Standard Disclaimers
Please review! I need constructive criticism to make my story better. Sorry for the way the last chappie looked like. My computer was having problems and wouldn't let me make paragraphs. Thank you kiamiawia for reviewing and telling me about the problem. I thought it looked like one paragraph only in the review. Oh, and most of the story is going to be in a flashback unless there is a line of stars. K, on with the story.
Finding her
She was said to live in a hut by the side of the forest thought Syaoran. But the stranger said to go to the palace. Syaoran was really confused, because he had never really had to make a princess fall in love with him before. Oh well, he thought, I'd better try the palace first and see what I can see.
AT THE PALACE
Tomoyo, isn't that dress a little to much, asked Sakura to her best friend and maid Tomoyo. Not really, Tomoyo replied, it only has 13 ruffles and 86 ribbons. Really, Sakura asked? The answer Sakura got back was "Really". I mean, I am going to meet Yukito for the first time, so shouldn't I look like myself? I mean, first impressions count a lot don't they? Sakura was really nervous about meeting her fiancé for the first time.
She had never even seen him before. What if she hated him or he hated her. But Sakura sometimes drifted off into a dream that Yukito lifting her up in her arms and saving her from the pressures of being a princess. Sometimes Sakura went as far to dream that he would kiss her with such feeling that she was sure that the dream was true. The memory of the dream kiss made her heart ache with longing, also making her cheeks burn at the thought.
It took awhile for Sakura to realize that Tomoyo was calling her name, and in truth, Sakura did not want to leave this dream land of safety and warmth. SAKURA! Tomoyo shouted for the fifth or sixth time. Hello? Anyone in there? Tomoyo was waving her hand back and forth in front of Sakura's face. When Sakura finally came back from la-la land, Tomoyo instantly guessed what Sakura had been thinking about.
Ah, you were thinking about Prince Charming, weren't you, Tomoyo teased. Ah, how far did you get in the dream this time? Sakura had told Tomoyo before about these dreams she had been having. But Sakura did not want to share this latest dream with anybody. He is mine, she thought possesivly.
THRONE ROOM
Madam, Prince Yuki has just arrived, called out a footman to Queen Nadeshiko (A/N I am pretty sure I spelt that wrong too.) Oh darn, he is right on time, he was supposed to be fashionably late! Thought the Queen. Girls, Girls, GIRLS get down here. The prince has arrived!
PALACE GATES
Whoa, who is that? Thought Syaoran as he looked upon Prince Yuki. Do I have to compete against him? OK the stranger had no I dea what he was talking about and I'm not going to make the princess fall in love with me. Just then a person who had been following the Prince who was on horseback, came up to where Syaoran was gaping at Yuki. Hey, you, the footman to the prince whispered, Come here. The footman beckoned to Syaoran to come. You look familiar said Syaoran. Well I should because I talked to you this morning. Now go and change into these clothes and you will look like me and will be able to go into the palace and meet the princess. The man gave Syaoran some clothes and smiled.Can I not know your name asked Syaoran. The man replied, no not yet . The man disappeared from sight with a ripple of his strong muscles.
So that was the man who came to me this morning, mused Syaoran. I wonder why he wants me to do this?
SOMEWHERE ELSE
So, did you get him the clothes asked Tomoyo with a worried expression on her face. Yes I did replied Eriol. No need to worry my love, Sakura will not need to marry the prince if all goes well.
Ok, that is my second chapter of this story. A little confusing, is it not? Thank you peoples for reading my first fanfic. I hope it is good enough. Read and Review peeps.
Please review! I need constructive criticism to make my story better. Sorry for the way the last chappie looked like. My computer was having problems and wouldn't let me make paragraphs. Thank you kiamiawia for reviewing and telling me about the problem. I thought it looked like one paragraph only in the review. Oh, and most of the story is going to be in a flashback unless there is a line of stars. K, on with the story.
Finding her
She was said to live in a hut by the side of the forest thought Syaoran. But the stranger said to go to the palace. Syaoran was really confused, because he had never really had to make a princess fall in love with him before. Oh well, he thought, I'd better try the palace first and see what I can see.
AT THE PALACE
Tomoyo, isn't that dress a little to much, asked Sakura to her best friend and maid Tomoyo. Not really, Tomoyo replied, it only has 13 ruffles and 86 ribbons. Really, Sakura asked? The answer Sakura got back was "Really". I mean, I am going to meet Yukito for the first time, so shouldn't I look like myself? I mean, first impressions count a lot don't they? Sakura was really nervous about meeting her fiancé for the first time.
She had never even seen him before. What if she hated him or he hated her. But Sakura sometimes drifted off into a dream that Yukito lifting her up in her arms and saving her from the pressures of being a princess. Sometimes Sakura went as far to dream that he would kiss her with such feeling that she was sure that the dream was true. The memory of the dream kiss made her heart ache with longing, also making her cheeks burn at the thought.
It took awhile for Sakura to realize that Tomoyo was calling her name, and in truth, Sakura did not want to leave this dream land of safety and warmth. SAKURA! Tomoyo shouted for the fifth or sixth time. Hello? Anyone in there? Tomoyo was waving her hand back and forth in front of Sakura's face. When Sakura finally came back from la-la land, Tomoyo instantly guessed what Sakura had been thinking about.
Ah, you were thinking about Prince Charming, weren't you, Tomoyo teased. Ah, how far did you get in the dream this time? Sakura had told Tomoyo before about these dreams she had been having. But Sakura did not want to share this latest dream with anybody. He is mine, she thought possesivly.
THRONE ROOM
Madam, Prince Yuki has just arrived, called out a footman to Queen Nadeshiko (A/N I am pretty sure I spelt that wrong too.) Oh darn, he is right on time, he was supposed to be fashionably late! Thought the Queen. Girls, Girls, GIRLS get down here. The prince has arrived!
PALACE GATES
Whoa, who is that? Thought Syaoran as he looked upon Prince Yuki. Do I have to compete against him? OK the stranger had no I dea what he was talking about and I'm not going to make the princess fall in love with me. Just then a person who had been following the Prince who was on horseback, came up to where Syaoran was gaping at Yuki. Hey, you, the footman to the prince whispered, Come here. The footman beckoned to Syaoran to come. You look familiar said Syaoran. Well I should because I talked to you this morning. Now go and change into these clothes and you will look like me and will be able to go into the palace and meet the princess. The man gave Syaoran some clothes and smiled.Can I not know your name asked Syaoran. The man replied, no not yet . The man disappeared from sight with a ripple of his strong muscles.
So that was the man who came to me this morning, mused Syaoran. I wonder why he wants me to do this?
SOMEWHERE ELSE
So, did you get him the clothes asked Tomoyo with a worried expression on her face. Yes I did replied Eriol. No need to worry my love, Sakura will not need to marry the prince if all goes well.
Ok, that is my second chapter of this story. A little confusing, is it not? Thank you peoples for reading my first fanfic. I hope it is good enough. Read and Review peeps.