pride, and it was probably the only thing I had left. I wouldn't cry. Too late, I had lost, and I brokedown.
~*~
I was in shock as I watched the girl I always thought was strong crying her eyes out. I couldn't believe it. She was just there, across from me. Her body racking with each and every sob. I could just hear the pain in each cry. Many thoughts flew through my mind. I guess I just went with my instinct because I found myself walking across to her. I picked up her small frame and sat down with her on my lap. And there I sat just holding her trying to get her to stop.
~*~
I couldn't hold it in any longer. I just couldn't. For the first time in a long time, I was crying my heart out. Each and every sob was full of pain and sorrow. I was huddled against the window. I realized that I was crying in front of Malfoy but I couldn't help it. I just couldn't stop. As I was still crying I heard his footsteps coming closer. I thought this is it, he's going to hit me senseless until I stop crying. But that wasn't the case. Instead he picked me up and drew me close into his chest. And there I continued to cry.
I started to calm down a bit but I had made his shirt wet with my tears. And I just sat there, on top of his lap clinging onto his shirt gasping for air. I finally was able to calm my breath. But soon darkness claimed me and I drifted.
~*~ In the next compartment:
"What are you thinking about Ron?"
"Just about Hermione Harry. She would tell us what's wrong right?"
"I think that she'll tell us when the time is right."
"Yeah I guess you're right Harry. Up for some Wizards Chess?"
"Ron, you know that you're going to win, what's the point?"
"Come on Harry, you need to work on it anyhow."
"Alright Ron, but just one game."
Five Games later....
"Checkmate"
"Right Ron, there you won again."
"Come on Harry lets play again."
Just then the food trolley (is that the right thing?) came by.
"Harry! I'm starving, let's get some food."
"Saved by the food cart." Harry mumbled under his breath.
"What was that Harry?" Ron managed to get out with his month full of Chocolate frogs.
"Nothing Ron, Nothing."
~*~ Back to Hermione and Draco...
I finally came to and all I could grasp is the smell of cologne. It was a musk smell. I just wanted to inhale it all in. I then realized that I was still on Malfoy's lap and it was dark outside. How long have I been asleep? I tilted my head up and I saw that Malfoy was sleeping too. He looked so peaceful. I then took the time to take in his features.
His hair had changed a bit. It was no longer slicked back with a profuse about of gel. It now hung loosely on his head. He was still pale.......but not as pale as before. It must've been from quiditch. He was also tall and lean, and also had strong arms too. From quiditch also. For some reason it felt right to be in his arms but I knew that it was wrong, really wrong. I mean he is Harry's worst enemy. And here I am, in his arms! There was something really disturbing about that. But it felt so good. Just to be held and feel loved. I snuggled in knowing that when he woke he would just push me to the floor. I was going to savor this moment forever.
~*~
Yeah well I wanted to get this out tonight so I'm ending it now. There isn't a cliffy but those are good once in a while. It's not as long as I hoped it would be either. Lol chapter four and they still aren't at Hogwarts. Wow, I'm making this slow huh? Oh well. Oh and I changed it so that she only talks a little bit...like only when she has to almost. I mean to not talk at all...I know people can do that but it would be hard to write about it and plus it's my fic and I can do whatever I want to mwahahhahaa. Wow. I huge run on but whatever lol. Well since that you stayed to finish this chapter why don't you do me a favor and review? Please? *puppy dog face*
Inu yasha: Why do you bother with that Sa?
Sa: Because it works...
Inu yasha: no it doesn't....
Sa: *puppy dog face* Inu yasha....will you let me pet your ears?...please?
Inu yasha: Oh ...oh...FINE! *Mumbles*
Sa: Te he *pets ears that are oh so soft* XD oh and by the way, if anyone knows how to make words and such in italics, bold, etc. on Microsoft Word please inform me! Thanks for reading! Now...review!