Disclaimer:
I don't own Dark Cloud.
If you didn't see this disclaimer before,
then I am very mad.
Because you forced me to write it again!
Besides, if I did own it..
I'd make Goro be devoured by the white snake.
Because I hate him.
Then I'd add to the game a cool little side thingy.
Where Toan goes on a date with Ruby or Xiao.
Kinda like on FF7.
Which I do not own.
.....
I'm just wasting space out of boredom by the way.
Feel free to skip to the author's note.
This Disclaimer should be done soon though anyway.
Plus I'd make it where Xiao and Ruby had more speaking parts.
And where you could fight your teammates to the death.
So I could kill Goro and steal his hammer to open switches myself.
Well I guess I'll shut up now.
Enough with the idiotic disclaimer.
On with the fic!
I think Steve the Slingshot's rubbing off on me..
That or I'm rubbing off on him.
Because he thinks Xiao is cute.
And so do I!
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Author's Note:
--Guess what folks? I fixed the spacing
goof up! So as long as you can ignore
a bunch of little slashes...
-
--Anyway, I'm up to the Sun and Moon
temple so I thought I'd take a break from
the game and begin chronicling my journeys -
with my own little plotline mixed in. By the way,
does anyone else think the Ice Queen is..
kinda stupid? Pathetic even?
---Well, enough rambling, the couple might
be revealed in this chapter - or it may not.
And hey, if you stick with me and keep reading,
I'll throw in a nice bonus chapter or two after the
end; the more good reviews I get, the more I'll be inspired
to write! Even repeat reviewers! *hint, hint!*
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==(={[DarK ClouD}]=)==
~(Behind the Scenes!)~
[Part II: in which Toan realizes that life is too short]
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(]Adventure Day 15[)
-
-
------Toan woke up with a yawn as he tried to
get up - but he quickly realized that something,
or rather someone, was clinging to his hand.
"Xiao, you've gotta break some of these habits.." he
said, nudging her to wake up. He tried to pull
his hand away but she merely pulled it closer,
hugging it with a content purr. "... this could
take all morning.." he said as he tried to pull his
hand away harder, only to have little claws sink
into it a bit.
--"Ow!" Toan yelled, not waking Xiao up as the
feline girl just pulled his hand closer. "This could
take all morning.." he sighed as he took out some
Regular Water, and uneasily took the top off with
his teeth. "Here's hoping I don't walk away with
scars.."
-
-
----And, a few moments later.. There was a splashing
sound as the water fell upon the feline, followed by
a shriek and a hiss, then a yell of pain, some shouting,
then apologizing, and after half an hour to pack things
up, the duo was off, with Toan's left hand bandaged
due to cat scratches, and a still slightly wet feline
stalking small animals as they went.
-
-
-
--[]A Few Minutes Later..[]---
-
-
-
------Toan and Xiao walked into a patch of trees,
and into a clearing where a treehouse dwelling stood
strong. Suddenly a huge hefty dude fell out of the
tree, the ground quaking at his massive fatness as he
hit the ground, the earth beneath him denting a bit
like on Dragon Ball Z. ((Hahah, yeah. Gotta love
the Goro bashing.))
-
-
-----After a few minutes of Goro's idiotic rambling,
he gets into a fight with Toan, Xiao cheering from the
sidelines.
--(And now to put my fight-scene skills to good use!!)--
--(Please note that the Snake Fight will be muuuch better.)
--(Because I like the snake. Not Goro. Goro doesn't deserve
--a fair fighting scene. He's too useless.))
-
-LET THE DUEL BEGIN!!-
--The goofy dueling music plays out. Toan whips out his
sword as Goro slams his hammer to the ground menacingly.
(Note: This duel will not be accurate to the game's. It will
be cooler. Mwahah.)
"Hya!" Goro shouted, slamming his hammer where Toan was
standing as the green-clad hero dodge-rolled just in time,
spinning and giving a low kick to Goro's legs, tripping him.
"Feh, it was just luck!" Goro shouted, struggling to heave
his massive self up. He swung his hammer in a wide circle,
but Toan was way too quick for the slowpoke as he leapt
agilly into the air, coming down hard and kicking Goro
over the head, knocking the tub-o-lard to the ground with
a massive THUD!.
-
-END DUEL!!-
-
-----Goro got up, gasping for air. He'd lost his breath
entirely. "I.. I'll get you for this!!" he said, climbing up the
ladder to his house. Toan and Xiao shrugged and walked
off as the ladder broke and Goro plunged to the ground,
passing out. (note. When you review? Tell me if I should
just kill Goro and ignore his purpose in the game. = )---)
-
-
-
(]Adventure Day 20[)
(Note: YES, I skipped a lot.)
(But quite frankly I'm skipping the dull parts.)
-
-
-Summary of the Last Few Days:
-----Toan had rebuild a good majority
of the forest town. And he had a cool
new flute to show for it! Oh and he
and Xiao are getting to be friendlier
towards eachother...
-
-
Xiao and Toan walked down the foresty
path, Xiao humming a catchy tune and Toan
checking his pockets to make sure the
supplies weren't low. They reached a clearing
with a large cave. Xiao's nose twitched once
or twice. "Toan, Xiao has a bad feeling
about this.." she said quietly, her tail twitching
nervously as they approached the cave.
Toan pulled out a Bone Sword. "Don't worry
about it, what's the worst that could happen?"
Toan said with a grin as he began playing on
a flute he'd recieved. There was a hideous,
horrific hissing sound from the cave as a monstrous
white snake lunged out, slithering like lightning
between the two as they fell back. Toan glared
as Xiao ran away to a safe distance from the snake
as it turned around, slowly approaching our hero.
-
-(Now for the good duel!! YESSS!!)-
-(Awesome dramatic dueling music plays)-
-
--The snake hissed angrily as it struck at
Toan, who nimbly dodged, but was knocked to
the ground as the snake whipped his feet with
its tail. Toan quickly rolled out of the way, the snake
biting the ground where he once was with lethal poison.
The snake turned, glaring at him with cold red/pink eyes
and lunged for him suddenly. Toan gasped and jumped up
into the air, coming down onto the snake and jabbing it's
hard scaly head, his sword shattering as the snake
reared back, throwing a stunned Toan and a shattered
sword to the ground, a jagged shard of the sword
cutting Toan's left arm. He groaned in pain, a bit of
blood trickling down his arm as the snake hissed coldly,
preparing to devour Toan in one bite. The boy cringed,
the snake lunging down as Toan's life flashed before
his eyes, a single regret entering his mind as he knew
his life was over. "If only I had--"
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(Author's Note: Is he DEAD!? Bwahaha, you won't know untill
you read Part Three!! And you will find out the pairing soon,
hopefully! And by the way, when I said THE WEIRDEST
PAIRING EVER, that shoulda been a dead giveaway.. Oh
and if the new spacing thing with the - - - - bothers you,
let me know in a review. If I get enough complaints I'll
go back to sloppy, spaceless writing. = ) ... Please
no flames, you don't even know if Toan's dead or not!!)
-
-OH one last thing...-
-One big plot modifyer I was thinking of..-
-Should Goro be allowed to live and the story remain
remotely the same...-
-Or should he die in battle and Toan use his hammer
to unlock them button doors?-
-Let me know when you review!!-
-Only your reviews can save (or kill) Goro the Fat One!-
-And Only Your Reviews will bring about bonus chapters
when this fic is over!!!-
-
-
I don't own Dark Cloud.
If you didn't see this disclaimer before,
then I am very mad.
Because you forced me to write it again!
Besides, if I did own it..
I'd make Goro be devoured by the white snake.
Because I hate him.
Then I'd add to the game a cool little side thingy.
Where Toan goes on a date with Ruby or Xiao.
Kinda like on FF7.
Which I do not own.
.....
I'm just wasting space out of boredom by the way.
Feel free to skip to the author's note.
This Disclaimer should be done soon though anyway.
Plus I'd make it where Xiao and Ruby had more speaking parts.
And where you could fight your teammates to the death.
So I could kill Goro and steal his hammer to open switches myself.
Well I guess I'll shut up now.
Enough with the idiotic disclaimer.
On with the fic!
I think Steve the Slingshot's rubbing off on me..
That or I'm rubbing off on him.
Because he thinks Xiao is cute.
And so do I!
-
-
Author's Note:
--Guess what folks? I fixed the spacing
goof up! So as long as you can ignore
a bunch of little slashes...
-
--Anyway, I'm up to the Sun and Moon
temple so I thought I'd take a break from
the game and begin chronicling my journeys -
with my own little plotline mixed in. By the way,
does anyone else think the Ice Queen is..
kinda stupid? Pathetic even?
---Well, enough rambling, the couple might
be revealed in this chapter - or it may not.
And hey, if you stick with me and keep reading,
I'll throw in a nice bonus chapter or two after the
end; the more good reviews I get, the more I'll be inspired
to write! Even repeat reviewers! *hint, hint!*
-
-
-
-
==(={[DarK ClouD}]=)==
~(Behind the Scenes!)~
[Part II: in which Toan realizes that life is too short]
-
-
-
(]Adventure Day 15[)
-
-
------Toan woke up with a yawn as he tried to
get up - but he quickly realized that something,
or rather someone, was clinging to his hand.
"Xiao, you've gotta break some of these habits.." he
said, nudging her to wake up. He tried to pull
his hand away but she merely pulled it closer,
hugging it with a content purr. "... this could
take all morning.." he said as he tried to pull his
hand away harder, only to have little claws sink
into it a bit.
--"Ow!" Toan yelled, not waking Xiao up as the
feline girl just pulled his hand closer. "This could
take all morning.." he sighed as he took out some
Regular Water, and uneasily took the top off with
his teeth. "Here's hoping I don't walk away with
scars.."
-
-
----And, a few moments later.. There was a splashing
sound as the water fell upon the feline, followed by
a shriek and a hiss, then a yell of pain, some shouting,
then apologizing, and after half an hour to pack things
up, the duo was off, with Toan's left hand bandaged
due to cat scratches, and a still slightly wet feline
stalking small animals as they went.
-
-
-
--[]A Few Minutes Later..[]---
-
-
-
------Toan and Xiao walked into a patch of trees,
and into a clearing where a treehouse dwelling stood
strong. Suddenly a huge hefty dude fell out of the
tree, the ground quaking at his massive fatness as he
hit the ground, the earth beneath him denting a bit
like on Dragon Ball Z. ((Hahah, yeah. Gotta love
the Goro bashing.))
-
-
-----After a few minutes of Goro's idiotic rambling,
he gets into a fight with Toan, Xiao cheering from the
sidelines.
--(And now to put my fight-scene skills to good use!!)--
--(Please note that the Snake Fight will be muuuch better.)
--(Because I like the snake. Not Goro. Goro doesn't deserve
--a fair fighting scene. He's too useless.))
-
-LET THE DUEL BEGIN!!-
--The goofy dueling music plays out. Toan whips out his
sword as Goro slams his hammer to the ground menacingly.
(Note: This duel will not be accurate to the game's. It will
be cooler. Mwahah.)
"Hya!" Goro shouted, slamming his hammer where Toan was
standing as the green-clad hero dodge-rolled just in time,
spinning and giving a low kick to Goro's legs, tripping him.
"Feh, it was just luck!" Goro shouted, struggling to heave
his massive self up. He swung his hammer in a wide circle,
but Toan was way too quick for the slowpoke as he leapt
agilly into the air, coming down hard and kicking Goro
over the head, knocking the tub-o-lard to the ground with
a massive THUD!.
-
-END DUEL!!-
-
-----Goro got up, gasping for air. He'd lost his breath
entirely. "I.. I'll get you for this!!" he said, climbing up the
ladder to his house. Toan and Xiao shrugged and walked
off as the ladder broke and Goro plunged to the ground,
passing out. (note. When you review? Tell me if I should
just kill Goro and ignore his purpose in the game. = )---)
-
-
-
(]Adventure Day 20[)
(Note: YES, I skipped a lot.)
(But quite frankly I'm skipping the dull parts.)
-
-
-Summary of the Last Few Days:
-----Toan had rebuild a good majority
of the forest town. And he had a cool
new flute to show for it! Oh and he
and Xiao are getting to be friendlier
towards eachother...
-
-
Xiao and Toan walked down the foresty
path, Xiao humming a catchy tune and Toan
checking his pockets to make sure the
supplies weren't low. They reached a clearing
with a large cave. Xiao's nose twitched once
or twice. "Toan, Xiao has a bad feeling
about this.." she said quietly, her tail twitching
nervously as they approached the cave.
Toan pulled out a Bone Sword. "Don't worry
about it, what's the worst that could happen?"
Toan said with a grin as he began playing on
a flute he'd recieved. There was a hideous,
horrific hissing sound from the cave as a monstrous
white snake lunged out, slithering like lightning
between the two as they fell back. Toan glared
as Xiao ran away to a safe distance from the snake
as it turned around, slowly approaching our hero.
-
-(Now for the good duel!! YESSS!!)-
-(Awesome dramatic dueling music plays)-
-
--The snake hissed angrily as it struck at
Toan, who nimbly dodged, but was knocked to
the ground as the snake whipped his feet with
its tail. Toan quickly rolled out of the way, the snake
biting the ground where he once was with lethal poison.
The snake turned, glaring at him with cold red/pink eyes
and lunged for him suddenly. Toan gasped and jumped up
into the air, coming down onto the snake and jabbing it's
hard scaly head, his sword shattering as the snake
reared back, throwing a stunned Toan and a shattered
sword to the ground, a jagged shard of the sword
cutting Toan's left arm. He groaned in pain, a bit of
blood trickling down his arm as the snake hissed coldly,
preparing to devour Toan in one bite. The boy cringed,
the snake lunging down as Toan's life flashed before
his eyes, a single regret entering his mind as he knew
his life was over. "If only I had--"
-
-
-
-
-
(Author's Note: Is he DEAD!? Bwahaha, you won't know untill
you read Part Three!! And you will find out the pairing soon,
hopefully! And by the way, when I said THE WEIRDEST
PAIRING EVER, that shoulda been a dead giveaway.. Oh
and if the new spacing thing with the - - - - bothers you,
let me know in a review. If I get enough complaints I'll
go back to sloppy, spaceless writing. = ) ... Please
no flames, you don't even know if Toan's dead or not!!)
-
-OH one last thing...-
-One big plot modifyer I was thinking of..-
-Should Goro be allowed to live and the story remain
remotely the same...-
-Or should he die in battle and Toan use his hammer
to unlock them button doors?-
-Let me know when you review!!-
-Only your reviews can save (or kill) Goro the Fat One!-
-And Only Your Reviews will bring about bonus chapters
when this fic is over!!!-
-
-