Ok ok ok...I know the last few chapters have been a bit cruel – but this is
the one where u find out...and I know most of u don't like Chase/Kim but I
dunno sometimes I need a little bit of another story line – Sorry I have
been cruel its just I needed to think of a good storyline so I don't kill
the story to soon – plus your all hooked in...I bet none of u could stop the
story right now and not find out if its Tony (who everyone wants it 2 b) or
Brad....hmmm...well that's all 4 now! Plz READ AND REVIEW!!
Disclaimer – I wish I didn't have to say this – I don't own 24 or any of the characters except I did make up Brad, Leanne and Daniel – but Daniel is half of 24's – Teri was pregnant b4 she got killed by Nina ( - stupid biatch Nina...hate her I heart Teri 4 life!
- Oh 1 last thing if u didn't get my message a few times ago – www.simpleplan.com – they have a new video and its done 24 style – it's awesome!!
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"Hey Michelle"
"Hey Brad"
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Ding Dong
Chase put Angela down in her crib and opened the door "hey hun!" Chase said as he kissed Kim.
"Hey Chase"
"Come in Kim, come in, you can head to the dining room – I'm just gonna put Ang in bed" – Oh yeah – there's something for you on the table...wait till I come down – NO PEEKING..."
"I won't peek...much!!"
"You better not" and with that he grabbed Angela and headed to her room.
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"Wait Brad...what are you doing here...I said I wasn't ready to forgive you yet, I said not tonight, give me time to think...I told you not..."
"I know you did Michelle, but its Valentine's Day and I love you and I wanted to be with you and..."
"I don't care Brad...I just wanted some time away from you – time to think you know. Don't you understand Brad..."
"I completely understand I just wanted to give you this" he said as he pulled out a present and a bouquet of flowers that he had hidden behind his back.
"I just wanted to give you this, and tell you I love you and I'm so sorry and I hope you can forgive me..."
"Maybe one day I can Brad, just right now I need to think."
"Well please at least take the flowers and the present."
"Ok fine, I'll see you at work tomorrow, bye Brad"
Just as Brad was handing over the flowers and the present Tony pulled in the driveway. He saw Brad handing her the flowers.
Maybe Tony had been wrong, maybe he had been wrong to ask Michelle out while she was still going out with Brad, she probably didn't even like him...
With that, he pulled out of the driveway – he knew when he wasn't wanted, he knew when to leave.
Michelle looked up to see Tony leaving the driving – oh no, this had been her big chance with him and it was all because Brad had shown up – Well Brad probably should have shown up – after all he was her boyfriend but still
She had 2 guys that had wanted to take her out on Valentine's Day, and now she had none – this is how most Valentine's Day's are for her – Lonely
Well it wasn't true that neither of them wanted to take her out its just that Michelle didn't want Brad to take her out at the moment and Tony had been hurt.
Maybe next Valentine's Day she'd have somebody to be with she thought, maybe, she never had a boyfriend on Valentine's Day that she truly loved – she could have had Brad this year but they just weren't working out at the moment...
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Ok so I didn't lie – I told you there would be a twist – well sort of twist and I'm sorry no Michelle/Tony yet – I assure you they will b eventually trust me I love Michelle/Tony – oh and girls if you want to imagine Brad – just think of the hottest actor – so like Brad Pitt, or Kiefer or even Carlos (even though those 2 r from 24) or hmm Johnny Depp or maybe for friends lovers MATTHEW PERRY or maybe for some Josh Hartnett...I dunno...tell me in your reviews who your thinking about! – whoever floats your boat – just think about them and that's your Brad – REVIEW plz or you'll never ever get 2 c Michelle end up with Tony...or maybe Brad – I dunno yet – haven't quite decided myself – I'll update soon but I need reviews and ideas as well...I'm running out of ideas – and um some constructive critism on how to improve my writing and story is always appreciated – I won't get offended – I just try to work on it – Thanks for all that have reviewed, it means a lot to me...and Thanks for reading my story that means a lot as well...
Disclaimer – I wish I didn't have to say this – I don't own 24 or any of the characters except I did make up Brad, Leanne and Daniel – but Daniel is half of 24's – Teri was pregnant b4 she got killed by Nina ( - stupid biatch Nina...hate her I heart Teri 4 life!
- Oh 1 last thing if u didn't get my message a few times ago – www.simpleplan.com – they have a new video and its done 24 style – it's awesome!!
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"Hey Michelle"
"Hey Brad"
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Ding Dong
Chase put Angela down in her crib and opened the door "hey hun!" Chase said as he kissed Kim.
"Hey Chase"
"Come in Kim, come in, you can head to the dining room – I'm just gonna put Ang in bed" – Oh yeah – there's something for you on the table...wait till I come down – NO PEEKING..."
"I won't peek...much!!"
"You better not" and with that he grabbed Angela and headed to her room.
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"Wait Brad...what are you doing here...I said I wasn't ready to forgive you yet, I said not tonight, give me time to think...I told you not..."
"I know you did Michelle, but its Valentine's Day and I love you and I wanted to be with you and..."
"I don't care Brad...I just wanted some time away from you – time to think you know. Don't you understand Brad..."
"I completely understand I just wanted to give you this" he said as he pulled out a present and a bouquet of flowers that he had hidden behind his back.
"I just wanted to give you this, and tell you I love you and I'm so sorry and I hope you can forgive me..."
"Maybe one day I can Brad, just right now I need to think."
"Well please at least take the flowers and the present."
"Ok fine, I'll see you at work tomorrow, bye Brad"
Just as Brad was handing over the flowers and the present Tony pulled in the driveway. He saw Brad handing her the flowers.
Maybe Tony had been wrong, maybe he had been wrong to ask Michelle out while she was still going out with Brad, she probably didn't even like him...
With that, he pulled out of the driveway – he knew when he wasn't wanted, he knew when to leave.
Michelle looked up to see Tony leaving the driving – oh no, this had been her big chance with him and it was all because Brad had shown up – Well Brad probably should have shown up – after all he was her boyfriend but still
She had 2 guys that had wanted to take her out on Valentine's Day, and now she had none – this is how most Valentine's Day's are for her – Lonely
Well it wasn't true that neither of them wanted to take her out its just that Michelle didn't want Brad to take her out at the moment and Tony had been hurt.
Maybe next Valentine's Day she'd have somebody to be with she thought, maybe, she never had a boyfriend on Valentine's Day that she truly loved – she could have had Brad this year but they just weren't working out at the moment...
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Ok so I didn't lie – I told you there would be a twist – well sort of twist and I'm sorry no Michelle/Tony yet – I assure you they will b eventually trust me I love Michelle/Tony – oh and girls if you want to imagine Brad – just think of the hottest actor – so like Brad Pitt, or Kiefer or even Carlos (even though those 2 r from 24) or hmm Johnny Depp or maybe for friends lovers MATTHEW PERRY or maybe for some Josh Hartnett...I dunno...tell me in your reviews who your thinking about! – whoever floats your boat – just think about them and that's your Brad – REVIEW plz or you'll never ever get 2 c Michelle end up with Tony...or maybe Brad – I dunno yet – haven't quite decided myself – I'll update soon but I need reviews and ideas as well...I'm running out of ideas – and um some constructive critism on how to improve my writing and story is always appreciated – I won't get offended – I just try to work on it – Thanks for all that have reviewed, it means a lot to me...and Thanks for reading my story that means a lot as well...