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Legend of Zelda:The New life
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Part 6-Temple of Time
I escaped through my window at night. Matt was going to bring his bike over and we were going to ride off to the Temple. I left my mom a note telling her I was alright and I would be back after only alittle while.
I strapped on my helmit and rode off to the meeting spot. I saw Matt there.
"hey man. Let's get going." I said. We took off to the Temple.
We rode through three different cities. Our legs were screaming at us. Then it started to rain on us.
"Oh! Goddesses why now!" I shouted.
"Goddesses?" Matt asked.
"Yeah, haven't you read anything on Link? There are three goddesses. One of power one of wisdom and the other of courage. My ansester had the triforce of courage you know." I said.
"Yeah yeah. Now I know why you are so brave at the most stupidest of times!" Said matt.
"I am not!" I complained.
"Are too. Remember when Kevin dared you to ride your skateboard over the roof, onto the street and off a ramp?" Asked Matt.
"Yep. I broke my arm after not landing to board right and skidding down the street. So?" I said.
"You knew you couldn't skateboard even if your life depended on it!" Shouted Matt.
"Yeah. your point being?" I smiled.
"Your insane I promise!" Matt grumbled. We both saw an old building. It had a roof and that was good enough for me.
We made out way inside and rung out our clothes. I took my shirt off and thrown it over a chair. I also laid my hat on that seat. Matt just rung his clothes out. We walked further back into the bulding. Hoping someone was around to tell us where we were. We continued walking until we saw a blocked off door. Matt and I smiled at each other.
Matt bent down and picked the lock. I pushed the heavy door out of the way. We walked inside and saw an alter. It had three old looking gems over it. Floating!
"WOW!" matt shouted.
"That's it! The three stones of the land! Forest, Fire and water! Ha! Told you so!" I said.
Matt walked up to it and put his hand below it. testing to see if there was anything holding it up.
After trying to figure the stupid thing out for a long time on how to make it work, we gave up. We leaned against the alter. I took out a blue ocarina my mom gave me when I was six. She tought me how to play alot of songs too.
I put it to my lips and played Epona's Song. Then switched over to Zelda's Song. Matt listened.
I keep in switching. The last was a song my Mom didn't know the name too. It sounded really weird, but it was magical at the same time. So, I called it the Song of Time.
I started to play the first couple of notes, when suddenly the Ocarina began to glow!
Matt shook me to let me see, because I had my eyes closed.
I stopped playing and it stopped glowing.
"That was really weird." Matt said.
"yeah." I agreed
"Play it again and see if it happens again!" Said Matt.
I shrugged my shoulders and began to play the song again. The Ocarina glowed. I finsihed the whole song this time. Then the building began to shake. We both stood up and was about to brake for the door when we saw the back wall opeing up! A triforce peice above it glowed brightly.
'Well, that's something you don't see everyday." I said. I ran pasted the alter and into the room. Matt followed.
Then we saw it. A huge blade. The master sword!
"It's the Master Sword! The sword that can kill all evil!" I said, walking up to it. Matt pulled me back though.
"Don't man! You don't know what it might do if you touch it. Remember what happened to Link when he touched it? He got trapped in a spirit realm for seven years! Man, how would I explain that to your mom?!" Matt almost yelled.
"It's alright man. there's no evil around here. think about what you are saying. I just want to touch it. Don't you?" I asked.
Mat slowly nodded. I walked up the stairs to it and reached out. Before I could touch it, two cops flashed their lights on Matt.
"Hey what are you kids doing back here?" One of them asked.
I reached foward and grabbed the sword. I held onto it. I felt a lightening like bolt go through my whole body. It was a warm feeling though. I wanted more of it. I wrapped btoh of my hands around the holder and wrentched it out of the pedistal. It made a sweet sound that was like music to my ears. I raised it like King Arthor would his sword.
I watched the blade, almost transfixed on it. It was beautiful. The most powerful and beautiful thing I had ever seen in my whole life!
Then, someone grabbed me. It was the other cop.
"Drop the sword sonny." he said firmly.
I shook my head and backed away.
"I earned this sword. It belongs to me. I am the Hero of Time for this generation. Unless you can pull the sword from the pedistal of Time and prove me otherwise, I state my claim." I said. The words just seemed to roll off my tongue, like I had been saying them my whole life. I was guessing it was the sword talking.
I placed the sowrd back into the pedistal and waited for him to try to pull it.
"Alright you have had your fun kid. I will show you that it's all a legend." He said. he grabbed the handle, only to be shocked and he backed away from the sword. The other police man grabbed the sword, but the same thing happened to him. I grabbed the holder and pulled it out with one hand.
"See." I said. Suddenly, a sheath fell into my other hand, seemingly from nowhere. I put the sword into the sheath and put it on my back. I hooked it and left with Matt, while the policeman stayed stunned on the ground. Before we left, I grabbed my shirt and hat, then the three gems after the policeman got out of the doorway. I put them in my pocket and took off for the bikes.
Matt and I never rode so fast in our lives! But it was too dark out and the rain had made the ground too soft to ride on. We got off our bikes and walked them. The whole section of roads that lead into our town were blocked off by rain. Matt and I traveled through the rain for hours until we made it to the next city.
It was called 'Wet Lands'. There was tons of water and a huge waterfall there. I figured this is where Zora's Domain was. We found an abanonded place to sleep for the night.
"I blame you for this Link!" Said Matt.
"Hey, it's not my fault!" I said.
"Yes it is. You just had to go to the Temple and you just had to get us caught in the rain. then to top it off, we both got caught by the police. Now, we are soken wet, cold, hungry and to top the whole day off, in deep trouble by our moms! Not to mention my dad will kill us!" Siad Matt.
I sighed. I really got us in deep today. I couldn't blame matt for being mad at me. I was mad at myself for that matter. I got in deep with my mom and that was enough, but Matt has both his parents to deal with.
"Sorry Matt. I didn't mean to get us in trouble." I said.
"It's alright man. Just try to get some sleep. Atleast we don't have to go to school tomorrow." Said Matt with a smile.
"Yeah. I got a test in first peroid!" I said.
"No way! Spanish! Gag! I feel sorry for you. And we got baseball pratice in two days, so that doesn't matter. But, can you see the look on your mom's face when you bring home that sword? She will freak!" Matt started to laugh.
"Hey! She'll let me keep it! My mom is cool like that. Though she might have me lock it up in the basement. Atleast I will keep it. But, you have to admit, that whole Ocarina glowing was cool looking." I said, pulling out my ocarina.
"yeah. Wonder if it will glow now. Play that song." Said matt.
I put it to my lips and played the notes of the song of Time. Nothing happened. The tingle feeling I had when I played it at the alter wasn't there anymore.
"Oh well. Atleast you playing will get me to sleep." Said matt.
"I am so not playing you to sleep!" I complained.
"What? You don't know enough to do it?" Asked Matt with a challendgeing smile.
"You win." I said, and started to play. I played all the songs I knew. I could hear Matt's light snoreing. I continued to play until my eyes dropped and I fell fast asleep.
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Legend of Zelda:The New life
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Part 6-Temple of Time
I escaped through my window at night. Matt was going to bring his bike over and we were going to ride off to the Temple. I left my mom a note telling her I was alright and I would be back after only alittle while.
I strapped on my helmit and rode off to the meeting spot. I saw Matt there.
"hey man. Let's get going." I said. We took off to the Temple.
We rode through three different cities. Our legs were screaming at us. Then it started to rain on us.
"Oh! Goddesses why now!" I shouted.
"Goddesses?" Matt asked.
"Yeah, haven't you read anything on Link? There are three goddesses. One of power one of wisdom and the other of courage. My ansester had the triforce of courage you know." I said.
"Yeah yeah. Now I know why you are so brave at the most stupidest of times!" Said matt.
"I am not!" I complained.
"Are too. Remember when Kevin dared you to ride your skateboard over the roof, onto the street and off a ramp?" Asked Matt.
"Yep. I broke my arm after not landing to board right and skidding down the street. So?" I said.
"You knew you couldn't skateboard even if your life depended on it!" Shouted Matt.
"Yeah. your point being?" I smiled.
"Your insane I promise!" Matt grumbled. We both saw an old building. It had a roof and that was good enough for me.
We made out way inside and rung out our clothes. I took my shirt off and thrown it over a chair. I also laid my hat on that seat. Matt just rung his clothes out. We walked further back into the bulding. Hoping someone was around to tell us where we were. We continued walking until we saw a blocked off door. Matt and I smiled at each other.
Matt bent down and picked the lock. I pushed the heavy door out of the way. We walked inside and saw an alter. It had three old looking gems over it. Floating!
"WOW!" matt shouted.
"That's it! The three stones of the land! Forest, Fire and water! Ha! Told you so!" I said.
Matt walked up to it and put his hand below it. testing to see if there was anything holding it up.
After trying to figure the stupid thing out for a long time on how to make it work, we gave up. We leaned against the alter. I took out a blue ocarina my mom gave me when I was six. She tought me how to play alot of songs too.
I put it to my lips and played Epona's Song. Then switched over to Zelda's Song. Matt listened.
I keep in switching. The last was a song my Mom didn't know the name too. It sounded really weird, but it was magical at the same time. So, I called it the Song of Time.
I started to play the first couple of notes, when suddenly the Ocarina began to glow!
Matt shook me to let me see, because I had my eyes closed.
I stopped playing and it stopped glowing.
"That was really weird." Matt said.
"yeah." I agreed
"Play it again and see if it happens again!" Said Matt.
I shrugged my shoulders and began to play the song again. The Ocarina glowed. I finsihed the whole song this time. Then the building began to shake. We both stood up and was about to brake for the door when we saw the back wall opeing up! A triforce peice above it glowed brightly.
'Well, that's something you don't see everyday." I said. I ran pasted the alter and into the room. Matt followed.
Then we saw it. A huge blade. The master sword!
"It's the Master Sword! The sword that can kill all evil!" I said, walking up to it. Matt pulled me back though.
"Don't man! You don't know what it might do if you touch it. Remember what happened to Link when he touched it? He got trapped in a spirit realm for seven years! Man, how would I explain that to your mom?!" Matt almost yelled.
"It's alright man. there's no evil around here. think about what you are saying. I just want to touch it. Don't you?" I asked.
Mat slowly nodded. I walked up the stairs to it and reached out. Before I could touch it, two cops flashed their lights on Matt.
"Hey what are you kids doing back here?" One of them asked.
I reached foward and grabbed the sword. I held onto it. I felt a lightening like bolt go through my whole body. It was a warm feeling though. I wanted more of it. I wrapped btoh of my hands around the holder and wrentched it out of the pedistal. It made a sweet sound that was like music to my ears. I raised it like King Arthor would his sword.
I watched the blade, almost transfixed on it. It was beautiful. The most powerful and beautiful thing I had ever seen in my whole life!
Then, someone grabbed me. It was the other cop.
"Drop the sword sonny." he said firmly.
I shook my head and backed away.
"I earned this sword. It belongs to me. I am the Hero of Time for this generation. Unless you can pull the sword from the pedistal of Time and prove me otherwise, I state my claim." I said. The words just seemed to roll off my tongue, like I had been saying them my whole life. I was guessing it was the sword talking.
I placed the sowrd back into the pedistal and waited for him to try to pull it.
"Alright you have had your fun kid. I will show you that it's all a legend." He said. he grabbed the handle, only to be shocked and he backed away from the sword. The other police man grabbed the sword, but the same thing happened to him. I grabbed the holder and pulled it out with one hand.
"See." I said. Suddenly, a sheath fell into my other hand, seemingly from nowhere. I put the sword into the sheath and put it on my back. I hooked it and left with Matt, while the policeman stayed stunned on the ground. Before we left, I grabbed my shirt and hat, then the three gems after the policeman got out of the doorway. I put them in my pocket and took off for the bikes.
Matt and I never rode so fast in our lives! But it was too dark out and the rain had made the ground too soft to ride on. We got off our bikes and walked them. The whole section of roads that lead into our town were blocked off by rain. Matt and I traveled through the rain for hours until we made it to the next city.
It was called 'Wet Lands'. There was tons of water and a huge waterfall there. I figured this is where Zora's Domain was. We found an abanonded place to sleep for the night.
"I blame you for this Link!" Said Matt.
"Hey, it's not my fault!" I said.
"Yes it is. You just had to go to the Temple and you just had to get us caught in the rain. then to top it off, we both got caught by the police. Now, we are soken wet, cold, hungry and to top the whole day off, in deep trouble by our moms! Not to mention my dad will kill us!" Siad Matt.
I sighed. I really got us in deep today. I couldn't blame matt for being mad at me. I was mad at myself for that matter. I got in deep with my mom and that was enough, but Matt has both his parents to deal with.
"Sorry Matt. I didn't mean to get us in trouble." I said.
"It's alright man. Just try to get some sleep. Atleast we don't have to go to school tomorrow." Said Matt with a smile.
"Yeah. I got a test in first peroid!" I said.
"No way! Spanish! Gag! I feel sorry for you. And we got baseball pratice in two days, so that doesn't matter. But, can you see the look on your mom's face when you bring home that sword? She will freak!" Matt started to laugh.
"Hey! She'll let me keep it! My mom is cool like that. Though she might have me lock it up in the basement. Atleast I will keep it. But, you have to admit, that whole Ocarina glowing was cool looking." I said, pulling out my ocarina.
"yeah. Wonder if it will glow now. Play that song." Said matt.
I put it to my lips and played the notes of the song of Time. Nothing happened. The tingle feeling I had when I played it at the alter wasn't there anymore.
"Oh well. Atleast you playing will get me to sleep." Said matt.
"I am so not playing you to sleep!" I complained.
"What? You don't know enough to do it?" Asked Matt with a challendgeing smile.
"You win." I said, and started to play. I played all the songs I knew. I could hear Matt's light snoreing. I continued to play until my eyes dropped and I fell fast asleep.
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I hope you like the story so far! Please review!