Hola everyone!
So sorry for the long wait. Seems I've been doing that with all my stories, doesn't it? Well, sorry to say that this isn't a new chapter. I'm still where I was about two months ago. Anyway, I'd just like to say that I've been revising this story. Chapters one through seven (or the summary through chapter five) are currently revised and posted. I changed a lot of things. Basically, though, I surrounded added a LOT more description and a lot more depth to Lalaine's character.
One thing I would advise anyone to read is the summary. I basically rewrote the it, and I think it's a lot more agreeable with Tolkien's writing. And I explained myself some more. I have a bad habit of being vague and expecting everyone to know what I'm talking about. lol
Anyway, that's all I really have to say. I don't have much time to write nowadays, because I'm so bogged down with schoolwork. And right now I'm working on the revision of the previous chapters, but I'm done with the worst parts, so the rest should be relatively easier. I'll try to find time to revise and work on the current chapter. Thanks!
~*~Meltintalle
So sorry for the long wait. Seems I've been doing that with all my stories, doesn't it? Well, sorry to say that this isn't a new chapter. I'm still where I was about two months ago. Anyway, I'd just like to say that I've been revising this story. Chapters one through seven (or the summary through chapter five) are currently revised and posted. I changed a lot of things. Basically, though, I surrounded added a LOT more description and a lot more depth to Lalaine's character.
One thing I would advise anyone to read is the summary. I basically rewrote the it, and I think it's a lot more agreeable with Tolkien's writing. And I explained myself some more. I have a bad habit of being vague and expecting everyone to know what I'm talking about. lol
Anyway, that's all I really have to say. I don't have much time to write nowadays, because I'm so bogged down with schoolwork. And right now I'm working on the revision of the previous chapters, but I'm done with the worst parts, so the rest should be relatively easier. I'll try to find time to revise and work on the current chapter. Thanks!
~*~Meltintalle