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Disclaimer:
I don't own Harvest Moon or it's characters, Natsume does.
Rating: PG-13
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Author's Notes:
1. This is based on Harvest Moon : BTN (Back to Nature)
2. It is suggested that you read 'Harvest Moon : Gray's Revenge' because the events here depend on what happened in HM : Gray's Revenge.
3. And uh... Read & Review...
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[A Harvest Moon Vacation]
CHAPTER 1, SUMMER : INVITATION
------9:00 AM, SUMMER 4th, YEAR 3------
*Everyone is trying to adjust from what happened last Spring* (1)
JACK (talking to Karen, his wife): Wow! Look at how time passes! It's summer already!
KAREN : Yeah, It seems like yesterday everyone was mourning over Gray.
JACK : Please, don't remind me of that...
KAREN : *giggles* I remember how you got your ass kicked...
JACK : I guess it was a bit funny...
*Someone knocks on Jack's door*
JACK : Huh? Who is it?
"It's me! Popuri!"
KAREN : I wonder what Popuri wants?
JACK : Beats me... *goes toward the door* Hold on! I'm coming!
*Jack opens the door*
JACK : Hi Popuri!
POPURI : *waving frantically* Hi Jack! Hi Karen!
KAREN & JACK : Hi!
JACK : So, What's up?
POPURI : *in a sweet, yet annoying tone* Well... Try to guess!
KAREN : Hmm... It's the end of the world?
*Popuri sticks her tongue out at Karen*
POPURI : Wrong!
KAREN : Well, What?
POPURI : Kai is offering the WHOLE town, a vacation at Moon Island! For free, All expenses paid!
KAREN : That Kai, Trying to show off again...
JACK : Sounds good. I guess everyone needs a vacation after what happened. Did you tell the Mayor?
POPURI : Yup, he was delighted! And he said that everyone should go!
JACK : When do we leave?
POPURI : Kai said that the departure will be at 3pm, the day after tomorrow.
KAREN : *her jaw drops* That soon?!
JACK : Isn't that a bit early? And what will I do about my crops?
POPURI : Kai said some people will handle that.
JACK : Who?
POPURI : Kai said some corporation is gonna be responsible for it... Ask him yourself.
JACK : I guess that's alright... Let's Go!
------1:00 PM------
*Jack visits Mayor Thomas, brings with him his mallet & hoe (don't ask me why...)*
*knock, knock*
MAYOR : Come in!
*Jack walks in and shakes the hand of the mayor*
JACK : Hi Mayor!
MAYOR : Oh Jack! Have you heard the news?
JACK : Yes I did. Popuri told me & Karen.
MAYOR : I see... I'm sure you know why we're taking a vacation...
JACK : Gray?
MAYOR : That's right... We all need a break... So we'll leave ASAP.
JACK : Okay Mayor, Just makin' sure that Popuri's not pullin' a prank... Well anyway, See you!
*waves goodbye to the mayor*
MAYOR : Bye Jack! See you tomorrow!
JACK : Aw hell! So we really are going to some island in the middle of nowhere.
*Jack walks to the clinic to see Elli*
JACK : *knocks on door* Hello! It's me, Jack! I came for those pregnancy test thingies!
*Doctor opens the door and stares at Jack in a very scary manner*
JACK : *freaked out by the doctor* U-um... Elli asked me to drop by and pick up those pregnancy test stuff... Is she in?
DOCTOR : ...
*Doctor stares at Jack even scarier than a while ago*
JACK : Um... I could go by tomorrow if now is a bad time...
*The doctor does an evil grin*
*Jack starts to step back from the door*
DOCTOR : Hold it!
JACK : Yes?
DOCTOR : Come in...
JACK : Uh... I think I have some farming to do... bye!
*Jack runs frantically to the chapel and enters the confessionary box*
JACK : Pastor Carter....
CARTER : Yes? Tell me your sins...
JACK : Well... Actually....
CARTER : You don't have to be ashamed...
JACK : I think that the doctor might be possessed.
CARTER : Oh really?
JACK : Yeah... He gave me an evil sadistic grin...
CARTER : It's alright...
JACK : Really?
CARTER : You're not the first...
JACK : ...
CARTER : ... Your sins are forgiven ...
*Jack runs out the chapel*
JACK : *huff* Maybe the doctor is gone...
*Jack walks back to the clinic*
JACK : Or maybe he's preparing a table so he can open me up & take my guts ...
*Jack gets second thoughts and runs back home*
As Jack walked home, he passed by the square and sees Elli*
JACK : *waves at Elli* Elli!
ELLI : Oh Jack! I already passed by and dropped off the pregnancy test...
JACK : Is that why you weren't at the clinic?
ELLI : *gasp* You passed by the clinic?!
JACK : Er.. Yeah... *changes the topic* What a lovely dress you're wearing!
ELLI : It's the dress I wear everyday...
JACK : Um... It suits you!
ELLI : *weirded out by Jack* ...
JACK : Alright Elli... Have you noticed anything weird about the doctor?
ELLI : Huh? ... *thinks deeply* ... Ah! Was the doctor giving you a weird stare?
JACK : *nods*
ELLI : Grrr... He did it again!
*Elli runs off to the clinic*
JACK : Did what? (I know what you think he did! Don't try to hide it!)
*Jack, traumatized for life, goes home to rest*
(Note: Jack gets nightmares of the doctor trying to take his guts)
------6:00am , SUMMER 6th , YEAR 3------
*Jack wakes up from the nightmare screaming & Karen fixes him breakfast*
JACK : Good Morning...
KAREN : Good Morning... Honey, you were screaming in the bed last night... Were you having a nightmare?
JACK : Huh? *Pretending not to know* Was I?
KAREN : Yes... And you were saying something about medicine...
JACK : It must've been a bad dream...
KAREN : Oh ok...
JACK : Honey, did you pack your things?
KAREN : Done... What about you?
*Jack stays quiet for a while*
JACK : ....
KAREN : What do you mean by '....' ?
JACK : *scratching the back of his head* Sorry honey! I forgot!
KAREN : *sigh* I should've known. Anyway, we still have a bit of time before we leave. So hurry!
* Jack manages to pack his things in a jiffy *
KAREN : Did you forget anything else?
JACK : Nope. (Jack's Mind : At least I don't think so...)
KAREN : Good! We're all set to go!
JACK : Alright! Let's go to the beach!
* Jack & Karen walk to the beach with their bags *
*At the beach, were ALL the citizens of Mineral Town*
JACK : *jaw drops* Wow!
KAREN : Wow... Everyone's here... As in EVERYONE!
*Mayor walks up to them*
MAYOR : Jack! Karen! We're just waiting for the boat to arrive...
JACK : I see...
KAREN : Everyone is really going!
MAYOR : Why yes... It wouldn't be the same if someone were to be left behind...
JACK : We'll just go over there so we can leave our bags...
MAYOR : Oh sure!
*Jack & Karen drop their bags on the sand in front of Kai's shack*
JACK : *Sees thye boat from afar* Look! It's a cruise!
KAREN : *looks around for it* Where?!
JACK : *points in one direction* There!
KAREN : *finally sees the cruise* Wow! It's so beautiful!
JACK : It looks big!
KAI : It's called the 'Mineral Rider'...
*Jack & Karen were scared like hell*
JACK : What the... Kai!!!
KAI : Hehehe... That was fun...
*Karen slaps Kai silly*
KAI : *swollen* Oww... You didn't have to do that...
KAREN : Serves you right!
JACK : Aren't you on the boat?
KAI : No...
JACK : Huh?
KAI : I'll explain some other time... Hurry up and get your asses on board...
KAREN : You wanna get slapped again?
KAI : Heh... Whatever, just hurry...
*Jack & Karen take on last look at the town before they get on the ship*
JACK : *sigh*
KAREN : Why do you look sad?
JACK : I'm gonna miss this place...
KAREN : It's just gonna be one season...
JACK : I guess you're right.
*The ship departs*
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Okee people! There you go! Chapter 1 of the Sequel of Gray's Revenge!
Ja ne!
Note: I'll write the next Chapter if I get at least 4 reviews...
Is that fair or a little mean? Anyway, just review if you think so... hehehe!
Disclaimer:
I don't own Harvest Moon or it's characters, Natsume does.
Rating: PG-13
----------------------------------------------------------------
Author's Notes:
1. This is based on Harvest Moon : BTN (Back to Nature)
2. It is suggested that you read 'Harvest Moon : Gray's Revenge' because the events here depend on what happened in HM : Gray's Revenge.
3. And uh... Read & Review...
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[A Harvest Moon Vacation]
CHAPTER 1, SUMMER : INVITATION
------9:00 AM, SUMMER 4th, YEAR 3------
*Everyone is trying to adjust from what happened last Spring* (1)
JACK (talking to Karen, his wife): Wow! Look at how time passes! It's summer already!
KAREN : Yeah, It seems like yesterday everyone was mourning over Gray.
JACK : Please, don't remind me of that...
KAREN : *giggles* I remember how you got your ass kicked...
JACK : I guess it was a bit funny...
*Someone knocks on Jack's door*
JACK : Huh? Who is it?
"It's me! Popuri!"
KAREN : I wonder what Popuri wants?
JACK : Beats me... *goes toward the door* Hold on! I'm coming!
*Jack opens the door*
JACK : Hi Popuri!
POPURI : *waving frantically* Hi Jack! Hi Karen!
KAREN & JACK : Hi!
JACK : So, What's up?
POPURI : *in a sweet, yet annoying tone* Well... Try to guess!
KAREN : Hmm... It's the end of the world?
*Popuri sticks her tongue out at Karen*
POPURI : Wrong!
KAREN : Well, What?
POPURI : Kai is offering the WHOLE town, a vacation at Moon Island! For free, All expenses paid!
KAREN : That Kai, Trying to show off again...
JACK : Sounds good. I guess everyone needs a vacation after what happened. Did you tell the Mayor?
POPURI : Yup, he was delighted! And he said that everyone should go!
JACK : When do we leave?
POPURI : Kai said that the departure will be at 3pm, the day after tomorrow.
KAREN : *her jaw drops* That soon?!
JACK : Isn't that a bit early? And what will I do about my crops?
POPURI : Kai said some people will handle that.
JACK : Who?
POPURI : Kai said some corporation is gonna be responsible for it... Ask him yourself.
JACK : I guess that's alright... Let's Go!
------1:00 PM------
*Jack visits Mayor Thomas, brings with him his mallet & hoe (don't ask me why...)*
*knock, knock*
MAYOR : Come in!
*Jack walks in and shakes the hand of the mayor*
JACK : Hi Mayor!
MAYOR : Oh Jack! Have you heard the news?
JACK : Yes I did. Popuri told me & Karen.
MAYOR : I see... I'm sure you know why we're taking a vacation...
JACK : Gray?
MAYOR : That's right... We all need a break... So we'll leave ASAP.
JACK : Okay Mayor, Just makin' sure that Popuri's not pullin' a prank... Well anyway, See you!
*waves goodbye to the mayor*
MAYOR : Bye Jack! See you tomorrow!
JACK : Aw hell! So we really are going to some island in the middle of nowhere.
*Jack walks to the clinic to see Elli*
JACK : *knocks on door* Hello! It's me, Jack! I came for those pregnancy test thingies!
*Doctor opens the door and stares at Jack in a very scary manner*
JACK : *freaked out by the doctor* U-um... Elli asked me to drop by and pick up those pregnancy test stuff... Is she in?
DOCTOR : ...
*Doctor stares at Jack even scarier than a while ago*
JACK : Um... I could go by tomorrow if now is a bad time...
*The doctor does an evil grin*
*Jack starts to step back from the door*
DOCTOR : Hold it!
JACK : Yes?
DOCTOR : Come in...
JACK : Uh... I think I have some farming to do... bye!
*Jack runs frantically to the chapel and enters the confessionary box*
JACK : Pastor Carter....
CARTER : Yes? Tell me your sins...
JACK : Well... Actually....
CARTER : You don't have to be ashamed...
JACK : I think that the doctor might be possessed.
CARTER : Oh really?
JACK : Yeah... He gave me an evil sadistic grin...
CARTER : It's alright...
JACK : Really?
CARTER : You're not the first...
JACK : ...
CARTER : ... Your sins are forgiven ...
*Jack runs out the chapel*
JACK : *huff* Maybe the doctor is gone...
*Jack walks back to the clinic*
JACK : Or maybe he's preparing a table so he can open me up & take my guts ...
*Jack gets second thoughts and runs back home*
As Jack walked home, he passed by the square and sees Elli*
JACK : *waves at Elli* Elli!
ELLI : Oh Jack! I already passed by and dropped off the pregnancy test...
JACK : Is that why you weren't at the clinic?
ELLI : *gasp* You passed by the clinic?!
JACK : Er.. Yeah... *changes the topic* What a lovely dress you're wearing!
ELLI : It's the dress I wear everyday...
JACK : Um... It suits you!
ELLI : *weirded out by Jack* ...
JACK : Alright Elli... Have you noticed anything weird about the doctor?
ELLI : Huh? ... *thinks deeply* ... Ah! Was the doctor giving you a weird stare?
JACK : *nods*
ELLI : Grrr... He did it again!
*Elli runs off to the clinic*
JACK : Did what? (I know what you think he did! Don't try to hide it!)
*Jack, traumatized for life, goes home to rest*
(Note: Jack gets nightmares of the doctor trying to take his guts)
------6:00am , SUMMER 6th , YEAR 3------
*Jack wakes up from the nightmare screaming & Karen fixes him breakfast*
JACK : Good Morning...
KAREN : Good Morning... Honey, you were screaming in the bed last night... Were you having a nightmare?
JACK : Huh? *Pretending not to know* Was I?
KAREN : Yes... And you were saying something about medicine...
JACK : It must've been a bad dream...
KAREN : Oh ok...
JACK : Honey, did you pack your things?
KAREN : Done... What about you?
*Jack stays quiet for a while*
JACK : ....
KAREN : What do you mean by '....' ?
JACK : *scratching the back of his head* Sorry honey! I forgot!
KAREN : *sigh* I should've known. Anyway, we still have a bit of time before we leave. So hurry!
* Jack manages to pack his things in a jiffy *
KAREN : Did you forget anything else?
JACK : Nope. (Jack's Mind : At least I don't think so...)
KAREN : Good! We're all set to go!
JACK : Alright! Let's go to the beach!
* Jack & Karen walk to the beach with their bags *
*At the beach, were ALL the citizens of Mineral Town*
JACK : *jaw drops* Wow!
KAREN : Wow... Everyone's here... As in EVERYONE!
*Mayor walks up to them*
MAYOR : Jack! Karen! We're just waiting for the boat to arrive...
JACK : I see...
KAREN : Everyone is really going!
MAYOR : Why yes... It wouldn't be the same if someone were to be left behind...
JACK : We'll just go over there so we can leave our bags...
MAYOR : Oh sure!
*Jack & Karen drop their bags on the sand in front of Kai's shack*
JACK : *Sees thye boat from afar* Look! It's a cruise!
KAREN : *looks around for it* Where?!
JACK : *points in one direction* There!
KAREN : *finally sees the cruise* Wow! It's so beautiful!
JACK : It looks big!
KAI : It's called the 'Mineral Rider'...
*Jack & Karen were scared like hell*
JACK : What the... Kai!!!
KAI : Hehehe... That was fun...
*Karen slaps Kai silly*
KAI : *swollen* Oww... You didn't have to do that...
KAREN : Serves you right!
JACK : Aren't you on the boat?
KAI : No...
JACK : Huh?
KAI : I'll explain some other time... Hurry up and get your asses on board...
KAREN : You wanna get slapped again?
KAI : Heh... Whatever, just hurry...
*Jack & Karen take on last look at the town before they get on the ship*
JACK : *sigh*
KAREN : Why do you look sad?
JACK : I'm gonna miss this place...
KAREN : It's just gonna be one season...
JACK : I guess you're right.
*The ship departs*
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Okee people! There you go! Chapter 1 of the Sequel of Gray's Revenge!
Ja ne!
Note: I'll write the next Chapter if I get at least 4 reviews...
Is that fair or a little mean? Anyway, just review if you think so... hehehe!