Hey y'all thanks for reviewing, but before I start the story again Imma
answer some questions:
Why am I doing these things to Sakura? I love Sakura, she's so cute, but would it really be a story if nothing happened to her, the main character. It's really nothing personal to Sakura, I love her. And I promise to see to it that she does have a happy ending, even if it doesn't happen for a while.
Is there more to come? Well apparently there is, since I'm writing this chapter. I'll put "~end~" at the very end of my story.
I hope you fix this story ? How do I fix it? I can't very well make all the things that you want to happen, without killing the plot, so sorry. She'll get Syaoran in the end, along with a happy ending, but sometimes you have to go through a lot to get to the happy ending. And I agree, Syaoran is a total bastard in the beginning, but that's one of the points in the story, Sakura changes Syaoran, to appreciate everything to a person, not just their chest.
Whelps, on with the story,
(Sakura's POV) As he pushed me away I began crying hysterically. It's not fair, Makoto made me, I didn't want to! Then, Makoto made me lie to Syaoran. I didn't want to hurt Syaoran, but I was afraid of what Makoto might have done if I said 'No, I love Syaoran!' I thought I was doing the right thing. No, I was doing the right thing. Syaoran should believe me; I would never lie to him, unless I had too, to protect his life. I did what was right, and I didn't get Syaoran because of it? That's just stupid; I'm going to make him believe me! I whipped the tears from my eyes, and got up. I wrapped my arms around him again, pushed him against the wall and pressed my lips against his, with every emotion I felt for him.
(Syaoran's POV) As she pushed me against the wall, and kissed me long and hard on the lips I forgot everything, all that mattered was that Sakura was in my arms. I felt her emotion through the kiss, I could feel her love. I wanted that, so much, I wanted her love, and in the instant I knew that I had it. I began to kiss back, as we moved down toward the floor. As the passionate caress of the lips ended, I found myself on top of her. "Well, I-I- well, I'm, I'm sorry." I whispered to her, for that kiss had held the truth, and I now saw what Makoto had done for what it really was, rape. Sakura, my Sakura, had been raped. What filth, from that moment I despised Makoto so incredibly much. Sakura looked at me, and asked, "For what?" "For not believing you, Sakura, I love you." Upon saying these words, I began to cum, again. Upon this action I realized that I had never changed into new pants and/or boxers. A blush spread across my face. "Well, we better get you home." I replied, quickly getting up and off of her and clothing myself. We went to her front door and finally, with the help of Sakura's hair pins, unlocked the front door. "I want to make sure that he isn't still here, you go in your room, and lock the door." "Thank you for caring about me" she replied, hurrying upstairs and locking her door.
(Sakura's POV) I decided that while I was waiting for Syaoran to make sure that the coast was clear I might as well try to unpack some of the boxes that I had neglected over the summer. I ripped open the first one, and saw a small winged stuffed animal, that upon seeing me, and the box opened, sprang out and started yelling at me.
"SAKURA!!! WHY DID YOU FORGET ABOUT ME? WHY DIDN'T' YOU LET ME OUT MONTHS AGO?! FOR ALL I KNOW YOU ARE 59 AND MARRIED TO SOME BRAT! WELL, DON'T JUST STAND THERE, FEED ME!!!!" Kero screamed at me.
"Ok, Ok, honestly Kero, calm down! I'm not 59, I'm in high school, and I'm not married to 'some brat'. I'm sorry that I forgot about you, I should've let you out moths ago. Why didn't you just change into your true form? You could have gotten out that way." I took out a muffin from my lunch and handed it to him.
"You don't think that I've tried? There was something that wouldn't let me, and you are one of the two things that could have stopped me," he glared at me and began to devour the muffin, "I think that you had something to do with it, you didn't want me."
"That's not true Kero! I didn't mean to, I didn't even know that I wasn't letting you. I really am sorry. Forgive me?"
"Depends." He replied stubbornly.
"On what?" I retorted.
"On weather or not you have another muffin in your lunch bag" he said only half teasingly.
I giggled and handed the last muffin over.
"Forgiven!" He said, ecstatic over the muffin. "I love food" he managed to unnecessarily inform me, while attacking the muffin.
"So I noticed" said I.
"Sakura?" there was a knock on the door.
I remained silent.
"It's me, Syaoran, I don't think that Makoto is still here. Can you let me in?"
"Sure!" I replied leaping up and sprinting to the door. Syaoran stepped in.
"He looks like a brat to me" Kero commented as he saw Syaoran.
"What was that?!" Syaoran asked, highly insulted by Kero's comment. I giggled. "He isn't a brat, Kero!"
"If'n you say so, but I don't believe you."
I walked toward Syaoran and kissed him gently on the cheek, he blushed, bright red, which made me smile.
"Come back tonight, at 11' or so, if you want more" she whispered to him, so that Kero couldn't hear.
He grinned, and nodded, "I'll be there." He touched my cheek briefly before turning and leaving.
( I couldn't help, but bring Kero into the story, he's so cute!) Tee hee hee, the next chapter is a lemon!!!! Yay! T'will be fun to write, but now I have homework, so, I shall write more maybe later tonight, or something. Review, Reivew, Review!
Why am I doing these things to Sakura? I love Sakura, she's so cute, but would it really be a story if nothing happened to her, the main character. It's really nothing personal to Sakura, I love her. And I promise to see to it that she does have a happy ending, even if it doesn't happen for a while.
Is there more to come? Well apparently there is, since I'm writing this chapter. I'll put "~end~" at the very end of my story.
I hope you fix this story ? How do I fix it? I can't very well make all the things that you want to happen, without killing the plot, so sorry. She'll get Syaoran in the end, along with a happy ending, but sometimes you have to go through a lot to get to the happy ending. And I agree, Syaoran is a total bastard in the beginning, but that's one of the points in the story, Sakura changes Syaoran, to appreciate everything to a person, not just their chest.
Whelps, on with the story,
(Sakura's POV) As he pushed me away I began crying hysterically. It's not fair, Makoto made me, I didn't want to! Then, Makoto made me lie to Syaoran. I didn't want to hurt Syaoran, but I was afraid of what Makoto might have done if I said 'No, I love Syaoran!' I thought I was doing the right thing. No, I was doing the right thing. Syaoran should believe me; I would never lie to him, unless I had too, to protect his life. I did what was right, and I didn't get Syaoran because of it? That's just stupid; I'm going to make him believe me! I whipped the tears from my eyes, and got up. I wrapped my arms around him again, pushed him against the wall and pressed my lips against his, with every emotion I felt for him.
(Syaoran's POV) As she pushed me against the wall, and kissed me long and hard on the lips I forgot everything, all that mattered was that Sakura was in my arms. I felt her emotion through the kiss, I could feel her love. I wanted that, so much, I wanted her love, and in the instant I knew that I had it. I began to kiss back, as we moved down toward the floor. As the passionate caress of the lips ended, I found myself on top of her. "Well, I-I- well, I'm, I'm sorry." I whispered to her, for that kiss had held the truth, and I now saw what Makoto had done for what it really was, rape. Sakura, my Sakura, had been raped. What filth, from that moment I despised Makoto so incredibly much. Sakura looked at me, and asked, "For what?" "For not believing you, Sakura, I love you." Upon saying these words, I began to cum, again. Upon this action I realized that I had never changed into new pants and/or boxers. A blush spread across my face. "Well, we better get you home." I replied, quickly getting up and off of her and clothing myself. We went to her front door and finally, with the help of Sakura's hair pins, unlocked the front door. "I want to make sure that he isn't still here, you go in your room, and lock the door." "Thank you for caring about me" she replied, hurrying upstairs and locking her door.
(Sakura's POV) I decided that while I was waiting for Syaoran to make sure that the coast was clear I might as well try to unpack some of the boxes that I had neglected over the summer. I ripped open the first one, and saw a small winged stuffed animal, that upon seeing me, and the box opened, sprang out and started yelling at me.
"SAKURA!!! WHY DID YOU FORGET ABOUT ME? WHY DIDN'T' YOU LET ME OUT MONTHS AGO?! FOR ALL I KNOW YOU ARE 59 AND MARRIED TO SOME BRAT! WELL, DON'T JUST STAND THERE, FEED ME!!!!" Kero screamed at me.
"Ok, Ok, honestly Kero, calm down! I'm not 59, I'm in high school, and I'm not married to 'some brat'. I'm sorry that I forgot about you, I should've let you out moths ago. Why didn't you just change into your true form? You could have gotten out that way." I took out a muffin from my lunch and handed it to him.
"You don't think that I've tried? There was something that wouldn't let me, and you are one of the two things that could have stopped me," he glared at me and began to devour the muffin, "I think that you had something to do with it, you didn't want me."
"That's not true Kero! I didn't mean to, I didn't even know that I wasn't letting you. I really am sorry. Forgive me?"
"Depends." He replied stubbornly.
"On what?" I retorted.
"On weather or not you have another muffin in your lunch bag" he said only half teasingly.
I giggled and handed the last muffin over.
"Forgiven!" He said, ecstatic over the muffin. "I love food" he managed to unnecessarily inform me, while attacking the muffin.
"So I noticed" said I.
"Sakura?" there was a knock on the door.
I remained silent.
"It's me, Syaoran, I don't think that Makoto is still here. Can you let me in?"
"Sure!" I replied leaping up and sprinting to the door. Syaoran stepped in.
"He looks like a brat to me" Kero commented as he saw Syaoran.
"What was that?!" Syaoran asked, highly insulted by Kero's comment. I giggled. "He isn't a brat, Kero!"
"If'n you say so, but I don't believe you."
I walked toward Syaoran and kissed him gently on the cheek, he blushed, bright red, which made me smile.
"Come back tonight, at 11' or so, if you want more" she whispered to him, so that Kero couldn't hear.
He grinned, and nodded, "I'll be there." He touched my cheek briefly before turning and leaving.
( I couldn't help, but bring Kero into the story, he's so cute!) Tee hee hee, the next chapter is a lemon!!!! Yay! T'will be fun to write, but now I have homework, so, I shall write more maybe later tonight, or something. Review, Reivew, Review!