A/N: finals just passed and my grades are in... finally found the time to
write... pls continue to r&r :)
To Fuzzy Li'l Bella-Chan, thanks... it means a lot to me : )
To hyper cherry blossom, if this was suppose to be a flame,
Quote: The following review has been submitted to: Spicy Love Chapter: 1
From: hyper cherry blossom(hyper cherry BLoSSom@OTAIL.COM)
yours realy needs to be edited, i even got more reviews the u did you jackass (u cant see me!!)\/\/0rD LyF
then I'm afraid your attack is lost on me. I would rather suggest that you take the time to actually read all the chapters first before you decide I'm not meant to be a writer. I would like to point out to you the date it was published compared to my first fanfiction, also found in my profile page, in case your eyes miss that. It's been nearly a year since I last wrote any fanfictions and instead wrote fictions, if you care to check my account at fictionpress.net. I do plan to edit it as soon as I have the time for it. I'm busy with other stuff, if you're not, that requires my attention as well, like my research paper that comprises my final grade for one of my majors this term. If your only reason for writing was to get many reviews, then I guess you have no idea of the passion involve in writing. As writers, we write what we want for the people and if they like it, then good, if they don't, there's nothing we can do about it. We write because we believe in something or we want to share an idea, not to gain popularity and have fan clubs or something. It would do you good to re-evaluate yourself as a writer. Take note also, I did not told you off on that it needs to be edited, because I can accept that I need to edit it again for it to be perfect and it's considered constructive criticism, but on your pointing out that you have more reviews, that is an insult and a destructive criticism, unless you're not aware of the difference. I appreciate the reviews I receive because it brings me pleasure to find that someone likes my ideas and my efforts are not wasted, but it doesn't mean that reviews are my life as a writer and that without them, I would quit being a writer. That's where you're wrong. I decided to continue writing fanfics because I got over some problems regarding my view on my writing and if you'd take time to read my reviews on fictionpress.net, or better yet, read one of my essays, you'd understand what I meant by problems. Unlike you, I'd set up a group to help some of us improve, learn and grow together as writers. And on second thought, why don't you join since you're into editing and stuff, the web address is . I hope you think about what you said before you review again, not only on my work, but on the others as well. Never point out you got tons more reviews than others because it would only degrade you in the eyes of other writers. I know some of my words are harsh but there is nothing I can do about it to get my point across. And I'm sorry if it causes you some pain but it's for your own good as well.
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Kagome and Sango held on to each other for dear life. A man. A man emerged from the water where the girl had fallen. They watched as Akane huffed and looked a cross between embarrassment, anger and resignation?
Kagome looked at her new friend and blinked a couple of times to make sure she's not just seeing things. But every time she opened her eyes, she still saw the same expression.
Akane let out an awkward laugh and settled back in the spring. She bonked the side of her head and looked at them sheepishly. "Ano... I guess the secret's out. Ranma wa honto ni ottoko desu." She began, her forefingers meeting each other in a sure gesture of one having trouble explaining something unusual. "Before he and his father, that's the panda over there, came to live with us, they were training in China. They both had the misfortune of falling into one of the millions of cursed springs in Jusenkyo."
"Jusenkyo?" Kagome asked.
"It's a popular training spot for martial artists." Akane elaborated. "He's my fiancé. He's also 16 years old and we're in the same class at Furinkan high school. He's a good martial artist and had defeated most of his enemies. He has a lot of fiancés..."Akane looked up sheepishly and found the two staring at her again. "I'm babbling aren't I? It's just that I'm afraid that you'll find us weird and freak out." (it's a bit OOC but can't be helped since it is kind of an unusual situation...)
"Iie." Kagome shook her head and said, "Believe me; I've seen stranger things since I landed on this place." Kagome looked down into the water in a thoughtful manner, wishing fervently that they'll equate the blush she could feel heating up her face to the heat of the springs.
"Ma, then it means you've been here that long already?" Akane asked.
"Hmm... come to think of it, Kagome-chan's been here for a long time... longer than I thought. She's already been traveling here for some time when I met her." Sango answered.
Silence reigned for awhile. Akane spoke up a little hesitantly, "ano... Higurashi-san, that person, with the silver-hair, is he a youkai?"
"Iie. He's a hanyou and we've been traveling together. He was the first person I met here..."Her voice trailed off as flashes of the time they'd spent together went through her mind.
She recalled the first hug he gave her, although he did threw her into the well and grabbed the shikon no tama from her, it still counts. The way he always rushed to her rescue. The way he would shout out her name, like the way he's doing now, makes her feel that he cares... wait! Now?
Kagome turned her head just as Inuyasha emerged from the bushes behind them still shouting her name.
He looked around wildly, his ears alert for any danger, when his eyes finally settled on the three girls staring at him with their mouths hanging down. Before he could react further, Kagome closed her eyes, her hands hugging her chest, she screamed, "OSUWARI."
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A/N: I know, short chappie... but I'm still trying to think of what's going to happen... minna-san, keep reading and reviewing and bear with me since I have no idea where it's headed... ja ne
Glossary: Honto – really
Ottoko – man/male
Iie – no
Hanyou – half demon
Osuwari – sit down... sounds much funnier than sit down, don't you think?
To Fuzzy Li'l Bella-Chan, thanks... it means a lot to me : )
To hyper cherry blossom, if this was suppose to be a flame,
Quote: The following review has been submitted to: Spicy Love Chapter: 1
From: hyper cherry blossom(hyper cherry BLoSSom@OTAIL.COM)
yours realy needs to be edited, i even got more reviews the u did you jackass (u cant see me!!)\/\/0rD LyF
then I'm afraid your attack is lost on me. I would rather suggest that you take the time to actually read all the chapters first before you decide I'm not meant to be a writer. I would like to point out to you the date it was published compared to my first fanfiction, also found in my profile page, in case your eyes miss that. It's been nearly a year since I last wrote any fanfictions and instead wrote fictions, if you care to check my account at fictionpress.net. I do plan to edit it as soon as I have the time for it. I'm busy with other stuff, if you're not, that requires my attention as well, like my research paper that comprises my final grade for one of my majors this term. If your only reason for writing was to get many reviews, then I guess you have no idea of the passion involve in writing. As writers, we write what we want for the people and if they like it, then good, if they don't, there's nothing we can do about it. We write because we believe in something or we want to share an idea, not to gain popularity and have fan clubs or something. It would do you good to re-evaluate yourself as a writer. Take note also, I did not told you off on that it needs to be edited, because I can accept that I need to edit it again for it to be perfect and it's considered constructive criticism, but on your pointing out that you have more reviews, that is an insult and a destructive criticism, unless you're not aware of the difference. I appreciate the reviews I receive because it brings me pleasure to find that someone likes my ideas and my efforts are not wasted, but it doesn't mean that reviews are my life as a writer and that without them, I would quit being a writer. That's where you're wrong. I decided to continue writing fanfics because I got over some problems regarding my view on my writing and if you'd take time to read my reviews on fictionpress.net, or better yet, read one of my essays, you'd understand what I meant by problems. Unlike you, I'd set up a group to help some of us improve, learn and grow together as writers. And on second thought, why don't you join since you're into editing and stuff, the web address is . I hope you think about what you said before you review again, not only on my work, but on the others as well. Never point out you got tons more reviews than others because it would only degrade you in the eyes of other writers. I know some of my words are harsh but there is nothing I can do about it to get my point across. And I'm sorry if it causes you some pain but it's for your own good as well.
* * * * *
Kagome and Sango held on to each other for dear life. A man. A man emerged from the water where the girl had fallen. They watched as Akane huffed and looked a cross between embarrassment, anger and resignation?
Kagome looked at her new friend and blinked a couple of times to make sure she's not just seeing things. But every time she opened her eyes, she still saw the same expression.
Akane let out an awkward laugh and settled back in the spring. She bonked the side of her head and looked at them sheepishly. "Ano... I guess the secret's out. Ranma wa honto ni ottoko desu." She began, her forefingers meeting each other in a sure gesture of one having trouble explaining something unusual. "Before he and his father, that's the panda over there, came to live with us, they were training in China. They both had the misfortune of falling into one of the millions of cursed springs in Jusenkyo."
"Jusenkyo?" Kagome asked.
"It's a popular training spot for martial artists." Akane elaborated. "He's my fiancé. He's also 16 years old and we're in the same class at Furinkan high school. He's a good martial artist and had defeated most of his enemies. He has a lot of fiancés..."Akane looked up sheepishly and found the two staring at her again. "I'm babbling aren't I? It's just that I'm afraid that you'll find us weird and freak out." (it's a bit OOC but can't be helped since it is kind of an unusual situation...)
"Iie." Kagome shook her head and said, "Believe me; I've seen stranger things since I landed on this place." Kagome looked down into the water in a thoughtful manner, wishing fervently that they'll equate the blush she could feel heating up her face to the heat of the springs.
"Ma, then it means you've been here that long already?" Akane asked.
"Hmm... come to think of it, Kagome-chan's been here for a long time... longer than I thought. She's already been traveling here for some time when I met her." Sango answered.
Silence reigned for awhile. Akane spoke up a little hesitantly, "ano... Higurashi-san, that person, with the silver-hair, is he a youkai?"
"Iie. He's a hanyou and we've been traveling together. He was the first person I met here..."Her voice trailed off as flashes of the time they'd spent together went through her mind.
She recalled the first hug he gave her, although he did threw her into the well and grabbed the shikon no tama from her, it still counts. The way he always rushed to her rescue. The way he would shout out her name, like the way he's doing now, makes her feel that he cares... wait! Now?
Kagome turned her head just as Inuyasha emerged from the bushes behind them still shouting her name.
He looked around wildly, his ears alert for any danger, when his eyes finally settled on the three girls staring at him with their mouths hanging down. Before he could react further, Kagome closed her eyes, her hands hugging her chest, she screamed, "OSUWARI."
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A/N: I know, short chappie... but I'm still trying to think of what's going to happen... minna-san, keep reading and reviewing and bear with me since I have no idea where it's headed... ja ne
Glossary: Honto – really
Ottoko – man/male
Iie – no
Hanyou – half demon
Osuwari – sit down... sounds much funnier than sit down, don't you think?