Sonic 3 & Knuckles: The Retelling
Disclaimer: Is it really necessary?
Author's note: This fic is told from Miles "Tails" Prower's point of view, so don't be confused by the perspective. I like fics that retell stories that already exist. They don't involve as much thought.
Remember when reviewing: Be honest, but keep your reviews under five sentences. I don't want another outburst like that one from Byron Nightshade for my story "Changes."
Chapter 1: Angel Island Act I
We had just destroyed Dr. Robotnik's Death Egg. We were sort of cruising along in our biplane, the Tornado, looking for something to do. We found it on a nearby island.
Without warning, Sonic leapt off the wings of the Tornado, which scared me a bit. He then transformed into Super Sonic and skimmed the surface of the water.
Watching Super Sonic was like watching Fourth of July fireworks. He dashed up on the beach of an island and disappeared into the jungle. Then I heard an audible CRASH.
Curious, I parked the plane on the shore and dashed into the jungle to investigate. There was Sonic, no longer Super, looking a little hurt.
As Sonic explained to me, he had been ambushed by a red echidna with a white crescent on his chest who took the Chaos Emeralds and ran off into the jungle.
I agreed to help Sonic get the Emeralds back. Together we searched the jungle, and came to a large chasm. A few vines swung back and forth across the chasm.
Sonic took a few steps back, and jumped up to snag a vine. He then tried to jump to the next vine, but missed and dropped into the chasm.
I hopped down into the chasm to meet Sonic. He was okay. Then I noticed the rock wall to our left. It looked weak, as if it could be broken open.
Sonic approached the wall and revved up a Spin-Dash. He then blasted off, sending the rocks in the wall flying. I ducked to avoid getting hit.
Upon dashing into the tunnel that the rock wall was hiding, I noticed Sonic staring up at a giant ring. I grabbed Sonic's arm and jumped in.
The next thing we knew, we were in an odd world with a checkerboard surface. There were several blue and red spheres scattered around the area.
All at once, Sonic started running forward. I followed. We ran into a blue sphere, and it turned to red. We decided to turn all the spheres red and see what would happen.
We found that if we surrounded a group of blue spheres with reds, then the blue sphere and the red spheres surrounding turned into rings, which we scooped up.
Finally we got the last blue sphere. All the spheres then seemed to leap off the world, leaving it empty except for us... and a Chaos Emerald.
We grabbed the Chaos Emerald and were almost instantly warped back to the cave where the ring was. The ring was gone, though, and we continued.
As we made our way through the jungle, we had to stop when we came across a large contraption with "Robotnik" written all over it. It looked menacing, but Sonic and I stood our ground.
The craft shot up several bombs that set the whole jungle afire. Then it fled. We tried to catch up to it, but to no avail. Oh well, we continued trekking through the jungle, or at least what was left of it.
After what seemed like forever, Sonic and I approached the same craft that had set the jungle afire. It blew a cloud of flame at us, then flew upward.
We both watched as the craft flew in an upside-down U and descended again. Quickly Sonic bashed its underside and we both backed away. It blew flame at us again.
Once again the craft flew upwards and descended on our position. This time, when Sonic hit the underside of the craft, I hit it too. Then we both backed away.
It took eight good hits to smash the hovercraft. We high-fived each other. We were now halfway through the jungle, and were prepared to go the other half.
Nice fic, huh? I look forward to creating Chapter 2. Review as much as you can!
Disclaimer: Is it really necessary?
Author's note: This fic is told from Miles "Tails" Prower's point of view, so don't be confused by the perspective. I like fics that retell stories that already exist. They don't involve as much thought.
Remember when reviewing: Be honest, but keep your reviews under five sentences. I don't want another outburst like that one from Byron Nightshade for my story "Changes."
Chapter 1: Angel Island Act I
We had just destroyed Dr. Robotnik's Death Egg. We were sort of cruising along in our biplane, the Tornado, looking for something to do. We found it on a nearby island.
Without warning, Sonic leapt off the wings of the Tornado, which scared me a bit. He then transformed into Super Sonic and skimmed the surface of the water.
Watching Super Sonic was like watching Fourth of July fireworks. He dashed up on the beach of an island and disappeared into the jungle. Then I heard an audible CRASH.
Curious, I parked the plane on the shore and dashed into the jungle to investigate. There was Sonic, no longer Super, looking a little hurt.
As Sonic explained to me, he had been ambushed by a red echidna with a white crescent on his chest who took the Chaos Emeralds and ran off into the jungle.
I agreed to help Sonic get the Emeralds back. Together we searched the jungle, and came to a large chasm. A few vines swung back and forth across the chasm.
Sonic took a few steps back, and jumped up to snag a vine. He then tried to jump to the next vine, but missed and dropped into the chasm.
I hopped down into the chasm to meet Sonic. He was okay. Then I noticed the rock wall to our left. It looked weak, as if it could be broken open.
Sonic approached the wall and revved up a Spin-Dash. He then blasted off, sending the rocks in the wall flying. I ducked to avoid getting hit.
Upon dashing into the tunnel that the rock wall was hiding, I noticed Sonic staring up at a giant ring. I grabbed Sonic's arm and jumped in.
The next thing we knew, we were in an odd world with a checkerboard surface. There were several blue and red spheres scattered around the area.
All at once, Sonic started running forward. I followed. We ran into a blue sphere, and it turned to red. We decided to turn all the spheres red and see what would happen.
We found that if we surrounded a group of blue spheres with reds, then the blue sphere and the red spheres surrounding turned into rings, which we scooped up.
Finally we got the last blue sphere. All the spheres then seemed to leap off the world, leaving it empty except for us... and a Chaos Emerald.
We grabbed the Chaos Emerald and were almost instantly warped back to the cave where the ring was. The ring was gone, though, and we continued.
As we made our way through the jungle, we had to stop when we came across a large contraption with "Robotnik" written all over it. It looked menacing, but Sonic and I stood our ground.
The craft shot up several bombs that set the whole jungle afire. Then it fled. We tried to catch up to it, but to no avail. Oh well, we continued trekking through the jungle, or at least what was left of it.
After what seemed like forever, Sonic and I approached the same craft that had set the jungle afire. It blew a cloud of flame at us, then flew upward.
We both watched as the craft flew in an upside-down U and descended again. Quickly Sonic bashed its underside and we both backed away. It blew flame at us again.
Once again the craft flew upwards and descended on our position. This time, when Sonic hit the underside of the craft, I hit it too. Then we both backed away.
It took eight good hits to smash the hovercraft. We high-fived each other. We were now halfway through the jungle, and were prepared to go the other half.
Nice fic, huh? I look forward to creating Chapter 2. Review as much as you can!