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Legend of Zelda:The New life
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Part 4-Link reads about Link?!
I had to explain for about an hour to my mom about why I was late. She still eyed me wearly, but let me go upstairs to my room.
"TGIF! What a week. Now, onto that book."I said as I picked up to dusty book, laided it on my desk and started to read.
"So, every Kokirri but him had a fairy huh? I kinda know how he feels. I just moved here. Well, atleast i got something in commom with him."I said.
Then I turned the page. It was about his search for a sheild and sword. Then, him going into the Great Deku tree to save the forest. And then at the end, when he comes out and the Deku tree dies.
"Wow. poor Link. That must of been sad to see that happen."I said silently to myself. Then I turned to the next.
"Adventure in Hyrule Feild. Sounds cool."I said.
By the time I went to sleep, I had read all the way up to the time when Link got all the spirt stones and was just about to open the doors of time, then my mom came in and shut the light off.
'I swear she has the worse timing!'I thought.
When I finally got to sleep, I had a dream that i was Link, the Hero. I fought the great Queen Gohma. I got the stones, saved the Gorons and Zoras. I felt the pain, and greatness of being brave just like him. Then I woke up to my new alarm clock.
I opened one of my eyes and shut it.
"God! Why did I set my alarm clock for?! I don't have to get up!"I said to no one.
I turned it off and rolled over. I put the pillow over me head so the sun wouldn't touch my eyes anymore. I tried to get back to sleep but no use. So, I trugged out of bed, took a quick shower, got dressed and sat down to read the rest.
"Link, played the song of time, just then the three spirtal stone flew above him with all their shinning glory, placed into the three hollow holes. The Song ecoked off the walls and made it sound even more intence, the door of time opened, leaveing Link to just go in a get the prize. Link walked in, and saw the Master Sword. A big sword, made of a special metal, that could slice through all evil. Only the Hero of Time can pull it out of the pedistal. Link slowly walked up to it. Then begain to pull on it, then it moved slightly in the pedistal. Then, with one final tug, Link held the master sword above where it once laided. Suddenly, Ganondorf appeared. He laughed at Link and Link passed out."
"Link awaken to find himself in the spirt realm. An old looking man stood there. He gave Link the first madailum. The one of Light."I finished.
"So that's what the Temple of Time is! It's the Temple of Light! I knew I could figure this out. And by my guess, if I am correct, where my house is, is where the path to the Fire Temple once was! I can't beleive I am living in the Kakariko Village!"I said. Then Matt walked in my room.
"Hey man. And what about you living in carrotiky village?"asked Matt as he sat down beside my on my bed.
"Not Carrotiky, Kakariko Village. It's one of the Villages where Link stayed and guess what? The Temple, you know the old temple you told me about?"I asked excitily.
"Yeah."said Matt.
"Well, that old Temple is the Fire Temple! The third Temple. You know the sentence with 'under the rocks of fire' is that old temple. The temple made of light is the Temple of Time. And if I am right, that's in West City, by the old castle runins. The one deep in the vast forest, in the Farkon Town. Well, just north of it. It is hiden. Then one under the tears of angels, is Lake Lilon. You know. The Lake that some idiot named about four weeks ago. I used to visit there. I bet the Temple is under the Lake. Oh, and I even figured out the next one. The place in shadow, is the dark cave north east of right where we are! Above the graveyard."
"Well. Link. I think you have finaly cracked, but what you said, strangly enough made sence. In it's own way. If you really think there is a chance that you could be right, then I am all for it. We can go up to the old Temple right now. I mean, we will have to sneak around, but that's what I am good at."Said Matt.
I smiled and said,"Alright. You got it. Let's get going. And if I am right, then that means I am the Hero of Time. You will bow before me!"
Matt laughed and said,"In your dreams Link. In your dreams."
"Man, that remindes me. Have I ever told you about my dream?"I said.
"No. What about it? Oh let me guess. You see yourself as Link, come to save the world again!"Matt smiled, but it disappeared when he saw the look I gave him. "Man, what's up with you? What is so bad about your dream that could scare you! I mean, someone punched you right in your face and you didn't even flinch! It's got to be serious!"
"It is. You see that guy Ganondorf in the picture?"Matt nodded. "Well, I have been dreaming about him. I mean as soon as I moved here, I dreamed about him. It's aways the same. I am by a drawl bridge, it is cold and dark outside. The drawl bridge comes down, a white horse with two riders. One a girl, and one a woman. As soon as they leave into the feild, I turn around and see a black horse with fire red eyes. The horse doesn't scare me as much as the rider does. He is pure evil. I know he is. His cold eyes stare at me, and then he laughs at me. he shoots some kind of magic at me, which leaves me body aching and hurting bad. I wake up and my body is still hurting with that pain. This can't just be a dream. It has to be real, somehow. And when I read this book that I found, or it rather found me, Link had the same dream. The same god dam dream! Then only a few months later, what happened in his dream really did happen, to him! Maybe, if I don't act fast, it will happen to me."I said, settling down and sitting on the bed looking at my toes.
"Well, if that does happen to you, atleast you know you can beat him after all. I mean this Link did it. So why can't you?"Matt tried to lighten me up.
"I haven't read the battle part yet. I am almost afarid. I got up to the point where Link has had his spirt locked away for seven years, so he would be an adult when he fought Ganondorf. What if that happens to me? I mean, I am not kid, I am 14 years old, but still. They could lock my up for 4 years so i would be 18 when i got out. I don't want that to happen."I said.
"Hey, no worry. All we gotta do is go to the Temple, I'll prove you wrong, glot and then we can go back to normal life, like reality."Said Matt.
I could tell he beleived me thought. Just in his tone of voice. he didn't want to beleive it but it was true. He had to face that.
"Well, let's get going then!"I said as I stood up and we walked out to go to the grave yard.
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Legend of Zelda:The New life
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Part 4-Link reads about Link?!
I had to explain for about an hour to my mom about why I was late. She still eyed me wearly, but let me go upstairs to my room.
"TGIF! What a week. Now, onto that book."I said as I picked up to dusty book, laided it on my desk and started to read.
"So, every Kokirri but him had a fairy huh? I kinda know how he feels. I just moved here. Well, atleast i got something in commom with him."I said.
Then I turned the page. It was about his search for a sheild and sword. Then, him going into the Great Deku tree to save the forest. And then at the end, when he comes out and the Deku tree dies.
"Wow. poor Link. That must of been sad to see that happen."I said silently to myself. Then I turned to the next.
"Adventure in Hyrule Feild. Sounds cool."I said.
By the time I went to sleep, I had read all the way up to the time when Link got all the spirt stones and was just about to open the doors of time, then my mom came in and shut the light off.
'I swear she has the worse timing!'I thought.
When I finally got to sleep, I had a dream that i was Link, the Hero. I fought the great Queen Gohma. I got the stones, saved the Gorons and Zoras. I felt the pain, and greatness of being brave just like him. Then I woke up to my new alarm clock.
I opened one of my eyes and shut it.
"God! Why did I set my alarm clock for?! I don't have to get up!"I said to no one.
I turned it off and rolled over. I put the pillow over me head so the sun wouldn't touch my eyes anymore. I tried to get back to sleep but no use. So, I trugged out of bed, took a quick shower, got dressed and sat down to read the rest.
"Link, played the song of time, just then the three spirtal stone flew above him with all their shinning glory, placed into the three hollow holes. The Song ecoked off the walls and made it sound even more intence, the door of time opened, leaveing Link to just go in a get the prize. Link walked in, and saw the Master Sword. A big sword, made of a special metal, that could slice through all evil. Only the Hero of Time can pull it out of the pedistal. Link slowly walked up to it. Then begain to pull on it, then it moved slightly in the pedistal. Then, with one final tug, Link held the master sword above where it once laided. Suddenly, Ganondorf appeared. He laughed at Link and Link passed out."
"Link awaken to find himself in the spirt realm. An old looking man stood there. He gave Link the first madailum. The one of Light."I finished.
"So that's what the Temple of Time is! It's the Temple of Light! I knew I could figure this out. And by my guess, if I am correct, where my house is, is where the path to the Fire Temple once was! I can't beleive I am living in the Kakariko Village!"I said. Then Matt walked in my room.
"Hey man. And what about you living in carrotiky village?"asked Matt as he sat down beside my on my bed.
"Not Carrotiky, Kakariko Village. It's one of the Villages where Link stayed and guess what? The Temple, you know the old temple you told me about?"I asked excitily.
"Yeah."said Matt.
"Well, that old Temple is the Fire Temple! The third Temple. You know the sentence with 'under the rocks of fire' is that old temple. The temple made of light is the Temple of Time. And if I am right, that's in West City, by the old castle runins. The one deep in the vast forest, in the Farkon Town. Well, just north of it. It is hiden. Then one under the tears of angels, is Lake Lilon. You know. The Lake that some idiot named about four weeks ago. I used to visit there. I bet the Temple is under the Lake. Oh, and I even figured out the next one. The place in shadow, is the dark cave north east of right where we are! Above the graveyard."
"Well. Link. I think you have finaly cracked, but what you said, strangly enough made sence. In it's own way. If you really think there is a chance that you could be right, then I am all for it. We can go up to the old Temple right now. I mean, we will have to sneak around, but that's what I am good at."Said Matt.
I smiled and said,"Alright. You got it. Let's get going. And if I am right, then that means I am the Hero of Time. You will bow before me!"
Matt laughed and said,"In your dreams Link. In your dreams."
"Man, that remindes me. Have I ever told you about my dream?"I said.
"No. What about it? Oh let me guess. You see yourself as Link, come to save the world again!"Matt smiled, but it disappeared when he saw the look I gave him. "Man, what's up with you? What is so bad about your dream that could scare you! I mean, someone punched you right in your face and you didn't even flinch! It's got to be serious!"
"It is. You see that guy Ganondorf in the picture?"Matt nodded. "Well, I have been dreaming about him. I mean as soon as I moved here, I dreamed about him. It's aways the same. I am by a drawl bridge, it is cold and dark outside. The drawl bridge comes down, a white horse with two riders. One a girl, and one a woman. As soon as they leave into the feild, I turn around and see a black horse with fire red eyes. The horse doesn't scare me as much as the rider does. He is pure evil. I know he is. His cold eyes stare at me, and then he laughs at me. he shoots some kind of magic at me, which leaves me body aching and hurting bad. I wake up and my body is still hurting with that pain. This can't just be a dream. It has to be real, somehow. And when I read this book that I found, or it rather found me, Link had the same dream. The same god dam dream! Then only a few months later, what happened in his dream really did happen, to him! Maybe, if I don't act fast, it will happen to me."I said, settling down and sitting on the bed looking at my toes.
"Well, if that does happen to you, atleast you know you can beat him after all. I mean this Link did it. So why can't you?"Matt tried to lighten me up.
"I haven't read the battle part yet. I am almost afarid. I got up to the point where Link has had his spirt locked away for seven years, so he would be an adult when he fought Ganondorf. What if that happens to me? I mean, I am not kid, I am 14 years old, but still. They could lock my up for 4 years so i would be 18 when i got out. I don't want that to happen."I said.
"Hey, no worry. All we gotta do is go to the Temple, I'll prove you wrong, glot and then we can go back to normal life, like reality."Said Matt.
I could tell he beleived me thought. Just in his tone of voice. he didn't want to beleive it but it was true. He had to face that.
"Well, let's get going then!"I said as I stood up and we walked out to go to the grave yard.
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