First off sorry I always take so long to bring out the next chapter but
lately I been loosing my internet a lot because I just moved and I am
having a lot of problems with my tower. Because of my comp problems my
keyboard skips a lot so excuse me for any spelling and Grammar errors (I
don't have spell and gram check). Also Kingdom Hearts and its characters do
not belong to me and are Copyright by Squaresoft and Disney, and that same
copyright thing goes for my previous and upcoming chapters.
The story thus far.
Sora is a 7-year-old kid living on an island with his friends. Recently a
girl named Kiari has come to live on the island from some unknown place and
has quickly become friends with Sora but is still teased by Riku who dose
not seem to want to accept her. Now it is some time later, Sora is 11 and
still great friends with Kiari and Riku but Kiari and Riku still don't get
along that well. I've blabbered on enough so read on.
.Sora sat up, his head ached after last night when he ran into the wall. He Realized he was still on the floor in front of the wall he had run into. He slowly stood realizing it was still night. He walked up the stairs to his room and before falling over onto his bed he heard a strange voice that seemed to say "door of light" but just faintly. To tired to think he ignored it and flopped onto his bed and fell asleep quickly. The next morning he ran outside still a little drowsy to meet Riku like he usually did by the boats. He reached the Boats and was surprised to not see Riku there waiting for him. "Riku is usually here first" he thought. Sora laid back but was up quickly again after hearing Riku call to him. He stood waiting as Riku caught up to him looking extremely worried. "Hey Riku what's wrong?" "It's Kiari! She was standing by the high edge of the island because I dared her to and she fell. I didn't think she would actually do it though! She is hanging on the edge and I don't know how long a girl like her can hold on" "Well that was a real smart thing to do Riku! Come on we got to go help her." Riku and Sora raced off up hill to the higher grounds of the island to Kiari. They reached the edge and looked over. About 100feet down was the ocean and about 10 feet down was Kiari hanging on for her life. "SORA!!! HELP!!!!" "I will but I don't know what to do" "HURRY!!!" Kiari began to slip, her palms getting sweatier by the second, Sora thought quickly. "Riku go get some pulls and I'll make some tree lashings to put them together" "Right" Sora and Riku ran off to get the things they needed. They met up in the village and began tying the poles together. They were running back to Kiari after only 10 minutes of running away. Sora got there first because the wait of the poles slowed Riku down. Sora looked down to see Kiari still there but barely hanging on. Riku had not yet arrived Kiari suddenly slipped. Sora jumped down after her not thinking. He grabbed on to her by the ankle. He closed his eyes and hoping to grab something, grabbed at the air. To his surprise he was holding onto something. He opened his eyes and looked up to see Riku above him holding onto one end of the pole and himself holding on to the other end. Kiari then opened her eyes to and was staring down at the ocean. She was about to scream till she realized she was not falling. She looked up and saw Sora holding onto the poles and her ankle. Sora looked down at her with relief. "Kiari, grab onto the cliff and there for a second" Kiari did as she was told and was no longer upside down. Riku lowered Sora abit bringing him to Kiari's level. "Ok Kiari, grab on to me." "Kiari grabbed on around Sora's neck with one arm and then the other. Sora put his arm around her back and Riku began pulling both of them up. He began having trouble, their wait too much for him. Suddenly they were being pulled up a lot faster. They reached the top to find not only Riku there but also Tidus and Waka to.
*** Sora and Riku were sitting on the bent over tree staring out over the ocean. A gentle breeze was blowing and it was completely quiet. The sky was orange with the sun's setting glow. Kiari came walking up behind them and leaned over the tree by Sora who was on the outer part of the tree. "Hey Kiari" Sora's voice was calm saying this as he bothered not to look over at her. "Hi Sora" her voice still a little jumpy from earlier also not bothering to look. It was quiet from there. No words were made except for that of the breezes. For awhile nothing was said, all three were just quite. The sky grew dark and stars began to fill the sky. Sora's stare over the ocean was now upon the stars. The silence finely broke by Sora's words. "Hey Riku, isn't the star we normally always look at (because it never moves) gone?" Riku's gaze was now pulled to the stars by Sora's question. "I Don't see it, I think your right" Suddenly a star was blackened, one very close to ware their "normal" star was. Sorry if this or any of the other chapters were to small. And also I showed my friend this story and he thought I was getting to the part already ware Sora has that dream thing on the beach (beginning of the game) already and so just so there is no confusion I am no ware near that part. That don't happen till Sora is 14 and he is 11 right now.
Please R&R Constructive criticism welcome NO FLAMEING!! It's rude
.Sora sat up, his head ached after last night when he ran into the wall. He Realized he was still on the floor in front of the wall he had run into. He slowly stood realizing it was still night. He walked up the stairs to his room and before falling over onto his bed he heard a strange voice that seemed to say "door of light" but just faintly. To tired to think he ignored it and flopped onto his bed and fell asleep quickly. The next morning he ran outside still a little drowsy to meet Riku like he usually did by the boats. He reached the Boats and was surprised to not see Riku there waiting for him. "Riku is usually here first" he thought. Sora laid back but was up quickly again after hearing Riku call to him. He stood waiting as Riku caught up to him looking extremely worried. "Hey Riku what's wrong?" "It's Kiari! She was standing by the high edge of the island because I dared her to and she fell. I didn't think she would actually do it though! She is hanging on the edge and I don't know how long a girl like her can hold on" "Well that was a real smart thing to do Riku! Come on we got to go help her." Riku and Sora raced off up hill to the higher grounds of the island to Kiari. They reached the edge and looked over. About 100feet down was the ocean and about 10 feet down was Kiari hanging on for her life. "SORA!!! HELP!!!!" "I will but I don't know what to do" "HURRY!!!" Kiari began to slip, her palms getting sweatier by the second, Sora thought quickly. "Riku go get some pulls and I'll make some tree lashings to put them together" "Right" Sora and Riku ran off to get the things they needed. They met up in the village and began tying the poles together. They were running back to Kiari after only 10 minutes of running away. Sora got there first because the wait of the poles slowed Riku down. Sora looked down to see Kiari still there but barely hanging on. Riku had not yet arrived Kiari suddenly slipped. Sora jumped down after her not thinking. He grabbed on to her by the ankle. He closed his eyes and hoping to grab something, grabbed at the air. To his surprise he was holding onto something. He opened his eyes and looked up to see Riku above him holding onto one end of the pole and himself holding on to the other end. Kiari then opened her eyes to and was staring down at the ocean. She was about to scream till she realized she was not falling. She looked up and saw Sora holding onto the poles and her ankle. Sora looked down at her with relief. "Kiari, grab onto the cliff and there for a second" Kiari did as she was told and was no longer upside down. Riku lowered Sora abit bringing him to Kiari's level. "Ok Kiari, grab on to me." "Kiari grabbed on around Sora's neck with one arm and then the other. Sora put his arm around her back and Riku began pulling both of them up. He began having trouble, their wait too much for him. Suddenly they were being pulled up a lot faster. They reached the top to find not only Riku there but also Tidus and Waka to.
*** Sora and Riku were sitting on the bent over tree staring out over the ocean. A gentle breeze was blowing and it was completely quiet. The sky was orange with the sun's setting glow. Kiari came walking up behind them and leaned over the tree by Sora who was on the outer part of the tree. "Hey Kiari" Sora's voice was calm saying this as he bothered not to look over at her. "Hi Sora" her voice still a little jumpy from earlier also not bothering to look. It was quiet from there. No words were made except for that of the breezes. For awhile nothing was said, all three were just quite. The sky grew dark and stars began to fill the sky. Sora's stare over the ocean was now upon the stars. The silence finely broke by Sora's words. "Hey Riku, isn't the star we normally always look at (because it never moves) gone?" Riku's gaze was now pulled to the stars by Sora's question. "I Don't see it, I think your right" Suddenly a star was blackened, one very close to ware their "normal" star was. Sorry if this or any of the other chapters were to small. And also I showed my friend this story and he thought I was getting to the part already ware Sora has that dream thing on the beach (beginning of the game) already and so just so there is no confusion I am no ware near that part. That don't happen till Sora is 14 and he is 11 right now.
Please R&R Constructive criticism welcome NO FLAMEING!! It's rude