AN OLD MAN'S WISH
Chapter 3
I got my first review, so as I said hears a new chapter. Hopefully my writings starting to improve, and in honor of the review hears an extra long chapter.
Disclaimer-don't own it, don't really want to own it(wish I owned Karen at least though) Natusme does so don't sue. NOW on with the story
Jack and his new friend Cliff entered Flowerbud village for the first time, and for the first time Jack realized how small his new home was. He could almost see the whole thing from where he was standing. Jack was knocked out of his thoughts though when Cliff said
Cliff: We should probably go over to the town hall and figure out what were going to do there
Jack: I don't think a town this size even has a town hall.
While talking the two bys were walking through town. Jack noticed a seed shop and made a mental note to go and pick up some supplies there before the end of the day. Moving into the residential area the boys notice what's appears to be at least from the mailbox the mayors house.
Jack: Well I am sure the mayor would want to see us; in a town like this one new person moving in is big news, let alone two.
Cliff: Why would the mayor care about some drifter moving in, you on the other hand just inherited this town's largest farm so I am sure he would want to meet you.
Jack: So you're not coming in then?
Cliff: No, I am going to look around some more and try to get a job somewhere. I'll come by the farm later, ok?
Jack: OK, well see you later.
After Cliff's departure Jack knocked on the mayor's door. Jack struggled to control his laughter at the site that met him at the door. To Jack it looked like a fat red wearing dwarf with a huge oversized mayor badge binned on him. Not noticing the boy chuckling the mayor quickly spoke up. "A new face in these parts is rare indeed, so I will assume you are the new owner of the farm" Jack answered, "That would be right." "Well in that case, come with me and will take a tour of the town!" This is going to be a long day Jack thought to himself after he followed after the red dwarf.
MEANWHILE-
It was getting late and Cliff was still jobless. He had actually been offered four jobs but had turned them all down. Why, because of those dam girls. The first place Cliff had gone had been called green ranch. Cliff liked animals so he thought this would be the perfect place for him, but that was until he met Ann. At first she had seemed nice enough, until Cliff noticed her obvious flirting. The girl acted like she was ready to jump cliff then and there. She of course immediately offered Cliff the job but Cliff didn't really want to be around a girl that was obsessed with him every day plus he had gotten a really scary look from what he assumed to be the girls brother. So he left the farm to look for another job.
Cliff often had these effects on girls; do to his looks but never like this! Everywhere he went there was a girl nearly giving themselves to him. They all were flirting with him nonstop and all offered him jobs so fast it made his head spin. It must be the fact that it was a small town so any new guy was a big deal these combined with his looks must have driven them all insane. Cliff didn't like it not one bit. He had been in this town all day and hadn't met one sane person around his age save for Jack of course. It was getting dark and he noticed everyone seemed to be headed for what appeared to be the local bar. Deciding this might be his last chance to get a job he entered.
BACK TO JACK-
After the 7 hour!! tour ended, Jack had met every single living sole in the town. Though the tour was boring he decided at least the people in the town were nice enough. Only one though really caught his eye and her name was Popuri. When he had entered the seed shop he immediately noticed this pink haired beauty. It was here reaction to him though that really got to him. After seeing him she said "oh my god, to new hot boys in one day!!" Realizing what she had said she quickly left but the damage was done, Jack knew she found him good looking and he would definitely remember that little fact for later.
It was night now and Jack saw Cliff headed towards the bar. He decided to head there two and entered to find a very interesting seen.
Karen: What to you mean your going to give him the job, don't I do enough, I don't need any help!
Bartender :{a/n I forgot this guys name any help would be appreciated} Listen Karen you aren't hear every night and even when you are you could really use some help and this guy can also help run the inn not just the bar, so I am hiring him and that's final!
Karen: Why you ungrateful jerk, this guy looks like he just some drifter anyways, why the hell would you hire him?!
Bartender: Well I am Karen whether you like it or not and I think you should go home and get some rest now, Cliff hear will take over for the day.
Karen: Fine but this isn't finsished.
Storming off, Jack gets his first look at her and realizes she to is beautiful, but in a different way then Popori is. Despite wanting to talk to her, he decides this isn't the best time. Remembering from the tour that she lives at the vineyard, he decides to stop bye their tomorrow. For now he had to talk to his only friend in this place and figure out what the hell just happened.
Cliff again-
Karen: Fine but this isn't finsished.
That was the last words she said before she gave Cliff a look that would send daggers through the average guys heart, but Cliff was to busy staring at her to notice. Every girl hear had thrown themselves at him but this one was different. This one seemed to almost hate him. Getting one last look at his dream girl, Cliff decided he would stay in this town longer then he had planned.
Longest chapter yet!!! Both jack and cliff like Karen could this eventually destroy the friendship. And what about Popuri?? Find out next time. Next chapter will be put up as soon as I get two new reviewers.
I got my first review, so as I said hears a new chapter. Hopefully my writings starting to improve, and in honor of the review hears an extra long chapter.
Disclaimer-don't own it, don't really want to own it(wish I owned Karen at least though) Natusme does so don't sue. NOW on with the story
Jack and his new friend Cliff entered Flowerbud village for the first time, and for the first time Jack realized how small his new home was. He could almost see the whole thing from where he was standing. Jack was knocked out of his thoughts though when Cliff said
Cliff: We should probably go over to the town hall and figure out what were going to do there
Jack: I don't think a town this size even has a town hall.
While talking the two bys were walking through town. Jack noticed a seed shop and made a mental note to go and pick up some supplies there before the end of the day. Moving into the residential area the boys notice what's appears to be at least from the mailbox the mayors house.
Jack: Well I am sure the mayor would want to see us; in a town like this one new person moving in is big news, let alone two.
Cliff: Why would the mayor care about some drifter moving in, you on the other hand just inherited this town's largest farm so I am sure he would want to meet you.
Jack: So you're not coming in then?
Cliff: No, I am going to look around some more and try to get a job somewhere. I'll come by the farm later, ok?
Jack: OK, well see you later.
After Cliff's departure Jack knocked on the mayor's door. Jack struggled to control his laughter at the site that met him at the door. To Jack it looked like a fat red wearing dwarf with a huge oversized mayor badge binned on him. Not noticing the boy chuckling the mayor quickly spoke up. "A new face in these parts is rare indeed, so I will assume you are the new owner of the farm" Jack answered, "That would be right." "Well in that case, come with me and will take a tour of the town!" This is going to be a long day Jack thought to himself after he followed after the red dwarf.
MEANWHILE-
It was getting late and Cliff was still jobless. He had actually been offered four jobs but had turned them all down. Why, because of those dam girls. The first place Cliff had gone had been called green ranch. Cliff liked animals so he thought this would be the perfect place for him, but that was until he met Ann. At first she had seemed nice enough, until Cliff noticed her obvious flirting. The girl acted like she was ready to jump cliff then and there. She of course immediately offered Cliff the job but Cliff didn't really want to be around a girl that was obsessed with him every day plus he had gotten a really scary look from what he assumed to be the girls brother. So he left the farm to look for another job.
Cliff often had these effects on girls; do to his looks but never like this! Everywhere he went there was a girl nearly giving themselves to him. They all were flirting with him nonstop and all offered him jobs so fast it made his head spin. It must be the fact that it was a small town so any new guy was a big deal these combined with his looks must have driven them all insane. Cliff didn't like it not one bit. He had been in this town all day and hadn't met one sane person around his age save for Jack of course. It was getting dark and he noticed everyone seemed to be headed for what appeared to be the local bar. Deciding this might be his last chance to get a job he entered.
BACK TO JACK-
After the 7 hour!! tour ended, Jack had met every single living sole in the town. Though the tour was boring he decided at least the people in the town were nice enough. Only one though really caught his eye and her name was Popuri. When he had entered the seed shop he immediately noticed this pink haired beauty. It was here reaction to him though that really got to him. After seeing him she said "oh my god, to new hot boys in one day!!" Realizing what she had said she quickly left but the damage was done, Jack knew she found him good looking and he would definitely remember that little fact for later.
It was night now and Jack saw Cliff headed towards the bar. He decided to head there two and entered to find a very interesting seen.
Karen: What to you mean your going to give him the job, don't I do enough, I don't need any help!
Bartender :{a/n I forgot this guys name any help would be appreciated} Listen Karen you aren't hear every night and even when you are you could really use some help and this guy can also help run the inn not just the bar, so I am hiring him and that's final!
Karen: Why you ungrateful jerk, this guy looks like he just some drifter anyways, why the hell would you hire him?!
Bartender: Well I am Karen whether you like it or not and I think you should go home and get some rest now, Cliff hear will take over for the day.
Karen: Fine but this isn't finsished.
Storming off, Jack gets his first look at her and realizes she to is beautiful, but in a different way then Popori is. Despite wanting to talk to her, he decides this isn't the best time. Remembering from the tour that she lives at the vineyard, he decides to stop bye their tomorrow. For now he had to talk to his only friend in this place and figure out what the hell just happened.
Cliff again-
Karen: Fine but this isn't finsished.
That was the last words she said before she gave Cliff a look that would send daggers through the average guys heart, but Cliff was to busy staring at her to notice. Every girl hear had thrown themselves at him but this one was different. This one seemed to almost hate him. Getting one last look at his dream girl, Cliff decided he would stay in this town longer then he had planned.
Longest chapter yet!!! Both jack and cliff like Karen could this eventually destroy the friendship. And what about Popuri?? Find out next time. Next chapter will be put up as soon as I get two new reviewers.