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Now on with the story.
At the cafetaria:
It was crowded to say the least. Turmaine scanned the crowd in search of a beautiful white female mouse with long waving crimson hair and dark pink eyes. After a few minutes of searching he found her sitting by the window.
Veronica who was waiting by the window noticed him too. She smiled at him as he approached.
"Hi Turmaine" she said still smiling while he seated himself accross the other end of the table facing her. "Hello to you too beautiful" he answered "What happend?" he asked. "I decided to try the skateboard you gave me for my birthday last week....well...I..I...let's just say it wasn't a success" she answered him still blushing from his last comment. "Don't sweat it the first time I skated I broke my arm remember? That was five years ago, and now almost everyone in school wants to be as good as me" he told her. "Yeah..well how is your mother doing? Is the baby here yet? she asked. "I almost forgot. You wanna come upstairs and wait with me?" he asked her. "Of course I wanna come and wait with you" she answered. "Can you hand me my cruches?". "Of course".
As they made their way to the elevators Veronica looked sideways avoiding eyecontact with Turmaine who was staring at her. When he realised what he was doing he looked away blushing.They were silent all the way up to the third floor where his parents were. When they got out of the elevator they went straight to the waitingroom where they found his father looking very pale.......
Well. How was that my first cliffhanger. Please review. And I promise that the next chapter will be longer.
Now on with the story.
At the cafetaria:
It was crowded to say the least. Turmaine scanned the crowd in search of a beautiful white female mouse with long waving crimson hair and dark pink eyes. After a few minutes of searching he found her sitting by the window.
Veronica who was waiting by the window noticed him too. She smiled at him as he approached.
"Hi Turmaine" she said still smiling while he seated himself accross the other end of the table facing her. "Hello to you too beautiful" he answered "What happend?" he asked. "I decided to try the skateboard you gave me for my birthday last week....well...I..I...let's just say it wasn't a success" she answered him still blushing from his last comment. "Don't sweat it the first time I skated I broke my arm remember? That was five years ago, and now almost everyone in school wants to be as good as me" he told her. "Yeah..well how is your mother doing? Is the baby here yet? she asked. "I almost forgot. You wanna come upstairs and wait with me?" he asked her. "Of course I wanna come and wait with you" she answered. "Can you hand me my cruches?". "Of course".
As they made their way to the elevators Veronica looked sideways avoiding eyecontact with Turmaine who was staring at her. When he realised what he was doing he looked away blushing.They were silent all the way up to the third floor where his parents were. When they got out of the elevator they went straight to the waitingroom where they found his father looking very pale.......
Well. How was that my first cliffhanger. Please review. And I promise that the next chapter will be longer.